/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>10550016
I feel like your issue here is that the background doesn't actually add to the piece. The composition, colors, and lighting don't do much to accentuate the figure and because of that, they feel less like a choice and more like something you picked at random. It's probably what's making the other anon feel that it's traced over 3D. Obviously you had some element of this bg in mind when you started but it might be a good idea to spend more time designing the bg to work with your composition without the perspective grid and then put it into the scene for reference once you're getting closer to the rendering phase. I did a quick PO demonstrating some of these ideas. (I also noticed the lighting direction was a lil inconsistent)
Sage for art sperging. Anyway your work is great anon and I really hope to see you post more! I don't know if you have an insta or something but I'd love to follow you!