/cgl/ - Cosplay & EGL

>>9205087
I love this

>>8556468
It's a pretty series but the wine color looks muddy. The green and the blue seem to pop a lot more.

>>8558037
I'll give it a shot. I can be a bit blunt, so sorry if I sound like a dick.

>Bodyline main pieces miss the mark
I feel like you're trying to shoehorn these into otome. I'm sure someone can make them work, but to me they seem too lolita.Maybe you should hold off using them until you've fleshed out the rest of your wardrobe and got a bit more experience?

>Cardigans are alright, but need some work
There's nothing wrong with the current ones you have. I think simple, loose cardigans, can work well in the fashion, but buttoning them up like you did over here >>8558321 isn't flattering and makes the cardigan look cheap.
Do you own any cropped cardigans? I think they work well in the fashion and they'd be far more flattering when butoned.

If you want to make your coords more interesting you should think about adding some details to the top half of your outfit. At the current stage the cardigan is a visual block that dominates your coord. Adding some details to your cardigans like new buttons, a removable collar, brooches, etc, will help solve this problem.

>Shoes are alright, but can be improved
I don't mind the shoes you have (save for the Bodyline wedges) but I think adding some more adventurous colors or styles into the mix will give your coords the pop they need.
I'm a big fan of brogues and Melissa shoes. I know the latter can be expensive, but the quality is quite nice and they frequently go on sale. Keep in mind that a small heel is more flattering than a 100% flat shoe. The slight lift they provide helps make a coord look more mature.

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