Lolita Nitpick

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Lolita Nitpick Anonymous Sun Jul 13 22:14:33 2014 No.7680743 [DELETED]

I didn't see one, so nitpick thread.

Here's proof that you can have a lot of pretty brand pieces and still not pull it together.
If she wasn't going to play up the outfit with black and gold, she could have used more components with other colors in the print. That is far too much white for that outfit.The tights print is also a weird combo with the dress.

Oddly enough, I looked at her other outfits and they're all much nicer than this one.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 13 22:16:09 2014 No.7680756 gold ivory white bordeaux blue pirate tights? hell no

Anonymous Sun Jul 13 22:17:51 2014 No.7680767
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Another JetJ nitpick:
Something feels really off about her cardigan, and I think it's the texture/material. I really like her shoes, but I'm not sure how I feel about them with those tights/this dress.

Anonymous Sun Jul 13 22:25:18 2014 No.7680809

>>7680767
I kind of like this if I'm correct in her concept- it looks like it's kind of based on natural kei, playing off still life fruit. But I think the feel of the dress is too classic/ elegant and structured (though debatable about how elegant JetJ painting prints are) for the sweater. I think a better fitting cardigan with some good, thick lace would have looked better.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 12:15:06 2014 No.7683029 >>7680767 There's something off about the hair accessory.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:10:00 2014 No.7683287

>>7680767
I absolutely fucking adore her outfit. Those earrings are pretty adorable, too.

>>7680743
I think her outfit is nice, obviously aiming for somewhat OTT classic, and she hit the nail on the head.

But you guys are jellyfats and/or uglyfaced, gotta find something about the cute lolita girls to tear apart. I understand.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:12:39 2014 No.7683298 >>7680743 Using that much white in her outfit would have been fine if she switched out those tights for something that matched the bolero.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:13:06 2014 No.7683300 File: 105 KB, 720x960, 10351306_10152549077710798_6688933902530605917_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this supposed to be her cheap-ass version of DDC?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:14:34 2014 No.7683308 >>7683300 That's a great coord considering it's offbrand. I don't like the wig, but I think sweet wigs are all ugly.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:15:27 2014 No.7683312 >>7680767 I think this is cute. Only thing I'd change is the sweater. And I love the earrings.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:18:59 2014 No.7683324

>>7683287
This thread is for outfit criticism, and her outfit needs some. It doesn't mean that she's ugly or hopeless or anything it just means that she could stand to improve.

It's her tights that need work here, and I don't like the shoes but it could just be how they clash with the tights and the awkward foot pose.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:20:52 2014 No.7683328 >>7683300 Needs to trim the wig bangs. Also I'd go for a pink or white purse, as the purple doesn't match. Otherwise pretty cute though.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:22:14 2014 No.7683334
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Selfposting for concrit.

I know I'm fat. I'm working on it.

The pose looks really awkward in this photo, but it's the only one he snapped where I'm not making a weird face.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:23:16 2014 No.7683336 >>7683300 This would be cute with better execution, but it's pretty funny as is.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:24:53 2014 No.7683339 >>7683334 It's not bad, but it doesn't really read as lolita to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:27:32 2014 No.7683348 >>7683300 I actually think this is really cute besides that cheap layer of chiffon

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:29:43 2014 No.7683354

>>7683334
I think there's a little too much going on here. The vest is a bit busy for the skirt and vice versa, plus none of your colours really go, e.g., you've got what appears to be a white blouse with an ivory skirt. I wouldn't say the skirt itself is particularly lolita, either, and the tights look a bit odd with it, I would have gone with a plainer pair. I also think the shoes are a bit... matronly? And that haircut doesn't look to be particularly flattering. It might look better with regular clothes, but I think a wig would go better for lolita.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:41:29 2014 No.7683381

>>7683354

That was my thinking. I feel like if I'd had an ivory blouse instead of the cream one, and a larger gold brooch at my neck, it might have looked a little better? I was planning to wear a gold pin, but the backing broke day of and the little cameo was the only thing I could find. So disappoint. Also, what if heeled oxfords instead of t-straps?

You're right, I hate how my hair looks here. I have naturally curly hair, and even though I spent an hour trying to get it into a straight bob, as soon as I went out into the heat it just completely gave up the ghost. Next time I'll just use a wig for occasions like this.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 14:51:08 2014 No.7683410 >>7683324 Have you ever considered that they like the way they look, and all of you just sound like whiny bitches who have too much time on their hands?

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 15:17:55 2014 No.7683477

>>7683410

Actually, these threads are super helpful. No one in your comm is going to tell you that your pinks don't match, at least not to your face, and sometimes even if you like the way the outfit turned out overall it's nice to get advice for improvement. Never just assume you're perfect, that is the path of the ita.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 15:22:22 2014 No.7683489

>>7683477
There's a big difference between calling out an ita and just having an opinion that differs from the wearer of said outfit. Which is what nitpick threads are. You're picking at someone's outfit not because it's ita or bad, but because you personally don't like it.

Do you get how fucking stupid that is? I guess not.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 15:23:12 2014 No.7683492 >>7683489 So, which one of the people posted were you?

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 18:30:48 2014 No.7683975
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>>7683489
Personally, I think these are some of the best lolita threads on /cgl/ when they're civil.

No one's attacked most the time and it's more about discussing how to push an outfit further and step up your game so to speak.

A lot of first attempts at looks get posted and critiqued and that can help either that lolita or another improve or try something new with their style.

>>7683300
Personally I think this girl's got a really cute idea that could be executed better. The first issue is the big floppy bow. it's bulky and detracts from the dainty flowy feel that the chiffon overlay might be able to give it. Mirroring AP's design would work better, doesn't have to be the same. I would go for bows with gold star buttons on the middle to carry the star theme up.
Also the over lay should be either meeting the top of the boarder print or the hem of the dress in my opinion.

I'd love to see someone take this bodyline dress to full DDC mode. I love seeing fun Bodyline mods.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 20:10:44 2014 No.7684305 >>7680767 I really hate those shoes. Other than that, I like how it's so casual but not too casual.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 21:05:00 2014 No.7684444

>>7683287
How did she nail it? You didn't elaborate on this or really defend anything. This is pretty lazy for an OTT coord. Just slap on a rose headdress, the most overused of all motifs, and that's it? Nevermind the hodgpodge of themes and clashing colors.

It's almost as if you decided to act angry and weakly defend in hopes that people would be even more critical.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 21:53:44 2014 No.7684593 >>7683300 It's a bodyline dress from way back when Sugary Carnival was first released.

Anonymous Mon Jul 14 22:10:07 2014 No.7684652

>>7683334
Personally, I don't think your skirt looks very lolita. You should really invest on an actual lolita skirt. But, if you really want to go with this one, add some lace to the hem, or wear an underskirt. Athough the pattern is very cute, the skirt is too simple for lolita and it contrasts with all the ruffles on your blouse. Balancing isn't just about colors, you know. That's the main problem I see here. My other nitpicks would be: ivory+white. Generally a no no (that goes for beige+white, beige+ivory as well). Also, styling your hair properly would make this so much better.
I disagree with the anon who disliked your shoes. I'd wear them.
Well, it's very brave of you to ask cgl for concrit. I hope next time we see you we don't have anything to nitpick about. Gl!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 14 22:13:33 2014 No.7684666 >>7684652 Oh, and, yeah: your vest is cute but I'm assuming it's black, not blue. Blue has absolutely no place in this coord.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 02:49:50 2014 No.7685443 >>7684593 try again. SC was out for over 2 years when this one came out.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 03:50:03 2014 No.7685526 >>7683287 >I think her outfit is nice, obviously aiming for somewhat OTT classic, and she hit the nail on the head. Just because your standards for a goof outfit is low, doesn't mean the rest of us have to conform to you

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 05:59:42 2014 No.7685645

>>7683489

Just think of it as a containment thread; it's better to have noobs come in here and voice their self-important opinions rather than posting coords they merely aren't a fan of in the ita thread, or sperging out in the drawthread. Hopefully by debating nitpicks in here they also learn what annoys other people as well and learn to dress themselves better.

>>7683975

A couple of years ago I'd agree that cgl was actually helpful. This year, though -- last month we had multiple accessories thread where lolitas legit did not know how to find accessories for their lolita dresses. There were girls in the "feels" thread who said they had over ten main pieces and no blouses to wear them with. One girl repeatedly asked in lolita general how to reserve a dress from btssb, another decided that asking cgl something about Tenso should be the first step rather than checking Tenso's English website for info, and we had a couple of dress cleaning questions where apparently it doesn't occur to the dress owners to check the care labels. You just have to wonder exactly how valuable the kind of advice this pool of noobs can give.

I also wish we could educate the noobies that their personal opinions don't matter as much as they think it does. The nitpick thread makes it look okay for girls to voice opinions about other people's dress style, in fact, this is a very rude thing to do. /cgl/ has always been where lolitas can let their bitchy side hang out and be complete bitches, the nitpick thread should make it clear that nitpicking another person's outfit is a bitchy, guilty pleasure. If the outfit in question is not complete ita, don't offer your opinion on how it can be better.

sage for nitpicking the nitpick thread.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 12:33:20 2014 No.7686031

>>7684652

Thank you! The skirt was bought from storenvy, and I really wasn't quite happy with it when it arrived. I've been holding off on taking it apart and remaking it though, until I decide what to do with the hem. Would a black venise lace look alright, like 2 in with a floral motif?

Thank you for the compliment on the vest, it is black, I made it myself. For some reason the lights for the fashion show were all blue. feelsbadman.jpg

I do have a pretty decent wardrobe, mostly IW, but my coords are always just...simple. This was my first real crack at trying to go a little fancier, but I don't feel like I quite hit the mark.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 13:27:43 2014 No.7686111

>>7685645
Eh, I can understand asking questions about reservations. I was really nervous about reserving with Baby the first time I did because I had heard so many horror stories about them blacklisting people.

Also, nitpicking isn't bitchy. There are frequently little things wrong with an outfit that don't warrant "ITAAA!" but could really be improved. It's a concrit thread, and concrit isn't rude, it's fucking productive.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 14:42:12 2014 No.7686246

>>7685645
You must be extremely butthurt about something. Were you posted in one of these? Maybe one of your rori girlfriends?

>I also wish we could educate the noobies that their personal opinions don't matter as much as they think it does.

Ok, your opinion doesn't matter. Ta-da!

>The nitpick thread makes it look okay for girls to voice opinions about other people's dress style, in fact, this is a very rude thing to do.

Do you even /cgl/?

Anyway, you must be really stupid to think it's about nitpicking someone's STYLE. No, it's about "Here's a coord that would be good if they didn't make mistakes like this or this." In fact, it would be rude to post coords that need critiques but aren't completely awful in ita threads. It's funny you're worried about people's feels in a nitpick thread where the people getting mostly polite critiques should probably know better than to make the mistakes they're making in most cases but you're apparently OK with ita threads were young, inexperienced people just learning the fashion get ripped apart and are posted just to be made fun of.

> the nitpick thread should make it clear that nitpicking another person's outfit is a bitchy, guilty pleasure. If the outfit in question is not complete ita, don't offer your opinion on how it can be better.

Mediocrity shall reign supreme guys! I bet you also think everyone should get a little "you tried" trophy at little league games.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 14:45:35 2014 No.7686255

>>7685645
>If the outfit in question is not complete ita, don't offer your opinion on how it can be better.
>If the outfit in question is not complete ita, don't offer your opinion on how it can be better.
>If the outfit in question is not complete ita, don't offer your opinion on how it can be better.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 14:54:51 2014 No.7686272
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Saw this in an ita and again, don't think it belonged there but there are a couple things that could be improved upon. Leg wear for starters? Don't know if I like the bare leg look with this since it seems she was trying to go OTT sweet.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 14:56:31 2014 No.7686275 >>7686272 *an ita thread

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 14:58:20 2014 No.7686283

>>7686111

She literally just asked "How do I reserve a dress with btssb/Baby?". You might be able to find the thread in the archive if you search those exact words (except for the btssb/Baby, I don't remember which abbreviation she used). The first one was a very short post. The second one at least asked "Do I just put it in the shopping cart?", and then further along, "Do I just email them if they say to email them?". Basic handholding questions.

To clarify, I don't have issues with noobs asking questions. It keeps the lolita general thread alive at least. I have issues with girls thinking this thread is something productive. You have no idea if the girls posting in this thread are those same noobs asking very basic questions. I mention noobs to point out that half the board are completely new to the fashion, and have no business giving any kind of advice if they require handholding through something as simple as making reservations with Baby.

Someone just needs to say this: this thread isn't useful, it's only full of opinions. Some of those might come from someone with a good eye for fashion, which is useful. Some others will come from complete noobs who post something so that they can join in and be part of cgl, then turn around and go post a noob question in lolita general.

>nitpicking isn't bitchy

If you walked up to a complete stranger on the street, and without so much as a howdy-do, started listing out all of the things you did not like about their outfit, you can expect black stares, a shouting match, maybe get slapped.

It is only okay in cgl because it's anonymous, so you can be a full out bitch or a shitposting troll, and no one can link your bitchy shitty posts back to your online accounts. Make no mistake, both this and the ita thread are lolitas being bitches.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:10:59 2014 No.7686309

>>7686272
I think the stuff on her head is more awkward than anything else. It just seems like she literally put wahtever she can find ontop instead of at least making it look intentionally. I understand the no leg wear idea if it is hot, but sweet looks okay with ankle socks so that is something she could have done.

Bag doesnt match with anything else besides the awkward bow, she needs to tie in that blue or ditch it.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:16:35 2014 No.7686313

>>7686246
>>7686255

You're trying too hard. I'm in the nitpick thread because I join in and nitpick on others.

I just have an issue with the new lolitas thinking this is normal and productive behaviour for a lolita.

Both the ita thread and the nitpick threads are lolitas being bitches, myself included. All new lolitas should take note. Do not nitpick other people's coords outside of cgl, especially if someone can trace your posts back to you.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:17:28 2014 No.7686315

>>7686272

It looks like her main problem is her accessories don't match the dress, especially with that peignoir. She's got all pastels, when the only pastels on the dress are accents. If she ditched the peignoir, the pink bow and stars, and had some little blue ruffly ankle socks it'd probably look way better.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:27:37 2014 No.7686338

>>7686272
The bag looks like a little kids lunch pail for school and doesn't go with anything.
The weird see through coat is wierd as well.
Leg wear is needed, even if it's simple.
The head piece looks weird and overdone.

Think it's just trying to be a bit too much of a special snowflake, just needs to be simpler or better matching if complex.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:30:09 2014 No.7686340 >>7686313 >I just have an issue with the new lolitas thinking this is normal and productive behaviour for a lolita. That's not how you made it out you basic backtracking bitch.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:33:20 2014 No.7686350

>>7686283
>If you walked up to a complete stranger on the street, and without so much as a howdy-do, started listing out all of the things you did not like about their outfit, you can expect black stares, a shouting match, maybe get slapped.

Yeah and if you walked up to a girl on the street and ask if she also got cramps from cold foods during her period, she'd think you were insane and rude. But girls have had this discussion on... the Internet!

Guess what? This isn't the streets! It's the fucking internet where people have discussions that they wouldn't have from some stranger.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:42:32 2014 No.7686370 >>7686283 You should get off /cgl/. According to you, half (if not more) of this board isn't useful or good. Why are you even posting here? Hide the thread and gtfo.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:46:30 2014 No.7686379 File: 35 KB, 552x464, this-bitch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I love this bitch completely ignoring the person who ASKED the thread for crit and is fucking grateful for it, too

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 15:55:23 2014 No.7686405

>>7686340

I wrote the first comment fresh out of reading some noob sperg out in the draw thread, apologies if it got your jimmies rustled.

I'll admit mine was rustled because the drawthread is now a magnet for random lolitas to nitpick.

>>7686350

Yes, and I'm pointing out, do this on cgl, but let it be on cgl.

While also pointing out, it's not an activity you brag about to your friends, unless you want a reputation for being a bitch.

>>7686370

ok

>>7686379

1 out of 5

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 16:24:43 2014 No.7686477
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>>7686405
Whoever said this was something they brag about to their friends?
Seriously, stop shitting up the thread. You're not contributing at all, and you're a fucking idiot.

I love this skirt, but I don't like how white her tights/shoes are. The whole top is cream, and then the entire bottom of the outfit is a stark white.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 17:18:16 2014 No.7686617 >>7686477 These two seem entirely too proud of their nitpick thread >>7683477 >>7683975 I'm not seeing an incentive to stop posting if it gets your precious thread derailed.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 18:28:41 2014 No.7686775
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The balance here is way off. The huge wig, coupled with the big coat, makes her look like a pink traffic cone. She should ditch the coat, and swap out the twintails or whatever that is for a more natural hairstyle.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 18:31:26 2014 No.7686784 >>7680743 >ITT: >Self important cunts giving their ~superior~ opinions

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 18:31:38 2014 No.7686785 >>7686775 The warm pinks paired with cool pinks are killing my eyes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 18:34:44 2014 No.7686803 >>7686785 Agreed. I love that jacket or whatever she has on, though, anyone know where it's from?

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 18:34:52 2014 No.7686804
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The rose hair accessories are kind of out of nowhere. They don't match the minty teal in the dress, and there's no florals anywhere else in the coord, so...wherefore turquoise roses?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 19:00:46 2014 No.7686883 >>7686785 Agreed. I keep seeing this on my tumblr dash and all I can think is why does it have so many notes it's so mismatched

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 19:35:29 2014 No.7686990 >>7686784 gr8 b8 m8

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 19:57:47 2014 No.7687040

>>7686272
I was gonna comment on this when I realize I know this girl. She use to be my friend but blocked me everywhere like a bitch. At least I know her coords haven't gotten any better. Her family is rich AF and she has a bunch of lolita and money to spend on it but she can't be bothered to get any proper lolita shoes. Those are legit her only pair. Fuck you mckenzie that's my wig

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:03:08 2014 No.7687049

>>7687040
Ahaha please moar, this sounds gold!
Why did she block you everywhere?
Also, I think her coord is straight up ita. A peignor with Fruits Parlor, wtf was she thinking? I hate uncreative and unstylish lolitas who can't figure out all trends don't fit all coords.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:06:16 2014 No.7687054 >>7687040 you sound bitter af

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:07:06 2014 No.7687055

>>7687049
I seriously DO NOT know. We were close (I thought we were). Both of us were kind of our only real friends irl that were into lolita/cosplay and we bonded well. We didn't talk everyday but maybe a few times a week, you know pretty standard. Maybe a week or two after I hung out with her at a meetup (where everything was great, she seemed happy to see me and hang out with me) I went to message her on facebook and I couldn't find her. I went to her profile and I was blocked. I tried texting, tumblr messaging, everything but not a response. This happened in like March. I'm bitter because she didn't have the guts to say anything.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:09:33 2014 No.7687060 >>7687055 That is weird as hell. Do you have any mutual friends who could give you the deets?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:10:47 2014 No.7687064 >>7687060 not really. There's only one girl that we're mutual friends with but neither of us are close enough to her for her to know the deets.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:14:11 2014 No.7687068

>>7686477
Wow I really love the top half of this. The leggings and shoes really need work but the rest looks great. Stark white looks awful paired with the soft off-white in the rest of the coord, and shoes are too sweet. Also she looks like a man in the second picture. But otherwise I really like this.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:19:24 2014 No.7687078 >>7686804 This is one of my biggest pet peeves: mismatched themes. I can't count the amount of time's I've seen people wear sweets/food themed dresses with those fucking dangling star clips. Just why?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:24:02 2014 No.7687090 >>7687078 >Just why? Someone explained(or atleast brought it to light) in a thread a few months back. It has something to do with people thinking that 'natural or plain' things are neutral when no, they're not.

Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:27:56 2014 No.7687095

>>7687060
Sounds like she figured out Anon is the type of angry person to randomly hang out her dirty laundry unsolicited. If her response to a blocked friend is to call her a rich, spoiled bitch who can't coord, imagine the kind of drama she makes day-to-day
Anon, kinder people would first wonder what you accidentally did to offend this girl or try and see if there was some sort of mistake. You too quickly turned your back on her. I wouldn't trust you either.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:30:38 2014 No.7687104 >>7687095 Oh wow, drama? On /my/ cgl? In /my/ nitpick thread? That simply will not do!

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:31:50 2014 No.7687106 File: 72 KB, 477x331, 1382398766398.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7687095

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 20:51:04 2014 No.7687129 >>7687095 Anon said all that happened in March, and she said she's tried contacting her through various means. Waiting 4 months to bitch about her is pretty loyal, IMO.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 15 21:06:23 2014 No.7687152 >>7687095 Anon also implied that she stole the wig she's wearing in the pic, or kept it and didn't return it (same thing since she can't get in contact with the girl).

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:13:32 2014 No.7687980 So close. They're all just ALMOST there. Shoes, lack of socks, hair... everyone just has something the tiniest bit off and it bugs the hell outta me.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:14:43 2014 No.7687982 File: 466 KB, 2048x1366, 10504804_10204210583249945_483254428616519853_o.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7687980 Dropped my pic goddammit

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:36:31 2014 No.7688022 >>7687982 It's not that bad. Chick on the left needs better shoes and to get rid of dem tights. Chick in the middle needs to fix her petticoat, it's showing pretty bad. Otherwise... looks fine?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:41:53 2014 No.7688030 >>7687982 The two blonde girls are pretty good... but yeah, everyone else is just almost there but not quite. Also, this is an almost cartoonishly racially diverse group, lol.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:42:13 2014 No.7688031 >>7687982 Everyone looks hideous and so old...

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:46:21 2014 No.7688042 >>7687982 Hijab girl is also pretty good I know someone is going to bitch about that but I don't normally like hijabs, she's pretty coordinated One nice thing about being in a small lolita group, is seeing your group grow together <3

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:47:28 2014 No.7688044 >>7687982 the hijab loli is cute, needs to get different shoes though. Light colored mary janes would look great!

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:48:33 2014 No.7688047

>>7688030
That's SoCal for you, they're pretty mixed.

Gonna disagree and say that Lor (blonde in the pigtails) and the hijab lolita are the only ones who nail it. The other blonde's outfit confuses me, wtf is with the moon bag and daisies and blue Misty Sky???

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:50:54 2014 No.7688054

>>7688042
half of the people who complain about hijabis wearing lolita tend to be unpleasantly racist and somehow extremely weebish at the same time.
I don't care if she's wearing a headscarf, as long as her coords are good and she knows what her style is, it's all good.

Besides, less hair hassle.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 02:56:09 2014 No.7688060

>>7688031
I think a lot of them could be improved by better makeup too. Lor kinda piling it on in this pic, though. They're all over 20 and the only one who has a somewhat unfortunate face is the one on the right.

It's a nitpick thread, contribute or gtfo, no room for your sandy blanket statements here.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 03:54:47 2014 No.7688157
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Since the lolita general has turned into Linguistics 101 and I know this topic has been mentioned in previous threads I'll ask here.

If there was another fb group that did constructive coord crit, similar to the nitpick threads, what do you think a poster should mention.
I'd like:
-Budget (bodyline, taobao, brand)
-Style their going for (classic, gothic, sweet, babby's first outfit, OTT etc)
-Area that they'd like the most tips on

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 04:45:04 2014 No.7688226

>>7687040
I only met her a couple times, but even if her family is rich, she definitely doesn't have "a bunch" of lolita or a lot of money to spend on it. Her parents seem really strict and overprotective (isn't she only like 18?) so I doubt they'd just give it to her to spend on whatever she wanted. Her wardrobe seems pretty sparse to me, hence the single pair of shoes (she uses that bag a fuckton too). I don't know her very well though.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 11:12:02 2014 No.7688599
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Just saw this on Instagram.

>cream beret when white lace and socks
>what the heck is that haircolor
>brown bag out of nowhere
>non-lolita/sport ankle socks
>blue shoes which match anything but the outfit

But that's okay, she's the french kawaii ambassador after all.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 11:18:11 2014 No.7688603

>>7688157
The problem I usually have with concrit from strangers is that they don't know what I already have, so it's harder for them to make useful suggestion. My lolita friends give amazing concrit because it's all "you use should use those black shoes with the higher heel, and switch from the cutsew to that the chiffon blouse you bought last month, etc".

So, a link to an online wardrobe reference would be amazing for doing concrit, but that might be a bit much to expect from most posters.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 11:25:26 2014 No.7688618 >>7688603 Well if someone says, you should use different shoes, you can reply with I have these black shoes would they work? No one is going to look at all the stuff you own, but if you want more specific advice have a conversation about it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 15:58:21 2014 No.7689172 >>7685443 Yeah, it was a Bodyline replica way back of SC, not DDC.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 15:59:08 2014 No.7689177 >>7688599 I feel like this more Otome, versus being lolita.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 15:59:25 2014 No.7689178 >>7689172 I realise now the wording was strange.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 17:00:52 2014 No.7689327
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>>7683334

I put together a small collage of changes I'm going to make. Namely, a darker ivory/beige blouse, a black lace trim on the skirt, and finally just getting a damn wig. thoughts?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 17:49:22 2014 No.7689455 >>7688599 >>7688599 seconding this. it seems to be more on the otome side

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 17:49:39 2014 No.7689457 >>7687982 I really like that mint/brown coord, the blonde wig works well with it and the bear bag(?) is cute. the girl's coord to her left is also nice, albeit simple.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 17:50:31 2014 No.7689461 >>7689455 meant this post >>7689177 I'm kinda slow today...

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 18:34:34 2014 No.7689583

>>7689327
Just giive up on the skirt. It's not lolita. It's not the right shape or big enough to make enough poof for the correct silhouette.

Also the bob hairstyle screams middle aged office lady, and it's not very flattering on you, at least judging from the image you posted. I'd also invest in an accessory for your head.

Honestly I would start from scratch if I were you.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 18:42:45 2014 No.7689603

>>7688226
She has a lot of random brand. Every lolita piece she owns is brand. Her wardrobe is lacking a lot. Lots of essentials. It's like she's never heard of getting basics but instead gets brand socks instead of another bag or shoes. She's been in lolita for over 4 years and only has 1 pair of shoes. Like seriously

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 18:49:00 2014 No.7689614 File: 36 KB, 500x750, 60795_10151341973250948_960813128_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7689583 I'm wearing a hair accessory. It's on the other side of my head. This is what my hair normally looks like.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 19:12:47 2014 No.7689681 >>7688599 I think this is cute.

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 19:51:19 2014 No.7689780
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My first thought when I saw this was "Bitch plz, coordinate your robot with your dress better." Especially since last I saw of that robot there was a white one. There could've been some red in her outfit if they had to use the red one though.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:18:08 2014 No.7689839 >>7688599 WHAT HAS SHE DONE TO HER PERFECT BLONDE HAIR

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:21:13 2014 No.7689845 >>7688599 Wait how is there a french kawaii ambassador? I thought kawaii ambassadors was japan's thing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:22:33 2014 No.7689850 >>7689603 I've been in lolita for 4 years and I only have like 4 pairs of shoes that are loli. I just don't really like shoes... But I agree, 1 pair isn't enough. Especially that ugly pair.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:23:54 2014 No.7689853 >>7689839 That was my exact thought. Shit, my crush on her has just flown out the window.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:25:32 2014 No.7689858 >>7689845 also she ain't kawaii at all

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:35:13 2014 No.7689886 >>7689845 I think they meant the French lolita ambassador for Misako's International Lolitas thing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:36:43 2014 No.7689890 >>7689845 Misako names Kawaii Ambassadors all over the place. Canada has three.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:41:39 2014 No.7689905 File: 69 KB, 640x640, 10277581_727225070631031_6280043603479234617_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Has anyone else noticed that when she smiles the edges of her mouth curls oddly??

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:45:22 2014 No.7689918 >>7689905 either her cheeks are real saggy or those are dimples

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 20:45:59 2014 No.7689921 File: 306 KB, 400x299, 1359046940798.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7689845 How... new are you? I wish new people would lurk a while before asking these questions.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 21:44:29 2014 No.7690082 >>7689327 Like >>7689583 said, I'd just get a new skirt altogether.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 21:46:28 2014 No.7690087 >>7686111 >concrit isn't rude, it's fucking productive. I'd say it's pretty rude considering none of the people posted here asked for it (except the one above who self-posted for concrit).

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 21:56:19 2014 No.7690101 >>7686804 What kind of hair accessories would you recommend for this coord to make it better? Just a regular headbow that matches an accent color on the dress?

Anonymous Wed Jul 16 22:06:00 2014 No.7690117

>>7690082

The skirt was 30 bucks, I lose nothing from taking it apart and remaking it. It's not like I don't have other skirts. Besides, I fucking love flocked fabric and it's hard as hell to find, so I'm kind of determined now, you know? The skirt is actually pretty full, fuller than some of my brand, I'm just fat and need a new petti. I figured the more subtle petti would work for a more mature look, but it sounds like I was wrong.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 22:12:23 2014 No.7690128 >>7690117 I like the skirt.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 22:19:35 2014 No.7690145 >>7690117 If you're going to be altering it, maybe a velvet ruffle along the bottom? Cotton velvet seems like it'd match the texture of the flocking. It needs more frills somehow.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 16 23:35:15 2014 No.7690271 >>7690145 That's actually pretty genius. It would have to be a very light cotton velveteen though, the fabric itself is like a very lightweight synthetic taffeta. A heavy ruffle would weigh it down.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 01:31:39 2014 No.7690543 >>7689905 Oh god she's terrifying.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 01:40:44 2014 No.7690560

>>7690087
Exactly. Concrit when not asked for is just rude, and not in anyway constructive.

You're never going to make someone say "Oh, I gotta try better next time so I don't get posted in cgl!", instead they'll just think "I might as well never post a picture in lolita again".

It's different to try to let an ita know that scratchy lace and no blouse probably isn't a good idea without them asking for it. They genuinely are embarrassing themselves and the lolita community as a whole.

But when someone is well dressed, for the most part? Keep your goddamn mouths shut.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 01:44:56 2014 No.7690567 >>7689905 Are you a retard? That's obviously photoshop

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 01:54:13 2014 No.7690587

>>7690560
Whatever. I'd much prefer to run into someone critiquing my coords rather then the the "burn your brand you greasy man faced cunt". I don't think cc is rude as long as you phrase it the right way. Obviously if you act like a cunt about it and are not helpful in anyway, no one is going to want to hear it. Unfortunately a lot of anon seem to think insulting someone's looks and declaring some one has shit taste counts as CC.

I'd much rather receive un solicited cc then being put down without anyone offering advise to improve. You just don't have to be a cunt when giving advice, because if you are, no one will want to hear about it anyways.

Sorry if I repeated shit I'm drunk and its late here. Night seagulls.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 01:56:21 2014 No.7690592

>>7690560
As long as you post a picture online, people are going to have comments about it. Even if cgl pulls the plug on nitpick threads, you don't know when a random lolita's photos will be selected to put up on some fetish blog without their consent. Tell me which is worse. The moment you post a photo online you can't stop people from doing what they want with it. I've never posted photos of myself in lolita online because I don't want any of that, and I am very much happy this way.

I think originally nitpick threads were born because of

> co-ords that got kicked out of ita threads for not being ita enough
> people wanting a place to say "this is a nice outfit, but if only you change XYZ it would be so much better"

I agree that nitpick threads are getting out of hand but there's no stopping to cgl is there.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 02:01:15 2014 No.7690611 >>7690592 I'd far rather be on a fetish site than be nitpicked. At least fetishists are enjoying my outfit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 02:47:18 2014 No.7690697 >>7690611 I guess that's a positive (but creepy) way to look at it

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 03:07:04 2014 No.7690716 >>7690560 No one gives a fuck if it's rude except you. If you care about rude, you're not just on the wrong board- you're on the wrong website. By your logic some of these girls embarrass themselves by making mistakes they should know to avoid.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 08:51:41 2014 No.7691056 >>7690611 >At least fetishists are enjoying my outfit. Hah, or so you think. They just want a photo to fap to their fetish. They don't care if your pinks match or your petticoat is poofy enough.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 13:13:06 2014 No.7691323 >>7689839 Completely agree. Her hair was perfect. It looks like it was poorly done now.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 13:34:57 2014 No.7691372

>>7690716
Different anon, but most of the time it's not blatant mistakes. Just little things that can be improved upon later. And I guess in that respect I think it's fine to point them out as it can be helpful. But then there's times when it gets ridiculous.

Half the time, I wonder how many people posting pictures in this thread and nitpicking have perfect enormous wardrobes where all colors match and everything perfectly fits. I bet half the time, it's a bunch of Bodyline bandits up in here wishing they could even touch some burando.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 14:38:33 2014 No.7691477 >>7691056 >They don't care if your pinks match or your petticoat is poofy enough I think that's the point... (I'm a different anon btw)

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 14:58:53 2014 No.7691515 >>7690716 The girls making embarassing mistakes they should know to avoid are in the ita thread, though. This thread is basically anons complaining loudly about what they don't like about other lolitas' outfits.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:00:48 2014 No.7691522

I think the problem with so much nitpicking is that in most cases people know their co-ord isn't perfect. It's kind of pointless to discuss someone's outfit being a little bit off when half the time they're just working to get a cohesive wardrobe but still want to wear their nice things even though they might not all go together perfectly.

The girls who have huge wardrobes and still don't make perfect co-ords obviously don't care about conforming to the rules or matching their colours or whatever. So all in all, these threads are pretty pointless. I wouldn't want to be posted in one, but this is /cgl/ so you know.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:36:43 2014 No.7691593 File: 39 KB, 500x281, tumblr_lsrh4rMbAP1r0q6x8o1_500.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7691522 no one cares about your opinion

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:38:46 2014 No.7691595 >>7691515 >This thread is basically anons complaining loudly about what they don't like about other lolitas' outfits. Wow, this affects you in no way at all!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:40:02 2014 No.7691599 File: 332 KB, 1280x881, 1341467366148.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7691593 >>7691595

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:42:37 2014 No.7691606 >>7691522 And a lot of girls actually appreciate nitpick threads because with a lot of these come questions on color theory and how the make a cohesive theme. >but this is /cgl/ so you know. Clearly you know so then get out if you're so offended.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:51:33 2014 No.7691619

Who is "a lot of girls"? You?

Most people already know how to match colours and it's pretty obvious when colours don't match, they just don't give a shit or don't have the proper colours. If you have that much trouble telling that two reds are different or that black shoes look bad with an all pink outfit, maybe this isn't the fashion for you.

I don't know which part of my post made me seem offended, since I'm not, but you seem really mad. I've come to these threads a few times because I like to see what people complain about, but there's really no arguing their pointlessness.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:52:33 2014 No.7691624 >>7691619 >>7691606

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 15:57:58 2014 No.7691636 >>7691619 >2 sentence post you're so mad lel! >writes a whole paragraph i'm totes not offended or mad!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 16:01:26 2014 No.7691647 >>7691372 I have a lot of burando, actually. I also know that unless I consider an coord really great that it shouldn't be posted on the Internet because it will be open to scrutiny.

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 17:05:05 2014 No.7691777

>>7691593
>>7691595
>>7691636
Ok, just jumping in to say that you sound a lot more mad than the other anon.

Why is it okay to nitpick outfits, but not to nitpick nitpicks? I mean, it's the internet, are you really surprised that someone disagrees with you?

Anonymous Thu Jul 17 17:08:07 2014 No.7691784

>>7691777
Oh and on top of that, saying "well if you don't like it then gtfo" is pretty childish. And when has saying that ever worked? Do you really expect people to keep their opinions to themselves because you don't happen to agree with them?

if you don't like their opinions then stfu omg lel !!!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 20:28:14 2014 No.7692117 >>7691784 Your trolling skills are impressive. No one is seriously this much if an autist.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 17 21:49:38 2014 No.7692377 File: 40 KB, 598x448, f-Stop-Posting--89607.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7692117 She's right though.

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 01:58:55 2014 No.7694897

>>7690560
>You're never going to make someone say "Oh, I gotta try better next time so I don't get posted in cgl!", instead they'll just think "I might as well never post a picture in lolita again".

Every time I start planning a coord one of my primary focuses is to not be posted to /cgl/. The fear of ridicule is a powerful tool to force people to improve. Only a natural ita gets posted to an ita or nitpick thread and just brushes it off as "they're all just salty fuck them."

Accept the crit and learn from it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 04:01:37 2014 No.7695035 >>7692377 >>7691777 So how many times have you been posted?

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 04:02:03 2014 No.7695036

>>7694897

By that logic, anons in here need to take the constructive criticism that the nitpick thread is not at all useful and may be a little bit rude, or else they're natural itas.

Seriously speaking, though, I got as far as the confusion over Bodyline Carousel and then stopped taking this thread seriously. It doesn't even surprise me when someone asked about lolita ambassadors. It's hard to take these criticisms seriously when the girls giving them don't seem to have been in the fashion very long, or don't seem to pay as much attention to the fashion.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 12:00:18 2014 No.7695406 >>7694897 Except rarely do any of the girls posted get actual con crit in the ita threads.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 13:08:02 2014 No.7695501 File: 32 KB, 704x528, 1339925036370.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7695035 Only one of those was me but I've only been posted on /cgl/ in a good way as far as I know. Keep graspin', anon.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 13:10:19 2014 No.7695506 >>7691056 that's the point you dingus

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 14:30:11 2014 No.7695666

>>7695036
If it's an obvious vendetta than you clearly don't need to consider it. People discussing how the colors don't match or whatever is beneficial because there are times when you just don't notice that something about your outfit is off until someone points it out.

Stop being so sensitive or don't post your pictures online.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 14:44:33 2014 No.7695690 >>7683410 aww, did someone post you? go back to tumblr.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 15:11:08 2014 No.7695731 I don't want to derail the thread, but doesn't anybody else feel nervous now wearing Lolita? Nitpicking is just a step up from the Ita Thread, I'm honestly so worried about getting posted here now.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 15:17:20 2014 No.7695742 >>7686775 she's gorgeous and that dress is somehow really flattering on her imo (she looks like a doll) but the colour scheme is killing it jesus the accessories too

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 15:27:26 2014 No.7695759 >>7686477 Yeah the white is really off.

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 15:44:43 2014 No.7695793

>>7683287
You sound really defensive and upset.

The comments you responded to aren't even mean, they're like open faced compliment sandwiches.

It must be really difficult to function in the world if everyone who gives the slightest bit of concrit turns you into a slobbering ball of WOW YOU MUST BE UGLY, BITCH, CAUSE I'M FLAWLESS, BEYONCE TOLD ME SO

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 15:48:55 2014 No.7695799

>>7695731
No, because I'm not a coward.

We've had nitpick threads for years. We've had ita threads for years. If you're feeling scared now, leave the fashion.

Worry about more important things than what some 4channers are saying about our weirdo Victorian ageplay fashion.

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 16:01:06 2014 No.7695835
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Have we ever managed to have a nitpick thread that didn't deteriorate into madness?

>ACTUALLY, I think she looks perfect and tbh you're just jelly
>After reading this thread, I'm starting to think that I don't want to be a lolita, bc I'm scared you guys will post me
>This is both literally hitler and literally like posting people in the ita thread
>If you weren't a bunch of pussy-ass bullies, you'd say this to their face, not online motherfucker, see what happens
>No1curr about your opinions, ceeg
>Someone interprets "She's really cute, but I wish she'd stop wearing AP sneakers with her otome coords" with "God, this bitch is fat and ugly. Is there a reason she hasn't killed herself yet, 4chan verify for me."

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 16:56:48 2014 No.7695952 >>7689839 I think it's cute

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 17:24:40 2014 No.7696022 >>7688599 Sauce on this dress? It's adorable.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 19:02:40 2014 No.7696187 >>7695501 I bet you were posted in a fat lolita thread

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 19 22:59:38 2014 No.7696593 >>7695666 >don't post your pictures online You realise you're now making the argument >>7690560 was making, that the nitpick thread doesn't help lolitas improve, it only discourages them from posting online.

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 23:39:56 2014 No.7696665

>>7696593
Some people being scared off doesn't mean that all lolitas don't get anything from these threads. Saying that people with paper skin and glass bones should fuck off the internet isn't saying that nitpick threads don't help other people improve.

All lolitas aren't some interconnected mass; Just because Jenny refuses to improve so stubbornly that she decides that she'll just not post herself online isn't to say that Maria isn't open to criticism.

Anonymous Sat Jul 19 23:55:36 2014 No.7696686

>>7695666

I don't think their comment about newbies is referring to a vendetta, though. For instance, there's an anon on here that keeps going on and on about stars and flowers not matching, usually in the same breathe where she claims all themes in an outfit must match. I think she recently posted in one of the other threads that finding matching accessories is simple as keeping the themes and motifs straight.

I'm going to have to see her ideal outfit before I can take her advice, her attitude of putting motives and themes above matching colours and shapes sounds like either complete noob advice or troll to me. I don't know if she's just OCD or incredibly anal, matching themes isn't really mandatory so much as making sure the themes don't clash.

At the same time, there's nothing stopping her from posting her weird advice on here, and she has no obvious vendetta, just a weird obssession with making all the themes match. It's not that all nitpicks in here are dumb, but mixed in with the useful advice are some odd weird nitpicks, so I can see how some girls would consider this entire thread useless because it's difficult to tell apart one from the other.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:12:40 2014 No.7696703

>>7696686
Themes should match, what are you even on about? Mixing Chess Chocolate with a fucking moon bag doesn't make any sense and it looks bad. Not necessarily ita bad, but bad nonetheless.

If you don't agree with the advice being offered then shrug it off and move on. If some anon's opinion not matching is bad enough to scare you out of the public eye, then you didn't belong there in the first place.

>It's not that all nitpicks in here are dumb, but mixed in with the useful advice are some odd weird nitpicks, so I can see how some girls would consider this entire thread useless because it's difficult to tell apart one from the other.
If anon's talking about how an outfit has four different shades of brown then they might have a point, but if they're just ranting because they hate RHS then fucking ignore them. Use your common sense.

Has more than one person agreed with them? Is no one calling them out for being ridiculous? Do more than just your coord have similar complaints? If so they might be on to something.

Some lolitas get help from these threads. You don't even need to be posted to use nitpick threads to help yourself improve because there are times that you would never have considered something until you see it mentioned here and it actually makes sense. Lurking nitpick, ita, and just the general are great ways to help yourself improve. If you're not trying to improve then just ignore it.

Besides, even if no one were to get help from these threads they're still a place for seagulls to come and be bitchy without shitting up ita threads. If you can't handle people being bitches for the sake of bitchiness then you need to go back to Tumblr where you belong and soak up those asspats that you so clearly crave.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:17:20 2014 No.7696711 >>7696665 >people with paper skin and glass bones You realise that, by that logic, you're now required to post yourself to prove you should be allowed on the internet, right?

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:20:43 2014 No.7696717

>>7696711
>hurr durr I'm a fucking retard how do I logic
We're talking about /photos/ being nitpicked because someone found them and posted them here. How the fuck did you even come up with that idiot conclusion?

Bottom line: If you don't like the thread, hide it and move on. No one cares about your tears and nitpick threads aren't going anywhere.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:29:29 2014 No.7696725

>>7696703

If you mixed AP's royal chocolate bag with ETC's chocolate series dresses and btssb's chocolate socks, they won't match, because the pinks are different shades. If you have limited options, then matching the colours, the shape of the clothes (eg collars and necklines) and the style/design of the outfit should take priority over things like making sure everything in your outfit is chocolates. If you only have bows and flowers that match in terms of colours, shape and style, then those bows and flowers are a better choice over something that matches thematically.

As a matter of fact, when the view was first voiced, one or two anons disagreed, and outside of the nitpick thread, she still gets arguments. She just keeps persisting anyway, and it seems like she gets louder each time because no one in the nitpick threads disagrees with her for whatever reason.

I do agree that it's useful to keep the nitpicks out of the ita threads. But I don't see this thread as being useful, much.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:30:32 2014 No.7696726 >>7696717 If you don't like my post, then hide it and move on. It's not like I care about your butthurt either.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:34:22 2014 No.7696731 >>7696726 So wait, you're trying to respond in the same way, telling them to do the same thing even though you won't? What innovation!

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 00:35:26 2014 No.7696732 >>7696731 It's their own advice. I don't see why they can't take it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 03:39:56 2014 No.7696973 I love the wank this thread has become more than actual nitpicks.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 10:49:38 2014 No.7697356 >>7691593 and what makes you think anyone cares about yours? lel

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 11:56:02 2014 No.7697420 >>7696973 > implying nitpick threads were ever anything but an excuse for drama

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 14:47:16 2014 No.7697643
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can we please quit bitching and get back on topic? If you dont like it then get out of the thread jesus.

>looks like grandma's blouse
>mis-matched headbow. Not even the same colors. If you're not going to wear the bow that came with the dress at least do a color that matches like white or something
>Her boob to waist size is a huge difference and it gives her an odd shape. She could try wearing a corset or something to help even out the shape. idk.

She's really cute, but this coord dosen't do her OR the dress justice.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 14:50:15 2014 No.7697649 File: 103 KB, 534x800, tumblr_mo73hvjyvQ1rgtzt2o2_1280.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I love the jacket, but it changes the feel of the coord, and the shoes don't match that feel. Oh. and those stupid fucking glasses man.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 14:52:31 2014 No.7697654 >>7697649 I feel liker her hair/wig was more layered/choppy it would suit the punky-ness that jacket brings in, without having to change the shoes.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 14:52:50 2014 No.7697655 File: 138 KB, 500x750, tumblr_my4kf8Ycc11rgtzt2o1_500.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how the fuck did this get over 500 notes? It would look cute with different hair...maybe... idk something about it just makes me cringe tbh

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 14:59:15 2014 No.7697670 File: 301 KB, 956x1280, tumblr_n6u52b5XHe1rbz3m3o1_1280.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] could be ok for a casual coord i guess, but >the shoes and socks are ugly. >needs more accessories. maybe some bracelets or wristcuffs or something

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:00:56 2014 No.7697675 File: 134 KB, 500x667, tumblr_mh1qshhizP1r2hr4uo1_500.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] loose the caplet, or get one in a color that matches better. mis-matched pinks are a huge pet-peeve of mine.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:02:29 2014 No.7697677 >>7697655 >>7697670 >>7697675 I smell jelly.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:06:09 2014 No.7697685
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i think this is the same girl as >>7697655
I'm starting to think her face/makeup is what's throwing me off here.

Fully covered arms and legs, almost nothing on her head, it makes her coord look bottom heavy. It would look worlds better with at least a small bow or something to go with the ears would be adorable and even it out. Her head just looks so naked compared to the rest of her body

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:09:07 2014 No.7697695

>>7697677
No I have Cat's Tea Party. I like going through the tag on tumblr to get inspo for future coords. I don't think any of these are particularly bad, just some things that can be improved on to make the coords better. if i was jelly then i'd post them to the ita thread. but i don't think any are that bad at all

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:12:25 2014 No.7697701
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loose the grandma jacket. She could be so cute, as she is pretty all ready, but the coord looks sad and frumpy.
Again, could be a cute casual coord like >>7697670 with a few alterations.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:13:55 2014 No.7697703 >>7697685 Her outfit looks great and the ears looks cute, It's just her terrible bangs as they are far to short and her face looks like she's had her arse smacked, cheer up lass.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:16:28 2014 No.7697705 >>7697703 Agreed. One of the few prints that can get away with using cat ears.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:17:48 2014 No.7697710 >>7697701 Yes it's looks very frumpy, I agree loose the cardigan, change out that ridiculous crown for a more suiting head piece and style her hair. Seriously though, I need this dress in my life.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:22:27 2014 No.7697720

>>7697643
>>7697701
Plus >>7697685 >>7697655 girl

Makes me wonder if people buy the dress only and not the matching accessories. What else could explain why people don't wear the bow that matches with it, and go for some ugly mis-matched shit instead?
nothing against kitty ear girl though it acutally looks cute.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:26:12 2014 No.7697726 >>7697720 There wasn't a whole bunch of matching accessories, though.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:32:10 2014 No.7697733 >>7696022 http://lolibrary.org/apparel/whipped-gingham-op looks like the red version of this to me

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:33:10 2014 No.7697736 >>7697726 i think anon is refering to the bow. why wear a blue blow that wont match when you have the bow that goes to the dress (in reference to >>7697643 )

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 15:47:59 2014 No.7697759 >>7697643 I guess she thought sax was close enough to the grey of the print? I just looks weird and out of place to me.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 17:13:24 2014 No.7697850 >>7697649 At least the glasses match

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 17:14:44 2014 No.7697853 >>7697655 Because it's cute? I like the hair with it tbh

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 17:35:04 2014 No.7697873 >>7696703 >tfw paranoid because I once posted a coord with CC with a moon bag as a placeholder (said in the description.) because I didn't have a bag the right colour.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 17:51:06 2014 No.7697896
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This is my cats tea party coord a couple years ago. Its not a great coord.
>deflated petti (honestly its aline, i didnt have a bell)
>cardigan doesnt suit theme
>tried too hard to fit gold in
>need sock glue
>the shoes (brown tea parties) are not shown but definitely didnt go

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 17:53:11 2014 No.7697904

>>7690560
>>7690087
Posting a picture online is always going to be subject to criticism and people will always find something wrong with it, whether or not you like it, because it's public domain.

Lolita nitpick threads originated because a lot of people were posting pictures of girls who are rather well dressed yet something was off about their outfits in ita threads, and people would always say "durr ur just jelly XDDD" or call vendetta.

Perhaps the way some people word their criticism isn't adequate, and it's borderline bashing, but in the case someone gets posted, it's best to take the criticism you think is useful and don't pay attention to the criticism that doesn't help you.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 18:09:04 2014 No.7697926 >>7697896 Well at least you know what was wrong w it. Your right the cardi style dosent go, but the colors match at least. I'm glad all these CTP are being posted it helps me critique my own CTP coord

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 18:19:18 2014 No.7697943 >>7697643 I actually like the blouse, the mauve looks nice with the grey. I just wish she had an accessory at her neck, it looks too plain. Agreed on the bow though.

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 19:43:48 2014 No.7698093
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>>7686272
http://miripurin.tumblr.com/post/92373535241/outfits-to-date-u-v-u-first-two-are-some-of-my
wow she just posted a whole gold mine of nit pick worthy coords

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 19:50:07 2014 No.7698107 >>7698093 This could be way cuter without the long sleeves. It just looks weird with the knew socks and sandals. The hat needs to go too. It's like she dosent know weather she wants to dress for spring or winter

Anonymous Sun Jul 20 19:51:20 2014 No.7698109

>>7697904

That's a very diffferent tune from the gospel these two want to preach:

>>7683477
>>7686111

Which is what started half the arguments in the thread in the first place.

At least you're willing to admit this thread is just lolitas doing the usual, bashing on other lolitas, instead of pretending to be some higher cause.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 20:10:03 2014 No.7698135 >>7698093 She really loves those ugly shoes

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 20:10:10 2014 No.7698137 >>7689921 at least it's anonymous and they can ask here without being publicly shamed.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 20:21:00 2014 No.7698153 >>7697643 >>7697649 >>7697701 >>7697685 >>7698093 All really fucking cute coords. Hater's gonna hate, I guess. Especially >>7697655

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 20:54:12 2014 No.7698188 >>7697685 She looks like a woman who's crazy mother infantilizes her ny making her wear children's clothes, hence the face.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 20:59:24 2014 No.7698198 >>7697643 This just... doesn't look right.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:06:01 2014 No.7698210 >>7690567 She looks like in all her photos/videos. It's not photoshop, just her face.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:09:49 2014 No.7698217 >>7698153 Every time someone posts defending coords like these I wonder what their own look like.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:13:20 2014 No.7698222 >>7698217 Everytime someone nitpicks coords I wonder what their own look like.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:34:12 2014 No.7698258 >>7696686 That post was me and I have literally never posted about it before then. It's a pet peeve of a lot of people though, understandably so IMO obviously.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:40:39 2014 No.7698266 >>7698258 LITERALLY GUISE

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:41:58 2014 No.7698271 >>7698153 It's the nitpick thread not the ita thread. I'd rather be posted here and told a few things are off on my coord then bashed on the ita thread. Get over it

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:43:30 2014 No.7698274 >>7696686 Plenty of anons hate flowers being shoved into coords where they don't work, get over it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:49:49 2014 No.7698285 >>7698274 How many is "plenty of anons", and what do their coords look like?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 21:59:26 2014 No.7698305 >>7698285 You'd probably wear a flower crown with Cosmic wouldn't you, faggot?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 22:02:54 2014 No.7698311 >>7698274 Seconded.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 22:22:24 2014 No.7698354 >>7698271 So would I. But I personally think these are really cute.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 22:24:01 2014 No.7698355 File: 77 KB, 960x949, 1457521_10202431100279894_752346375_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I understand the socks match the sweater and the color also matches the dress. But these don't look right together.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 22:35:01 2014 No.7698372 >>7698354 Posting something itt doesn't mean you think it's not cute. The outfit could be really cute with one small thing off or almost but not quite ita.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 22:36:20 2014 No.7698375 >>7698355 i think it's the shoes/bag, they should be a lighter color

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 20 23:01:57 2014 No.7698415 >>7698355 The dress looks cheap to me, but that's just a personal opinion.

Anonymous Mon Jul 21 02:03:18 2014 No.7698780

>>7698355
I feel like literally nothing matches. The gold star clip goes with nothing, the color of the dress and socks are different, and all of the browns are clearly mismatched. All of them.

I feel like this girl skates by a lot because she's Asian.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 02:06:06 2014 No.7698784 >>7698355 Is this a brolita? also nothing matches

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 02:29:47 2014 No.7698819 >>7698784 No , she just has a noble nose

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 02:59:55 2014 No.7698853 >>7698093 That dress looks like it's in terrible condition and it really needs steaming

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 03:19:35 2014 No.7698879 >>7698780 Pretty sure that last statement is true, she owns a lot of brand and does a lot of modeling but clearly can't put a coord together worth shit

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 03:21:07 2014 No.7698882 >>7698853 I feel like if the dress was steamed, bows were straightened out, cupcake pocket thing flipped up, and shoes were ditched, this would be an alright outfit.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 03:22:50 2014 No.7698884 >>7698882 Aside from the shoes, I agree

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 03:41:23 2014 No.7698901 >>7698879 She tries way too hard to be a big deal but she's just not that interesting or attractive and her style is all over the place. Her old co-ords seemed a lot nicer but maybe it's just because I wasn't a very good lolita yet.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 11:16:50 2014 No.7699282 >>7690611 Conformed for troll.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 11:22:11 2014 No.7699290 >>7697675 Her makeup is awful.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 12:45:47 2014 No.7699402 >>7697655 This would be really cute with a different dress. The headdress and RHS don't really fit with the dress IMO. It would be a really cute old school coord but the print just throws the whole thing off

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 12:52:42 2014 No.7699415 >>7699282 Pretty funny because I wasn't trolling at all, I post here often and am active in my local comm.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 13:47:20 2014 No.7699515 >>7697655 I'm on my phone oh my god she looks like she us floating this is so cool

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:09:13 2014 No.7699536 >>7699515 Hoverloli?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:28:26 2014 No.7699555 >>7697655 The only thing that bothers me is the petticoat because it seems to be too short for that dress.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:28:53 2014 No.7699557 File: 85 KB, 720x960, IMG_63093993468867.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] It's not awful but something seems off or I just don't like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:52:04 2014 No.7699589 >>7699557 looks a bit like sissy/ageplay tbh

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:58:58 2014 No.7699607 >>7698285 Yup.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 14:59:55 2014 No.7699613 >>7699557 the torso is much too short. if there was more room from the bottom of her breasts to her waist it would look much better.

Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:01:22 2014 No.7699614

>>7699557
I saw this coord! Honestly, I personally love it.
My nitpick for it:

Swap out the patterned/lace tights for UTK or OTK white socks. It's a very old school coord with a super poofy petticoat and the tights with the ankle socks make her legs look very bare.

Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:02:42 2014 No.7699615

I think the low cut blouse looks really bad with this JSK. It'd look better with a high-collar or a peter pan collared blouse.

Also the flower crown and frumpy hairstyle are not doing her any good. I'd get rid of the flower crown and do something nicer with her hair.. preferably something where the hair isn't all pulled back? That just looks so lazy to me

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:04:28 2014 No.7699619 File: 95 KB, 720x960, 10449946_10202697636137150_7299316689729531145_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7699615 dropped my pic

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:05:21 2014 No.7699623 >>7699613 Agreed. Other then that its really cute IMO and I the pink

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:07:50 2014 No.7699628 >>7699619 It looks pretty cute to me. Except the lack of shape. That kills it. I have a few dresses in this style you need to find a good petti that's not to big and not to flat, and be the perfect length.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:30:18 2014 No.7699654 File: 158 KB, 604x960, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This was so cute until I scrolled down and saw the shoes. The shoes just kill it for me. Otherwise I love the coord!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:31:57 2014 No.7699655 >>7699654 Maybe this is just me but is she wearing like a cream/offwhite blouse underneath the white dress??

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:39:33 2014 No.7699662 >>7699619 I agree about the blouse. Those socks also don't suit the feeling of the dress, imo. This outfit actually kind of pains me, because this is one of my holy grail dresses.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 15:44:32 2014 No.7699665 >>7699654 I think this is beautiful, still I agree on the shoes. maybe she thought the color of her shoes and wig would match.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 20:02:21 2014 No.7700163 >>7697420 No way. Maybe I never stayed in a nitpick thread long enough to see it turn into a train wreck.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 20:18:25 2014 No.7700210 >>7689327 That head is creepy a lot.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 22:17:49 2014 No.7700447 >>7698093 oh mckenzie... I'm glad you were a bitch to me so I can now laugh at you and not feel bad

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 21 22:23:50 2014 No.7700453 >>7699662 I couldn't really get a good look at her socks, which is why I didn't say anything about them. But from what I can see, those socks don't look great with the outfit. I feel like more elegant shoes would suit that dress better, too

Anonymous Tue Jul 22 00:02:33 2014 No.7700671
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The tights don't look good with the coord, perhaps if her neck bow was a similar colour it would break it up a bit more, but as it is, it looks odd.
Also, those fingerless lace gloves look really tacky.
I like Xylia but her coords are feeling kind of same-y lately. Anyone else feel this?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 04:59:51 2014 No.7701212 >>7700671 Those tights are terrible with this dress. Also, the handbag, the lace gloves and the shoes should be replaced.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 05:04:16 2014 No.7701213 >>7701212 I think the shoes match pretty well actually.

Anonymous Tue Jul 22 05:06:47 2014 No.7701217

>>7700671
That bag needs to gtfo, it has no place in this coordinate. I'm also not feeling the roses in the hair, i feel like she really tried to bring flowers into a completely unrelated theme and it just doesn't work, one of my pet peeves right there.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 05:17:18 2014 No.7701224 >>7700671 hate the legwear and bag. maybe a solid colored bag would work better? like one of those satchel things, maybe? are those hot topic gloves

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 05:35:58 2014 No.7701242 >>7698819 What. Noble nose, explain this

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 10:48:32 2014 No.7701531 >>7701217 She does that with nearly every coord. I can't recall a single coord where she doesn't have flowers in her hair, relating to theme or not, or a missive one used as a brooch.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 22:45:00 2014 No.7703249 >>7701242 my thoughts exactly...

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 22:46:58 2014 No.7703254 >>7701242 >>7703249 It's the name of a nose shaper that gives you a slimmer, more "western" nose.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jul 22 23:27:38 2014 No.7703352 >>7700447 Is there more than one person who doesn't like her or are you just incessantly posting about your vendetta this past week?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 23 01:29:55 2014 No.7703579 >>7703352 I haven't posted any of her pictures but I have commented on them. >>7700447 >>7687040 >>7687055 >>7687064 those are me

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 23 19:56:06 2014 No.7704911 File: 1.16 MB, 720x1080, Photo on 2014-07-23 at 6.00 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] More ita than anything

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 23 20:15:18 2014 No.7704954 >>7689614 That cut and color makes you look much older than you should.. Just get a wig and accessories. I think you are cute and see potential but just look at your pics as if you would look at someone else on here and really ask if that's instyle.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 23 20:19:21 2014 No.7704965 >>7703254 Does it actually work?

Anonymous Wed Jul 23 20:36:54 2014 No.7705002

>>7689327
Don't do any of those imo. That blouse is terrible and the lace is ugly. The wig is ok but if your hair looks like the other pic you posted I think it's fine as long as it's very sleek and straightened.
Anyway if you're really determined to fix the skirt, I would line the skirt underneath and add a row of ruffles to the lining in black fabric so it adds length and also makes it less boring. Unless you have an elastic waistband hiding under there, where you might be able to salvage some extra length and add a black flat waistband, then I think lace would be ok (just not the one you selected). Also it might just be your vest being ill fitted but since you're a little thicker I would make sure the petticoat is a little fluffier.
I think you have a lot of potential though! It's nice to see people who want to improve.

Anonymous Thu Jul 24 00:17:08 2014 No.7705395
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The blouse looks really bad with this JSK, IMO. I think she should switch it out for something with a peter pan collar to give it that school girl kinda vibe.

Her wig is just heinous, it doesn't belong really with any lolita outfit, but especially not this one.

I'm not a fan of the shoes but they're okay, she definitely needs to get some sort of legwear going on though. Maybe lacy anklet socks if it's hot where she lives?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 00:22:28 2014 No.7705403 >>7705395 Just looked again and noticed that's not a wig and probably her real hair. She should definitely get a wig, and I'm almost never one to recommend wigs...

Anonymous Thu Jul 24 02:09:00 2014 No.7705693

>>7705002

The lace was just an example, I couldn't find any other pictures of black embroidered lace. For the wig, I do feel like it's time to invest in a couple for occasions like this where heat and humidity can ruin the style. I've got my eye on another one in my usual style, as well as the longer dark brown one.

The skirt is lined, that's a really good idea. Could I go with the black cotton velvet idea from the other anon, or would you suggest a lighter fabric?

I made the vest before I gained the weight, it fits better since that picture was taken.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 02:21:37 2014 No.7705735 File: 200 KB, 500x667, honey honey cake.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >Why SO MUCH BLACK >That hairstyle looks so unkempt >face/pose looks derpy >shoes are alright >no wristwear >minnie mouse ears Why does no one coord HC in a good way?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 02:38:19 2014 No.7705770 >>7705735 Is that her computer?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 02:46:27 2014 No.7705789 >>7705770 Looks more like a tv

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 02:48:05 2014 No.7705791 >>7705735 Lots of people coord honey cake well, there's just not a lot of variety you can do with it. I think she had a good idea with the minnie mouse ears, but got stuck on black.. then again you can't really get minnie ears in brown or gold so idk.

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>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 07:28:33 2014 No.7706129 >>7706124 honestly this belongs in the ita thread

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 24 08:14:45 2014 No.7706164 >>7706129 yeah couldn't decide between ita and nitpick as it could be a lot worse

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Anonymous Fri Jul 25 08:53:14 2014 No.7708433
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Especially the socks bug me. The rest also seems very off to me.
I don't think the gold theme works with this dress at all, paired with the harlequin socks it's just a big no.
Shame cause I think she's very pretty and the silhouette itself is good. Haenuli dresses often fit awkwardly because of the long bodice but that actually looks pretty good on her.

Anonymous Fri Jul 25 09:14:55 2014 No.7708449
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>>7699557
Why has no one said it yet? Honestly? It is staring everyone right in the face but not one person has said it yet.

TOO MUCH PETTICOAT!!!!

Get a smaller petticoat or just wear one and she'd look fine (she looks like she is wearing 4 at once)

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 10:01:20 2014 No.7708487 >>7708449 AP is meant to be super poofy, anon. It's not too much petticoat until the skirt fabric is taut from petti stuffing.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 11:25:06 2014 No.7708624 File: 120 KB, 700x525, summer-time18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7708449 >complaining about too much petti when skirt looks as full as most AP stock imgs

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 11:27:33 2014 No.7708631 >>7708449 It's honetly not that bad, poof looks fine.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 12:01:19 2014 No.7708687 >>7708449 I don't know that there's too much poof.. I think her upper body is just larger than her lower plus she has no waist so she ends up looking like a giant potato with stick legs.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 12:04:33 2014 No.7708691 >>7708487 >>7708624 >>7708631 Seriously? It looks terrible. The dress is pulled out to its limits and is " taut from petti stuffing", so by >>7708487 's logic it is indeed too much. There's a difference between poofy and straight up fit to bursting.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 12:45:33 2014 No.7708761 File: 329 KB, 800x1200, l232-2[1].jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7708691 When the wrinkles start forming horizontally instead of vertically, you'll know the skirt was overstuffed.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:12:29 2014 No.7708872 >>7708433 I actually like this, socks and all. The only thing I'd change is the shoes, because they don't match the other golds. Black shoes would be better.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:15:28 2014 No.7708874 File: 1.36 MB, 640x360, 1406177455958.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7708691 youre the only who thinks its too much poof, dont try to force yr opinion on us anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:38:11 2014 No.7708901 >>7708874 No I'm not, there was the anon who said it in the first place. I'm not forcing an opinion, it is clearly maxing out the skirt. She looks like a lampshade. But hey, if you like that look go ahead.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:43:16 2014 No.7708909 File: 31 KB, 360x480, 10359403_801687093205316_2154399028168593502_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Ita thread is autosaging

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:43:31 2014 No.7708910 >>7708901 >ugh I'm not mad really i'm right and you're all stupid lol

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:44:26 2014 No.7708913 >>7708909 So make a new one. That picture would be a perfect cover image.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:44:48 2014 No.7708914 File: 46 KB, 280x373, DreamyHoroscopeOP-pink.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7708909 How it's meant to sit

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 14:46:26 2014 No.7708917 >>7708910 Cool, you have not only bad taste but also you have the attitude of a 12 year old and don't know how to read. Not sure why you're so upset that I agree that the petticoat(s) look like they're eating the dress.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 15:01:15 2014 No.7708938 File: 523 KB, 980x550, 1399659549837.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7708917 i said >>7708874 but not >>7708910 anon

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 15:02:45 2014 No.7708943 >>7708433 That thing about her waist looks like a curtain tie

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 15:03:52 2014 No.7708947 >>7708943 It's called a tassel

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 15:04:38 2014 No.7708950 >>7708355 this would be so, so much better if she just wore tights instead ughhhh

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 15:12:27 2014 No.7708968 >>7708947 it looks really out of the place.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 19:54:22 2014 No.7709543 File: 187 KB, 640x960, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7680743

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 19:57:53 2014 No.7709551 >>7709543 Why hasn't she thrown that spider web wig away, jfc

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 20:41:04 2014 No.7709638 >>7709543 She's beautiful, her makeup and her coord are amazing! Her wig is gorgeous! Definitely doesn't belong in this thread, please delete your post. She so pretty, Sorry you're so blinded by jealousy to even see that :)

Anonymous Fri Jul 25 20:44:30 2014 No.7709648

>>7709638
It's a nitpick thread, jfc.
I didn't post that but there are so many things I don't like about this outfit. Also her makeup is barely there.

>Skull purse matching nothing else
>plain tights
>those glasses

And personally I never like peep toe shoes in lolita.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 20:48:47 2014 No.7709662 >>7709638 This has got to be a trol.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 20:49:50 2014 No.7709663 >>7709638 She looks like that guy from the big bang theory

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 20:56:18 2014 No.7709671 >>7709648 I hate the purse, but the dress does have bones on it. So it's not entirely out of theme. Just ugly.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jul 25 22:21:58 2014 No.7709788 >>7709638 Looking at the email field, I'm assuming its you since you call yourself Nebula. It's the nitpick thread so chill. The shoes don't look great with the outfit. Take the con crit and gtfo.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 27 00:10:19 2014 No.7712031 >>7709788 Those heels are probably nicer than anything you own, honey :) Stop being so jealous, it's sad. She doesn't belong in this thread, please remove her or I will report you all.

Anonymous Sun Jul 27 01:17:57 2014 No.7712152

>>7712031
Not jealous and different anon. Quit being such a try hard. I've met her (you?) at conventions and she's nice and cute. You're not doing her any favors here by acting like that. I have better heels, and I'm going to assume anon you replied to does too. Take the con crit or not, but all you're going to do is attract more hate by acting this way over something so small

Anonymous Sun Jul 27 01:46:36 2014 No.7712178
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"Steampunk/classic Lolita for tea time!"
I don't know if it the dark colors on her lower half, the no wig/bad hair accessories, or the super stupid theme, but something strikes me as really wrong about this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 27 01:55:16 2014 No.7712187 >>7712031 Watch out, nonnie! She's gonna report you!

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 27 01:58:27 2014 No.7712194 >>7712178 I'm gonna go with the hair/glasses. If she changed that up it would be pretty cute. As it is now she looks like a granny from little house on the prairie

Anonymous Sun Jul 27 02:41:22 2014 No.7712261

>>7712194

Definitely the glasses, though, it looks like they're in a REALLY strong prescription. She might not have many options as far as that goes.

I have a super strong prescription, but for myopia, so I need thicker frames to counteract how small it makes my eyes look.

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