Coord help thread

[Anonymous No.8560776]

Last one in autosage.
>>8529254

[Anonymous No.8560816]

I am doing a circus inspired coord, but I am having the hardest time not making it look unbalanced
May I request some feedback?

[Anonymous No.8560823]

>>8560816
You're going to want to balance out the reds and yellows. You've got them in the centre of your coord but not at the bottom or top. Maybe swap out the shoe laces for something coloured, or possibly different socks that can bring in those colours. Add in some ribbons to your hat, maybe you can add an ace of hearts too to tie it in more and have a pop of red.

[Anonymous No.8560826]

Gulls, I'm planning my first ouji coord around Roland, but the problem is I look like shit in high neck blouses or anything that isn't a square or boat neck. Would anything else look absolutely awful or is there hope for me out there?

[Anonymous No.8560831]

Oops, re-posting

I am having a bit of trouble deciding on a direction to take this, any opinions?

>>8558926
>>8553085
maybe http://world.taobao.com/item/35099602548.htm?fromSite=main&spm=a1z10.3-c.w4002-9479593900.74.r52mMi would have the same feel but be less gaudy?

[Anonymous No.8560871]

>>8560823
Something like this?

[Anonymous No.8561169]

>>8560816
I think you need more clashing patterns, it's falling a little flat at the moment, it needs to be more..jazzy. Some embellishments and a contrasting ribbon on the hat would be good too.

The socks seem way too pain, I'd recommend something in red and gold. A rosette of some kind on the blouse would be good too.

[Anonymous No.8561178]

>>8560871
this is a big improvement but I reckon you should go big with the hair and hat embellishments plus a red rosette on the blouse/vest area would be good

[Anonymous No.8561299]

We're having a meet in about a month and I need some advice regarding shoes that can be ordered quickly (such as Bodyline). I'm a size 255 and at the moment it seems my best choice is s507 is sax but I'm not very sure about it.

I'm also debating which shawl/bolero to use.

Rundown of the coord so far:
JSK Bodyline L141
Bag IW Marine World tote
Socks Metamorphose Swan Lake
Necklace by TrollWorx Etsy

I'm looking locally for a straw hat I can decorate with blue&yellow roses but in case I don't find one I'll just braid them into my hair.

[Anonymous No.8561322]

>>8561178
>>8561169
Thank you!!!
Do you think that going with red shoes would be okay? or should I stat with black oxfords?

[Anonymous No.8561340]

>>8560831
I'd go for the navy pairings. Anything but those ridiculous fucking socks

[Anonymous No.8561342]

I'm planning out a cute end-of-summer coord. I'm not sure if I should go ankle socks or tights.

>>8560831
The dress is navy right? It looks black on my screen. Anyway, top OTKs are my favourite out of the three. I don't like the idea of throwing white into the mix. Have you considered a gold blouse instead of navy (so it's not navy overload)?? You could also pair this with the golden milk heart bag.

[Anonymous No.8561349]

>>8561299
the plain bolero should work if you want to accentuate the necklace, and i think white or cream shoes would work although make sure there is enough contrast between the socks and the shoes if you choose cream as otherwise your whites will look dirty and mismatched.
With the socks it might be a little too much of the same/similar print, instead maybe go for plain otks or lace tights and add some shoe clips if you can find them, that way it's still nice and balanced but it'll break it up and add a little more interest.

[Anonymous No.8561354]

>>8561342
ahh also the red on the hat matches the wines in the rest of the coord, the photo just doesn't show it very well.

[Anonymous No.8561380]

>>8560826
i don't know why the collar shape would matter. pic related is a coord from Boz where the collar (on the lolita outfit) is quite low. why would you think you need a high collar?

[Anonymous No.8561383]

>>8561380
>on the lolita outfit
*on the left outfit

[Anonymous No.8561404]

>>8561380
I was concerned about the neck area looking a bit too empty, since pretty much all the coords I've seen with the jacket so far have been with high collars, but I could just add some jewelry in that case. I guess I just like the look of ties and jabots, wish I could pull those off.

[Anonymous No.8561412]

>>8560831
I'd say work on the gold accents instead of adding white. Top otks are my favorite and I'm loving the navy blouse, but I think if you go for that you should try to balance the amount of navy with gold head accessories.

[Anonymous No.8561445]

ideas on making a sailor style coord with this?

[Anonymous No.8561482]

>>8561342
that's cute as fuck, anon. also to answer your question, ankle socks would be better. they have a more summer-y feel to them than tights. or you could meet in the middle and go for OTKs.

[Anonymous No.8561487]

I need ideas on what kind of socks or tights would go with this. And shoes, I guess.

[Anonymous No.8561498]

Apologies for the lewd upskirt, but I'm trying to figure out how to match my AP bag with my co-ord as its a darker brown than my dress and shoes. Anyone have any suggestions to how I could accessorise? I'm thinking about maybe a cute hat but not sure where to start. Thanks!

[Anonymous No.8561511]

>>8561487
I'm working in a similar colorway right now. I'm not sure about tights, but here are some shoes i found via suggested brands in the shoe thread.

[Anonymous No.8561535]

>>8561498
I'm not sure if its just the photograph but it looks like your bag is a
warm brown, whereas the rest is cool so it probabbly wont work without clashing horribly.
If it is indeed just the photo, different sades of brown can work, so maybe go for a
bolero/jacket or headwear in a similar shade or darker than the bag to help tie it in nicely.
You could get some darker brown ribbon to lace up your shoes too if you want to go the extra mile,

[Anonymous No.8561584]

>>8561487
That dress is glorious.
Gold heels, and maybe skin coloured tights with a gold pattern or socks with a motif matching the dress - it really depends on your coord colours.

>>8561445
Gotta be honest, it makes me think more nun than sailor. The easiest thing would be a black and white sailor hat, black and white striped socks with anchor motifs, black mary jane shoes and a scarf tied under the collar.

[Anonymous No.8561619]

I got my medium jsk set in the mail but I heavily underestimated how long this dress would be on me (5'3). I've never coordinated with this long of a dress before. The dress hits awkwardly at my lower shins and makes me look like a sad, frumpy lolita traffic cone.

Also
>blouse fits me weirdly
>OTKs look terrible on me

Help

[Anonymous No.8561634]

>>8561299
This is super cute. Love the socks and tote together!

[Anonymous No.8561645]

>>8561511
BAIT shoes will be the death of me

[Anonymous No.8561984]

>>8551416
Tried my hand for a request in the last thread. I love the idea of using that light creamy brown and having a "chocolate with hazelnuts" theme but I couldn't find any sort of hazelnut acessories. CollageAnon forgive me

[Anonymous No.8562027]

>>8561619
I just got mine too, same color and length but I'm 5'7

try swapping the black blouse out for a white one, get a petti that will fit the length properly and help look more flattering, white shoes or boots of some sort, and I will have to brainstorm on the leg wear.

Also sell me the blouse if you hate it because I didn't get one

[Anonymous No.8562326]

>>8561619
Go for a vintage 50s shape - get a slimmer silhouette on the blouse, maybe a black vintage inspired pussy-bow blouse with slight puff sleeves. I'd also go with black tights + heels to elongate your legs and a decent petticoat.

[Anonymous No.8562348]

>>8561445
go easy on the sailor motifs etc and try a more elegant Victorian sailor style and keep it simple, I pretty much second >>8561584 except for the anchor motifs bit.

A more traditional sailor hat like pic related could be an interesting and sightly refreshing take on things too, especially when paired with cute dolly type hair.

A quality straw boater hat with a bold black ribbon would also look good.

If you really wanted to go for a Victorian look, black Edwardian/Victorian ankle or calf boots, with perhaps lower contrast stripe socks (say, black and dusky grey with thinner stripes) would look amazing imho and isn't something I've really seen before.

[Anonymous No.8562383]

>>8562348

[Anonymous No.8562432]

This is a last minute coord for this weekend so it's nothing to amazing, but I'd like some advice on making it at least a little more interesting. Sorry I didn't lay things out. I took this last night before I started packing. The lighting is weird in my room so that's Meta's Rose Letter if it's hard to tell. The shirt I'm wearing has a removable tie so I was going to swap out the black, but I'm not sure if I should go for a dark brown or something beige. The woman at the store suggested pale pink? Also, I'm wondering what color world be best for my stockings. My shoes will be dark brown so would it be too much for dark brown or skin tone stockings or should I go for a light color like ivory or maybe the pink can be down here?

[Anonymous No.8562433]

>>8562383
Source on both of these shoes?

[Anonymous No.8562434]

>>8562432
Do not wear that blazer. It's too long for the levels of poof. It looks very silly.

[Anonymous No.8562436]

>>8562434
Yeah, I think I have to agree with you there.

[Anonymous No.8562483]

>>8562432
vest/waistcoat or blazer is a nice idea but I think you need to go for something that sits at the natural waist so it works with the poof. A jacket or blazer with a peplum would also work. It's a nice blazer though and the color works well, it might even be worth getting it altered so you can wear it with your lolita coords.

[Anonymous No.8562737]

I posted this a while ago near the end of thread and I'm still looking for suggestions. My biggest worry is that I have too many browns going on. I'd love some leg wear suggestions, or accessories to just make it a little more complete looking. Any general concrit would be good too.

[Anonymous No.8562795]

I have a general question on matching colors, and if this belongs somewhere else please let me know.

Would a coord look okay if there are regular and wine reds balanced in the coord? I know whites need to match, does the same apply to reds?

[Anonymous No.8563073]

>>8561342
I think that this is a great coord, however I'm not sure about the bolero - it's really cute, but the black lace around the collar might throw everything off. But I'm with the other anon- those ankle socks are the way to go!

[Anonymous No.8563079]

I'm thinking of just going basic with this?
Black rights and black low heeled boots? Maybe a small gold accent in my wig?

[Anonymous No.8563102]

>>8562737

While they match fine, I think you should replace the current shoes with a darker brown, one the same dark brown as the jacket and bag.

I think some regular cream socks/tights would be just enough. I love playing with shades of brown too, I don't think you have too much going on.

[Anonymous No.8563259]

>>8563102
Good call. Now that you point it out darker shoes will look a lot better.
I'll start keeping an eye out.

[Anonymous No.8563285]

>>8561584
yeah it def has more nun vibes, but hoping maybe I can try to milk something out of it, y'know? if it doesn't work though I won't push it

>>8562348
>>8562383
i'll keep all of this in mind, this looks really cute. thanks for your help anon!

[Anonymous No.8563372]

>>8562432
I know you said it's for this weekend, but I would see if you could find either a cropped blazer or a peplum blazer because right now it's squishing your skirt and it doesn't look good at all. Maybe try leaving it open? (and wear a sweater vest underneath?)

[Anonymous No.8563501]

>>8563073
Thanks for the advice! I actually plan on removing the black lace, since I didn't realize it was there until after I ordered it haha. (Oh shit it's being MTO so maybe they can just not add it for me)

[Anonymous No.8563658]

I planned on doing the black dolly cat op with pink boots but I'm afraid it will look too much like hellobatty's coord.

Any suggestions, should I do it or not?

>captcha: select eggs
>ibprofen is now eggs

[Anonymous No.8563701]

Babby's first coord
please be gentle

[Anonymous No.8563732]

>>8563701
It's gorgeous so far imo, most people would recommend lacy tights for legwear.

Question though, why are you going so OTT for your first coord?

[Anonymous No.8563740]

>>8563701
i like it, pretty bold for babby's first coord.
i'd bring the pink up to the veil a bit, maybe a hair chain with the same rose cabochons as in the necklace if you can find one.
do you have any legwear in mind?

[Anonymous No.8563756]

>>8563732
>lacy tights for legwear
Yeah, thats what I was thinking
>why are you going so OTT for your first coord?
Go hard or go home, I guess?
>>8563740
I was thinking of putting a dried flower crown on top of the veil.
>do you have any legwear in mind?
I was just thinking of wearing some white lacy flower patterned tights.

[Anonymous No.8563776]

Posted in last thread but I think it got skimmed over. I'm trying to decide on what colors to pair with this JSK. I was thinking a semi sheer lavender blouse might look nice with some gold shoes.

[Anonymous No.8563783]

>>8563756
Might just be me, but those long gloves combined with the long sleeves of the OP might not work out so great

[Anonymous No.8563793]

>>8563756
Ditch the gloves, and maybe you can go with some tights like this ones

[Anonymous No.8563798]

>>8563776
Just pick some colours from the JSK, like blue and gold, this is coord help thread, not make my whole coord thread

[Anonymous No.8563805]

>>8563776
Lavender x navy with gold shoes

[Anonymous No.8563950]

>>8563798
I just wanted some advice on a color scheme, not advice on the entire coord. How is that not relevant to this thread?

[Anonymous No.8564010]

>>8562027
>Also sell me the blouse if you hate it because I didn't get one
Diff anon but someone is selling the black blouse on LSE new.

[Anonymous No.8564616]

>>8563079
Black boots with gold button detail, consider a gold pattern on your tights as well if you're wearing ankle boots. Gold details would be nice, but probably not as hair accessories - black beret maybe

[Anonymous No.8565212]

>>8563658
Just do it

[Anonymous No.8565343]

>>8564616
Thanks anon!

[Anonymous No.8565586]

>>8563783
>>8563793
Is this better or worse? I had to change the shoes as I learnt the heels are too high, but all the other changes are experimental atm. I don't know if I should go with pink or white for the shoes.

[Anonymous No.8565594]

>>8563776
This blouse is on maidenclothing right now. I would go with off white/gold tights if you were to use this blouse, to keep the colour scheme light overall but not too purple, and go for a white bag and gold accessories

[Anonymous No.8565610]

>>8565586
I liked your previous choice of bag. I think the bag and shoes are too cutesy for the elegance of the rest of the outfit and I also think your should restrict the pink too small pops of colour as looking at the dress vs your accessories, none of the pinks really match. This isn't an issue with small pops of colour in fairly close shades but with something like shoes or a bag it's really obvious and quite jarring. Try looking for white bridal boots or victorian style lace up boots for the same elegance with a lower heel.

[Anonymous No.8565615]

>>8565610
Okay, thanks for your advice! as for shoes, I think I'll just get a pair of tea parties, as I need to dance in this coord and my feet blister up even in flats.

[Anonymous No.8565637]

>>8565594
...that thing looks bad.

[Anonymous No.8565698]

>>8563805
Are the dark parts really navy? or are they purple? it's hard to tell from just pictures

[Anonymous No.8565798]

just reserved pic related from little dipper and am having a tough time thinking of what to do for legwear.

[Anonymous No.8565836]

I really want to do a redxsax outfit with my jewelry jelly JSK. I feel right now this isn't quite balanced and that the red is over-powering? I can't decide specifically on colors for purses or shoes.

Or would all of this be solved by changing it from a red cardigan to a sax?

[Anonymous No.8565847]

>>8565836
I think a light colored wig would bring it all back into balance, like a pale blonde. The darkness of red could be cancelled out with an airy wig color and better incorporate the sax.

[Anonymous No.8565869]

I'm a newbie and I just bought this. Please help by throwing ideas at me. I might be in over my head. It was pretty and I gave into impulse. I have nothing pink or red, so I get to start buying from scratch for this coord.

[Anonymous No.8565944]

>>8565698

They're purple, if that helps. Or at least very noticeably purple-tinted rather than blueish navy. Only the special set actually has pure blue pegasus (pegasi?). I think it might still suit navy though, since the lavender on that is one of the cooler shades.

[Anonymous No.8565955]

>>8565836

imo, this does kind of look heavy handed. I think I'd have gone with white x blue with red accents instead of straight up blue x red, as the colour combination is gentler. I'd try replacing the cardigan with a shorter white bolero (or go with a white blouse under the jsk), with red jewellery as an accent instead of a big block of heavy red. If it still looks too heavy, try replacing eiher the bag or the beret with white or sax blue as well.

[Anonymous No.8565988]

>>8565869

99% of the time any jsk can always be matched with either a white or ivory blouse and legwear, then you only have to look for bag, shoes and hairpiece that matches the dress.

Choose ivory or white either according to your skintone, or according to what lace is on the dress. Legwear does not need to be printed, lace tights or those clear patterned OTKs baby keeps selling out of will also suit. In this case, keep the collar mature, avoid huge peter pan collars, and choose a nice lolita blouse -- it's an underbust, so a lot of the blouse will be on display, this isn't the time to look for a loliable blouse.

For hairpiece, bag and shoes, in general you can go with either taking something from the dress print, or choosing something that goes well with it. For example you could do red and pink roses as headwear since that's the main part of the print, and then go with brown shoes and brown bag, since brown and pink go well together.

[Anonymous No.8565990]

>>8565836
Go with a white cardigan/bolero/bkouse, red bow on white beret, and white or sax shoes.

[Anonymous No.8566003]

>>8565988
>>8565869
Could I use Ivory shirt and socks with light tan brown shoes & purse for a mature country look?

[Anonymous No.8566071]

>>8565836
>>8565847
>>8565955
>>8565990


Sorry for these being super hastily being put together and sloppy, but are any of these heading in a better direction? I took everyones criticisms into account. Of course when I have more time I'll refine them out more and add in other small accessories but I want to get my base down first.

Thank you guys so much for all the input !

[Anonymous No.8566134]

>>8565637
Yeah, maiden clothing takes terrible photos and I can't find stock ones for this colourway.

>>8566003
Yes, you probably could. If you can find pink roses that match the print for your hair I think that'd be lovely

[Anonymous No.8566147]

>>8566071

I think the shoes on for the set on the bottom right should be red, otherwise the white shoes blend in with the white socks. I do like these better.


>>8566003

If by ivory shirt you actually mean ivory lolita blouse, then yes, it will work.

[Anonymous No.8566301]

>>8566147

Jewelry jelly anon here. Thank you for the input. I'm actually really happy for these new outfits and really excited to start putting a finalization together !

[Anonymous No.8566753]

>>8565798

I think this would look killer with black constellation tights, or any OTKs that have a celestial / sky theme. I have this dress in the lavender and am having a tough time with it, since it's a pink-lavender, not a blue-lanvender.

[Anonymous No.8567891]

i know this is super basic and i need all the help i can get.

[Anonymous No.8567910]

>>8567891
>ditch fingerless gloves
>get different shoes or add shoe clips to those currently
>floral hair accessory would be cute
>simple bracelets or wrisctuffs.

[Anonymous No.8568016]

>>8567891
I think I would also get a different blouse. Something with a bit more frilly stuff around the chest area and different style sleeves.

[Anonymous No.8568250]

Hey seagulls. I'm thinking of doing a 'witch' coord with this dress. I have no idea where to start. I will probably use a mini broom and a natural blond wig somewhere...

If you guys can point me towards a shop with cute witch hats, it would be much appreciated.

[Anonymous No.8568286]

>>8568250
I'm not sure that dress is very witchy atv all and you may struggle reconciling the carousel horses in the print to a witch theme..any plain black dress would probably be better. Because it's got a print, striped socks/buckled witch shoes/hat and broomstick are probably going to look a little incongruous

[Anonymous No.8568310]

>>8560831
i think you should actually do both coords! they're pretty on their own ways. however i do have to say the white is more out of place.

[Anonymous No.8568311]

>>8561342
if long sleeves then always tights

[Anonymous No.8568314]

>>8563701
for babbys first if you're decked out in this much fancy brand you need really really good make up and hair, just a warning. Anyway, id say white or light pink lace tights either in a dot patten (to match headdress) or rose pattern (to match necklace). Cross pattern would also work for both the necklace and veil for something more angelic.

[Anonymous No.8568498]

>>8568314
I was planning on doing victorian ringlets for my hair, but I haven't thought about make up yet. Any suggestions? I'm pale if that changes anything.

[Anonymous No.8568651]

>>8568016
Second, those cap sleeve blouses you find for office wear are so unflattering on bigger girls. Speaking as a bigger girl.

[Anonymous No.8568952]

>>8565586
I liked the other bag better, but maybe you could go with a whit bag and attach some roses to it

[Anonymous No.8569796]

>>8568311
Oh I'm not using long sleeves, I'm using the short sleeved bolero. The stock photos weren't as clear - sorry for the confusion!

[Anonymous No.8570052]

Is there a shoe color other than white that would work with this? I'm afraid anything else might be too distracting...

[Anonymous No.8570062]

>>8570052
Cute!
Pink, sax or tan would work well.

[Anonymous No.8570195]

So i'm looking at this dress, and trying to decide how i'd style it before i get it. I'm very new to lolita and would appreciate feedback/input.

I'm especially unsure about the wig.

[Anonymous No.8570213]

>>8568952
Oh, that sounds fun! I'll be in the lookout for a cheap white bag.

[Anonymous No.8570261]

Poor choice of tights perhaps.. ? Already hate myself for flowers with a starry theme.. Im not sure what else accessory-wise either..

Hmm any help? Any Taobao links to accessories and such would be appreciated!

[Anonymous No.8570275]

It's been over a week and I'm pretty much at a lost on how to amp up a coord for this. A lot of potential themes and colors to coord with, but what can I do in two weeks?...

Everything here is just stuff I own right now. The DC blouse is actually a really good color match and isn't that reddish brown at all.

[Anonymous No.8570279]

>>8570275
Oh, if it helps, I'm a very classic-based lolita. I don't do very sweet stuff at all but I'm open to any ideas!

[Anonymous No.8570280]

>>8570195
I think the wig is perf for this tbh

[Anonymous No.8570287]

>>8561342
Not sure about that hat, the red doesn't match the wine color to well to me

[Anonymous No.8570297]

>>8570052
a pale light blue color could work as well

[Anonymous No.8570354]

>>8561984
mind sharing where the wine jacket is from?

[Anonymous No.8570397]

>>8567891
>>8568016
>>8567910
>>8568651
I agree about replacing the blouse. I would actually try not to go with anything too frilly on the bust itself, and I suggest a square neckline - both look better on girls with larger busts. Something like pic related.

Definitely trade in the shoes. Maybe in the same blue you're wearing in the skirt.

I also like the idea of the flower hair accessory, ditch the fingerless gloves (those are generally a no-no), and instead get wristcuffs or bracelets. I can't really tell what's going on with your tights/socks?

[Anonymous No.8570498]

I got this dress recently because it's been one of my dream dresses since it came out but now that I have it I've got no fucking idea how to coord it? it's been sitting in my wardrobe for months now, does anyone have any thoughts?

[Anonymous No.8571066]

>>8570498
There's a whole lot you could do here anon, it just depends on where you want to go with it. Brown, beige, pink, offwhite, leaf green, florals, ribbons, deer, birds - pick a couple of your favorite things about the dress, then coord around them. Or use what you already have and go from there. I see this being used in a toned-down sweet, springtime, nature fairy princess coord, but if you want help you need to provide SOME kind of starting point to make a coord from besides the dress itself.

[Anonymous No.8571077]

>>8571066
I guess I'm mostly confused with what type of blouse to wear with this neckline, I'm totally stumped.

[Anonymous No.8571206]

>>8571077

If you want to show off that neckline, then the easiest and most obvious answer is the high collar blouse or a turtleneck.

But you can also try :
- wide neckline blouse with ruffles, pull the ruffles out from under the jsk and lay them on top of the jsk collar
- low neckline blouse that sits just under the jsk neckline, so when you wear them both you only see the sleeves of the blouse
- large peter pan collar with pussy bow, the large bow will break up the jsk collar so it doesn't clash with the peter pan collar.

[Anonymous No.8571223]

How can I make this more...cuter?
I was thinking a short sleeved red blouse and red shoes with a bob wig.

[Anonymous No.8571242]

>>8571223
That sounds like a good start anon! Maybe a straw boater with a red ribbon, or a red beret. A headbow seems like the obvious choice for something cutesy, but it might overwhelm you in a bob. Lace-topped OTKs in offwhite or beige would add an old school touch, and you could get wrist cuffs to match.

[Anonymous No.8571255]

Trying to do something kind of basic with Dim Light. I'm iffy on the underskirt, but the DL skirt is short and I'm quite tall, so I might need it. Probably going to add some small gold rings and a necklace, but I'll take suggestions/crit on any of this.

>also plz actually consider the shoes before you gut me over them
>tfw feet are huge
>finding loliable shoes in this color is a bitch

[Anonymous No.8571266]

>>8571255
I think if the underskirt winds up looking too long you can just roll it up a little like some people do with pettis. Also not necessary but I think some small gold pin on the beret would be cute.

Sauce on the shoes, btw?
>tfw feet are also huge

[Anonymous No.8571273]

>>8571266
don't laugh http://www.forever21.com/Product/Product.aspx?BR=f21&Category=shoes_flats&ProductID=2000184152&VariantID=

I tend to roll the underskirt anyway, or hike it up. This trend has been a godsend tbh. A gold pin will definitely find its way onto the beret, whether in this coord or a future one, thanks for the idea!

[Anonymous No.8571275]

>>8571273
>don't laugh
Quite the opposite, I'm cryin' because I wear size 12 ;_; Glad I could help, though!

[Anonymous No.8571322]

Which of these boots would be better for gothic? (or, what sort of features should I avoid in boots when trying to shop for something to wear with gothic?

[Anonymous No.8571328]

>>8571273
>f21
prepare for blister city

[Anonymous No.8571340]

>>8571322
All of these look too generic/normalfag to be really sutable for lolita. Far right might work for boystyle, but everything else is a no. You should look into boots with a higher heel that are laced up or have other "Victorian"-feeling decorations. I hope it's not rude to ask, but what's your shoe size?

[Anonymous No.8571357]

What are some good starter places for someone whose new and still insecure about wearing lolita in public? I was thinking of going to the cinema.

[Anonymous No.8571376]

>>8571322
These might be alright for a normfag goth outfit, but they aren't really elegant enough for lolita imo. The pointed toes and slight heel is a good direction to go in, but avoid the buckles/straps/zippers that give it the "riding boot" feel. Pic related might give you an idea of some more rori desu choices.

>>8571275
May Mana-sama bring you salvation

>>8571328
I'm prepared (or at least not quite foolish enough to wear them without socks or tights)

[Anonymous No.8571377]

aaaaaaaaand >>8571340 beat me to it, aaaaaand that is a shit quality picture of mine, my b

[Anonymous No.8571431]

So I have a rococo-soul jam paradise jake in the red. However I don't know where to start or to make it more Lolita and less otome. All I can think of is a red blouse with it and even that would look off. Any advices/ideas

>pic is stock photo

[Anonymous No.8571436]

>>8571242
thank you! I'll start looking ~

[Anonymous No.8571440]

>>8571431
*jsk in *brown

Sorry. Fuck autocorrect

[Anonymous No.8571542]

>>8571431
Ivory or beige is a safe bet with brown. I would go for an ivory cardigan over the jsk, ivory tights and brown shoes with a red beret.

[Anonymous No.8571638]

I need help gulls. My comm is having a harry potter themed meet, and we're all wearing house themed coordinates. I love being Hufflepuff but I'm having a hard time finding good coordinates & more with coming up with one. I almost like the idea of taking a bodyline carousel dress and replacing the pink ribbon with some yellow somewhat like my horrible phone edit here. I like the idea, but I can't tell how bad the execution would be. Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.8571663]

Im trying to put together a mori ish lolita coord for an outdoors meet. The socks would be scrunched down, and the lace thing next to the blouse is a vest. Any advice, or just letting me know if it is awful or not , is appreciated.

[Anonymous No.8571670]

>>8571638
Wouldn't it be easier to go the school uniform route with a plain black JSK with a white blouse and just wear a yellow neck bow and socks?

[Anonymous No.8571673]

>>8571340
I'm a size 9 and have fat rugbyman calves, so certain styles shown in >>8571376 won't really work for me (like the mid-calf boots I'm afraid wouldn't look nice?). I also specifically wanted something knee-high to keep my legs warmer.

Any boots that would look more ouji-ish? I kind of want a more masculine boot. Nothing wrong with some of the boots in >>8571376 but again I wanted something for the winter which is also why I was more interested in a flatter boot (or at least something with a chunkier heel), I'm afraid a boot with some of the small heels like pictured may not work out as well for walking/running around in the snow, sludge, or wet pavement? (and I know that even some of the initial riding boots I posted aren't like, fully functional snow boots or anything like that)

Honestly I'm willing to sacrifice a little bit of the aesthetic here, I know that's gonna ruffle some feathers but yeah.

Sorry, I feel bad for going "no! I want x not y!!!!", but if anyone had suggestions on a more masculine/ouji kind of boot that would be way better.

[Anonymous No.8571681]

>>8571638
Hello probable fellow comm member? That particular print isn't very Halloween or Hufflepuff so I wouldn't use it for that theme, but anyways it would be better to use more of a gold ribbon a similar shade to the stars rather than the yellow that HP uses. Yellow will stand out too much and clash.

[Anonymous No.8571685]

>>8571663
It's just not lolita, it just looks like a cute normal outfit

[Anonymous No.8571687]

>>8571673
wow, I'm a moron. I didn't even fully explain myself in my intial post >>8571322
sorry everyone. I was specifically looking at boots like this for winter, so I was mostly trying to look at things that would be like, gothic enough to 'fit in' with my coords, but still reasonably functional.

[Anonymous No.8571690]

>>8571638
I don't think that's going to look as good as you imagine that it might be. It would be much easier to just find a plain black jsk and then add stylized accessories to it to make it more HP-ish. (like, a cape, a wand accessory, an official brooch, maybe you could make an ascot or something, etc)

[Anonymous No.8571695]

>>8571638
Wow this is fucking stupid. Just wear a damn black dress and a witch hat.

[Anonymous No.8571700]

>>8571685
I was worried about that. Do you think it would look too normal even with a lot of poof?

[Anonymous No.8571711]

>>8571638
But yeah, this is what it would roughly look like. Again, it really just doesn't suit the theme and I agree you'd be better off just using/finding a non-print skirt or jsk and going for a uniform feel with a nice caplet or blazer

[Anonymous No.8571716]

>>8571700
The problem is the shoes, hair wear, and socks. Even if you're trying to blend it with mori, it's just not quite close enough. If you fixed those up a bit it would be good

[Anonymous No.8571744]

>>8571711
Would something like this be better? I have a black lace covered dress for a more classic coord, but would it work? U dont want to but a dress just yet if I can help it.

[Anonymous No.8571745]

>>8571638
Hello also potential comm member, if you don't have a dress that works, you can always just wear some other coord. A lot of girls are going to try and get plain black skirts (maybe from Lady Sloth) and coord that way? I would also suggest maybe posting in the event thread so people can share some of the inspiration they've had

[Anonymous No.8571750]

>>8571711
This looks really dumb. This >>8571744
is a much better idea.

[Anonymous No.8571778]

>>8571745
My confidence for making any decent coordinate is pretty much shot. I know it's not a big deal, but I'd like to match the other members. I have a hard enough time thinking I'm allowed to even wear lolita still, so this is kinda my way of trying to kick myself back into the comm, y'know?
I did post, but I already deleted it for feeling so stupid. Idk, I'm putting way too much thought into it.

[Anonymous No.8571781]

>>8571744
Again I'd stay away from bright yellow, it doesn't really translate well irl.
That idea is cute otherwise, but to clarify it's a lolita dress correct? Other than that I'd just suggest finding a cute bow for the hat like how the Cici works hat is.
>>8571750
Yes it is, but that was roughly anon's idea but done in photoshop so they can see how it'd actually look

[Anonymous No.8571809]

>>8571778
Don't worry too much anon, either way I don't think you have to worry about looking ita. It's just you're aiming for a specific theme(Which isn't mandatory of course). What do you mean by "allowed" to wear lolita? Unless you're underaged that really shouldn't be a concern.

For my coords I personally don't wear loud prints and own mostly non-prints aimed at a classic/gothic style and never get any problems in public if that's a worry for you.

Assuming you are from/wanting to be in my area's comm, you really don't need to worry. Everyone is really friendly and chill, helpful as well if you have any questions. I've been in it for a year~ish and I haven't seen or heard any real "drama" like I've seen people post about on here about their comms.

[Anonymous No.8571879]

>>8571255
Are you sure that vest will match? It looks like a different red, and since it's going to be right on top of the skirt, you'll be able to really see it.

[Anonymous No.8571893]

>>8571781
I was just using what supplies I had at workto draw it out, I wouldn't use bright yellow. Technically it's a dress from David's Bridal, but I've put a petti under it. With a high neck collar, white tights and black tea parties it looks good for classic

[Anonymous No.8571900]

>>8571255
Also, >>8571879 again, but if you're going to go with f21 shoes, maybe you should wait until another pair comes in stock? I don't know if this is under a time crunch or anything, but there were some cuter options, the only problem being stock.

I thought this might work better: http://www.forever21.com/Product/Product.aspx?BR=f21&Category=shoes&ProductID=2000120643&VariantID=

[Anonymous No.8571904]

>>8571893
Would you be able to take a photo with all the main things together?

[Anonymous No.8571916]

>>8570195
I think this is great! I'm thinking dump the heart bag, though, it's too cutesy instead of elegant imo.

[Anonymous No.8571925]

>>8571673
Lace up knee high boots are definitely still better. Try fluevog.

[Anonymous No.8571997]

>>8571904
I'm still looking for decent yellow tights, but when I do I can. Every other yellow seems super highlighter or dirty mustard.

[Anonymous No.8572002]

>>8571809
I just tend to think I'm not really cute or pretty enough for it. I admit my skin has cleared up since high school/college days, but my face is under average. Like if I had a better appearance I would be more fitted for it. Not sure how else to explain.
I've been in my comm since its early days, but I'm not really confident these days about it.

[Anonymous No.8572100]

>>8571542
what about the blouse?

[Anonymous No.8572135]

Could a necklace like the this work in lolita? If so, what style and what kind of neckline?

[Anonymous No.8572145]

>>8572135
Definitely, hime, sweet and even some classic would be good.

You'd want something with an open neckline

[Anonymous No.8572252]

>>8571925
I like the idea but,
>fat rugbyman calves

those shoes right there only go up to a 12 inch calf and a lot of other ones I'm finding only go up to 14, for some reason I'm having a heck of a hard time trying to find wide-calf lace-up boots. also
>$475

nope.jpg if I want to use them as winter boots, they're just going to get scuffed, scratched, and probably eventually damaged from salt stains.

I hate to be that pain in the ass that shoots everyone down like this, but I'm not sure if I'm expressing what I want and don't want clearly enough... Maybe it'd be better if I asked my question like this:

>What kind of features should I try to find in a boot suitable/just okay/just fine for wearing with gothic lolita, with the thought in mind that I would be using these to walk around in the winter?

Like, I don't care if I'm gonna buy something that's going to be 'nitpick' is what I'm trying to get across, I'm just trying to get a certain type of functionality/practicality out of the boot because I think first off, I'm limited in the fact that I need something that's wide calf. Most wide calf boots I find are not lace-up and just have a stretchy bit in the back.

I appreciate the suggestions, however, in spite of me being a picky pain in the butt.

[Anonymous No.8572277]

>>8571925
those run narrower than the product page suggests and look like shit if you open the lacing even a little. the tiny low heel is surprisingly unstable, too. for $500+ after taxes, not worth it in the slightest.

[Anonymous No.8572420]

>>8561487
>Headbows
AATP Crown Tassel
AP Milky Cross
IW Coord Tassel
AP Victorian Tassel

>Legwear
AP Marionette OTK
AP Toy March OTK
AP Victorian Tassel Tights

>Bag
AP Milky Cross
AP Star Bag
AP Elegant Tassel

>Other Accessories
Carousel pin: ModCloth
AP Fairy Heart Charm Wrist Cuffs
AP Crystal Dream Wrist Cuffs
Excentrique Lion Tassel Necklace
Star ring is from MILK
AP Cosmic Ring

[Anonymous No.8572471]

>>8571273
Those show toe cleavage like crazy, there's no half sizes either so the toe box is really huge but the first strap that goes across the ankle squeezes your skin. Be wary anon but I loved them when I saw them in the store.

[Anonymous No.8572514]

>>8572252
I do not think you will find something that is suitable for both lolita and your winter needs without getting something custom-made and/or expensive. I had a look for more elegant military-styled lace ups, but most don't go above 15" or are a lot further towards gothic/punk than lolita. It would be useful if you posted calf measurements too...like am I looking for super wide width or just a bit larger than usual?

[Anonymous No.8572785]

So I'm not married to this headpiece. I first wore this dress with a darker red blouse, but that blouse isn't fancy enough for this next occasion. Would it look less out of place if I added more ribbons to it in a brighter red, or should I find something else entirely? If so, what? Sorry for the rotated photo, I can't figure out how to unrotate it on my phone.

[Anonymous No.8572787]

>>8572785
Anon, everything about this besides the dress itself looks so cheap and awful, and even the dress is so wrinkly.

[Anonymous No.8572806]

>>8572787
I just washed it and haven't ironed it yet. What's wrong with the blouse?

[Anonymous No.8572844]

Working on a coord to wear for my birthday next week. The jsk is a lot more OTT then what I normally wear. I am going for a mature sweet look.
Any suggestions on how to make it more interesting/better are welcome.

[Anonymous No.8572910]

>>8572844
For more mature I would suggest white lace tights instead of ankle socks (ankle socks have a much younger vibe), and instead of a headbow maybe a flower and lace headdress (not a crown), or a hat like in the pic.

[Anonymous No.8572934]

>>8572806
The blouse looks hot pink from your photo, which is a colour I generally feel should be avoided. If it's actually a deeper red, I guess it's fine. The headwear needs to go, though. It looks like something you'd see in a bad child's costume for Esmerelda or Jasmine.
What shoes and bag are you wearing with this? It's hard to recommend headwear without knowing what other colours are in your palette or what sort of vibe you're going for.

>>8572844
I personally think the headbow is fine but agree with >>8572910 that white lace tights would better suit a mature sweet look. The mismatched whites (at least from the photo) might peeve some, but they seem close enough to work for me.

You could always add a bracelet or ring or two for more jewelry, and if you're crafty, create a rose or macaron bag clip to match the print.

[Anonymous No.8572957]

>>8572785
Please burn that headdress. I would suggest adding more wine red accessories to the dress itself if you are going with this color scheme. I beautiful pin on the waist sash would tie it together more, as well as red tights, or shoes.

[Anonymous No.8572976]

>>8572934
I think the mismatch whites are more to do with the lighting. The bow is spot on irl and so are the socks. All though the bag might be a bit off it matches better than my pink bags. I am planning on wearing this again to an event, and for that Ill order a better matching bag. But honestly for dinner with my friends and family I think the white ones close enough.

Do you think I could get away with plain white tights? I dont really like the way lace tights look. Im worried plain white will just be too big of a color block.

[Anonymous No.8572994]

>>8572976
I would definitely go with the ankle socks over plain white tights. There's nothing wrong with them, really, they're just a little less mature than lace tights.

[Anonymous No.8573027]

>>8572934
I'm not carrying a bag, but my shoes are calf height boots in brown, with red tights.

The blouse is actually wine red, it probably just got lost from life to camera to your screen. The veil on the circlet is burgundy though, so it doesn't match, and I have no idea what to replace it with.

[Anonymous No.8573061]

>>8572957
I like the idea of a pin on the sash, would an antique brooch work?

[Anonymous No.8573109]

would this head piece look odd with the dress? I want it because I was thinking it kinda gives that nun-y feel but is slightly different from wearing a veil.

it's plain because it's intended to be decorated, I was thinking of just leaving it as it is so it fits in with the dress more? since I'm just not too sure how else I would decorate it without it becoming too OTT/extravagant, since I want it to be a little bit more reserved (again, nun-like). Perhaps black lace and a cross in the center?

[Anonymous No.8573113]

>>8573109
fuck it I forgot my pic

[Anonymous No.8573191]

>>8572844
I personally think that tights look weird with short sleeves, and the ankle socks will be cute. I'd use lace tights if you ever do a more ott coord with a fancier blouse. Same with the headbow, it looks cute and casual, but when you do the coord for the event later, I'd use the hat with flowers like the other anon posted or something like it.
I'm not sure about the neck of the cutsew/blouse , though, does it look okay worn? It looks pretty casual in the pic. I'd ditch the pearls with a collar like that.

[Anonymous No.8573213]

>>8573113
Sitting plain on the mannequin, it reminds me of pic related. What you described for decoration sounds good, though.

[Anonymous No.8573295]

>>8573113
Depending on your accessories, some gold roses could look amazing.

[Anonymous No.8573332]

>>8570397
ive tried to find nice blue heels with no luck and thank you for your advice. I wore the gloves because i thought it was better to have something over nothing. I have tights and knee high socks on. I assumed that was proper lolita etiquette, ive recently got blue otks to replace my legwear.

[Anonymous No.8573420]

>>8570052
I'm back! I need guidance with jewelry.
My thoughts:
>Regarding headwear, I plan on decorating or commissioning a straw boater or bowler
>Leaning way more towards the socks than the tights, but I wanted to know if the tights were at all doable
>Considering twin braids (like in the blouse pic) with fringe bangs, tied off with blue ribbons at the ends
>Want to decorate the basket to match the dress more

[Anonymous No.8573432]

>>8565798
I feel like you could DIY these socks with some white tights and a black fabric marker.

[Anonymous No.8574005]

>>8573332
>I have tights and knee high socks on
There are very, very few situations where people do this (or look good doing it) - these times are only with ankle socks and tights in matching color. Or maybe if a lolita were trying to layer during the winter, but they wouldn't want people to notice they layered.

>I wore the gloves because i thought it was better to have something over nothing
I understand your thinking. Just a heads up, though, that fingerless gloves will almost guarantee your outfit will look ita. I've only seen fingerless gloves work once, sort of, and it was in a magazine shot from Kera (I think). Wristcuffs or bracelets are best, when you have them.

>ive tried to find nice blue heels with no luck
I scoured around antaina, and found these in pic related, although they're a bit darker than the mana-sama blue of the skirt:
http://world.taobao.com/item/10561286911.htm?fromSite=main&spm=a312a.7700824.w4004-5295210529.5.h6pWRt

However -
>ive recently got blue otks to replace my legwear
You probably won't need those shoes now, haha. Black shoes are easier to find, and definitely more versatile to add to your wardrobe. I would suggest a chunkier shoe to keep the gothic vibe.

Also, just to give you more of an idea on a hairpiece:
http://world.taobao.com/item/17580922820.htm?fromSite=main&spm=a312a.7700824.w4002-3350510245.32.lUsyzY

[Anonymous No.8574011]

I need suggestions on jewlery (I am always such a loss at jewlery for some reason) and I am debating between a white and a black bag what would you suggest?

Also I will style my hair more or wear a wig ( http://d3u67r7pp2lrq5.cloudfront.net/product_photos/30586429/starlet-flax_20(1)_original.jpg ) with the final coord.

Any other suggestions would be great!

[Anonymous No.8574017]

>>8574011
This may sound odd, but I think I'd prefer a white bow to a black one. Or maybe a black oldschool headdress with white rose accents? Your hair is dark enough that the bow kind of blends into it and looks a bit like ears at a distance.

[Anonymous No.8574024]

>>8574017
>http://d3u67r7pp2lrq5.cloudfront.net/product_photos/30586429/starlet-flax_20(1)_original.jpg
Reread. Black bow would be fine with that wig. My bad.

[Anonymous No.8574029]

>>8574017
That is fair actually. I often get comments when I do floordinates that my outfit would look more balanced with a black bow but then when I actually do a black bow I also feel like it blends into my hair too much.

People often say the colour of your hair shouldn't really matter in a coord if it is naturally coloured but I think it can make a difference.

Thanks for the feedback though!

[Anonymous No.8574032]

>>8574024
>>8574029

Also yes that was, in part, why I was considering the wig.

[Anonymous No.8574062]

>>8574029
I think when it comes to things like matching the dress (ie: don't have brown hair with a blue dress or something), it's dumb. But when it comes to tonal values, it can make a difference. Dark accessories get lost against dark hair.

[Anonymous No.8574072]

>>8574062
That makes a lot of sense honestly.

[Anonymous No.8574107]

Just wondering if this is gothic enough or even lolita enough for a gothic themed meet. Also I always tend to have bare wrists/ hands for short sleeved ops so I'm struggling with that.

[Anonymous No.8574109]

>>8574107
Seems a little bare.
I'd go with the solid tights.

[Anonymous No.8574138]

I'm back from a few threads ago, the only thing I'm struggling with is the socks I think. These are probably a little too brown as opposed to ivory/cream, but I wasn't sure where else to look. If someone has any suggestions please, I'd really appreciate them! I'm looking for OTKs over tights but I'll look into either!

[Anonymous No.8574616]

>>8570280
Thank you very much!
>>8571916
I tend to agree, do you have any suggestions for a good purse? i looked through clobba already and didn't find anything that really grabs me.

[Anonymous No.8574736]

are these reds gonna work together or nah?

[Anonymous No.8574750]

>>8574107
I really like the clean simplicity of this, would be a shame to spoil that look with extra jewellery, hair bows etc. I like both tights options, just go with the one you prefer, no harm in buying both sets anyway for different looks since tights are relatively cheap.

I'd avoid using bow Alice bands etc, it completely takes away from the cute yet somewhat severe appearance of the distinctive Wednesday look. What I would suggest is very small matt, neat black bows at the ends of the plaits and nothing more.

Sometimes stark is good and I think your coord is a good example of where it works - not too mention it's quite refreshing in lolita fashion.

[Anonymous No.8574767]

>>8573113
Love your idea anon, I think some kind of subtle bead trim would be all you need to pep it up a little whilst keeping the stark, clean look. The trim could go along the ridged part on the crown and also possibly along the rim at the front too - you could use perhaps a smaller, simpler trim for the front as well.

[Anonymous No.8574771]

>>8574767

[Anonymous No.8575122]

>>8573432
Link to those shoes anon?

[Anonymous No.8575135]

>>8574736
I don't know anon, the bonnet is dark maroon/cream while the dress is a lighter maroon/white, and the heart purse is definitely too bright for them. I think the tights and bonnet would also be too busy for the dress as far as patterns are concerned. I think you can still get a queen of hearts look with that dress without all the different patterns. I think the card purse would look fine, but maybe tone down accessories. But that's just me!

[Anonymous No.8575289]

>>8574107
I have those boots anon and they are super comfy!

[Anonymous No.8575326]

>>8571273
I think these shoes look really nice anon!

[Anonymous No.8575354]

>>8574767
I like the bead trim idea a lot, it kind of keeps in touch with the typical kind of beading/lace work that is on french hoods but still simple enough that it isn't so extravagant as how they are usually styled. would also keep it versatile enough in my wardrobe to be used with other dresses.

>>8574107
source on the boots? they're super cute!

[Anonymous No.8575363]

What colors could I coordinate with this besides pink? Most of it is pink on pink, and the only accent color is the leaves, but they're kind of a weird sage-y green that would be hard to match. I'm just not sure what other color would look nice.
Worth noting that the long chiffon part of the sleeves is detachable, so I could take them off and use wristcuffs or something.

[Anonymous No.8575369]

>>8575363
brown, cream
neutrals mostly

[Anonymous No.8575704]

>>8575363
I initially thought neutral brown but it wasn't quite doing it for me. I actually think it would be best to keep things relatively simple since it's quite a busy dress. I even think cream on cream for the tights and shoes works in this case. I think it would be nice to bring in that olive green shade but it may be best left in the form of leaves on a say, a vintage style hat.

[Anonymous No.8575729]

>>8574011
I like this but I have to agree with the others that the black bow isn't quite doing it, at the very least I think it would look better placed to the side and not directly in the centre.

I actually think a white oldschool type headdress would look good with this, perhaps with some small black bows or roses added to the sides (keep it subtle so it doesn't quite resemble a typical black x white headdress).

Another trick for making black bows stand out a little better on dark hair, is to add little white/cream pearl embellishments to it, I think that could look quite pretty as well.

[Anonymous No.8575738]

>>8574736
bring in some cream roses for under the bonnet plus a few that exact match the burgundy of the dress and i think it will work.

Agree with the other anon that the heart bag is not quite right, besides it seems a bit more orange in tone than the other reds/burgundy. Card purse looks good.

I like the tights, I think the cream shoes also help break up the boldness of the pattern well.

[Anonymous No.8576209]

very, very last min coord for PAX.
I wanted to cosplay but plans fell through. Thought I might try to throw together a last min AC villager inspired something.
Trying to make it not to costume-ish, but still be kind of recognizable.
Was thinking of getting some accessory tool? Maybe a watering can? Or finishing up this pitfall seed bag I've been working on.
Also other ideas on leg wear?

Sorry if the image is all huge.

[Anonymous No.8576276]

>>8574750
Thanks! I was thinking something like that but I've seen people get nitpicky about no big visible hair accessories on top of the head and bare wrists, so it's good to know you like it.
The shoes are from here, everybody.
http://www.myhabit.com/#page=d&asin=B00XCASQOC&cAsin=B00JVW551M&fc=1&ref=qd_ic_t_d
I have the brown, and I'm going to order the black. They're rather comfortable and I normally dislike heels and non-leather shoes. I could walk quite far in them.

[Anonymous No.8576278]

>>8576209
Reminds me more of the candy gingham shirt (well, dress in the old games)

[Anonymous No.8576284]

>>8576209
(cont.) If you're going iconic AC, then blue striped socks, red mary janes, and a bob wig in pink or something. I wouldn't expect you to wear a cone hat or anything haha. Yours just looks normal, but maybe because I played gc a lot.

[Anonymous No.8576291]

>>8575729
I do quite like the idea of the black roses and the white headdress I am definitely going to try that out! Thank you for the suggestion.

[Anonymous No.8576292]

>>8576284
ha ha the pointy hats.
I'm just pulling what I have in my closet that kind of resembles a few items.

Might have time to run around and pick up a few things.
I do have blue striped socks tho.

[Anonymous No.8576404]

My first coord. Idk if I did well or not. Asking for concrit. Thank you!

[Anonymous No.8576418]

>>8576404

Looks a bit too unstructured for lolita, though I guess you're going for otome instead? Regardless, it's a really cute coord.

[Anonymous No.8576425]

>>8576418
Ah! Oh no. I was actually going for lolita than otome. Any suggestions you could give me to make it more lolita?

[Anonymous No.8576473]

>>8576425

Ah, I see. It's mainly the blouse and the cardigan. Because the skirt poofs out from the waist, normally everything above the waist you'd want to reduce bulk and have it be somewhat form-fitting, so that you can emphasise the poof (and also not look so fat -- when the top is poofy and the bottom is poofy, you end up looking like a snowman, or maybe a tent, because there is so much loose fabric. So you end up looking bigger than you really are). Mainstream cardigans are also usually well-known for being too long for lolita as well, they tend to sit weirdly on poofy skirts and cut off the skirt in a rather jarring place.

So basically what you need is a blouse that fits better; get a blouse that is shaped so that it tapers in at the waist (look for princess seams, or look for a blouse made with stretch material). For the cardigan, get one that is tighter, not so loose, and get a cropped cardigan that ends above your waist so you don't have to deal with trying to get it to sit nicely over your skirt.

For otome, it's perfectly acceptable to have a completely flat skirt, so a loose blouse with a loose cardigan over a flat skirt is fine.

There is also a little lack of detailing, lolita likes to have small little touches of finery on everything. For instance the blouse would look nicer if it had some nice lace on it. The beret can be prettied up with a rose hair clip or an additional bow. The cardigan is a little plain, too. If you can't find a more fancy cardigan, adding a nice brooch or a nice necklace can make it look better.

Hope that helps!

[Anonymous No.8576483]

>>8576473
Thank you so much! I was a bit worried of having a more detailed blouse as the skirt itself is quite busy with the print. Same with the cardigan. If that makes sense?

You suggestions have been very helpful! Thank you so much!

[Anonymous No.8576860]

Is there a way to coord Petit Patisserie in brown with red without using quite so much red? Like if just the cardigan and then another small thing, such as an accessory, were red, would it work?

[Anonymous No.8577093]

>>8576860
I think you have to be careful with this because you would still want to balance your coord and if it is all top heavy and nothing on the legs it could look awkward.

[Anonymous No.8577188]

Looking for ways to improve this coord. I won't be wearing the circle lenses next time, because I don't particularly like the way they look on me. Also, dress is knee length, this is just an awkward angle.

[Anonymous No.8577294]

>>8577188

First of all, please loosen your bust corset just a bit because that looks painful. Get a lolita blouse with ruffles or lace. Tights are your friend, no ankle socks with tights, instead try ones with a print that picks up other colors in your dress. A single large headdress like a bonnet would look nicer and more classic than two smaller bows. Also add wrist cuffs or bracelets.

[Anonymous No.8577358]

>>8577294
Yeah, I intent on adding lace to this blouse. It was a thrifted find, and I had no time to fix it up before going out. There is no gold on the dress, so I'll try and find some with silver print. I think I'll find just an alternative headbow to wear, because bonnets don't seem to work well with my face/head shape as I've seen in other coords I've made. I'll be getting some wristcuffs soon as well. Thanks anon!

[Anonymous No.8577414]

>>8576860
How about red cardigan + red shoes?

[Anonymous No.8577421]

>>8577188
Which dress is this? Are you sure it's not backwards? It looks overall incredibly awkward in the bust.

[Anonymous No.8577445]

>>8577421
I agree with this anon it almost looks like it's on backwards...

[Anonymous No.8577450]

>>8577421
Its Enchantic Enchantilly's Rose Arch JSK in BluexSilver. It has a bit of an awkward bust as is, and my large chest doesn't help that much. I added the navy waist-tie under the bust to give it more of a proper silhouette, because it just kind of poofs out in all the wrong ways otherwise.

[Anonymous No.8577517]

>>8577450
>>8577188

Maybe try a bolero or a shawl like in pic related to cover the bust area.

[Anonymous No.8577531]

>>8577517
I'll definitely look into getting one! I can see how it would fix the problem.

[Anonymous No.8577910]

I posted this in the lolita general awhile back asking about if the manolos would work in a coord. Now I was hoping to get a little help in finding a blouse similar to this one. I have looked everywhere for this same AATP blouse but have had no luck. Does anyone have any suggestions for a similar blouse? Or a different one that would work with this coord? Concrit welcome!

[Anonymous No.8578011]

>>8577910
Here's a similar blouse from baby, on sale to boot!
http://shop.baby-aatp.com/collections/baby-the-stars-shine-bright/products/b39bl416-back-pintucked-blouse

Personally, I'd go for something like pic related instead though. I can dig up a similar taobao one I saw if you're not looking for brand too.
http://shop.baby-aatp.com/collections/baby-the-stars-shine-bright/products/b39bl441-chiffon-princess-dress-blouse

[Anonymous No.8578021]

>>8577188
Dress issues aside, I'd go with some patterned or navy ombre tights and you need something on your wrist. This will help balance out your hair.
I also don't quite understand where your space-themed accessories (hair clip, socks) are coming from and why you seem to be mixing silver and gold unless that's your IG filter making the heart pendant look gold.

[Anonymous No.8578079]

>>8578021
I'm gonna be picking up some navy wristcuffs ASAP, cause I definitely see the imbalance. I was mostly just tossing together what I could out of my limited wardrobe in short notice. I really need to build up my closet.

I don't know why I wore the gold necklace. I think I just grabbed it while I was half awake to be honest. I'll be doing silver next time.

[Anonymous No.8578373]

>>8576860

Normally I suggest just doing another colour and then adding red accesories, usually white x brown with red accessories work pretty well. But then I noticed in your pic that the dress isn't even white x brown, it's more like funky grey (I guess because of the brown lining showing through the white).

I think you can still try it with yellow x brown + red accents, or pink x brown + red accents, or even do a full brown coord with red accents, though. I'd say try putting together a few collages and see if it looks all right before going all out and committing to purchases.

[Anonymous No.8578412]

doing a witch coord and i need some help cause i feel like this isnt "witchy" enough. i hoping someone could direct me to a good tutorial for making witch hats too since im a little stumped

[Anonymous No.8578432]

>>8577188
Patterned tights, dark colours preferably.
A dark navy or black underskirt to make the dress appear longer.
The headbows sitting that vertically looks horribly awkward. Try making them more horizontal or avoid them all together, they look a little tacky.
Fake eyelashes, you have lovely shaped eyes so make them noticeable with longer lashes.
That dangly thing is too long and is dragging the focal point of your facial features down. You want the bottom star to not go below your lips. It's there to draw attention to your face, not your neck. Also, it appears too silver when you have a gold necklace. Pick only one metal, not two.
Also, your blouse appears too tight, particularly in the arms. Like another anon said, get something more ruffly and covered in lace.
And no ankle socks, esp. with tights. It really doesn't flatter you. You have a cute face, and work on your poses. Don't let people take photos "looking up" at you. It's an unflattering angle. Good luck, you'll make a great lolita eventually.

[Anonymous No.8578569]

>>8573420
Jewellery: the teacup necklace and the dangly earrings are cute, plus those are more likely to be seen if you choose the wig rather than braids. I think the bright bracelet is too bright and would go for the lighter colour to match the necklace.
Hat: sounds cute. I would go for less is more rather than ott so it should be easy to get a couple of flowers and a ribbon to attach yourself.
Tights: given that the dress is so long, you may get away with them as they will hardly show. I like the socks better though.
Basket: looks a bit orange. I'd go for a lighter beige straw, although I suppose if your hat matches it then it's not such a big deal.
Also I prefer the tan shoes overall, I think they are nicer.

>>8574138
I can never tell from stock photos how IW well look irl. I've seen off brand ivory knit otks with lace tops before in normal stores but of course it's completely the wrong time of year to find them now.

>>8578412
To be honest I would have had no idea this was witch themed if I saw it irl. It just looks like a normal outfit. Because the colours aren't usual and the dress isn't even remotely gothic at a casual glance, the themes of the items need to be more obviously stereotypically witch costume - e.g. slightly pointy, buckle shoes with a chunky heel (could be a diy job with chunky pumps and gluing on buckles, it pic related can be found here http://www.maskworld.com/english/department/theme-parties/witches-wizards/witch-shoes/witch-shoes-brown--103938)), striped tights (maybe brown/white if you're set on red x brown x white), consider a cape or capelet, and hat + broom + cauldron shaped handbag? It will probably be a fair bit of diy as those colours will be difficult to find and match.

[Anonymous No.8579874]

I need help for this one

[Anonymous No.8580047]

Just got this dress in the mail, but I'm having a bit of trouble. I was thinking something simple, with cream lace tights, brown shoes, cream wristcuffs (?), no idea for headwear Suggestions appreciated!

[Anonymous No.8580051]

>>8579874
Ivory blouse, lace tights, brown/navy/grey shoes.

[Anonymous No.8580081]

>>8580047
I think a brown headbow would look nice, also a brown/blue beret

[Anonymous No.8580268]

>>8578569
Thank you for the input, anon!
For the hat, I did plan on keeping it simple. Lace trim on the brim and wrapped around the crown, and a few artificial roses with a small cornflower blue (I think that's the blue on the dress) bow, to mimic the print on the dress.

[Anonymous No.8580386]

>>8572785
Still need help with what to put on my head. I'm ditching the circlet. The blouse is wine red, and I'll be wearing red tights and brown shoes.

[Anonymous No.8580730]

>>8579874
Aside from what's already been suggested, I would consider picking up the blue ribbon trim as an accent colour, or pairing this dress with pink, a teal green or navy.

>>8580047
It might depend on your hair. If you have brown hair a brown bow might get lost in which case maybe a couple of flower clips in ivory/brown or blue would be better

>>8580386
Brown floral headband, or maybe round headdress?

[Anonymous No.8580789]

>>8575122
http://world.taobao.com/item/41100279411.htm?fromSite=main
they are warm and comfy too

[Anonymous No.8580871]

>>8578373
Yeah, it's more of a cream than a white.
I usually coord this with pink or cream, which is why when I saw that red x brown coord I was thinking I might try that out. My style tends to be a bit simpler/not so loud, though, which is why I'd like to avoid something quite so vibrant.
I do own a similar red cardigan and red shoes, so I might try what >>8577414 and >>8577093 suggested. I am just a bit of a newbie and still don't trust my coording judgement.
Thanks, everyone!

[Anonymous No.8580885]

>>8575704
Where's that bag from anon?

[Anonymous No.8580894]

>>8580885
Not that anon, but it's from long ears and sharp ears, a taobao brand.

[Anonymous No.8581005]

I have all the items and the colors and fabrics go well together despite what it looks like on the collage.
I was going for something like a royal vampire but I don't think any of that comes through. I might need the Moitie bat bag?

[Anonymous No.8581202]

I'm lacking inspiration and need major help!~

[Anonymous No.8581234]

I was thinking a vampire coord when I had all of the wine items but all black started to look really nice so I'm stuck. I'm not sure if I should go with all black or the wine reds. I also own opaque black and wine tights if the printed tights are too much for this coord. I'm also looking for a bat or coffin bag instead of the book bag (only black bag I own).

[Anonymous No.8581254]

>>8581234
Personally, I like the wine coordinate more.

[Anonymous No.8581261]

>>8581234
where is that blouse from?

[Anonymous No.8581328]

>>8581261
Blouse is from Axes Femme.

[Anonymous No.8581345]

>>8581234
This is just my opinion but I feel like it's a shame that that cape would hide the nice cut of that bust, and might even look a little awkward if the cape doesnt reach far down enough to the cutout.

[Anonymous No.8581500]

I'm planning my first gothic coord, would these shoes be a good choice?

[Anonymous No.8581516]

>>8581500
depends on the outfit of course but in theory yes, they're very nice, gothic appropriate shoes.

[Anonymous No.8581525]

Would a dress like this work for baby's first coord? It's apparently made out of a "soft cotton knit" so I'm a little worried but at the same time it's super cute. I do have an alternative if it doesn't work.

[Anonymous No.8581533]

>>8581525
The fabric going to be similar to a cutsew, if you are going to go casual I don't see why that dress wouldn't work.

[Anonymous No.8581557]

>>8581345
Damn thanks for pointing that out, I didn't think about that. I'm going with the wines because I want the blouse and shoes but I have another axes Femme blouse that might work so it won't cover the cut if the cape blouse looks bad.

[Anonymous No.8581664]

>>8581660
Might as well post this here too. It seems as though most people pair Moitie's Nun OPs with almost all black, but I really want to wear the white shoes.

[Anonymous No.8581672]

>>8581557
it's a nice blouse but I feel like a higher neckline rather than a peter pan collar would be more fitting to a vampy coord. I love your coord in general though anon, especially the wine version.

I prefer your original blouse choice for the reason above but I do see what the other anon means about it being a shame to cover up the jsk under bust detailing, I really think it depends where the cape part will fall. You could even do some creative temporary stitches on the cape part perhaps, to reveal more of the jsk.

Some bat clips in addition to your hair accessory could look good. The same company also do a necklace that doubles as a brooch.

[Anonymous No.8581802]

>>8570195
Minor update, the socks showed up but the blouse is MIA. Sigh.

Still looking for suggestions for a more elegant white purse, thanks to anyone who has a minute for it :)

[Anonymous No.8581883]

I am really in love with this dress.
However I am stumped on how I would coord it?? Any ideas????

[Anonymous No.8581894]

These are the things I own currently.

I want to make a cute halloween coord, I don't know what to do for jewelry, the head piece, or the purse.

[Anonymous No.8581899]

>>8581883
I am too anon, the print makes me think of something AP would do right now

[Anonymous No.8581944]

>>8571673
Maybe these anon?

I own these boots. they are nice and tall, adjust around bigger calves, and are VERY comfortable. the heel is not hard to walk in.

I wear these with my casual goth clothing but they sound like they will work with your stuff.

[Anonymous No.8581949]

>>8581944
also i should mention, they were $50 and they are ridiculously high quality...

[Anonymous No.8582050]

>>8581005
I'm not feeling vampire yet either. I agree that you need more bat wings in it if that's where you're headed.

>>8581202
I really like the idea of this with white and mint green - like white blouse/socks, lilac neck bow, mint bolero and shoes. Themed gold tone jewellery and possibly a gold clutch?

>>8581883
Keeping it dark: black zodiac constellation tights/cross print tights, black cat bag or that heart shaped one with bat wings, blue shoes, black blouse, cross necklace, black/blue headdress with veil
Lighter: white blouse + tights, black shoes - kinda like the stock photo

[Anonymous No.8582095]

>>8572277
Slave to fashion, you are not. Take that any way you'd like to.

[Anonymous No.8582105]

>>8577358
If you intend on using stairs in your next shoot, give Ani the high ground.
Also, please don't just slap lace on that blouse and call it a day. I'm telling you grrl, it just isn't loliable enough. you'd be better off with a more flattering cut for a blouse, 3/4 sleeve with ruffles preferably.
Other anon covered everything else.

[Anonymous No.8582108]

>>8565869
Basically visualised what has already been said. It's an easy dress to coord, you'll look beautiful.

[Anonymous No.8582111]

>>8578412
If you had a cowl, witchy shoes and more gothic-esque tights, this would be perfectly fine. To note, I'd go for a pendant that looked as close to the snow white poisoned apple as possible, like when the witch pulled it from the cauldron with the dripping green skull. Very recognizable.

[Anonymous No.8583465]

>>8581894
bumps for help

[Anonymous No.8583548]

Hello, recently I purchased one of my dd and I just came to realize I have little to nothing to create a coord.
I like to stick to lolita-only accesories with a few exceptions.
On a similar note, does anyone own a MMM bat bag replica to share their quality. I have few goth purses and would like to know if buying one would be a good idea or not.

[Anonymous No.8583584]

>>8582108
Sauce on that bag/basket, anon?

[Anonymous No.8583676]

>>8583548
Would these tights match the print?
I cant distinguish if the tights are navy and white or black and white, sorry.

[Anonymous No.8583805]

>>8583584
The seller has other basket things as well under 'hand knitted art'
http://www.aliexpress.com/store/product/KINGART-Rustic-rattan-plastic-storage-box-storage-box-finishing-storage-box-picnic-basket/613569_1978890974.html

[Anonymous No.8583817]

>>8583676
They're blue. It's ok anon, I feel for you.

[Anonymous No.8584021]

>>8583548
I have the loris replica and the real bag. The replica is pretty good quality for how cheap it is. It looks really similar to the real thing and it's durable.

[Anonymous No.8584387]

I'm planning a witch coord for Halloween this year, but I had so many ideas that I'm not fully set on what I put together. I already have the dress, just have to order everything from Taobao next month.

I'm gonna decorate the hat with some gold and black accents (not sure what yet) and I was planning to spray paint a pumpkin basket and carry around some candy to give out.

Any feedback or suggestions would be great!

[Anonymous No.8584435]

>>8583548
So this is my first attempt, I used some accesories I currently have: pagoda, shoes and headdress. With accesories I feel would match the aesthetic.
Can anyone provide some criticism?

[Anonymous No.8584440]

>>8584435
2nd attempt, is it just me or the tights from the previous coord seem iffy

[Anonymous No.8584441]

>>8584440
Dropped my pic

[Anonymous No.8584463]

>>8584441
I like this, not sure on the hat though tbh, it looks inferior to a lot of high quality vintage hats you can pick up for less money - if I couldn't see the btssb logo on it, I'd assume it was just a mediocre vintage style hat or possibly something from the 80s inspired by the 40s.

[Anonymous No.8585175]

>>8581894
Is the surface spell an entire under dress? I think it will look good.

[Anonymous No.8585182]

>>8581894
I want your kidsyoyo so bad

[Anonymous No.8585696]

I've been struggling to figure out what type of head piece or hat I can wear with my nameless poem op. Anyone have suggestions?

[Anonymous No.8585702]

>>8585696
Veil? Or a crown made of crosses.

[Anonymous No.8585714]

>>8585696
hop onto the headscarf trend and wear a wimple

[Anonymous No.8585715]

>>8585696
a crown of thorns

[Anonymous No.8585723]

>>8585714
>>8585715
these are both excellent ideas for my wip jesus boob dress coord *takes notes*

where 2 cop said accessories doe?

[Anonymous No.8587523]

>>8582111
>>8578569
Thanks for the help. I'm looking at some witch shoes and switching out the tights too. Ill probably sew my own hood and cape and make my own hat. DIY seems the best way to get high quality accessories for this cause most of the stuff online is cheap and costumey.

[Anonymous No.8588002]

>>8584387
Are you planning to wear a blouse? The jabot with that dress neckline could be kinda weird. I'm also not 100% convinced about the tights, I think a motif of some sort (bats?) would be cuter than vertical stripes. Presumably the book bag is just a filler and you're actually gonna carry the pumpkin one? Or are you intending it kinda like a book of spells + pumpkin?

[Anonymous No.8588904]

I'm going to be wearing a navy dress for an event, and I'm not sure whether to go with black or brown shoes. The dress is a deep neutral navy with gold buttons and white trim. I have Classic knee boots in both colors, but I'm not sure which to bring.

According to menswear, either color can be used, but do you think I can aply that to Lolita as well? I'm leaning towards brown but I'm unsure.

[Anonymous No.8588921]

>>8588904
brown please.

[Anonymous No.8588923]

>>8588002
I was considering it, but I wasn't sure what style of blouse to wear underneath so I said screw it. Do you think a choker would work instead of the jabot?

I'll look into some bat tights or some other creepy elements! The book is more for functional, holding my wallet and keys, while the pumpkin was kind of a prop.

[Anonymous No.8589095]

>>8588923
A choker would be better. If you're keeping the bat theme you could incorporate that with the choker

[Anonymous No.8589205]

>>8580789
Does the outside show wear easily? I've had a similar pair and the fake leather material started peeling everywhere it got even the smallest scuff.

[Anonymous No.8589962]

>>8582108
I just got this in and.... it's much more beige than pink it's so dust rose. I'm a bit worried. No wonder it's from 2009 and still new with tags.