/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6620340
oh no, it was this one, by teal line guy

>>6368186
Just another one of the many line art techniques

>>6217370
>4500x4500 600 dpi.
Holy shit really? Your brush size seems really thin, are you copying a style of lineart from another artist?

>>6123925

>>5107944
all i got
personally i just reference other works

>>4949220
I think he's trying to say that light gets usually absorbed or scattered by any given surface, but if you turn it parallel to your line of sight, there's gonna be light that's gonna bounce off of the surface perfectly instead of scattering or being absorbed, hence why, close to the edges (where the planes of the forms become parallel), you can see a bit of shine. No idea why it's called fresnel, though.

>>4431322

>>4255141
L I N E W E I G H T (pic related)

Also you really need to study your forms and anatomy more. Her cranium looks a little squished in, doesn't it?

>>3989034
>>3990461
And here's something that could help you with your lineweight if you want. Really helpful for me when I found it months ago. Good luck anon.

>>3974253
>>3974266
Also, pic related might be useful.

>>3800111

>>3613184
>>3613003

I am trying to help you but I do wonder if even this stuff I've posted is a little out of your reach. Will you even take any of this into consideration, or will you continue to polish turds for the rest of your life?

Maybe you should at least save them in a folder for when you get older and mature some more, when you think back on this as another one of those embarrassing moments where you weren't nearly as knowledgeable as you thought you were. When you lament wasting your time and desperately want the help, when your skills have truly plateaued for a long time. You try asking for help, but have driven too many people away to really get it anymore.

How sad.

I sincerely hope this doesn't happen to you. :^)

I guess it's time to leave you alone and watch you flounder or git gud. Which will it be, friend?

>anime lips are straight wrong and so it's deleting a line completely to 'allude' contact between surfaces
>it's a dumb stylistic choice like tumblr potato noses, it doesn't look good
what's going on in this thread?

>>3437341

>>3436822
I would also recommend Dynamic Sketching with Peter Han. It gets meme around here quite a bit, but it really did do wonders to my line work

>>3406812
This should help.

>>3338163

>>3243037
First off, inking requires knowledge of form and value. If you haven't mastered those two fundamentals yet, it's going to be very hard to do beautiful consistent linework. Pic related for what those things have to do with line art.

The DC comics guide to inking comics is a good read, since you're looking into comic stuff. Another favorite of mine is Framed Ink, that book goes over atmosphere and lighting, composition, and even a little character design.

By the way, if you need help with learning about paneling eventually, check out Scott McCloud, Understanding Comics and Making Comics are fucking great.