/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4369243
Still /beg/, but here's my attempt at redlining it. Big problems are with prospective and the static nature of the torso. The knee is out too far and the arm isn't foreshortened hard enough. Additionally the arms don't have any muscle; they're just twigs.The tits are round balloons here when they have weight; nipples are also usually off-center of your chest and tits are no different. Ribcage also doesn't have enough definition; which is a shame because it's a great place to emphasize the thin waist. I only defined the muscles for the legs for better understanding of where her thigh muscles will bulge; it can easily be more subdued but where the overlap for the body is more important. Didn't redline the hands or face because I wanted more focus on the rest of the body and honestly would take even more time.

If anyone in this thread has anything to add to my post or if anyone wants to correct me let me know.