/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4699703
I did some more studies from FLCL, this time of Canti. his model changes from episode to episode (even sometimes form shot to shot), so it's kinda hard to tell what some parts of him are supposed to actually look like
>>4709942
is yours the one on the right? I think you really improved the foreshortening on the raised leg, the size increase really helps make it more dynamic. the face lost some of its appeal, but I don't think I'd notice if the original wasn't right next to it
>>4711407
looks great, super expressive line work. I think you could sacrifice some of the anatomical accuracy on the face of the girl of the left, the face shapes look 'correct' but not necessarily appealing. drawing interlocking fingers is complicated as fuck, but I think you nailed it pretty well here
>>4711432
I think figure drawing would come in handy for that. I had a teacher once who told us to come to a figure drawing session with a model sheet and some reference of a cartoon/anime character of choice and to draw that character doing the model's poses. pretty fun exercise!
>>4711618
I think the details turned out really well, you definitely have more patience than I do. I dunno if it's because I'm turning my head sideways to look at it, but the drawing looks pretty accurate to the ref too, really well observed
>>4711808
looks pretty good, those shadow shapes are very old school anime looking. don't let the epiphany escape you, keep drawing more!