/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5109257
theres a lotr of mistakes but heres something you are missing, youa re trying to copy that gb artstyle right, that guy has that soft blending that makes theextremities almost look like blobs but he does know anatomy and he makes enphasis on key parts where you fail bringing down your drawing completely to beg levels which i think you aren't, for example the knee, you just used the same tone for the whole area making it look like it's one solid piece, you cant tell if there's a knee there, not to mention the muscle insertions are wrong, the other knee that has that part circled in red idk if you know what those lines mean because they are too straight defeating their purpose that is to show that form of connection with the calve so it doesnt make the leg look like uhhhh... a straight sausage, same with the right arm in the armpit area, the arms, left look like limp dick and feets barely have form. Other shit you need to fix are the sausage fingers in the left, tits with not gravity enabled and if im cherrypicking the hair looks stiff and not natural i know the style is like that but some hanks of hair like that large one poking out almost horizontally it's unatural abd the ones below look like they are part of one single part rather than showing that form that wraps the head around if that makes sense.