/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3689464
>>3689488
It's a bit stiff imo, some of pic related is more of personal preference but in general
>Neck too short, head position is unnatural, face a bit too wide for it's angle
>Relax the shoulders, arms are a bit short
>Back looks unnatural and stiff
>Breasts are too high up her chest, even with a push-up bra they shouldn't be that far up