/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5075445
I love the feel of this drawing and the toony/stylized face with thicc muscular anatomy.

But your construction is broken. Her neck should be more engaged and her shoulder in that pose and in that perspective would have a slight upward tilt. Try using the pose more too with her neck, its very static compared to the rest of her. Try redrawing this flipped and redo the gesture line from the waist up to see where her spine should be and build your torso out from there.

Also the divot in her ribcage and cleavage looks weird and less like muscle and more like shrinkwrap anorexic. Your style is very cute but a little stiff. Loosen it up with more curved gesture and study body language.

what brushes would you use to achieve this kind of art style, in terms of inking / coloring? I love the way this guy's artwork looks and I keep trying to replicate it but I can't get it right.