/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Mon Dec 28 02:47:28 2020 No.5092328 [View]
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any critique?

Her head is meant to be tilted very slightly down. I'm not sure if I mess that up.

I feel like the I messed up the eyes. It's meant to be viewed sligthly down and normally eyes get straighter eye lids for normal people when the head tilts down. I'm not sure it happens for anime characters that much.
Also the mouth feels a bit iffy, I know loomis tells us to curve the mouth to the curvature of the face but I don't know if it works that well for anime mouths.

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