/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Reposting since the last thread died.

Looking at this on mobile though, I think the head is a little too big. What do you think?

>>4996064
It could be a bit smaller, but I think it fits the general proportions of the character
Nice linework

>>4996064
nah, head is fine. Looking pretty solid so far, the face is cute. I'm not sure if it's because i got used to it or because you actually improved your faces, gj anyway

>>4996064
Head is fine imo. I think the neck is a bit too long. I would shorten it by half.

>>4996012

>>4996137

Nice coom you got here guys

>>4996137
>>4996133
kyle fan?

>>4996148
Yeah. I specifically like the way he renders skin. So i try to emulate that.

>>4995769
My blog is @AZAV858
posting pic related so you see it ITT.

>>4996064
I think you are definitely one of the more skilled artists I've seen on here, but I wish you would draw things more like the Tawna image or that clown girl image you made earlier. Those were really well-made and arousing. I can see a lot of potential, but your works seem to be veering towards weirder concepts and are ultimately less sexy. They are well-made, but not as arousing as they could be.

>>4996203
Your opinion on what is arousing/appealing has 0 value, cause it's a subjective thing.

>>4996230
Just because something is subjective doesn't mean an opinion has zero value. It can't hurt to hear different perspectives on these things. And like I said, it was drawn well. I didn't think I would need to say that it was my opinion and that he should take it with a grain of salt. That was implied already.

/beg/ reporting in

>>4996310
sage advice: Learn how to use reference. Drawing from imagination is a meme.

>>4996137
>peak of asshole lines creeping out like spider legs
ruined
why does this meme persist I hate it

>>4996128
>>4996120
>>4996076
Thanks for the feedback (and yeah I've been studying the structures of the head to try and construct not solid forms. My faces are still a bit gimpy, but they're improving.

>>4996203
The two pieces you gave as examples are results of me following prompts. Recently I've been trying to follow my own prompts which is probably why the subject matter has gotten a bit weird. Thank you though, I try to take all the feedback on here into consid.

>>4996628
Cannot unsee

>>4996188
>my blog is...
no one really asked

>>4997092
I did in the previous thread actually. They got some good shit.

>>4997092
>no one really asked
I literally quoted it you stupid fucking idiot.

>>4996628
huh, I like it. what's wrong with assholes?

>>4996064

hehe, I critiqued the ilium on your drawing last night, then I realized I'd done the same thing on my drawing so I didn't post it

>>4996628
I want to fuck stockings

>>4997151
not the person you're replying to but the arms on your drawing are kinda wonky. the triceps look contracted when they shouldn't be and facing the viewer when they shouldn't be either. forearm is kinda messed up on her right arm as well.
very good job on the torso, legs, and shoulders though. i love the way you overlapped the forms. your linework is beautiful too.

>>4997166

Thank you; yeah, you're right about the arms.

>>4997151
We can be shit together :')

Im gonna coooom

>>4997092
>>4997141
let us take this as a lesson on why we should think before we post

>>4997148
No you like poorly drawing spiders that you drew

>>4997288
what should a proper painted butthole look like? I need to know for scientific reasons.

>>4997288
can you give me one of those redlines, but for a butthole?

>>4997308
a brown line?

>>4996064
nice cock bro

will be my coloring practice later. still trying to get the hang of feet

>>4997402
Thanks for complimenting my dick, bro. Bros always got bros backs.

I cannot for the life of me get hair right. Or literally anything else.

>>4997625
And another version obviously

>>4997477
sure it'd be great if you got mine..

>>4997141
ok, "other anon".

>>4997627
make image small so my shit internet doesn't take a minute to load it.

>>4997625
I cant see anything wrong with the hair relative to the rest of the picture. Did you use reference?

I recommend trying to build the body with basic blocks with perspective in mind following a pose reference.

>>4997413
looks great but her left foot would be facing towards the viewer

>>4996012
I wanna fuck a little girl in her asshole so bad bros

>>4997822
Rope, nonce.

>>4997857
Where did everything go so wrong...

>>4997857
this gives me ideas for /ic/ posts

does this look ok?

>>4997980
this too

>>4997982
blog?

>>4998000

twitter.com/Stuffted1

>>4997857
blog?

Need to finish off the hay and the pitchfork and a few others things, but it's almost done.

>>4997980
I really like the stylisation, but eyes going over the hair is a huge pet peeve for me. It's a stylistic choice obvs, but I think she'd look more sultry with hair falling over her eye. Other than that, it's neat.

>>4997857
why people like those x-ray views? i guess they kinda work for a hentai comic, but other than that it's quite retarded.

>>4998290
I like it.

>>4997814

ty anonny. fixed her foot

>>4997857
Ah yes
granny gruntilda
every boy's dream

>>4998277
Blonde?

>>4997413
The hips/ass are a little low making her torso look longer and giving her a bottom heavy look/flow.

>>4997857
Lmfao
It's damn good

>>4998415

does it still look too low in the second iteration? I might just liquify/warp the ass smaller at the end

Fox girl up for auction. Will he put in a bid?

critique?

>>4998620
There's no stick up her ass

>>4998620
quite nice

>>4998089
>mjölk
Hello fellow scandinaviafag

>>4998277
it looks like all of your forms are constructed like logs of feces (literally)
squint your eyes and look at the hair even, looks like a scat artists rendition of a dragon turd
Idk what it is

>>4998976
I'm actually British, but I have a tonne of Swedish friends I met playing multiplayer games but I like to bully them by including parts of their/your culture in my coom art.

Amped it up recently by naming the femboys I draw after them in upload descriptions. Can't believe Jocke is able to take 3 whole dicks at once, and Leif is a champ at gobbling futa semen. Whew.

does anyone know how to render like this. this melon 22 and i like his art beyond just basic coomer appeal any idea how he gets this super neat style.

>>4999025
blog?

>>4999145
try studying that pic you posted? xD

>>4999021
>"something something dragon scat"
My dude it's just a girl with her hair up. If those hair shapes throw you off that much the problem may be on your end.

>>4999154
https://twitter.com/ortamaw

You'd be my 1000th follower. Finally hit 1k. Feels good man.

>>4999189
Oh my god, ngmi I like your shit even though a lot of it is already far beyond borderline, but this is, wow. This is a dark road.

>>4999189
youre wild dude, im sure your coombux will be plentiful though if youre going for niche content

>>4999224
i mean they kind of do, the way you draw hair is way too solid I think, there's not a lot of soft wispiness if that makes sense. it looks like it's sculpted out of clay
>>4999189
this is malicious

>>4999189
Seek help. I'm not even paraphrasing. Seriously, go see a therapist.

>>4999244
>the way you draw hair is way too solid I think, there's not a lot of soft wispiness if that makes sense.
It does. I have noticed it myself and part of me wants to call it "muh style", but I'll work on new techniques. Thanks.

>>4999189
I'm speechless.

>>4998435
I think I was wrong. I think it's because I can see the outline of the vagina. Normally from that angle you wouldn't be able to see it, that's why it's making me think it's lower than it is. Other than that it's great. Take my critique with a grain of salt though, I'm beg and you're far better than me.

>>4999189
Plot twist: he's secretly a fanatical anti-coomer and is drawing this to repulse us so much we never post to /salt/ again.

>>4999228
>>4999244
>>4999247
>>4999275
>>4999283
Yo wtf, guys. Chill your gaslighting.
I think it is normal for every artist to explore some darker corners of his mind and to make scribbles of it.

I usually do more vanilla stuff anyway. Like pic rel

>>4996628
That's hot, what are you talking about? Are you so scared of being gay that you can't even look at a woman's asshole?

>>4999351
Sorry anon, I should have specified. I was speechless in awe. Your skill is so good and your subject matter, while not something I would seek out, is interesting and I look at your posts for a long while, analyzing how you draw fingers, curves, etc. before moving on.

>>4999351
>gaslighting
how so?

>>4999446
making one question his own sanity, i think.
I don't know the exact meaning of this word

>>4999458
Gaslighting means to purposefully manipulate someone in a way that they think they are crazy/going crazy. You're not being "gas lit", these replies are just honestly repulsed. You drew an orc breastfeeding its own fetus while talking dirty to it. Did you honestly think nobody would find that repulsive?

>>4999351
I don't think you understand what gaslighting is, but I assume English isn't your native language so it's cool.

>>4999476
yeah, fair enough

As promised I tried a pose where both hands are visible, I'll be practicing fluids a bit more on my next ones.

>>4999497
Why don't you actually try and place the figure on an actual ground plane instead of randomly floating in space. In other words, draw a fucking background you lazy piece of shit.

>>4999508
I can't be arsed to do backgrounds just yet, I'm trying to focus on figures rather than a completed work, but yes you are correct I am a very lazy piece of shit.

>>4997857
That's awful but great.

>>4997857
Reminds me of https://youtu.be/WuQeIqEu2y4

if I could do it again, I would go slower on my lineart, make the head less-shaped like an M&M, and make the dick not look like a giant turd

had fun drawing it though

>>5000633
Try to either control your lines better and colour the lineart, or size down the lineart brush like 5 times. It just looks messy when the lines are that thick and black and overlap everywhere in the hair.

>>4999189
What’s your blog, I wanna see what else you draw

>>4999476
Yeah, it was borderline pedophilic, don’t know why anyone would sexualize a new born. This could ruin his career

>>4997627
Don't trace photographs anon

wip

>>4999351
It's also normal to keep that shit to yourself, you fucking psycho.

>>5000696
>borderline
it WAS pedophilic

>>4999351
draw more

>>4999497
who eats a popsicle while masturbating? this drawing makes no sense.

>>4999497

>>5000862
you're not wrong. here's some more questions:

why is the dick tanned?
why are the toes like that?
what's with all the sweat?
who holds a popsicle like that?
why would a futa have short hair?

>>5000779
not anymore

>>5000692
"NGMI" on pixiv and deviantart, still exodusisnear on hentai foundry, they don't have the option to change names =/

>>4999189
Holy shit hahahaa

>tfw i'll never be a young teen again, caring for an amputee woman twice my age
Why has the universe burdened me with such a painful shallow existence

>>5001127
so edgy kek

>>5001127
How do I avoid ending up like this guy? His art sucks and so does his taste.

>>4997308
>>4997320
kek

that guy genuinely needs to seek therapy to sort out his childhood trauma, it's not funny anymore (nor was it ever really)

>>5001294
this

>>5001217
Block /d/ and go to church every sunday

https://discord.gg/UYWJR7ePnB

>>5001347
NOOO I DONT WANT TO TAKE HRT AND CUT MY PENIS OFF

>>4999351
i draw fucked up stuff as well i don't share. /ic/ likes to pretend this is the bible study board any time someone shares art that isn't generic tits and ass or a sexless bowl of fruit

>>5001337
lol, religion is even worse than NGMI, the fisher and noelipher's pedo crap they constantly post.

>>5001353
there's a ton of fetish art posted here every day. no matter how much you guys try to defend pedophilia, it's never going to be mainstream. stop trying.

>>5001374

>>5001370
>there's a ton of fetish art
One, there's not. I don't see vore. I don't see braap. I hardly ever see bara or feet. Everything remotely fetishy is boring and generic and anything mildly interesting, much like your post, gets a whiny hall monitor type response.

Like I said, this is the art criticism board. Kvetch all you want, but people are going to post art here.

>>5001385
>One, there's not.
Just this thread alone has more fetish than vanilla porn in it kek.
Stop replying pedo. No need to be upset. Go create some """art""" LMAO.

>>4999351
based

>>5001393
People are going to post their drawings to the drawings board. If that really bothers you, you unironically might want to take a break and go for a walk to calm yourself down.

>>5001377
>>5001374
>>5001371
This guy gestures.

>>5001415
Just because I reply, this doesn't mean I'm upset to the extent of needing to cal down, pedo.
Stop posting pedo. I already got your delusional point.

>>5001415
ok pedo

>>4998620
I would change the pose by rotating her upper body a bit. so it doesn't look like she's part owl with her head going that far in one direction

Other than that, it's neat. Blog?

>>5001433
Has it occurred to you that I don't find the image of an ogre woman breast feeding a newborn and implying she's going to have sex with it to be appealing artwork; but simultaneously I accept that profane and obscene artwork is fine to post on 4chan? This isn't Christian Mingle. If you want sanitized, no hard edges web browsing, go to reddit, go somewhere else.

>>5001219
>avoid ending up
>like this guy
>ending up
hahaha to "end up" like me, you'd first have to get as good as me, unfortunately your art is shit

>>5001579
tough luck having skills, when you are a complete psycho lol

New pic thanks to the anon who always crit my stuff

>>5001127
Anon, give me your twitter please

>>5001677
>the cum looks too chunky and viscous
>the top of her head looks kinda caved in
>shoulder/breast area needs fixing(think of the ribs maybe)
>her labia are missing

Just a few things I noticed

>>5001679
exodusisnear
https://twitter.com/EIsnear
>>5001647
it is - really


anyway, any glaring mistakes in pic related before i continue?
>inb4 "you're the biggest mistake"

>>5001668
blog?

what is happening here, what's the story?

>>5001677
That looks really hot, do you have a blog?

>>5000862
I had to come up with a pose where both hands and feet are showing and I have no creativity, pls understand.
>>5000898
>>5000924
The angle fucked me up frankly, when I found out how broken it was on the big picture I couldn't fix it so I decided to finish it and move on, also the dick isn't tanned, I just like having the dick being a darker shade than the normal skin color, the sweat is just a personal fetish frankly, the holding of the popsicle I guess it's because the handle is already messy? and it's not a futa.

>>4999351
Your stuff is fucked-up and absolutely beautiful, not to mention you're a great artist, never stop

>>5001691
https://baraag.net/@vod_kjv

>>5001668
>>5001710
>baraag.net
lol, of course

read the rules and GTFO, shithead.

>>5001788
No.

>>5001794
How can one man be so based?

>>5001795
>writing no and posting a reaction image
>based
ROFL

>>5000978
Do you only draw fetish art?
>>5000779
You’re right, they took it too far by including a newborn

>>5001700
I understand you anon, but cmon, have some common sense, the drawing I think it's actually pretty good, but you need to give it some sort of sense. If you can't think in anything for the character, just look up for some porn references.

>>5001677
Thank you, agree with everything, the most with the face, my impulses are doing more realistic face but trying to make it animeish, i thing i need to dabble into 100%, it will not look so jarring.
>>5001694
Thank you! https://twitter.com/shofixi

>>5001884
Into 100% anime or western*

What's the best places for posting art shit now?

I've been so out of the times, especially with lewds.

>>5000666

Good point, I was rushing my lineart

How is this in comparison line wise?

Also looking for any other glaring issues before I start coloring

>>5001693
idk but I adore it.

>>5002075
cute style

>>5001795
Not so based anymore rofl

>>5002075
i like this one, did you use any reference?

>>5002209
>>5002416
thanks! i tried to eyeball the perspective on that one, still not sure about if it looks good.

Working on a blowjob

>>4998466
> Will he put in a bid?
I don't know because I can't see shit. You posted a 414x640px image that's 95% random strokes. Are you okay, anon? Did you take your pills today?

>>4998620
She isn't saying lumbafuut

>>5002681
really cute

>>5002681
Cute, I like the small eye anime girl style that's getting popular.

>>5001710
Why do you draw so many white-looking girls with white features (blonde hair, blue eyes. Red hair, green eyes. Etc) when you're an ugly gook?

>>5002895
they all do that

>>5002834
The legs and arms are out of perspective with the upper body and the torso itself it way too long. Draw a perspective grid on the floor if you really need to.

>>5002895
Any other race is ugly

i dont really like posting my work here anymore, all you get is either some jealous sensitive faggots who probably diddled kids who take out their frustrations on you, or no feedback at all.

>>5003146
Ok bye.

>>5003152
fuk you, dumdum

>>5003146
>one pedo artist less
oh no, how will we ever recover

>>5003163
must make you seethe that people with more skill than you draw things you dont like

>>5001687
Timmy's mom's left arm is randomly stiff. Who opens a door that way? and if she's walking out, her left arm should be either on a doorknob or in the process of letting it go. Also that stiff walk looks like she's about to fall backwards.
For vicki, it looks like her right arm would look more natural waving a lazy goodbye to timmy's mom. Timmy doesn't look like he's got a center of balance, he's just falling. I think putting both heels on the ground will help the illusion of balance without having to change the posture, Hope that makes sense.
but don't take my word for it, i'm beg.

>>4996137
Nice

>>4999497
Looks mostly good

>>5001350
Too bad Jack, I’m the president now. Now take the pills.

>>5001687
Oof, nice

>>5002075
Go Grach go Grach

>>5001687
>>5003184
Here's kind of what I mean. While I was drawing I thought it would be a good idea to put timmys hand gripping vicki's thigh for balance. idk. again, sorry for the anatomy mistakes, I'm still beg but I wanted to try an help. I don't really think I fixed what I was talking about with timmy being off balance but I'm sure you can.

>>5002838
>>5002894
thanks!

>>5003171
nope, it just makes me laugh that they draw things that will prevent them from ever making it.

>>5001884
>>5001684

help? critique? redline? something?

>>5003399
show us the reference picture.

>>5003399
I like the eyes but the rendering on the body is kind of plastic and the penis is pretty unappealing to look at.

>>5003399
Foreshortening doesn't work like that.
Try to draw her body from the side. Maybe then you will see how badly you misplaced the arms in this drawing.

You have to think in 3d, not just replicate what you think you are seeing.

>>5003399
Shiet tier rendering, looks like an uncanny blowup sexdoll

>>5003403

>>5003489
Even the photo is better "drawn" than your image. Notice how you killed all indications of structure and perspective. the background is space-less, you covered the shoulders, made the breast into formless balloons, broke her arm, botched the hand. the only thing you seem to enjoy is doing this formulaic, plastic looking, lifeless rendering. That's not drawing, go back to square, sketch, draw simple and clear, forget about rendering for a few months, just draw and draw, and redraw, trace your own drawings, clarify. ...Drawing is structure, structure structure

>>5003553

>>5003327
how much money do you make drawing?

>>5003635
I live off it. I won't say the exact figure, but it's more than 20k and less than 100k per year.

>>5003753
So 20k

>>5002895
>we wuz anime and shit

Still working on line weight and hair (and making mixed progress). Do I leave this here and move on or use it to try to learn some colour?

>>5003836
excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuse princess

>>5002165
>What's the best places for posting art shit now?
Twitter, newgrounds and pixiv

>>5003836
>that expression
kek

>>5003759
oh just go fuck yourself. last year I made a bit more than 65K after taxes.
How much did you make from art?

>>5004051
about 10k. still filed as dependent on my parents.

>>5004053
there's really no point in arguing with any of you people here. I've tried time and time again to explain to inexperienced artists on this board that it's bad for them to draw child porn, cause the world will completely ban it at some point or another, and all they're doing is digging your own grave, but of course no one ever listens.
I don't know if it's just because they are trying to go against the system or try do be edgy, cause they are fucking kids, but at this point this is completely ridiculous. Go on, never be professional artists in the future.

Keep the NGMI flag flying high.

>>5004079
>he thinks gmi is defined as being a cuck living off corporate money

soulless

>>5004053
There's really no point in arguing with any of you people here. I've tried time and time again to explain to inexperienced artists on this board that it's bad for them to draw child porn, cause the world will completely ban it at some point or another, and all they're doing is digging their own grave, but of course no one ever listens.
I don't know if it's just because they are trying to go against the system or try do be edgy, cause they are dumbass kids, but at this point it's just completely ridiculous.
Go on, never become professional artists in the future.

Keep the NGMI flag flying high.

>>5004083
I draw porn for a living as a freelance illustrator.

Yes, cmon, keep showing everyone how dumb you are.

>>5004089
the fact you think loli in your portfolio will stop you from getting commission as a professional is all i needed to know youre full of shit, or stupid

>>5004085
who said i draw lolis? i get this money with
vorarephilia porn.

>>5004090
I see. Then I'll ask you too. How much do you make from drawing?
Just so I know who is more full of shit between the two of us.

>>5002176

colored version. I have no idea why I didn't see how close the eyes were before but I'm glad I waited a day to come back to this before coloring.

Sorry I’m /beg/ and it’s really unfinished, but anyone know how to go about improving this? I feel like I can sort out the heads and arms but I’m mostly concerned with the back to butt. I think the legs I can iron out once I get what I’m trying to do with the foreshortened thighs, I tried doing this mostly from imagination and it’s really become a mess

>>5004499

Why are you drawing from imagination? Use a reference

>>5004525
cuz i feel the urge of masturbating if i had to use that as reference

>>5004534
That shit is disgusting to look at.

>>5004525
See that’s not the angle I want, I wanted it as if she’s laying on the bed and it’s partially a top down view with her butt raised. I tried drawing without a pose ref cus I just wanted to test myself really
>>5004534
Heck no

>>5004525
my pp is doing the funny

>>5004534
be based and have your gf pose for you. thats what i do because im too much of a pussy to go to a live drawing class, id hate to get an erection infront of strangers

>>5004539
maybe you should define first where's the bed, and then draw the girl on top.

>>5000633
is she shitting

>>5004229
Both the mouth and the fact that his eyes are looking in two different directions are pretty derpy

>>5003836
please..move on anon. And study anatomy of the face before trying to color.

>>5004194
your art is strange but it's got good flow. you've been practicing your gesture anon. : )

>>5004525
how do i draw an ass like this but gaping?

>>5004090
>>5004141
>How much do you make from drawing?
I thought so.

>>5004534
And this, ladies and gentmelen, is why dickbrains are NGMI.

>>5005101
I suppose they could make it if learned to control themselves momentarily. It must be difficult to have such high libidos.

>>5004537
This, unless it was a cock though.

>>5005095

>>5005195
Goatse?

>>5004754

It do be looking like that. I ended up changing the color to blue so I would stop seeing that

>>5004775

thanks for the feedback

>>5005099
more than you

>>5004591
pics?

>>5002895
I will hunt down and exterminate every last one of you /las/niggers that got my twitter deleted. Mark my fucking words, this is a direct and imminent threat and a felony under US law.

>>4999189
YES MOMMY MIIIIIILKYY

>>5005236
ugly, balding, squint eye, fat-lipped, gook nigger with unbridled amounts of mental illness. lol.

>>5005223
Don't be so salty NGMI.

>>5005245
t.

My first lewd and Im gonna make more. Not just sonic shit. Ravens next.
Any critique?

>>5005357
not a single thing is appealing in this monstrosity

>>5005264
you are so great and gmi, will you be my art teacher?

>>5002075
blog?

>>5005236
You definitely don't want to start a fight with someone who has dirt on you.

still working . first time doing greyscale to colors

still working . first time doing greyscale to colors0

>>5005611
looks good, how do you combat the urge to scrap it seeing the shadows in ugly greyscale?

>>5005618
Just sort of deal with it my greyscale isn’t too unappealing

>>5005611
bulge

your thoughts anon?

>>5005953
>my precious

i had a hard time doing the faces on this one

>>5005357
the space behind her knees looks very weird and so does her upper back. did you use any reference for this?
the lineart itself lacks a kind of confidence, like it looks wobbly in many places.

>>5004534
use references you mongoloid

>>5005357

>>5006055
gj

>>5005992
tbf it was my first painting with a drawpad.
Im trying to use more stabilization next time.
I used this as a reference

>>5006055
wow nice

I just noticed I haven't yet dealt with the right breastical. Fuck.

>>4996012
This is something i'm currently working on, had to revise a couple times to get the anatomy right.

>>5006140
sorry to break it to you bud, you didn't get the anatomy right

>>5005195
thanks anon, so basically is a hole full of jello

>>5006169
Eh, figure. I'm all up for criticism so i honestly don't mind.

>>4996310
Those hands are straight out of a Lovecraft's short story

>>5006251
You are at a beginner level, no shame in that. Get a good book that teaches the basics and start, Loomis is a good first step. Then Vilppu, then Bammes for anatomy. But be patient, focused, redraw as much of the illustrations in these books, there is no substitute to doing this work.

>>5006265
Damn anon that got me good lol

>>5006140
Maybe one of those poseable blanko figma figures can help you

>>5006271
Thanks my dude, i'll def check some good books out.

>>4996133
GONNA COOM!

>>5006402
OooOooh Nooo! I'm cooomingggg agghhhh.....

>>4996012
>>4995256
I wonder, did you ever recover from that nazi Nessa pic or are people still after your throat?

>>5002919
Thanks for the crit. I tried to ground the drawing a bit more but I'm still pretty dissatisfied lol. I thought this pose would be easier but it ended up exposing I need to study more

>>5006415
no one bothers me because social media has goldfish memory and i deleted it from my wall by accident in a wipe

still, theres plenty of trad/pol niggers to whinge about drawings

>>5006469
instead of trying to get attention by drawing edgy shit, improve your skills.

>>5006480
thats what im doing retard

>>5005101
>>5006008
You guys are still replying to a random person who didn't post their work
I'm still looking for direct help here
>>5004499
Anyone can say use reference but can any of you help show me how to correct it even a little bit? I don't understand the purpose of critiquing if all you can say is to use reference

>>5006421
is that you anon?

>>5006489
Do you want it to be?

heyyy

>>5006535
yes

Fan art

>>5006481
based on that artwork, it really doesn't look like, kek.

>>5006595
your choice of color looks very nice how do you go about picking colors like that

>>5006469
>and i deleted it from my wall by accident in a wipe
Didn't your twitter get banned back then? Or do I just remember the events incorrectly?

>>5006480
The seething turds getting angry was funny though

i wanted to finish it now before posting but i had to charge my pen

>>5007200
ill wait for you to post yours, anon

>>5007303
i got suspended and appealed it

I drew this when I was really high, any glaring issues I should fix before I keep going?

>>5007353
teach me hair

>>5007353
Blog? Your art looks soft and aesthetic as hell

>>4999224
lower the hairline by about the diameter of her iris

I noticed that the drawings with the most striking values (when viewed as a thumbnail) receive the most views on my social media.
So for this one I made different versions. Which one looks the best?
I want it to be descriptive and aesthetically pleasing while also being kinda dramatic.

>>5007849
Your first (top-left) is probably the strongest overall. The others can work but they're much more subtle and might read flat as a thumbnail.

>>5008061
Cute

>>5007663
didn't really learn from him but this is useful info: https://www.instagram.com/p/BjXWofOgrSx/?hl=en
>>5007716
thanks anon, i post on @pokinha sometimes

/beg/ reporting in

>>5008243
also, first lewd and second piece that isn't just a face shot

>>5007658
Is her pussy supposed to be stitched up?

ill try and draw the rest later, still unsure about the apple thing

>>5008533
I'm a gynecologist and I can confirm this apple isn't mature to eat yet

>>5008539
apple cunny OOOOooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO A IM GONNA EAT IT

This is perhaps my most uninspiring pose yet, decided to try to emulate Hades's style so I wouldn't be extremely bored, I almost made his nipples and dick purple but it looked too goofy.

>>5008802
Why would amphibia have nipples

>>5007658
When the legs are spread, the labia seperate.

>>5007849
I favour top-right personally.

how do you fix this shit in CSP?

>>5008933
Lower your area scaling

>>5008802
why does daffy have hands

>>5003836
You need to spread those eyes before you spread those cheeks.

>>5008283
>>5008859
yeah it's supposed to be stitched up

>>5005505
https://twitter.com/chrggggg

new thread
>>5009456
>>5009456
>>5009456

>>5007153
always nice to see your stuff

>>5007288
Thanks, i guess just thinking of cool light and warmer shadows

>>5005239
Based.

>>5002895
>Hurr durr anime is white people because dey don't arr rook same
Fuck off with your we wuzzing.