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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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gonna try to do more dynamic poses even if things dont always work

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>> No.3682570

I can't quite understand the pose on the left. It looks like it's one of those broken boobs+butt pose that are technically possible but take effort to make. I think it would make more sense for his hips to be turned more towards the viewer.

>> No.3682574

I like this one. The only thing I would say about it is that the color of the water is too strong. The colour of the sky gives a really relaxing feeling but the colour of the water feels kind of intense.

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I think it might help if you pull the butt back a bit around the crotch.

>> No.3682594

I'm shooting up the board if I'm not OP next time.

>> No.3682603

now that's a great looking butt

>> No.3682627

h-hey wana be friends |-O

>> No.3682634

neat how such a small change can make it so much better

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>> No.3682951

Reposting here since the last thread is dead. I understand where you're coming from, but I just want to draw something easy once in a while although I know this kind of work is pretty cliche at this point.

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most of my practice with anime was just redlining anons on /ic/ and admiring anons on tumblr

>> No.3683253

I think a little bit more atmospheric perspective/fade to the far away building to break it up from the midground shadowed buildings and give more depth to it would be better.

>> No.3683308

Oh this is hella cute, nice.
got more?

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i need to redline more so i can get on your level anon, thanks for the response

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Swol monk, would like some crit

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Daily waifu garbage

Really flat, and not in an appealingly designed sort of way. Not sure if the jaw being drawn detached from the skull seemingly is a stylistic choice but it's jarring. It's like he's wearing a mask of his own face

>> No.3683377

which ones the correct thread baka, anyway reposing these here


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>> No.3683389

Ah heck, I see it now, I tried to make a defined jawline but fucked it up a bit. What do you think I could do to make it less flat?

>> No.3683396

study up on basic forms and turning them in space

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Redline pls

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i agree with both of these, i'm gonna play around with it some more

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Here's one correction I thought of. Really nice btw.

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Here ya go, i tried. i just sort of gave it more weight by making the axis of the shoudlers and hips opposite(also for the head but mb its a bit overkill?), I pushed the shoudlers more forward sort of, and the rest is self explanatory, i hope it helps in some way, anyone feel free to redline my redline though.

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work smart not hard but also hard

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>> No.3683568

i want her to dominate my shrimp

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oops, didnt realize the last thread died.
Not perfect but messy paint over. I think what would help you most would be to do construction before drawing the final lineart. You have a lot of the ideas but his entire left shoulder is missing and you're just guessing with placing the facial features.

>> No.3683581

You're a terrible person.

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>> No.3683591

the original pic looks better overall

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Latest pages. I'm feeling some real highs and lows. At the very least, cityscapes are much less daunting, now.

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>> No.3683597

Not him but the original is on the left and is objectively worse.

>> No.3683619

wtf are you saying, left one is way better

>> No.3683640

Shit, my bad, got my left and right mixed up.

In my defense I legitimately have dyscalculia and do this at least once a day.

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some fixes

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Time to post cute boys?

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more doodle

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more doodle

>> No.3683869

I like this, give blog?

>> No.3683871

Stop making me gay.

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something i messed with last weekend been meaning to go at it women more but some critic would b swell

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something i messed with last weekend been meaning to go at it women more but some critic would b swell

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this one was for art class

>> No.3683897

dude don't be a dummie and post your real ass name on this site

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I don't usually do animaymays but this is wip for a m8.

>> No.3683944

got a blog?

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I don't usually do animaymays but this is a wip for a m8.

>> No.3683954

kawaii desu

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yeah, im not great at guys so this was good practice

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>> No.3683980

cute CUTE

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i think her neck is a touch too long. And maybe making the left eye less wide and adding a lash to the right will make the angle more flattering

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apologies if this is too much for here

i really like the clothing wrinkles on their left shoulder and the way you colored the hair! left foot's toes are backwards tho, got the big toe on the outside

whoah! cute tho!
i really like the choker
one thing i'd suggest is working on dick head shapes an how they attach to the shaft, it can be super tricky but really sells the whole dick thing if you're into those (at least it does for me haha)

the sense of depth really has been improved but i'd say the foreground is still a bit too close to the midground and it could be improved. maybe go a bit harder on the swampy water lighting the tree and surroundings since it seems to be pretty glowy?

i don't wanna be /that/ person in the thread but if it is part of what you enjoy with these types of drawings i'd really suggest more dick studies hashdf, the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more. a good way to start is just with a cylinder with a baseball cap on the tip but it's slightly tilted back so that if you viewed it from the side it'd be leaning like /=== and then massaging the shapes from there to get a more organic feel

perspective is a bit off but this is adorable, i love it

>> No.3684004

oh! i'll practice that then, dicks are difficult but i like how you draw yours, good shapes.
also that little detail of the indication of the fur on her tummy is super cute, dont know why but i love it.

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Not fat enough

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>the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more
So, I actually intended the character to be uncut with a tight foreskin, so I don't think the frenulum area would be that defined. You did make me realize that too much of the head is showing though (and I probably shoudl've defined the shapes there better to begin with)

>> No.3684054

Don't have a ton of nsfw here yet

>the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more
So, I actually intended the character to be uncut with a tight foreskin, so I don't think the frenulum area would be that defined. You did make me realize that too much of the head is showing though (and I probably shoudl've defined the shapes better to begin with)

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>> No.3684097

was that really needed. at least draw an appealing dick

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>> No.3684140

how do I draw like this

>> No.3684182

I think your line sculpting workflow is holding you back

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trying to draw a loli

>> No.3684243

I really like this

>> No.3684250

i dont, literally 20 sec doodles anyone can do

>> No.3684287

his what?

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>> No.3684295

if u think this ur just a dumb

>> No.3684297

Sure, sure, let's see what you can do

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Been messing around with different things lately.
I love the way you do architecture. Very simply done but they always read really well.

>> No.3684353

sooooo cute!

>> No.3684355

Yes this.
The big anime girls are not as well done or interesting as your cities

>> No.3684380

>left foot's toes are backwards tho, got the big toe on the outside
Oh fucc you're right. Nice catch, thanks.

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Inking is hard

>> No.3684384

Your strokes are too feathery and scratchy. Are you using a stabiliser?

>> No.3684397

It's traditional, not digital. All of my inking attempts turn out like this, and I'm not sure how to get longer, more confident lines with a medium that I can't really correct.

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not finished yet

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the left eye of the first girl looks a little of to the side. . .

>> No.3684469

looking super cute can't wait to see them finished! do you have a blog?

>> No.3684502

Shoulder is misaligned with her arm.

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>> No.3684603

jesus fucking christ, every time and I know you're samefagging now. Because this is pretty much the exact same image with the exact same lack of skill you posted 2 years ago.

>> No.3684604

Thanks anon and not really, not yet at least. I want to gain more confidence first

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>> No.3684609

I'm not that guy, gas yourself you paranoid jew

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anon you are already really good *pats head* be proud of your art.

>> No.3684671

goldensmurf? more like golden noob haha gottem, get good idiot

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>> No.3684730
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I'm bad at drawing bodies/anatomy and I have a case of chicken scratch, how exactly can I get better at those? (Please add examples since i'm stupid)

Pic related i just doodled

>> No.3684731

A cute!

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It's @thegoldensmurf .

>> No.3684735

Your 2D stuffs are better than your 3D bro.

>> No.3684736

it's not even comparable.

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>> No.3684871

She needs a penis to make me happy.

>> No.3684896

i want draw party to leave, the most cancerous discord out there filled with a bunch of pedos and circle jerking losers

>> No.3684922

I'm going to tell you what's worked for me, but it's up to you to decide what's best for yourself. I personally didn't like Loomis, so I learned the same concepts from other sources.

In my opinion you're not at a point where studying anatomy in depth would be the most productive route. I think what you should do instead is draw from imagination a lot, draw from reference/life especially when you're having problems visualizing/imagining, and just try to internalize the basic shapes and gesture of the body in key poses (particularly eye-level facing, as in that drawing). Have fun drawing for drawing's sake, for a couple months, for a few hours a day. Do ask questions (what causes that shadow on the form? etc.) and find answers, but don't make anatomy THE point...at this point.

You'll see gains if you do this enough. You'll get pretty good at drawing the figure in some basic poses. You'll memorize the shapes, the negative space between the legs when the feet are together, for example. Eventually you'll be dissatisfied. Any time you try to draw the figure in slightly more complex perspective, you choke.

When you get to this point--and it may not be in a couple months--when you're not gaining anymore and you're disgusted with your efforts, that's when you study seriously. This isn't a one-time thing probably, it'll happen over and over and each time you'll push to a more complete understanding. The end goal is to think three-dimensionally. When you find yourself doing that, that's when you start building a visual library, drawing more complex poses and perspective from reference. With each new pose drawn, you'll reinforce your understanding of the figure in general.

And use a pencil and paper. The chicken scratch will go away. Tablets suck for linework (don't know about the screen ones), it's like drawing with mittens. It can be done but it's just one more barrier while you're learning.

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I will try to follow your advice, thank you anon

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Are you the artist that made this????
Busted some pretty good nuts to it

>> No.3684992

>black skin
C-can you add a penis for me? I'd love this image so much more if you did.

>> No.3684995
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Doing exercises like gesture drawing is a good stepping stone to drawing with confidence. After you get a handle on that, life drawing or figure drawing is where you improve your anatomy. No matter what though, looking at reference will help you learn bodies.
Chicken scratch goes away when you stop building your drawings piece by piece and you focus on the larger, gestural strokes of the subject. Pic is some old work thats not perfect by any means but hopefully demonstrates the importance of minimizing the amount of lines you use to draw something, about half of these i was looking at reference of a person as well.

>> No.3685018

>Everyone has to be part of the circlejerk if they hate an extremely annoying faggot who's been posting here for years
no i just find him extremely obnoxious because the same fagging is obvious as fuck. nobody wants his blog, yet "somebody" immediately asks for it the moment he posts just coincidentally, despite him posting here for years and never changing.

>> No.3685025

That's some next level of salt.

>> No.3685027

>writing a sentence is extreme salt

>> No.3685033

lol yeah right you fucking faggot. i know who you are, everyone in that fucking discord sucks at drawing. not one single redeemable soul in there. goldensmurf was the only good few in there.

>> No.3685036

I can smell the envy from here already, I don't understand why that guy is so hated here when he seems like every other anon so far. I immediately replied because I was in the 4chan vortex looking and refreshing for new posts

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>> No.3685072

Can you tell me your brush settings? Thanks

>> No.3685082

Do you possibly use references

>> No.3685100

I don't understand this, but I want to do this

>> No.3685106

You should read their comment, they say they did for some.
Try to learn what animators do for gesture drawing, force, direction, exaggeration and all that.

>> No.3685122

I hate inking and coloring

>> No.3685123

then you hate art

>> No.3685124

imagine titling your .jpg "commission" just to try to impress a bunch of 17 year old autistic anime fans on the internet

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what did he mean by this

>> No.3685133

imagine renaming your old work so when you give an anon some advice some other random sad dude doesnt get triggered because people dont pay for his art.

>> No.3685138

Inking is only annoying if you don't know how to sketch.
I know this from myself. I always put too much work into my "sketches" and basically just make them detailed drawings.

>> No.3685140

trust me i get paid much more for my art than you do, tripfaggot.

>> No.3685146

probably. So why are you whining?

>> No.3685152

why are you such a little limp wristed fag?

>> No.3685185

yeah thats cute, but its boring. you need color. also comics are for fags and losers

>> No.3685189

post your colored work fagboy, nobody cares about your shit taste and shit opinions

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Anon, they're literally a woman. If the attention whoring didn't make that obvious then the awful squat form should have.

>> No.3685282

so what? you can still be a limp wristed little faggot if you're a chick

>> No.3685287

She’s not a faggot, she craves dick 24/7

>> No.3685292

i dont care if she's straight she's still a massive faggot

>> No.3685348

Hulk's head looks like it is completely detached from his body. You can see that the artist used a ref for Spidey but not for Hulk.

>> No.3685351

>brainlet cant into color

>> No.3685385

danke, i pretty much lift them wholesale from onta/doxy and turtle.fish.paint/bear hand hhasd, and yess, i jus threw the tum fuzz in as last minute detail and now i can't stop thinking about it and wanna draw it on every fuzzy character i can

i kno, please forgive me ;-;

fuzzmom best mom

phimosis can be pretty tricky to show correctly, especially with pure line when it's too far away to define with more line but when in doubt there's always refs!

your stuff is always so gosh damn cute

lotsa practice an cross referencing the parts you like from other people's work with real world equivalents in some vague attempt to understand what they're thinking when they draw, more practice. also don't be a lame-o like me and wait until now to learn to render/use color, it's really frustrating to be happy with what you can do in line but feel like an absolute beginner when it comes to taking things further

like the composition/thumbnail of this a lot, tho i'd maybe use a harder brush to define the hair in that way. i really like it overall tho!


it really fucking is. cope with this fact like i did by developing a style where you just clean your sketches while drawing (don't do this). one thing i can suggest tho if you want more confident lines is focus more on the shape and form of what you're drawing/inking than what the actual line looks like. somehow this ironically made my lines a lot better, both traditional and digital (tho it can get REALLY messy with traditional work if you let it).

>> No.3685391

ver cute, one thing i suggest tho is be SUPER careful with hair and how it frames the face and can betray the overall face shape if you let tangents play too close to certain areas, like the strand on chara that's like tucking into the cuff of the turtleneck next to their cut appears to also be their jawline even tho based on the construction of frisk's head this shouldn't be the case but this causes their face shape to change an maybe cause features to feel off even if you had placed them correctly on the original sketch

noice, <3 scars, bandages an panty lines showing through tight pants. also how messy yet clean an legible most of it is
the sound of horny granpa moaning "biiiaaturiiisuuu" into the night still haunts my dreams. also her neck should be connecting further back on the head an flow more into the over all headshape

you're nice, i like you

cute, i love the sense of motion

i always feel like i should go back and do one of these courses and just entirely focus on the basics so i can expand what i'm able to draw more easily

yee, no problem, it's just kyle's drawing box animation pencil that he used to have up for free on gumroad before he got hired by adobe, you'll need photoshop cs... 6 i think? i don't remember, apologies, but that's what i use, lemme reup it for you tho: https://www.sendspace.com/file/yfqfv0

i love joe mad's pencils to death but you gotta admit his colored work is also really cool

been studying big boys in other people's works a lot and they tend to hunch their backs forward along while bending their knees a bit, but with their huuuge shoulders an back muscles that causes the head to appear to sink down more which may feel a bit off cause people with proportions like that don't exist in real life, but trust me, his neck would feel super long an look even sillier if the head was placed further up, i kno from experience with my own work hahasd

>> No.3685392
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What should i do to sell more?


>> No.3685415

Make a thread

>> No.3685446
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>> No.3685508
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did this the other day

>> No.3685510
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insta @living.void

>> No.3685511
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>> No.3685520

You draw the same eyes on everyone

>> No.3685529

Welcome to anime

>> No.3685543
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No seriously those thick eyelashes don't go with the designs

>> No.3685656
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I am thrilled to say that that is not me.

>> No.3685683
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This is cute.

>> No.3685705

who ever commissioned you to draw the itty bitty kitty titties is awesome. i'm greatful for these nepeta draws angel

>> No.3685714

if you don't want black skin, and want a dick so badly pick up a pen and draw it yourself anon

>> No.3685717

That thing where you draw thicker lines and erase away bits by bits until you get the line you want. Kienan Lafferty is one example of artists who do that.

>> No.3685718

>like the composition/thumbnail of this a lot, tho i'd maybe use a harder brush to define the hair in that way. i really like it overall tho!
Thanks for the feedback, I see what you mean about the hair. I'll try using a harder brush next time.

>> No.3685719

Cute boy

>> No.3685732

*cute tomboy

>> No.3685734
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Some shit from last month

>> No.3685752

thought this was a 3d model from the thumb
nicely done

>> No.3685791
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help whats wrong with this pic it looks so bad to me, I know I might get banned because mlp. but whats wrong with it.
and pls dont say "everything"

>> No.3685801

She isn’t sitting on his face, more like his chin/neck.

>> No.3685817

maybe, but I feel like theres muuuch bigger issues than that. Im not sure what though, maybe something with the perspective, or form of the leg

>> No.3685822

traps are bad (but a good way to get more followers)
Yep, looks more dynamic.
how so? I tried with different techniques and this one gave me the best results.

>> No.3685825

From this perspective and with those proportions the waist would be giga-long. Look up a ref and compare.

>> No.3685826

Well, yeah. You have consistent problems with anatomy and perspective that you don’t try to improve, so I figured I’d point out one thing that you might actually try to fix.

>> No.3685938
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working on some fanart for my sensei can I get a redline something about the hand doing the victory sign feels off

>> No.3685943

thanks for the help anon

>> No.3685964
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could use some critique on this shit

>> No.3685973
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here's your redline.

On a side note, I actually really like your lines.

>> No.3685976

Well, if it works the best for you then I guess it's fine. I just felt there were some awkward shapes here and there that wouldn't have happen if you weren't line sculpting but that's just my opinion.

>> No.3685978

Who's your sensei?

>> No.3685983
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>> No.3685988

hehe this made me laugh going to save it. also I think you actually helped me I think the problem might be the hand is to big.

thanks i'm really trying hard to make sure my line quality improves to the level of pro mangaka

my sensei is yoshikadu I watch his streams to learn how to draw better and to get inspiration to keep drawing

>> No.3685994

looks like that guy from Ib

as for critique, yes, it is bad (not a bad thing in itself) and the result of a lack of fundamentals; no forms (looks flat) and stiff pose (no gesture)

>> No.3686000

Totally fair, thanks. My form is shit lol
Yeah it was drawn to be a reference to that ib guy
Any other suggestions im game

>> No.3686015

You'd end up with a more appealing result if you went for a 3/4 view I think. But if you just want to finish this and move on, his left arm is visibly shorter than his right and his facial features are all out of sync. Do those basic construction lines when drawing your faces, you still need them

>> No.3686092
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How would you guys go about drawing the shoujo/CLAMP style hair like in CCS?
I've been trying to capture it but the hair is so thin it stands out way too much unless I makes the lines in rest of the comic super thin which isn't the look I'm going for

Always thought you've got a very recognizable style, I like it a lot

>> No.3686116
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>> No.3686119

A thin brush and a large canvas

>> No.3686139

I should've mentioned I'm working in traditional

>> No.3686144
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>> No.3686146

A g-pen or maru pen

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>> No.3686152
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That is not what I meant, allow me to demonstrate what I meant in >>3685348 It is a barely noticeable nitpick change but the head now feels like it is surrounded by those sinews. While on the original it had a white aura around it, the thick black outline of the head did not match with the thin faded ones around it causing a disconnect.

Granted I get why it is done, it is to give the inker and then the colorist a sharp and clear view of the head, this can be fixed later. So it is not like the picture is wrong.

>> No.3686156

these all look identical

>> No.3686159

>Baki fanart
My nigga

>> No.3686203

I like this better than your porn

>> No.3686216
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>> No.3686229

cute! I would wear this if it was on a white t-shirt

>> No.3686270
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Any crits?

>> No.3686284

that's very flattering anon thank you, my goal is game cube graphics

>> No.3686293

Thats true, shit i didnt even notice that. Thanks anon

>> No.3686311

Make the neck feel like it’s there.

>> No.3686324

Her feet look too small

>> No.3686361
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>> No.3686398
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Trying to stylize a bit more

>> No.3686402
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>> No.3686412

youre all bad and have no future.

>> No.3686416

shoo shoo crab

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>> No.3686422

I'm surprised by how much good stuff is being posted in these threads desu.
I distinctly remember /ic/ being more shitty than this 3 years ago.

>> No.3686426
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Could you guys critique this? im planning on redoing the lines but I need help with the anatomy and stuff

>> No.3686430


great progress

>> No.3686462

stop being jealous and pick up that pen and draw like the rest of us

>> No.3686498

how she pull out that kunais?

is the sock thick enough to prevent the kunais to cut/pierce her leg?

are they just an ornament?

>> No.3686701

woah, while the shapes are appealing, serious problems with her figure... take a look at her right arm, it's every very weird

>> No.3686706
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> progress

In case it's not clear, right drawing isn't from me, it's a sprite from the visual novel of Umineko. Tried making my version of it.

And another one but fully body this time, Takano from Higurashi.

>> No.3686707
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drawing process of the face.

>> No.3686720

aw, I'm sorry, they are both cute anyway, but you do have space for growth, honestly though; in this one your drawing is better than ref; the problem with the other one is it look flat; this one too but less so, and the ref looks flat as heck.

>> No.3686721

>but you do have space for growth

Who doesn't.

>> No.3686724

>the problem with the other one is it look flat

It was a quick sketch that focused on the face.

>> No.3686725
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>> No.3686730

I like it

Nice projection /beg/shit

>> No.3686739
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>> No.3686755

Cool idea, but I'm not sure the blue on blue (dress on sky works)
This could also use a more dynamic angle

>> No.3686759
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Hey /ic/, I'm curious.
Which art style are you trying to emulate and why?

>> No.3686776
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Is this any better?
I also tried doing from below perspective initially but I couldn't get the hips to look right.

>> No.3686785
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>> No.3686796

It looks better to me but I suck

I feel like your colors in general are still weak, look for inspiration, someone that has a simialr style and how the color.

Also for angles lookup the Hyper angle series


>> No.3686803

of course everyone does frend... just said it cute but is flawed
that's fine, just giving you some feedback frend

>> No.3686810
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>Who doesn't

>> No.3686876
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doodle form a couple of days ago
I remember with manga studio having consistent lineart tools but with sai is just, I can't get the grip literally, dunno but I can't make it work.

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>> No.3686993
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theres little issues with flow and proportion but you have the right idea. Biggest problem is the position of the head, its too far off to the side without enough of her neck and shoulders following suit.

>> No.3687102

Not really a fan of the Tumblr face but them titties are rockin.

>> No.3687121
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top hat frog

>> No.3687190

The shading on the stretched fabric over the boobs make it look like they're lumpy in a way, kind of odd

>> No.3687193
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80s anime. dunno why but it feels sophisticated and cozy for some reason.
it also is surprisingly hard to emulate.

>> No.3687207
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Was bored and I made this for reddit (shut up)

>> No.3687221
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can I get some feedback on this? It's wip but I never go this far with values in shading; left is how I've been working it and right is with actual colors and blending settings

>> No.3687247

bike shadow?

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>> No.3687475
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>> No.3687548
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It’s been too long since I’ve done mechs

>> No.3687564
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How do you guys figure out which colours to use when you start a composition?
Do you block out all the colours in a thumbnail and then use that as reference, or do you just build things up as you go?

I'm having trouble painting this cozy Christmas scene - please critique me on colour choices regarding establishing a warm and relaxed tone.

>> No.3687568
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Working on more fanart for my sensei. Doing some traditional drawing this time. It's still in early wip

>> No.3687581
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your purples should learn more to the red side if you want the image to feel warm, right now it's dominated by the more blue leaning purple tones which makes the image feel colder

>> No.3687587

Please construct

>> No.3687602

ok will do, I'm still only in early wip phase so I'll start placing down my 3d construction forms now.

>> No.3687604
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Here are my personal opinions on it.

>> No.3687609

>early wip
>half an ugly flat face and four uninterpretable chicken scratched lines
Why bother posting?

>> No.3687615

> no bulge


>> No.3687619

I like it. Got any more?

>> No.3687622


>> No.3687625

*shrugs shoulders* I'm kind of happy with how I started is all it's not perfect and needs a lot more work done so I'll post more progress once there is more to show but it's a good start which is rare for me is all. I'll work on making the face less flat for you anon.

>> No.3687662

>*shrugs shoulders*
*grabs you by the throat*

>> No.3687672
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>*shrugs shoulders*

>> No.3687680

I meant feedback regarding the figure's shading, It's unfinished so the background isn't shaded yet

>> No.3687707

Hehe what?

>> No.3687716

O Well can't win em all. meep meep

>> No.3687726


>> No.3687737

sketch phase

>> No.3687738
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forgot pics

>> No.3687740 [DELETED] 

Fuck you

>> No.3687742


>> No.3687743

Not the anon who drew that but stop being a crab and post your work

>> No.3687744

No fuck you you're all just going to make fun of me like always

>> No.3687746

lmao what a loser

>> No.3687815

Don't let crabs get to you I just laugh off anything that is just negative and even the stuff that is negative or meant as an insult I try to look for the critique in it thank the anon subverting what that anon who wrote the negative comments expectation of my reaction to be when I am genuinely able to find some use in their Insult post. Now stop being crabby and post your work like the rest of us

>> No.3687817
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And colored.

>> No.3688017
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rip trigger waifu meme girl
gone, but also forgotten

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>> No.3688072

I hate this

>> No.3688153


>> No.3688191

I like this

>> No.3688198
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>> No.3688441 [DELETED] 

Your art sucks dick

>> No.3688467

>>3688441 Shut up
>>3688429 keep drawing

>> No.3688504

Try to look up the concept of Gamut Masks

>> No.3688950

her head is way too big for that body

>> No.3689114

i also miss 02, also really good job anon got a blog?

>> No.3689119
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sleim girle

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>> No.3689142

turn this into an anime

>> No.3689148
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I need to work on this more..

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>> No.3689325

mm blog?

>> No.3689338 [DELETED] 


your anatomy needs some work but it looks good and interesting. i would read this as an indie comic or something

>> No.3689340

your anatomy needs some work but it looks good and interesting. i would read this as an indie comic or something

>> No.3689362

I kinda suck at drawing but I like to use the doodles people make and make lifeless/minimal art with it. Does that still belong here?

>> No.3689390

If you have to ask then the answer is no

>> No.3689397
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Sry for bad photo

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Trying to focus on the colors this time so the character is a bit more simple.

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>> No.3689442

nice job with the legs, but the arms seem a bit stiff, also the fabric doesn’t seem to wrap around her breasts right. otherwise, seems pretty good.
(i’m kind of a dumbass, so i apologize if this isnt helpful...)

>> No.3689452

ok bye

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>> No.3689483

Looks cute

>> No.3689484

Very insightful critique.

>> No.3689487

Apologies if it wasn't to your liking

>> No.3689488

I appreciate the comment! (>>3689484 wasn't me)
Doesn't the anatomy look a it off, tho?

>> No.3689504
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It's a bit stiff imo, some of pic related is more of personal preference but in general
>Neck too short, head position is unnatural, face a bit too wide for it's angle
>Relax the shoulders, arms are a bit short
>Back looks unnatural and stiff
>Breasts are too high up her chest, even with a push-up bra they shouldn't be that far up

>> No.3689523

woah thanks, very helpful!

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>> No.3689555

All your drawings look like pochi kisekae traces

>> No.3689627
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ye, trial and error

>> No.3689636
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>> No.3689699
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I literally never do side view because I know i can't pull it off; where did I do wrong?

>> No.3689757
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Backgrounds are hard

>> No.3689886


Torso is turning away from the viewer, yet the head is in a perfect profile.

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>> No.3690242
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perspectives are hard

>> No.3690248

My dick is hard.

>> No.3690270

yeah, you are right, the head perspective is forced; thank you!

>> No.3690310

i like it a lot, anywhere i can find more of your work?

>> No.3690337
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That makes 16 expressions.

>> No.3690371

I love them, grest work, u missed ahegao

>> No.3690381
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So far I focused on redrawing the expressions of the original version. Could do more since you're like the 5th person asking me for an ahegao.

>> No.3690848
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it's a dood-le, get it???

>> No.3690988


>> No.3691033

cute, you chose the better green one

>> No.3691068
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>> No.3691212

I love you. I mean her. I mean it.

>> No.3691262
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how do I draw hands? I need help should I just restart

>> No.3691279

new thread

>> No.3691285
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some hands for you anon

but really just draw a lot of hands, when I study hands I do like 20 a day for as many days as I can keep it up

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