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My first post to this site, I hope this works.

>> No.3719307
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My second post to this site.

>> No.3719308 [DELETED] 

>>3719305
Choke on a cock and die sufficating.

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My third post to this site.

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My fourth post to this site.

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My 5th installment.

>> No.3719314

>>3719310
Ok just stop. Fucking stop. No body cares. Beginner thread.

>> No.3719315
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More art stuffs.

>> No.3719319

posting in the most epic thread of december 13th 2018

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And thats the last one to start this thred, I do like "real" constructive criticism. Please speak intelligibly, educated people don't read ape.

>> No.3719324

>>3719313
I like the funny texture

>> No.3719329

>>3719307
I'm also a bit of a fan of squidgy inaccurate drawing but with a lot of effort clearly put into it. Has a sort of childish earnestness

>> No.3719344

WOah! I actually got to post in one of the 4chan's most famous threads ever. Hi mom hi dad, bury my body when you find it and don't look for the porn mags!

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How about a different art style?

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I like your stuff, heres some of my stuff

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>>3719351

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>>3719352

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>>3719353

>> No.3719357

>>3719351
>>3719352
>>3719353
>>3719356
A challenger arrives... AND HE'S TAKING OVER THE THREEEAAAAD WOOOOOAAAAAAH

>> No.3719365

I'm a real fan of a good sketch. I love the gothic feel that you have clearly put a lot of work and time into. I also love it when people don't follow the rule of thirds. Thinking outside of the box helps separate your work in a positive manner. You should keep developing your art, and have fun with it in your own way. Thanks for sharing a peace of your soul with this thread.

>> No.3719375

>>3719365
>>3719310
>>3719309
I really enjoyed these the most, I can tell you really wanted to capture specific emotions and I think you do this well. Sorry I cant really give a real critique as I am still learning as well. Thanks for the nice words, and dont stop creating.

>> No.3719399

Dude c'mon. Get a clue.

>> No.3719405

nice work yall. art is ok but i like the enthusiasm
keep on drawin

>> No.3719412

inb4 rapeannfrank becomes one of the autistic 5

>> No.3719415

>>3719305
Once upon a time /ic/ was a place where people got together to learn and practice. Sure there was a lot of bitterness and anger, but that was everywhere on 4chan since the beginning. /i/, however, was this spooky place where you couldn't tell if people were severely retarded, trolling, creepy racist pedophiles or all three. But nowadays, /ic/ has become that place with threads like this being a shining example. Is the OP literally retarded? Or is he a troll with hours to spend just wasting his only life away? Who can tell? All I know is this board is just a horrifying experience and it's hard to believe some of you are real breathing living human beings.

>> No.3719432

>>3719415
Let me remind you that in the catalog right now, there's a thread about an anon stealing actual exhibits from a gallery, a thread "ironically" requesting free work, a thread of a faggot trying to kill himself and a thread about anime muslims. And if you still think that a random beginner genuinely asking for critique of their work outside of the designated general threads is a "shining example" of how /ic/ is bad, then you have brain problems. Or you're just a baby newfag trying to RP as a "disgruntled and jaded oldfag".

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You can criticize the art; but, being pompously offensive is not okay, nor will it stop me from doing what ever. It's odd that people here never seem to read the global rules like they are some how above the 4chan law. I really am surprised at how disgustingly rude the user base of this site is. The world doesn't revolve around disrespectful trolls. By alienating newcomers to 4chan, your slowly killing it. This is how much I care; moreover, I'm not going to stop making threds for the fun of it. So, here is yet another peace made for no reason what so ever...

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feelsgood thread can i post mine too ^^

>> No.3719455

>>3719444
Looks traced compared to your other works.

>> No.3719463

I quite like that. Conveys a certain melancholy though my eyes. I don't believe that you traced it. Tracing is okay though, I do it all the time. There are art works made with the cheapest colors and paper dived from dumpsters that were traced that now sell for 1000000$.... I hope you ad some color to your drawing at some point. I feel like it could evolve into a masterpiece of sorts. Oh, and by the why I'm curious about the original dimensions.

>> No.3719465

>>3719448
blog?

>> No.3719468 [DELETED] 

>>3719305
Fucking kill yourself piece of burnable trash, you are worthless than a used toothpick, go show your shitty traced """"art"""" to your hopefully dead mother and don't ever come back

>> No.3719469

Nothing I have uploaded on to here is traced. That was not the thred theme that I was going for. I could do a traced themed thred some other time though.... Hell, If Andy Warhol can do it, so can I.

>> No.3719473

>>3719465
sorry i dont have one

>> No.3719955

>>3719448
Looks great!

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Why do trolls want to see such faces? An experiment in emotion this is.

>> No.3720310

>>3719322
Fuck off to reddit

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>when a normie gets lost on the internets and accidentally falls into a sea of piss
Leave this place before the others catch wiff of your tight virgin boipucci.

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>>3719305

>> No.3720888

>>3719305
what is it with fucking newfags and stupid as shit trips?

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I am not a fagg >>3720888 ,what I am is much worse than that; but, I'm okay with my sexuality. I'm thinking of starting a new thred with a new subject. Maybe children in their natural form. Those sweet innocent faces with those bright smiles.... I think I'll get to it... Little succulent girls and boys in there natural form would make a good topic. Hmmm yesh. Drawing what I love is such grate fun. Fun, I like to have fun. Don't you worry, a new threds worth of content is under way. >>3720310 no I don't feel like it... I am free as a bird, in a cage. Shall I say, make love not war... so just calm your tits will you. mmmk? I don't think that your art is much better than mine or you would have posted something. People who shit post about peoples are that cant even art are worse than capitalist.

>> No.3721894

>>3721886
intense cringe

this has to be satire right

>> No.3721897

>>3719305
I must say, your art is fairly clean and unique, from the forlorn gaze to the lovely attention to detail on the beats by dre. I would work on hair lighting. But otherwise very contemporary and accesible. 9/10

>> No.3721899

>>3721886
I really hope this is just a troll with too much time that just decoded OP's tripcode.

>> No.3721904

Satire you say? >>3721894 ? I'm not joking. Though every thing I plan to post will be in-line with the rules of this site. (Post) There are just some subjects I enjoy a lot. These subjects give me goose bumps from the intense pleasure. Pleasurable subjects are what I want to share with the whole world. The smiles of little children with their sweet innocent smiles. Indeed they are virgins to most of life's woes. I suppose that is why they are always smiling. Even those cute little eyes seem ti light up quite often. Though the next thred is not decided yet. What would you want to see that I could post here? >>3721894 ? hmm yesh....

>> No.3721909

Thankyou >>3721897 The hair is the hardest part of these. I'm not surprised the hair was brought up. its something that i'm still learning along with the rest of this new style I'm trying out. My old style of art is so much different in most every way. As alway thank you for your good constructive criticism >>3719305

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Some times I make art that is meant to be refined latter. A rough draft just to capture emotion of the moment before it all goes away. Today I feel dead inside. So here is a draft of that feeling.

>> No.3723147

>>3719315
you're supposed to color under the lineart.
your program has layer options. Multiply makes white become transparent.
There are some artists that paint on top of their sketch and create beautiful works with this method, but you are going about it the wrong way and it is greatly above your current level.

>> No.3723178

>>3723147 I real life those lines don't exists. I'm merging different disciplines together to make something new. The line art of anime drives me nuts. Line art belongs in the simpleton realm of gray scale. Don't tell me that I don't know basic shit. I'm not new to this. I'm trying new things. I like that its possible to get rid of all the line art in a peace. What I posted here is an experimental thought I had... I mean like, if you hate something, eradicate it. Now I'm at the point where as I know it looks okay and all thats left is practice. If your going to be a shit, take that somewhere over the goddamned rainbow. I'v been working in the arts now for over 15 years. i'm sure I know what I'm doing at this point. leaving the line art is apart of cartooning and manga.... Thats just not what I have in mind. I could, but, I'm not.

>> No.3723186

>>3723178
You're defensive and trying to justify flaws that somebody pointed out in your piece... just listen to what that anon said

>> No.3725619

>>3719448
I really like this

>> No.3725622

>>3723178
>15 years in the arts
holy yikes

>> No.3725659

>>3719412
Judging from >>3719463 we do have a serious contender.

>> No.3725665

>>3719444
>”being offensive is not okay”
>namefagging as “rapeannfrank”
Pack it up boys, we’ve been bamboozled by some next-level shitfuckery.