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Previous thread >>4883772

What is /SALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique, 5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>> No.4905781

i thought this is the /beg/ thread wtf

>> No.4905800
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>Intact foreskin

>> No.4905827
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>> No.4905840

it is, but for degenerates.

>> No.4905867

yep pls post it

>> No.4905910
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Not very sexual tho, and still a wip

>> No.4905961

Gayest thread on the board rn

>> No.4906024

I like it. Looks like an in game sprite.

>> No.4906038
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I posted these in the wrong thread
i made them like three years ago

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>> No.4906160

too real.

>> No.4906163
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cat girl pin up, tell me what you think.

>> No.4906164

The fucks going on in here?...

>> No.4906167

idk it's just a dumb doodle

>> No.4906189
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feels to risque for the gens so posting here

>> No.4906317

i really like this but why does the mothers face look like a zombie?

>> No.4906344
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it's a comission
the dude asked for his oc trying to appear angry after she got peeked showering
colors are looking good

>> No.4906348

i forgot the arm and the image is flipped

>> No.4906355

Submissive cucks are detected

>> No.4906357

weak hold on the rapier
redo the hand so it looks like shes holding it properly

>> No.4906368

i'll use reference then
just a sec

>> No.4906385


>> No.4906386

fantastic colors and rendering on the skin

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>> No.4906475
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now that you've mentioned it became really obvious
i took a pic of my own hand, thanks for the help
obrigado amigos

>> No.4906493

Not that it matters but how do you feel about adding some light veins to the skin? since it's pale

>> No.4906496

How much do you charge per comission?

>> No.4906498


Often late rapiers weren't held like that, the quillions were integrated into the grip via thumb and sometimes the pointing and middle fingers rests. Do research, get rewarded with interesting visuals.

Also look up how a rapier looked like. Handle wasn't a smooth tube, it was thicker in the middle than the blade and the pommel was much larger than both blade and handle. This weapon was balanced, not a machete.

>> No.4906502

Also the handle doesn't just go half way to your forearm. it is supposed to end right below your grip so you can manipulate the sword.

>> No.4906537
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does girl on right seem petite, plump, or both?

>> No.4906562
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studies. Can I get some tips/critique.
Currently figuring out how nips render and how to make a boob have weight.

>> No.4906592

study real-life references instead of these highly stylized drawings, looks like you are painting something you barely understand

>> No.4906607

real girls arent sexy you fucking retard

>> No.4906636

Some parts feel weird, tatakae macaquinho

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>> No.4906643

but animals surely are

>> No.4906663

how do i make her one or the other friend

>> No.4906671
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Guess the idol

>> No.4906679

give me your gainz senpai

>> No.4906681

I don't keep up with jpop shit or idotculture.

>> No.4906687

too bad I draw better than you. Wanna know how? Studying real-life

>> No.4906700

I hope you are being ironic, I can't really tell anymore, you do realize 2D>3D is a joke, right?

>> No.4906737

The arm would look a lot more natural if you flexd the elbow just a little bit to accentuate it's position in space.

Other than that it's fantastic, great job.

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minimalistic rendering test

>> No.4907312

You should really work more on your weak lines first and draw with flat colors for now

>> No.4907410

oh yeah?? You should really SHUT UP!

>> No.4907420
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virgin detected

>> No.4907730
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>> No.4907736

Like uhhh... Do you like guys or something- k bruh- your choice, who am i to judge

>> No.4907749

why is there an overwhelming amount of women on this board

>> No.4907797

Hair over the nipple should bulge out a bit because it feels like the nipple is missing. Arm holding the weapons just feeeeels weird to me as if it's too short. The foreshortening is too drastic given the viewing position feels more to the side of the arm than in front of it - best to look up how old masters did draw stacked forms of forshortened arms.
May be good to go in and render the face with just a smidge more contrast since it is a area of focus. Up to you.

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>> No.4908280

cuz you don't know how a real women actually looks like

>> No.4908282

sopa de macaco uma delicia

>> No.4908514

Yes, calling out idiots is a female trait now

>> No.4908607

Yes, because men would let men make mistakes and learn from them. And call them idiots after the fact.

>> No.4908668


You’re any kind of artist!? Anybody know who you are!? You miserable presumptuous NO TALENT. You’re no artist. An artist respects the silence that serves as the foundation of creativity. You obviously don’t have the talent. You don’t have enough respect for yourself or other people, or know what it means to respect yourself in ANY form of CREATIVITY. You suck. You’re a no talent. If you really have talent, go practice. And then get yourself a gig instead of ruining the day for everybody here. You're a disgrace. You are everything that’s gone wrong in this world. You’re a self consumed, no-talent, mediocre piece of shit. And I’ve earned my right to say it. And I'm an NYC Film School graduate, and the
Academy of Art University San Francisco. I’m trained classically, I’m trained contemporaneously, and you suck. Who the fuck are you? You’re nothing and you will never be anything. Never. Fuck you.

>> No.4908669

Post work, brah.

>> No.4908676

Post work, brah.

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>> No.4908842
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R8 on the scale from 1 to 10 coomers.

>> No.4908896

I am so glad I made you seethe just by saying you should study the fundamentals and stop being a /beg/ clueless retard, means I was right on the money

>> No.4908904

classic seething woman. go draw boxes or something while I draw pretty girls that absolutely blow your stinky ass mo fuggin pussy out the water you photocopier degenerate. I will rape you.

>> No.4908906

You retard, I draw porn too, I just do it well
Learn to draw and take your meds

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>> No.4909554

You retarded faggot, this is Artwork and Critique, you get fucking critiqued, now go look at naked women on the internet and draw them

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>> No.4909670

This is so good I went back and put another hour into a piece I had just called done, great shit anon.

>> No.4909695

You should draw hidden vagene more, they are ugly when you draw them uncovered

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>> No.4909724

Chiiiiii caralho

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>> No.4910015

the pose is so stiff im giving this a 2

>> No.4910316
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>> No.4910481
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Haven't posted on /salt/ in a while. Anyone else have a thing for women making intense/crazy faces?

>> No.4910493

Nah, Ahegao is pretty niche and obscure. Hard to find things like that these days, clearly most people don't like it.

>> No.4910497

Yes, it's fucking stupid and no you're not being cute or sexy by doing it you look fucking retarded.

>> No.4910521
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Didn't know it was an anime thing. I just like it when porn stars make gonzo faces.

>> No.4910534
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catgirls are good, masked/hidden face catgirls are kosher

>> No.4910548

yeah, porn stars got it from the camsluts who got it from anime/manga. It's literally being fucked silly/stupid. Thing is, it only looks kinda hot in manga and while actually being fucked. Otherwise, it looks stupid as hell.

Looks like your line work is loosening up and looking more natural. Keep it up!

>> No.4910579

Will do, thanks!

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>> No.4910731

thumbs up

>> No.4911241
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>> No.4911526
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>> No.4911559

fucking die you degenerate fucks
thats it im hiding this thread, i dont ever want to see it you people are hideous

>> No.4911568


>> No.4911578

Cool render style.
Social media?

>> No.4911755

gimme ur fuckn BLOG

>> No.4911758

Adore this. Blog?

>> No.4911845

Who's the 12 year old?

>> No.4912342

this looks like a 3d render, loving it

>> No.4912499
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This is my work so far, still a beginner. Feeling stuck.

>> No.4912506
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Also, warning, a giantessfag.

>> No.4912829
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i did this years ago
did i regress?

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i dont know if ive ever seen an h artist draw a mutilated (circ'ed) cock. why would you choose to draw the aesthetically inferior version?
anyway, here's one i just did

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>> No.4913475
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how do I fix the legs?
do they look like they are not touching the ground?

yeah, the grip is not optimal.We are not seeing the other fingers.
The shower head does not have a circular shape.
Looks sick regardless

>> No.4915662

>page 10
Oh no no no no
Looks like homocoomers are finally dead

>> No.4915758

Bad pic to put as op. Thread was doomed from the start

>> No.4915869

Does anyone know if the pixiv censorship policy enforced at random?

Mine got taken down without notice or warning even though there are other more popular artists posting uncensored works without reprimand. I had to contact them to even know the reason my works were taken down, which was the mosaic situation. My content isn't contentious either so I don't understand, unless I was reported or something.

>> No.4915932

>doesn't use the catalog mode
brainlet boomer spotted

>> No.4915988

what makes a good choice for OP pic? and why was this one bad?

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>> No.4916035

Who are you quoting?

>> No.4916104
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Love the goblin and bush, maybe make the face a bit more detailed when it comes to the jawline, as it doesn't fully connect in the original and looks off.

Pic related for the fix. Do you have a twitter I can follow you on?

>> No.4916537

I agree

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>> No.4917462

confirmed brainlet

>> No.4918471
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Doing the standing split meme. My vag needs work though.

>> No.4918587

> My vag needs work though.
I’ll work your vag for you. The tail is merging too much with the body at the bottom, maybe have it arc out so you can get some negative space between the ass and leg before it curves back in to penetrate the tits

>> No.4918677

Please don't work my vag.

Great advice though, I'll fix it in a bit. Cheers big ears.

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Can someone crit my skintones? Also, how would you go about changing the colors of the lines? It looks weird no matter how I do it.

>> No.4918948

Can somebody post some really lewd hyper detailed anime open mouth refs? Of like tongues and saliva and drool

>> No.4919269
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I always knew Seattle was a cute girl all along

>> No.4919926

I thought you were gonna do Lara... cool pic anyways...

>> No.4920154

I am still gonna do her, but this is a trend so I need to hop on the wagon whilst it's still popular. Lara won't come for a while anyway since I have a few commissiona to get on top of, sorry!

>> No.4920275

I hate people that trend hop, but you could draw a Lara doing a split.

>> No.4920302

Hey man, when you're a nobody scrub like me, you've got to play the game for a while. The only artists who can afford not to hop trends and fan-pander are those with an established following already. Once enough people know and enjoy your work, you can draw whatever the fuck you want.

>> No.4920315

Is this the least appealing dick ever drawn?

>> No.4920379

I have an established following and never trend hopped, cause I dislike pandering to make it. I prefer to think it's because of my drawing skills.

Then I remember that I draw porn. :,)

>> No.4920426

I mean you're obviously much better at drawing than I am then :'D

>> No.4920523

its the loony mom

>> No.4920603

can i draw coomer art if ive never sexed

>> No.4920751
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Could I get a redline on this please?

>> No.4920806
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>> No.4921383

Quero me afogar na tummy dela usando-a de travesseiro.

>> No.4921501

Actual Lara “requester”, take your time man, anything you do is great... :)

>> No.4922603
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did some rendering studies today

>> No.4923065

damn really good
how do you go about shadow placement?
it's something i always have a hard time with my renderings

>> No.4923075

nice work anon, you got a blog?

>> No.4923157

>how do you go about shadow placement?
he obviously looked at the refs and copyed them, dumbass.

>> No.4924542
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Tried to get my finished lineart by just erasing lines from my sketch, but I don't think it worked out. Most of the time spent with this was just on seeing what different gradients and filters did anyway, so it's whatever.

Anyway, where do you guys post your drawings? I post on Twitter" but I get basically no activity there. I think it's cause I'm super inactive on there. Should I post on HentaiFoundry or Rule34 in addition to Twitter?

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Hey giga

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>> No.4926338
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I don't know who this type hatena follower is, but he pretty damn nailed that type hatena aesthetic.

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>> No.4926600

He is typehatena's alt

>> No.4926641
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Lined this one at last.

>> No.4926674

Nice taco pussy

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>> No.4926776
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Any thoughts about the pose? I feel like I put too much cheek at the bottom.

>> No.4927246

Her eyes don't line up with anything on the page. She supposedly should be looking either at the slug or the man's face but instead she is just staring in the distance with unfocused eyes.

>> No.4927283
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Ideal shape

>> No.4927491

I understand this is how your penis looks like, but seriously, acquire some objective taste.

>> No.4927528

Not mine

>> No.4927540
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I have been trying to fullfill a request. But I have 2 main problems at the moment, both regarding rendering which I cannot seem to do or learn.
As usual I cannot figure out by myself consistent lighting that makes sense and I do not know how to render metal, since its supposed to be a metal slime. If I can get any advice or critique before I continue I would really appreciate it. Thanks.

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I'm wondering why you chose diffuse shadows for the breasts. I would just stick to the hard shadows you have all throughout.

I think the answer to your question is just some observations. Look up other peoples' interpretation of slime. I like the slime in the background but the actual character looks incredibly solid and opaque instead of gooey and translucent. Metal already has hard highlights by nature, and that works well with kind of highlighting you need for slime to read proper.

For reference, >>4926776 was me. I'm not sold on my choices for the linework, but I think the body definitely reads as slime or jelly.

>> No.4927744

Thanks. I keep fucking up eyes. There’s some logic to them I’m not getting.

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Going a bit further and testing to see if I could maybe get closer. One thing I noticed about my own work is that I neglected to add that solid, globby internal shadow that comes with slime. That and rim lighting really helps push that feeling in my opinion. I lean more towards cartoons with my work, so that's another factor.

The metal aspect is a bit difficult for me. I don't know my textures well enough to replicate it exactly, but it looks like you know based off the little metal blob you put on your own canvas.

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Welp, thinking about that slime question just made me really want to go back and add that extra detail. Also shifted the gradient so there weren't harsh black lines at the bottom. I like the change a lot though. If I could do I'd probably ink with a smooth pen like I used for the shadows and highlights, but I love my toothy lines.

>> No.4927823

wtf the penis pregnant

>> No.4927834

nanomachines, son

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>> No.4928291

Thumbnail looks like she has a huge penis that is composing her torso

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>> No.4928310

I didn't even expand the image until I saw this comment and had to confirm it was NOT a penis.

>> No.4928316

This is honestly kind of horrifying.

>> No.4928318

From the thumbnail it looked like a futa with her giant dick tucked inside the shirt.

>> No.4928383

why does she carry around a sword in the shower

>> No.4928481

>I'm wondering why you chose diffuse shadows for the breasts.
I wanted to try that breast trick anime artists really don't want you to know about! On a more serious amswer there might be a lot of other things that will get diffused as well since I was blocking the shadows. The main challenge is still achieving the liquid metal look, so technically it shouldn't be translucent slime but I understand what you are saying.

>> No.4929183

Well you have to clean the sword occasionally. Blood gets on it with use.

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No one redlined but I went ahead and started another drawing

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Am I feeling the forms anons? How do you do it

>> No.4929758
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slimes are too much fun to color

>> No.4930066
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How’s this?

>> No.4930094

Nice form. Clean your lines tho.

>> No.4930600
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Is it wrong to rely so heavily on references if all I want to do is make stuff I want to coom to?

>> No.4930619


>is it wrong to rely so heavily on references...


>> No.4930788
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Posting it here just to be safe. It's a study that I did with a mouse. I was too lazy to set up cintiq and my intuos broke, so wanted to see if it was totally doable, and seems so.

>> No.4930817



Just try to avoid landing in the trap where you're mortally afraid to ever divert from your ref, or waste hours upon hours trying to find the 'perfect reference'.

>> No.4930850

its fine but you are going to soon realize sequential art will be impossible for you. Drawing a character getting pushed down, then dicked in the next panel will be impossible for you. Or at the very least, the quality / character similarity between panels will fall dramatically.

Drawing 1 sexy pose then moving onto a completely new image gets boring FAST as fuck. Unless you are getting PAYED like CSR for doing pinups like that, its very much worth studying fundies and getting better.

One of the most enjoyable aspect of art is thinking of something HOT in your mind and then drawing it. Having to spend 30 minutes looking over your 100 gigs of references for something close but not exactly what you thought in your mind is frustrating as fuck.

>> No.4930907
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A commission I finished recently.
It is quite a waste of good piss though, since it could've been drank by a shota.

>> No.4930927
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this took me waaaay too long
any glaring flaws?

>> No.4930963

who the hell commissions this shit? i'm genuinely curious

>> No.4930969

not to be too specific here, I changed her face and added the piss. wasn't meant to be a pissing tsunade

>> No.4930971

I like how he hasn't improved since like what, 2014?

>> No.4930979

head as wide as shoulders

>> No.4931017
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hands most obviously, other than that not much
since its a heavily stylized character, most of the decisions you could make are a matter of taste

>> No.4931022

of course there isn't much to improve once you hit perfection

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>> No.4931065

It flat as fuck lmao

>> No.4931110

Edgy mind produces edgy art. It's a shame you aren't a normal person. You could be GMI instead of NGMI.

>> No.4931111

Sickos with shitty taste.

>> No.4931182
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recently updated, i need to add more characters.

>> No.4931217

somehow that makes things even harder to understand

>> No.4931230

It's not seething. You are the dipshit who talked big but couldn't back it up. Big brain play retard.

>> No.4931234

Think your dick might be a little too vainy, but that might just be me. Maybe you like it that way though, just something to think about.

>> No.4931237

Do you have a thing for gross vaginas? Cause that is the ugliest looking vagina I have ever seen. Coomer art should turn the viewer on. This vagina is so ugly look my dick retracted into itself.

>> No.4931239

You should work on your lineweight dude. It would add a lot more to your pics. It's coming along thou anon. Keep it up.

>> No.4931243

No one is going to post their work just to prove a point that should be painfully obvious to anyone that isn't stubbornly retaliating against any form of criticism

Looking at other artists for style is expected. But to learn how to draw the human form, especially as a beginner, which is apparent by the work posted, you need to study reallife, not another person's interpertation of it
Are you still too dumb to realize why that is?

>> No.4931244

Love your style, very unique. However don't you think that the anatomy of the hips/belly button area is a little off? Besides that it's beautiful but maybe take a closer look at it.

>> No.4931250

Still too much of a pussy to post your own work. Stay /beg/

>> No.4931256

Every time I post my work here, people immediately recognize it, which should tell you enough
The fact that I don't want to draw attention to myself by announcing my presence doesn't mean that you are any less of a moron that won't take advice in a critique board

>> No.4931262

It's a study from here
I drew entirely with my mouse so it was just an experiment, don't plan on continuing it.

>> No.4931396

Thanks. The linework there is definitely not final.

>> No.4931419
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Just starting out

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>> No.4931448

They're a little tubular don't you think

>> No.4931490

What would you recommend specifically with lineweight by the way?

>> No.4931986


Not that anon but first step would probably be doing some cleaner inks. Around the hands you can see the lines are a bit scratchy which takes away from the visuals.

Another thing is paying attention to where forms overlap. Generally, when two forms overlap, you place a thicker line weight on the one in front and a thinner line weight on the one in back. An easy starting place would be where the thighs overlap. Her left thigh (our right) could have a thicker line. This also applies to anatomy. Bony surfaces or muscular could have thick lines, while softer forms could have thin lines

>> No.4932117

Can't say it is my fetish but this one is intended guroman.

>> No.4932764
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Working through this at the moment. Not sure if I should add a dick or not. I mean I'm probably going to either way... But...

>> No.4932803

They look quite manly. If you intended that it makes a lot of sense to do what you're considering. Not even talking about muscles, but rather specifically the narrow hips and wide shoulders.

>> No.4932825

Yeah I'm probably going to draw the shoulders in a bit. Tried adding a bit more weight to the hips too but couldn't find a way that felt right. I'll see where it all ends up in the end.

>> No.4933496
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I don't even know what I'm trying to draw any more. It's certainly not sexually appealing in any sense, it's just weird lol. I'm having a blast doing it though,

I unironically love your shit because it's so fucking ugly. It's just great.

>> No.4933513
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Today's drawing, trying to make my boobs look less like toobs

>> No.4933672

I like your style a lot from what I've seen you post. Honestly, this is sexually appealing to me.

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>> No.4933793
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Hope the linework is better on this. Shading isn't final.

>> No.4933931

anyone seen gains goblin lately? hoping he's alright. hoping we didn't shoo shoo him away forever.

>> No.4934175

Now that you mention it, I haven't seen him in a while.

>> No.4934181

he died from malnutrition

>> No.4934388

Seriously? That's reassuring. Would you give any suggestions on how to make it even more sexually appealing? I was thinking about changing the mouth, just a smile feels plain. Maybe a hand inviting the viewer forwards.

>> No.4934700
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Trying a new style.. thoughts?

>> No.4934830

Her other hand inviting the viewer forward would be good. Or you could have her jerking off a penis with her other hand. It just depends on what you are trying to go for. As for the mouth, I think it's fine. However, if you wanted to make her have a more seductive facial expression, that may be good. Another idea may be to zoom out a bit to show her midriff.

>> No.4934832

Please learn gesture, you're focusing too much on form and its losing all life and soul. Also the hips are too close to the ribcage.

>> No.4935141
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is he cute?

>> No.4935977
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>> No.4936016
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Random drawing I made

What do you guys think of it.

>> No.4936017

It's shit.

>> No.4936042
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Finally started drawing "anime" again. Feels good.
Good use of colour.
Lovely soft shading, I can never render big bobs right, especially the nipples.

>> No.4936057

Oh shoot I messed up the rim lighting on the legs.


>> No.4936062

Grotesque abomination

>> No.4936070
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Don't blame me, blame the E*ropean basedboys who's into BBC (Big Buff Chicks).

>> No.4936087
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Here's the version with a large sausage if anybody is interested

>> No.4936153
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I already posted this but does anyone have any suggestions on how I should draw porn of this character

>> No.4936186

Looks nice. I do feel the shading on the chains/hair/ears could use a little work given how the rest of the body is.
>Good use of colour.
Thanks. Also don't get me wrong I think you're doing better than me. This is my first time really trying soft shading.

>> No.4936266

I make things glow whenever I'm lazy, that's the trick lmao.

>> No.4938353

Can anyone suggest learning resources for coom art? Been watching mikeymegamega on youtube recently and drawing along, and I feel it's done wonders for the sexual appeal of my drawings.

>> No.4938359

That is the most pathetic dick I've ever seen.

>> No.4938508

go on /y/ and see what sort of porn people post there

>> No.4938523

Wtf why didn't I think of that!!

>> No.4938772
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>> No.4938785

lovely muscles

>> No.4938904
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hand on the leg is driving me crazy.
help appreciated

>> No.4939198
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Sorry but this is not how rapiers work.
Between the crossguard and the pommel there should be space for only 1 hand. Here it looks as if it was hand and a half.
Also the basket protects the hand, as in your previous version. Here it serves no purpose.

>> No.4939283
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Did what you suggested and you're right, looks tons better. Thanks!.

I kind wish you'd come here and do my shading for me desu, yours looks a lot better imo. That armpit and lats are sexy.

>> No.4939494
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>> No.4939644

Off-topic question. I have a cheap Wacom tablet and I am looking for nibs to buy. Are those cheap aliexpress/ebay nibs for $2-3 (for 10) *any* decent or are they straight up wasted money?

>> No.4939663 [DELETED] 


boobs too high

>> No.4939672

they're pretty good, I use them. maybe invest in a screen protector so your surface lasts longer too just in case

>> No.4939677

satchel is my favorite

>> No.4939720

Alrighty, thanks!

>> No.4940681
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i've never met anyone who draws the way i do. i use solid blobs of black and then carve the image i want out of it.

>> No.4940720

then you are a sculptor, anon

>> No.4940743
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huh, i guess so

>> No.4940752

anywhere i can see more of your work? its good

>> No.4940804

I've experimented with this method. For blocking out something like a body, it's great for easily getting an outline without as much need to feel out the portions with lots of lines which is a messy and tedious approach to construction.

>> No.4940955
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i worked some more on the shading

>> No.4941397

This would be very worthwhile seen finished. You don't have to do it all by mouse. She is soft but the metal is so sharp.

Tits too close together but I like how you put it together.

God this is good.
I feel like wishing the towel was fluffier would ruin the look, however without reading the context I thought she got caught in the rain naked and wrapped herself in a curtain.

>> No.4941427
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Anyone know an artist who doesn't draw anime or realistic who I can observe how they paint eyes? Someone with a style similar to what I'm going for? The more I try the more shit they look.

>> No.4941489
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Use your imagination

>> No.4941508
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I am glad, although I wonder if you actually like my content relating to her.

>> No.4941753

Damn bro your females are unattractive as fuck

>> No.4941775
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Bout to put socks or shoes on this one just so I don't have to draw toes.

>> No.4941783

always a treat when you post. You have nice form!

>> No.4941873

oh I do, I've been seeing your content here for a couple of years and I'm always looking for her when you post your betaman content. petit girls with short(ish) hair are the best. I also like her personality haha

>> No.4941928

try getting good instead. draw the toes you fuck

>> No.4941986

You mean you make a silhouette? That's a pretty common way for people to design characters digitally during the very first stages. They don't normally just leave it black though

>> No.4942030
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twitter at ABigRock2

see i just use it for the entire thing. all my "lines" are me erasing

sort of? but i use it all the time for everything, and if i want to do lineart, i just do it on a new layer. mostly though i keep things solid black because it works for my characters

>> No.4942037

you need to nail down basic anatomy before you start trying complex poses like this. very unpleasant.

>> No.4942057
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WIP. There's a lot that still sucks here but I'm getting closer and closer each time to creating stuff I want to see. And I'm learning each time I fuck so there's that I guess.

>> No.4942558
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Hey bitches. This one was kind of edgy, but really fun to make. I didn’t take it much farther beyond the sketch and some basic color, but I thought it was a fun experience, and I’m well on my way to becoming the best artist here and eventually the world, but that’s if you can even call half this board “artists”. Bonus points to anyone who can figure out who the two are, I didn’t put much of any effort into capturing likeness.

>> No.4942571
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I'm stuff

>> No.4942576
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then you are a GOD, anon

>> No.4942697
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>> No.4942773

These are kind of wonky, not sure what to say to help
Left thigh (his right) is probably longer than it should be.

>> No.4943081
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me on the left

>> No.4943094
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It is but I tend to just draw really long legs

>> No.4943183
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>> No.4943211

Not him, but a little bit of historical flubbery can be cool sometimes

as long as the anatomy seems realistic enough, the average viewer isn't going to see that anon's rapier and say its not historically accurate enough, especially from a pin-up

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>> No.4943851

Mental illness made into art.

>> No.4943921

every time I pass by this thumbnail I want to puke

>> No.4943923

Good, hide this thread and forget about it existence. Maybe we should pick the same pic for loli thread so you fags wont even bother entering and spamming it.

>> No.4943937

good to see you back

>> No.4944050

gtfo pedophile garbage

>> No.4944799
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Other than the long neck on the short one, Is there anything wrong with everything else?

>> No.4944981
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>> No.4945359

what is this cuckshit?

>> No.4945396
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i dont normally draw nsfw is this worth anything

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>> No.4945967
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>> No.4945985

what happened to your twitter? where can i watch your art?

>> No.4946069

Thanks anon, just made my day a bit brighter :)

>> No.4946086

Don't bother. He keeps deleting it because he draws pedo and other shit, he's not proud of.

>> No.4946305
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Alright I am improving in general but I am still far from being good, what would you guys do to make this piece more dynamic and appealing?

>> No.4946346
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probably wont finish

>> No.4946347


pretty cute girl on the right

>> No.4946401

but the stuff is absolutelely gorgeous.

>> No.4946447
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>> No.4946624

this should be so easy, but i genuinely don't know what to draw

i feel like if i draw another girl standing there with her tits out it will be the same shit i drew a month ago where a chick was standing with her tits out. but so many big artists just do that, every day a girl standing there with her tits out. how do they do it.

>> No.4946646
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Draw her with her ass out in stead!
Draw her wearing part of a different outfit

>> No.4946733

They look like teen boys at the youngest though

>> No.4946752

new thread

>> No.4946840

Grande dia

>> No.4948376

ngmi detected

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