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Anonymous Fri Dec 11 20:38:33 2015 No.14475790 [View]
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>Way down yonder, get my honey come back
http://pastebin.com/Cbgt4eiM

This was supposed to be a 2k-word dialogue exercise in longhand and a little something to tie up the ambiguous ending of the sitter story, but then things got a little out of hand, for better or for (probably) worse. Oh well.

Now, I hope I'm not being too pompous for asking this, but:
What would you consider is my biggest weakness when it comes to my writing?

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