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>>16459935
Well, I wasn't thinking of her when I made that. Her mistakes aren't egregious, but they're worth noting.
1) Leg goes too far back. Similar deal to Kawakaze K2 but it's better hidden. Didn't notice it at first.
2) Forearm is really short. While a forearm would only APPEAR shorter in that position, the way it's drawn makes it look like it's only half as long as the upper arm.
Also, her torso twists to a high degree, so she's almost facing back while her pelvis faces forward. While that pose isn't completely impossible for someone with her build, it's pretty awkward looking. Seems too forced for someone who's supposed to look injured.

I still like her though.