/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>21687219
Thanks, anon. Hopefully there will be more people who write similar smut to mine but better.
The way I write is kind of like this:
>Try to avoid repeating the same thing. Use different phrases and words if the same kind of thing is being written. Use a thesaurus.
>Look at Halo 5's campaign for reference. It contains pretty much everything a writer SHOULDN'T do.
>Re-read each paragraph, or at least each sentence. Ideally, the entire story would be re-read and edited to ensure consistency and adherence to" Chekhov's Gun".
>Start writing with a mind full of motivation and creativity, but don't piss it out willy-nilly. Begin with the end in mind.

I'm ultimately an amateur, even by hobbyist standards. I don't imagine myself to be terrible at writing at least, but Dunning-Kreuger effect and Deviantart ensure that I'm not considered shit relatively-speaking.

>>21612824
>>21612808
I've written two variant stories where a guy kidnaps a tanuki from the perspective of said tanuki. Here's one of them.

>>21458031
Alternate ending to pic related for those who want something else. Changes in the spoiler.

>"Where's that damn kiki off to? That rosuke better be working! I paid good money to get her here!" the Danuki thought to herself as she made impatient strides around the manor.
>Suddenly, a thud occurred and a decorative cup dropped from a shelf.
>"I bet that blasted Slav disorganized the broom closet!"
>Her guess was right, but for the wrong reasons.
>The maid screamed muffled warnings while uselessly struggling in her ropes.
>The danuki turned quickly, tail bristled up, and shushed the maid so that she could listen and try to detect any ambushes
>She quietly lowered herself to the kikimora and removed the handkerchief.
>"What happened?" she sternly inquired.
>"A burglar got me. He was so fast I couldn't react. He's sneaky, too, since I only saw him after I noticed several of your things were missing."
>The danuki clenched her fists. "He will be lucky if he will be in a good enough shape to leave with himself."
>A loud footstep alerts her.
>Then another. And another.
>She was told that this burglar was sneaky.
>She quietly closed the door, trying to conclude whether she should just stay hidden or try to ambush him.
>Her plotting was abruptly interrupted by a pair of hands grappling her arms, binding them together. More restraints were put on her legs and mouth
>The subdued and confounded danuki growled in confused frustration. There was nowhere to hide in that closet.
>The hand opened the door to reveal a kikimora. Her kikimora, to be exact, and without a single inch of rope on her.
>She turned around to see that the kiki in the closet grabbing her head with an unfamilar arm. It was the burglar in disguise all along. A face she recognizes. Her eyes flared up with even more anger and confusion.
>The burglar spoke "I'm not going to hurt you. However, I didn't come to this house to take any of your valuables."
>He hoisted her over his shoulder, then emerged from the closet.
>"I've come to take you on your 'mandatory vacation'."
>She made quite a struggle. She was a workaholic and hated anything involing 'lazing around'.
>"Don't worry." He assured. "Your maid will take care of things while you're gone."
>The kiki appeared and gave a thumbs up to her angry mistress and the kidnapper.
>Mistress was furious that her maid conspired against her, but her fury was short lived when her abductor smacked her bottom.
>"Until you learn to relax, I'm not going to let you out of those ropes, so you best keep your composure or else we won't be doing many other activities. Not that I'd complain."
>She groaned at the mild discomfort of her bindings, trying to persuade him to loosen them to increase her hopes of escape.
>"Don't worry. I'll replace those ropes with something much more comfortable and secure. Let's just get to our ride first."
>She hoped it was a short ride. She didn't like the tinge of excitement she was feeling in her predicament.

>>21446225
>>21446243
>>21446345
>paying for things

>>21436137
I wonder if they need protecting.