/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>5635843
This looks pretty nice. Great dedication and skill with pencils; I can never keep it clean without smudging everything.
1. The tail is a bit off though, the angle it comes out of her skirt is awkward, and the ribbon seems loosely tied to the tail.
2. The shoulders look a bit unnatural/ strangely puffed.
3. Your cup/glass lack depth as oppose to the rest of the picture, and what is that folded card thing next to it?
4. The back of the skirt's shading/folds are a little bit off
5. ... See the rest of the picture