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1879253 No.1879253 [Reply] [Original]

I had a idea for a visual novel jp. I'm seriously thinking of going throught with making it...tell me if you like what you hear....

"On September 1st, 1939 over a million citizens were moved from the urban cities of England to the country side.

I was amongst them.

I was designated and assigned to a new home at a all girls school just outside of Coventry. And while the world was going to hell around us, we found the escape of love."

World War II England with a harem setting.

Whadayathink?

>> No.1879265

male or female mc?

>> No.1879261

>>1879253
Sounds kinda gay, bro.

>> No.1879266

shit

>> No.1879272

Sounds really tacky. I can't believe I just said that on 4chan.

>> No.1879284

Cool generic idea bro.

I mean, who would've thought about making a video game based on WW2!?

BOY, I SURE CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF WW2. I THINK I'M GOING TO GO PLAY SOME MORE CALL OF DUTY.

Anyway, this idea might actually manage to be shit if you change the heros from British to Nazis. Japanese people love Nazis. If you make a game about Nazi lolis, it'll be hit. It doesn't even need to be set during WW2 or have any sort of historical relevance. Japanese people won't know the difference. You could have it be about Nazi lolis riding dinosaurs on the Moon and they'd probably think it was an accurate historical portrayal of how the Third Reich paved the way to the first space travel.

>> No.1879283

Make it rather young ambitious Nazi commander watching over camp full of young Jewish girls.

>> No.1879287

>>1879265
Male...
There'll be like...5 other males as well...

hes not the only male sent there. But theres at least 5 girls per male at the school

>> No.1879290

Earthquake VN?
Lighthouse VN?

>> No.1879294

>>1879284
Well I wasn't neccesarily trying to appeal to japs.

>> No.1879301

>>1879283
>>1879284
Nazi-mind.

>> No.1879304

bump

>> No.1879305

Any story can work as long as you can make the artwork good enough.

>> No.1879308

>>1879290

>Earthquake VN?

I really wish that guy had followed through. It was such an awesome idea.

>> No.1879325

>>1879320

But you can rape them!

>> No.1879318

>>1879283

What about a German citizen hiding Jews in her closet during WWII. All the Jews that are being hidden are women, except for the player character.

>> No.1879319

>>1879283
this

>> No.1879320

>>1879283
Why not a nazi commander dating nazi chicks? I'd rather not have to pick from a selection of whiny-ass kikes.

>> No.1879322

>>1879283
There can only be one.

>> No.1879329

>>1879320

The loli idea could be done as a raising sim.

>> No.1879336

>>1879305
> Any story can work as long as you can make the artwork good enough.

Air, Kanon, Tsukihime, Umineko

>> No.1879351

>>1879325
That doesn't really sound all that appealing to me.

>> No.1879342

>>1879305
> Any story can work as long as you can make the artwork good enough.

Air, Kanon, Tsukihime, Umineko
The art doesn't matter

>> No.1879345

>>1879320
Great idea. And they can beat, kill and have fun with the slaves together!

>> No.1879348

>>1879283

>> No.1879372

not creative? hurp durp, historical fiction. now you are a amerikkkan literary hero.

>> No.1879448

"ound: A clock ticking
Background: "A darkened room, with things scattered around the floor. To the left lies a desk with things scattered upon it."
Image: "A Old Man in a wheelchair."

Old Man: In 1939 England declared war on Germany and the Axis. I was only a boy.

Image Moves Left.

Old Man: Operation Pied Piper.

Transition: Fade

Sound: Rustling of papers
Background: "A desk littered with papers."
Image: "A framed photo of a young man, standing in front of a train at a train station. Dated 9/1/39."

>> No.1879508

>>1879253
holy crap a story about the effects of ww2 on the personal lives of people in allied countries. make sure you work in something about saving jews from the holohoax bro.

>> No.1879514

>>1879448
>little time to differentiate

THERE IS ALWAYS TIME FOR CALCULUS

>> No.1879519

>>1879284
It's like I'm really in the middle of warfare!

>> No.1879525

>>1879514
HAHAHA

good one

>> No.1879531

>>1879318
Wait, this is genius! You are a german citizen, hiding Jewish girls in your closet. At some point in the story, you will be given the option to tell about them to Nazis, which will make you enter Nazi-girl route!

>> No.1879583

Protip: Nobody likes jewish chicks, they smell, they whine, they have big noses, and the most bitchy over-protective mothers in the fucking world.

It's not like only kikes were culled either, make them gypsies or little homosexual girls.

>> No.1879587

>>1879583
>homosexual
>only fuck girls
>your a male

oh nice try anonymous

>> No.1879602

>>1879587
Who the fuck said it was consensual?

I see you haven't been on /jp/ very long.

>> No.1879611

>>1879531
I approve of this. Someone get some japs to do this so we don't have to hate it.

>> No.1879621

>>1879587
I could see that, a pair of loli lesbians in which you would rape one in front of the other while they screamed and cried.

>> No.1879636

Do one about butt rape in an all boys school.

>> No.1879637

You're a Russian officer, your boys find a group of lolis huddled together in a cell of a Lebensborn facility after liberating a city. Apparently all of them are forceably impregnated by SS members deemed racially pure to breed a new generation of nazi Übermensch. Your men wants you to let them do as they please with the lolis, your political officer demand them for his own use

What do you do?

>> No.1879630

>>1879531
This idea is nice, but make it so that you HAVE TO tell about them to avoid Bad End. It'd be awesome twist in the story too.

>> No.1879643

>>1879637

rape the commissar

>> No.1879650

and this is why /jp/ is the best board ever. right?

>> No.1879659

>>1879637
Have one for you, give one to the commissar, and the rest to the rank and file.

Everyone wins (except the lolis, of course)!

>> No.1879663

>>1879637
Escape with the lolis while raping them regularly and having them feed upon the corpses of those who die along the way.

>> No.1879696

>>1879663
No, have them lug the dead on their back so you can rape the corpses while having them exercise to keep their strength.

Unless anon does not enjoy popping a cold one.

>> No.1879731

>>1879663
Where are you going to run to? To the western front?

>> No.1879752

>>1879731
That could be a choice you have to make.

>> No.1879757

The bad end for the jew-route should be a harem ending, where you rape them to death in a cum chamber.

>> No.1879774

I can't see this going anywhere good.

>> No.1879814

You are Wernher von Braun, one day some higher up SS leaders invite you to a tour of a new factory where your V2 rockets are being produced. To you horror you realize the factory is actually one big concentration camp using loli slave labour. Horrified at the conditions you raise an objection with an SS guard only to be told that you should mind my own business, or find myself in the same striped fatigues.

Back at the lab you feel a strong sense of guilt. You want to help the girls, but how? You realize that your one bargaining chip lays right in front of you: the plans to the A9/A10 Amerika-Raketen capable of delivering atomic warheads to the heart of USA.

What do you do?

>> No.1879824

>>1879287
sounds like Edelweiss

>> No.1879826

>>1879814

Strap the lolis onto the V2s

>> No.1879836

>>1879814

Nuke the USA, unleash mutant American lolis on the USSR.

>> No.1879881

>>1879814
Convince the high command to reinforce the Afrika Korps so the can expand and capture black skinned subhumans. They have more endurance and can do more work than the the feeble loli.

Then take the lolis for breeding and experimentation purposes. In your private chambers. All of them.

Oh and nuke America.

Replace lolis with negroes and

>> No.1880064

You are Dr Helmut Kunz, resident doctor of the Führerbunker. From the approaching sound of Red Army howitzers you guessed that the Third Reich's days are numbered. One day, Joseph Goebbels approach you with an request: after he and his wife take their own lives he want you to kill their children for them.

After you injected the six childrens (5 loli, 1 shota if you didn't know) with morphine (you lied and told them it was vaccination against Russian bio-weapons), the children fall asleep. With six cyanide capsules in your hand, you hesitate.

Do you:

Kill them, so they never realize the horrifying fact that their father was one of the most evil man in history.

or

Let them live, give them sheltered, lonely but full lives.

>> No.1880076

>>1880064
Evil? He was working to improve the pure Aryan race! You must be a filthy bolshevik jew.

>> No.1880075

>>1879308
You mean the chinaquake one? Because that was rather lulzy.

>> No.1880093
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Left to right.

>> No.1880105

>>1880064

>Jam it in the lolis.

>> No.1880114

The plot doesn't matter, only how much effort you put in to writing the story that unfolds the plot. (And in the case of the VN, how much effort you put in to accompanying bits.)

>> No.1880128

>>1880093
I knew the idea sounded familiar

>> No.1880134

They should fight a Nazi Gruppenfuher riding a bear. Then suplex the rest of his squad to death. At the end the should suplex each other.

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This thread remembers me of this. Sauce?

>> No.1880140

>>1880134
>they
sorry the awesomeness overwhelmed me...

>> No.1880150

>>1880128
You know anon, this idea might actually work if handled the right way.

>> No.1880162

>>1880131
http://www.alicesoft.com/galzoo/chr/chr31.html

Alicesoft again.

>> No.1880164

>>1880150
If it's a romantic comedy it's going to be massive jew shitstorm

FUND IT

>> No.1880186

>>1880162
This just confirms my suspicions of Alicesoft being the best eroge company.

>> No.1880187

>>1880164

the ones that go to 4chan wont care, the rest wont even know about it. /jew

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1880872

I like it, let's just make it 1943 and change Britain to Germany, and Coventry to... I don't know, Bavaria?
It makes sense since Germany was getting royally owned from the air by that time.

And Bavarian dresses...

>> No.1880878

HEY I just entered this topic to ask:

Are there any VNs where you can end up with a girl OR a guy? The guy doesn't have to be a trap, either, maybe he's just GAR

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>>1880878
Yes, and its called Tsukihime.

>> No.1880894

>>1880878
nitro+chiral

>> No.1880895

>>1880872

>> No.1880897

>>1880872
post some more lol woops

>> No.1880900

>>1880878
Clannad. You can end up with Sunohara.

>> No.1880901

>>1880093
sage for left to right

>> No.1880904

>>1880093
>beautiful

>jewish girls

riiiight

>> No.1880910

True End is nazi raid, right?

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>>1880904
Anne Frank eroge where?

>> No.1880918

>>1880915
Swastika chest hair?

>> No.1880919

>>1880915

Poor Anne.

>> No.1880935

REPLACE THE MAIN GUY IN ALL IDEAS WITH A LOLI AND YOU'RE PERFECT GUYS!

>> No.1880936

>>1880935
>REPLACE THE MAIN GUY IN ALL IDEAS WITH A DOG JUMPING THROUGH HOOPS AND YOU'RE PERFECT GUYS!

>> No.1880938

>>1880878
There are a couple, but it's mostly just traps. Most games seem to focus on either one or the other, not both at the same time. There are some though, I remember one game that had girl on girl, girl on guy, guy on girl and guy on guy, actual routes. I can't fucking remember what it was called though, but it was a bodyswitching game.

>> No.1880939

>>1880935
and change all the heroines to burly muscly men too

>> No.1880961

>>1880939
And have /y/ bitch about it for years to come?

>> No.1880969

>>1880961
Why would they bitch about it on /y/?

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The year is 1941, you are the loader of a Panzer III tank attached to the 3rd Panzer Army, Army Group Centre. As you division fights its way through Asia you are also fighting for the heart of the other four crew members.

Driver - Long haired waifu material, very good at cooking, famous in the company for being able to cook up meals with only fuel cans and stahlhelm for pots.

Radio operator - glasses wearing bookworm, master tactician. She's often the one to bail the team out of trouble after a hot headed charge by the commander. Loves to grab one of you on the team and go sightseeing in newly liberated cities.

Gunner - dark haired trigger happy tomboy. Has a love of explosions and mechanical things. Harbors some feelings towards the commander. Optimistic outlook on life and always willing to volunteer for the heavy jobs alongside you (ammo loading, washing treads, etc).

Commander - hot headed tsundere loli. Loves bossing everyone around, particularly you since you are the only guy. Has a penchant to order a one tank tank-rush at the enemy when fired up. Is deathly afraid of cold weather and so always sleep alone in the tank at night to get away from the wind. In truth she longs for someone to huddle up to at night who would keep her warm.

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1881164

SIEG HIEL ONII-CHAN!

>> No.1881170

>>1881164
Stupid bitch has her hand upside down

>> No.1881176

>>1881116
WANT SO BAD

>> No.1881178

>>1881164
Sige Hei.... HOLY SHIT IS THAT A MAC FUCK OF MACFAG.

>> No.1881191

>>1881178
ONLY WHEN YOU LEARN HOW TO SPELL OFF FAGGOT

>> No.1881198

>>1881191
NO U FUCKING MACFAG. HOW CAN ONE USE SUCH A UNBELIEVABLY SHITTY OPERATING SYSTEM!?

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>>1881198
I run XP as well you dipshit.

>> No.1881274

>>1881212

Behead those who use Macs.

>> No.1881282

This isn't /g/ faggots.

>> No.1881281

>>1881212
That's like saying it's okay to be a furry as long as you fap to loli too sometimes.

>> No.1881329

Underground Railroad VN - You and all the girls are black. Can you and your true love make it to freedom?

Eskimo VN - All the men of your tribe died due to the harsh winter. Do you have the strength to get your harem through the winter while having sex with them every night?

Legends of the Hidden Temple VN - You could start by running to the room of the three gargoyles. Push in the right tongue and a door might lead you down a staircase into the wall climb. Here, you must choose your next path. You could race up to the observatory, spin the sundial and pass into the room of the golden idols. Once there, push down on their faces to release the doors, that may take you below or lead you into the shrine of the silver monkey. Assemble the statue there and you may be headed for the torch room. If the elevator is up, you could jump into the elevator and descend into the mineshaft. You might climb up the ladder or plow through the stone wall. Find the key and it may unlock the tombs of the ancient kings, allowing you to climb into the spider's lair. If you escape, you may have a chance to sit upon the throne of the Pretender. If the correct door is unlocked, you'll be able to crawl into pit of despair and finally make you way through the cave of size, back to the temple gate. The choices are yours and yours alone.

>> No.1881339

>>1881329
I loled at the legend of the hidden temple one.

I'm currently writing the script and coding my idea.

Demo in a couple of weeks?

>> No.1881342

Anyone remember that "so you're a Jungian psychologist in Gensokyo" idea?

>> No.1881344

No.

>> No.1881345

wat

>> No.1881350

The Fourteenth Century has begun, in the year of our Lord 1305. It is an age of turmoil sweeping across Europe, with many kings, princes, and nobles warring with each other relentlessly in the wake of the fallen Byzantine empire.

England is torn apart by a brutal war with the Scots, her countrysides ravaged and burned, her cities razed to the ground by the invaders from the Northern Highlands. Her people cry out to the Holy Roman Empire for succor, for relief from the northerners.

But the Roman Catholic Church itself is fraught with troubles of its own. The papacy has moved to France, with a local pope established by the people. France now holds the seat of the Church itself, and with this comes immense power.

You, a minor nobleman from a small ruling house south of the ailing Holy Roman Empire, must now guide your people through these trying times.
Your father's dying wish was for you to wed a rich, powerful noblewoman and restore the glory of your house. War is out of the question - you have not the resources nor the military might.

Thankfully, your sister has made arrangements for you to enter the court of the Holy Roman Emperor.

Navigate the politics of the court, endear yourself to the nobles and avoid attempts on your life, as the would-be suitors you contest with will stop at nothing to secure the hands of the ladies at court. Delve deeper into the mysteries surrounding the Emperor, and the strange company he keeps. One false step, and you may well lose your head. Seduce the ladies of the court, win their hearts and minds, and the glory you seek shall be yours.
tldr: Tsukihime prequel set in 1300's Europe, with BAD ENDs galore.

>> No.1881354

The Fourteenth Century has begun, in the year of our Lord 1305. It is an age of turmoil sweeping across Europe, with many kings, princes, and nobles warring with each other relentlessly in the wake of the fallen Byzantine empire.

England is torn apart by a brutal war with the Scots, her countrysides ravaged and burned, her cities razed to the ground by the invaders from the Northern Highlands. Her people cry out to the Holy Roman Empire for succor, for relief from the northerners.

But the Roman Catholic Church itself is fraught with troubles of its own. The papacy has moved to France, with a local pope established by the people. France now holds the seat of the Church itself, and with this comes immense power.

You, a minor nobleman from a small ruling house south of the ailing Holy Roman Empire, must now guide your people through these trying times.
Your father's dying wish was for you to wed a rich, powerful noblewoman and restore the glory of your house. War is out of the question - you have not the resources nor the military might.

Thankfully, your sister has made arrangements for you to enter the court of the Holy Roman Emperor.

Navigate the politics of the court, endear yourself to the nobles and avoid attempts on your life, as the would-be suitors you contest with will stop at nothing to secure the hands of the ladies at court. Delve deeper into the mysteries surrounding the Emperor, and the strange company he keeps. One false step, and you may well lose your head. Seduce the ladies of the court, win their hearts and minds, and the glory you seek shall be yours.
.
.
.

>> No.1881393

>>1881354
What. That doesn't sound anything like Tsukihime. Did I play the wrong Tsukihime?

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1881428

I just want to fuck Lady Karolina.

>> No.1881440

Da Vinci Code VN - Sex with a descendant of Jesus Christ pretty much sums it up

Hobo VN - You are a homeless guy (initially) wandering the streets. You can try and woo the girl at the soup kitchen, the one at the hospital if you try to commit suicide, the girl who you save from a hoodlum, the fellow female hobo or the one you end up working with on her farm if you travel to the countryside

Chrono Trigger VN - I don't want to actually copy CT but I want something where you get to go to the past, fuck a girl and in the future get delicious wincest that only you know about

Indian in the Cupboard VN - inspired by that other topic, basically you have the cupboard or something similar where you put inanimate objects into it and it comes to life

>> No.1881484
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1881484

Give me my Fire Emblem VN already dammit.

>> No.1881522

Behind Enemy Lines VN - As a fighter pilot in WW2, your plane goes down behind enemy lines. You are saved by a local beauty. Will you try to get back to your girlfriend in your home country or settle down with women who saved your life?

Mormon VN - There are multiple routes, but you play them all at once.

Pygmalion VN - You choose between 3 different statues.

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>>1881522
>Pygmalion VN - You choose between 3 different statues.

Bitch is carving up my waifu ;_;

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I think I just played this game, only it wasn't harem end.

>> No.1881554

>>1881440
>Hobo VN
You, good sir, have won this thread.

But are you a ragged old man or a scruffy youth who ended up on the streets after some unfortunate circumstances?

>> No.1881561

Trojan war VN. You play as Helen of Troy, everybody else in the war are female. Should probably be a strategy game with h-scenes. Routes:
Agamemnon: Tsundere loli, huge ego, bitchy. Besides scenes with you, there is a hate sex scene with Achilles and incest scene with Menelaos.
Achilles: Hotblooded, but not as bitchy as Agamemnon. Doesn't join the war early on because she's greatly pissed at Agamemnon for taking one of her slave girls (Making all Greeks lesbians isn't that big a change now, is it. ) Threesome with her best friend, Patroclus. Aforementioned hate sex scene with Agamemnon. Hector's mother Priam comes over to demand her corpse after Achilles kills Hector. Achilles is impressed by her assets and Priam is impressed by her virility, sex scene ensues (Actually almost happens in the Illiad. )
Greater Aias: Stoic, analytic, calm and occassionally batshit insane. Probably a lot taller than Helen too. May go yandere if you cheat on her. Given that she has a massive war hammer, you don't want to betray her.
Odysseus: "Class president" kind of girl with great, influental speeches and quick wits, but also an adept trickster when it comes to defeating the Trojan forces. The sequel VN, Odyssey, details the adventures of her after the Trojan war (Read: has sex with Circe, has sex with Calypso, has sex with blind loli Polyphemos and is cursed by Poseidon for leaving her poor girl alone, has sex with Aeolus, Sirens, the souls of Achilles and Agamemnon, Scylla... She'd be remade into some kind of prehistoric Marisa)

I don't have time to plan further, but oh well.

>> No.1881563

>I had a idea for a visual novel jp. I'm seriously thinking of going throught
no

>> No.1881631

>>1881329
Legends of the Hidden Temple VN YES

>> No.1881816

Where's that Four Horsewomen of the Apocalypse VN idea?

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