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>>20326340
Oh thank goodness. Looking at the archive, I thought someone had made a third gayass monstergirl thread at first.

Cute pic, although if that's supposed to be her hair draping over her and her wing, it's not that convincing.

a bump to this

Oh we're back

id like to request oc other than artworks ty

>>20332503
People have posted music before.

I hope this belongs in /jp/? I really like Vivaldi btw.

>>20339413
Interesting but I think her closer shoulder/armpit shadow is kind of weird, like making her arm look skeletal thin.

>>20339413
Very classical.

>>20332503
You should make something.

>>20349249
Faster!

>>20347029
like what

>>20352042
Anything other than artwork. Make a 2hu Diorama.

>>20351746
Ooh Thanks anon.

whats a diorama

>>20354196
a little miniature model set

>>20352042
Try to make a game and join the list of hundreds of /jp/ers who tried to code a game and gave up halfway through.

>>20339413
I really like it.

>>20358499
You. I like you. Got anything more to share? Past works?

>>20367834
Thanks. Got nothing to share atm though. But if I do i'll put it here

>>20326340
For a sec, I ignored this because I thought it was another mg thread.

>>20370386
OP really should have put the thread name and number on the image.

>>20362948
Those are some very nice sketchies you got there, friend. Cute. I like the eyebrows especially... please post more.

>>20369616
I can see your intentions and respect them, though the execution lacks refinement.
With the girl on the right, the arm extends backwards as though she'd do just that... extending it backwards. That way, the attempted foreshortening falls flat, and it looks off. As a result, I perceive the arm as being misproportioned; as though her forearm is FACTUALLY longer than her upper arm instead of perspectively, and the hand just big instead of close to the point of view.

Bottom girl also has some intense issues. She feels very flat, as though compressed. A bit of shadows might be able to aid with it, but won't fix it sadly. It's especially noticeable with the head. It looks as though her face is a flat mask.

Other than that, I find it a good idea to try these things out, and your execution, while not good, could be way, WAY worse. I don't know how many times you've tried these kinds of angles before, but I think you are well on your way to make them work; these do not look like first times, I can see a certain understanding of space in them. Keep it up, friend!

Here's a doodle of a friend's OC.

oldie

>>20372910
But goldie

>>20326340
saw your workstation over at /ic/

>>20373488
What is workstation? I posted it while it was work in progress though.

also, I forgot to post this koishi.

>>20375035
squishy toes

>>20362948
This one's cute I like the eyebrows

Glad this thread is back
I found a fairly old design I want to polish up, I'll post progress here, maybe even draw an illustration

>>20375035
Non-drawfriend here. Is there a reason why you use lines as shade? Is there some type of training benefit from doing that?

>>20379635
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hatching

bump

>>20375035
Very nice. This might be my favorite of yours so far. The lines for texture and flow are very well placed.

>>20377227
Good colors, though you still have some very clear anatomical issues, especially in the lower torso area, including the legs. Your designs remind me a little too much of Adachi Shingo... it kinda seems to me like a bland copy of it.
That's just personal though, matter of taste. If that's what you're going for, I said nothing.

>>20378744
Looking very good, I dig it a lot. She got quite the big feet for someone so small (same for the hands I guess) but that might just be intentional, since it doesn't look "off" really and doesn't look like a mistake.

>>20375035
cute

Here's asuka-chang

>>20383101
Gomen ne asuka I gave you saggy bobes. Fixed it tho

>>20378744 I started to refine the details, making things a little more clearer and proportioning the design. I think it looks better after cleaning up the details


>>20382716
Definitely a mistake, I wanted to get the idea down before I lost it. Also, really nice artwork on your end too, the details are great

>>20372910
Is that hair or a ribbon on the back of her head?

>>20383101
Cute Asuka, but I don't know why people keep acting as if she's a tsundere. She has no issues expressing her love for someone. For instance, here is a scene of Asuka expressing her love for Kaiji (I can only find a dub of this scene): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1HtXynQO2ps

She isn't being tsun to Shinji during those times she called him an idiot. She is just an immature, competitive, bitch towards Shinji. She initially hates Shinji because he is a threat to her perceived purpose in life (which is being the best eva pilot), but eventually she gains a sibling-like friendship with him. She hated Rei as well, but eventually warmed up to her. She won't admit it, but she loves Shinji and Rei, but not in a sexual way. Anyway, let's not go off topic.

sakuya i just drew

>>20390750
the blood hearts are a nice touch

>>20390807
ty, here's the original digital sketch too

>>20390031
>She initially hates Shinji... but eventually she gains a sibling-like friendship with him.
>She hated Rei as well, but eventually warmed up to her.
This is what tsundere means.

>>20383957 added in the rest and colored it in (for the most part) Going to add some small details to the clothing next

Derpy faced Oni

>>20390985
Cute!

>>20390951
Your definition of tsundere is somewhat correct but too broad. We could argue that most characters in anime are tsunderes with that simple definition. For instance, Naruto used to somewhat hate Sasuke, but over time both characters warmed up to each other and became best friends. Is Naruto a tsundere?

I think tsundere is like a delicate balance between love and hate. A tsundere likes a subject, but has a hard time expressing their feelings to said subject. A tsundere will struggle or blush on the rare occasions when they express their love to their subject. All tsunderes are immature since they never learned how express their feelings. For instance, in this >>20383101 anon's cute drawing, you could almost hear Asuka saying "it's not like I need you or anything, st-stupid!" Not to hate on his drawing, but Asuka is not like that in the show towards her love interest. Watch how she interacts with Kaiji. There is no ambiguity, hesitation, or balance between hate and love with her interaction with Kaiji. She is 100% dere and 0% tsun to her love interest:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1HtXynQO2ps

>>20390750
Did you poke yourself with one of those needles just to get blood? First of all, that blood is going to turn brown soon and ruin your drawing. And secondly, that's an easy way of getting an infection. Wash your wound and place a bandaid on it and never consider harming yourself for the sake of art and clout.

>>20391881
shut up faggot

>>20391890
I'm sorry. I will leave. Please no bully

>>20382716
Yeah I definitely need to improve on the lower torso area. I tried to practice that area with this. Probably still doesn't look right but a little better I think.
Had to google who Adachi Shingo is. Don't really watch his stuff. I watched like an episode of SAO and stopped.

Cool monster design btw. Feels like I could find this in a monster artbook of a Souls game

>>20393956
It's pretty similar to the dragon statues in ds3 I'd say.

>>20383957
That explains that, then. Good progress there, though, already looking damn cute.
>>20390985
And even cuter now. What's she, exactly? A royal knight/lolita girl? I really dig the design. Will the helmet be merged with the lolita headpiece?
Thanks btw.

>>20391294
Cute Oni, bro. Definitely see what you mean by derpy, turned out slightly off, but still looks cute.Pose and hands turned out great.

>>20391881
Nah you stay. He can get out.

Have a Yuugi in progress. Gotta fix her man-chin and misplaced triceps.
Sorry it's a photo; exporting was a hassle.

>>20396226
If you want to fix her manchin for being manly, then fix the cheekbone and the super-thicc neck as well. That curvy bit under the chin doesn't go that far forward despite how it may seem if you try to feel it up. And with a trapezius like that on a woman I'd expect a more extreme bodybuilder look. The navel also seems to be just a tiny bit too high. The outline of her body near the armpit also doesn't seem right, but I'm bot positive.

>>20397082
I definitely agree on the cheekbone and jawline.
Neck, not so much; I imagine Yuugi to be 2m+ in height, and though this is supposed to be a younger version of her, she'd still be very tall.
Somewhat of a bodybuilding-esque look is what I am going for, though not roided up; still considerably more in certain areas than might be naturally the norm among women since she's an Oni and all that. I just fetishize trapezius so that might play into it.
I agree on the navel again, though, and also not sure about the armpit myself.

Thanks for the feedback!

>>20390985
Cute

>>20391294
Cool

>>20396226
Sexy

>>20393956
If your room got raided, would you get partyvanned for all the dfc drawings on your laptop?

>>20398558
Don't think so. Im in the US and as far as I know nobody actually got arrested for loli that didn't have the real deal also. Otherwise they have to prove your art is obscene and they don't even want to bother.

Bump

https://clyp.it/44f3xij3?token=e4bf9cef3d469071d3a1155e786e313f

>>20332503
Just for you.

>>20402147
If I click that link will it hack my anus?

>>20403360
It's a clyp link. So no, you can click on it safely.

>>20402147
Not bad. Very chill.

i still don't understand how to achieve appealing line art on digital especially on hair, It feels really different from real pen

I don't have anything much but should I just start fanbox?

>>20406204
Without an actual customer base and understanding it well it's inadvisable.
If you're talking about that thing where you sell your works.

I doodled a reimu

>>20398762
Actually after sketching this I might have alerted a three letter agency and now the mods after posting it on 4channel

>>20410157

>>20412926
Dalai Lama?

>>20403440
Thanks mate.

>>20404340
Lotta issues here, especially some jarring asymmetry and wonky anatomy.
Are you drawing with some guidelines or a sublayer sketch? You might wanna utilize those.
Also, outlines tend to work better when they are thicker at spots where the shading would be more intense, and thinner where the light shines on.

>>20405548
Very cute. Maybe consider making the line of her ribcage/chest area less curvy so that it doesn't look like it's arching inwards as it does now.

>>20410157
Very nice dude.
>>20412926
Figured it'd end up like this. I like the contrast between them. What do you use to draw? Photoshop, Clip Studio? Mind sharing your brush settings?

Also, because I am a piece of shit that can't finish what he starts, here's another Yuugi WIP.

>>20413759
I don't know why the fuck this ended up tilted, sorry.

>>20413759
Is she a briarheart?

>>20413842
Nope, but it's possible those Briarhearts have a similar historic inspiration behind them.
This Yuugi is gonna be inspired by the Norse Berserker and various other Norse legends like Skálds and shamans.

>>20413759
>What do you use to draw? Photoshop, Clip Studio? Mind sharing your brush settings?


I use photoshop mostly, and sometimes Procreate on ipad. For the brushes it kinda depends, like I keep one for some times then I end up switching to another.

>>20411053
I doodled a thing too

>>20411053
>>20414558
Wow. Cute.

>>20391843
There's two types, the older "switches completely from hate to love type" and the newer "keeps acting like a cunt even after confessing" type. You're thinking of the newer type. Yes, rivals could be described as tsundere towards each other, especially if the rivalry ends in mutual respect. You'll even get the second type where they still act like jerks to each other even though they're just joking and are really friends.

>>20412926

>>20415713
absolutely cute and clever

>>20402219
That's a kinda weird looking spider

>>20390985
Finally finished her design. I added a (really flimsy) cape to her outfit so it feels more complete. I want to make an added reference for her guns soon!

>>20391294
Thank you!

>>20396226
Thanks! She's a royal knight who's mastered gunslinging. The other characters I've designed for the series have a fairy tale theme to them so it only felt right to add lolita-esque traits to her outfit. The helmet's only there for aesthetic (functionality isn't really something I think of when I design ahah)

>>20397549
Thanks!

Hey /jp/. I guess I haven't posted in a while.

I've been hacking away at save/load and the precompute-all-schedules optimizations. The schedule thing seems to be more or less working. It will compute a schedule for the NPCs (ie home->school->park->home) and then instead of pathing the entire way, they just path so the closest part on the precomputed path then follow from there. It also lets me later on have the possibility for arbitrary time-skips since I could teleport NPCs to where they should be on the path.

The artist added animations to the major scenes too.

Hopefully I'll be able to release a demo around Christmas!

Here, have a sfw gif of an NPC getting bored.

>>20421541
an attempt was made

>>20426010
I was going to say your source seemed to be at fault but looking up other images of it, it seems okay. Spiders only have 2 "sections", not 3.

>>20425617
You're a goddamn hero, you know. Do you want to expand into chance events like birthdays, considering you have schedules and the calendar set up?

>>20428266
>hero
>for making a game where you rape lolis to death as they piss themselves
>for way too long
I mean, I can understand people having their preferences, but calling them a hero goes a bit too far.

So I just found this relic of my past, I have no idea what it’s supposed to be though

>>20428397
An oni with bad anatomy

I'm finally free, but before I do the Yuuka drawing, there's something that needs to be done.

>>20429405
Nothing is more important than Yuukarin!

>>20429405
is this the one from THAT doujin?

>>20429995
N-No! Not THAT one.
It'sThylacine, she's just searching for a husbando!

>>20430458
> You cannot delete a post this old.

Damn. Gave it some little tweaks.

Progress before I sleep

>>20425617
I'm glad you're still going strong on your glorious quest, my dude

>>20431230

Here - save load is at least working superficially. I'm sure there's some random non-graphical stuff I might be forgetting though.

>>20432680
It's glorious.

>>20432990
>>20432680

Optimized it a lot. Turned out that, while I had written something to serialize the cached paths, I forgot to call that function..

This should be much faster now - and even then 1) not in full release build 2) I have a bunch of debug text in the console which slows it a bit.

>>20391843
whoa who called the nerd patrol

>>20422080
Very cute. I like your line work and your sense of design.
Do you have anywhere besides here that you post your drawings?

>>20417731
IMAGINE

>>20435787
Your work is at THAT gallery again, if you know what I'm talking about.

>>20435815
Oh... That's cool, I guess... I don't know how to feel about it after looking at the rating that's worse than before...

>>20435815
<spoiler>I'm sorry but what gallery?</spoiler>

>>20435815
<spoilers> what gallery? </spoilers>

>>20435815
which gallery?

>>20440018
EH.

>>20434165
I have a Twitter: Atlasnir

bump

chen

>>20422080
You did good, it looks great. Very charming. I hope to see more of your progress soon!

>>20426010
Pretty adorable, I dig it.

>>20428397
Oof, yea I know how that feels. I still have drawings from when I was 12 and 13... it hurts to look at, but also makes your progress more quantifiable. Always keep your old drawings, guys.

>>20429405
This better not be a rape victim mother.

>>20430681
As I have recently discovered that I am indeed attracted to Cyclops girls, I thank you for this one.

>>20446556
Hella good. Never really was a fan of the "murrican cheerleader" archetype because of the slutty reputation, but this looks very great anyways.

>>20447064
Shit dude, you starting to do explicit stuff now?
Looks great of course.

>>20446556
If I kill and eat you will I gain your powers?

>>20449087
try it and let us know how it turns out

Found this, apparently the artist used to drawfag here in /jp/ way back. Anyone got a name or more drawings from them?

>>20447064
Lewd.