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I wish, OP

And also has plot already developed...

>And also has plot already developed...

Eh. What's the plot then?

Elaborate and I will consider.

Perhaps. Would need to hear the concept and see some art samples.

Satoru Is a guy in a dead-end job with nothing to gain and nothing to lose, an encounter with a certain psychopath reveals to him that the world is not really as he seems, that chance and coincidence do not exist and that he has a power beyond his wildest imagination. As his world crumbles around him as the result of an underground organisation targeting him, his two saviours appear, but what will he use his power for and who will he side with to save himself from his predicament.

Cheesy blurb^ first two days of the script are written and a lot more character profile stuff, plus its in my head

And a current character WIP for proof (one of the girls from a path)

better logo, http://www.project-exist.com/

>>6161441
We didn't ask for your pitch, we asked for the plot. Get in depth.

How dark are you wanting this to get?

>>6161441
does it have consensual sex in the missionary?

Will it have sex.

>>6161458
As dark as you want, plots open to whoever wants to write it, darker the better

>>6161462
if you like

>>6161456
Depth isn't written up, but consits of a number of email conversations...
I can post the whole of the small plot kai that is writen up?

>>6161441
So it's The Matrix in VN form then?

>>6161441
>Satoru
>a power beyond his wildest imagination.
Does he have the ability to switch perspectives with other people?

>>6161441
I thought you said you had an artist.

>>6161474
Its a power that has a huge extent, the ability to alter reality, but its down to whoever wants to write it,

If whoever writes it wants sex, there will be sex.
Artist is open for anything

>>6161474

What are the first two days of script?

>>6161483
Fine, a person who can draw and colour on a computer quite well

>he has a power beyond his wildest imagination.
wow, so gay.

>>6161492
thanks, i said cheesy
>>6161489
want them posting? They're not amazing as I'm not an amazing writer

>>6161486
>the ability to alter reality
Does it involve positrons and magical swords?

>>6161499
no

Takumi Is a guy just barely passing school with nothing to gain and nothing to lose, an encounter with a certain psychopath reveals to him that the world is not really as he seems, that chance and coincidence do not exist and that he has a power beyond his wildest imagination. As his world crumbles around him as the result of an underground organisation targeting him, his six saviours appear, but what will he use his power for and who will he side with to save himself from his predicament.

Cheesy blurb^ first two days of the script are written and a lot more character profile stuff, plus its in my head

And a current character WIP for proof (one of the girls from a path)

Its a power that has a huge extent, the ability to alter reality, but its down to whoever wants to write it,

>>6161519
forgot my image

Is this going in a detective/mystery direction?

>>6161531
no

Good writer here.

I can wright you a story, but it depends on what exactly the visual novel is going to be about.

>>6161548
depends how good you can wright

>>6161548
>wright

Good spell-checker here.

>>6161501
I think it would be useful to see what you have so we can see what kind of thing you're looking for in writing.

OP, the idea "Guy who learns reality isn't what it seems and also has some amazing power" has been done like ten million times already. Why not do a historical drama or an adaption of an old novel? Nobody ever does those and I bet you'd dig yourself a nice niche.

Frankly, you don't get offers like this every day, and I'd love to write this. How can I contact you?

>>6161558
Oh shit my typos.lol.

I am very confident in my writing abilities. I might need spell checker once in a great while when I type too fast.

You do have an idea of what it will be about, right?

Or do you want the writer to come up with something?

>>6161571
Telling someone to change their style is kicking them in the balls. It all depends on how good the writing itself is, not what the writing tropes are.

>>6161592
I'm not talking about style, I'm talking about ideas. You can have the same style writing ten wildly different kinds of plots, but if the one plot you choose comes off as tired it's a problem, unless your writing style is so good and your character so interesting that it doesn't matter.

>>6161576
email me at guydesu@gmail.com and i have an msn address you can add
>>6161583
aah, wasn't sure if you were trolling, its pretty much as the blurb said, higher up, generally psychological/drama/romance/relationship
but its open to the writer's taste/style

at all else, posting the first day's script

>>6161583

I just read the rest of this thread.

I agree with
>>6161571
It's becoming like WWII FPSs.

I wish there was a WWII visual novel.

In actuality, I am writing a movie script based on an alternate WWII/fantasy setting I thought of. Maybe making it into a VN would be a good idea.

I can't draw good enough, though.

can't be arsed to split up text

http://www.pastedump.com/paste/1000

Day 1

Well, anyone wanting to write something different can talk it over with me/ the artist, we're quite open, though we don't want to throw away character sketches or do a WW2 VN

>>6161649
When I'm rich and famous you will regret that.

Also, I'm musically inclined.I know a friend of mine who could help me make a soundtrack for a VN.

>>6161660
Guess I will....
Someone to work on music would be great though, we have someone, but he's a dick and makes shit that he wants to make

>>6161660
If you're musically inclined and want to do something WWII related, why don't you make a WWII musical?

>>6161625
So "historical" automatically equals WWII now? That's great. The only six years out of six thousand plus years of human civilization that matters enough to write about, right?

Seriously, though, I have a good WWII VN idea

>>6161660
I came.

>>6161676
INB4 MEL BROOKS AND SPRINGTIME FOR HITLER.

Hmmm... I never thought of that.

But, like I said, I am currently working on a script. If there is someone willing to work with me, I could always try something new.

>>6161679
Those are the best-damn six years in all of history, and will be the best six years ever forever.

>>6161695
>>6161660

I just want you to write for this VN so I can someday see "Adolf Hitler" in a credit's page

Bonus points if it's a WW2 VN

>>6161708
You shut up, Hitler. You're supposed to be dead and we're supposed to be making sure you never happen again.

why a WWII VN? i don't play vn's for history
It would be the next Hetalia

>>6161649

You have an artist?

Fuck you, I've been looking for a dedicated artist for a year and a fucking half.

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost.php?p=2862489&postcount=21747

>>6161725
Hetalia is ultimate retarded. I couldn't stand it at all.

It woudn't necessarily be a history lesson, what I'm writing, at least.

It's a mixture of fantasy and alternate history.

needs more love

>>6161755
will be plenty

Well, I think a classic novel VN with a liberal interpretation or a similar historical VN would be great. Maybe I'm alone in thinking that. Maybe I'll write the damn thing myself.

>>6161740
I feel sad for you.

I'm writing something right now similar to what you guys want, and learning programming. Maybe in two or three years it'll be out. It's becoming less of a VN as it goes on though.

>>6161914
any desire to join up?

Still slightly interested after seeing the art and first day writing, but I would need more solid limitations on where you want this to go were I to help.

How long do you intend it to be?

how do you define a VN's length?
pretty long i'd say?

as for limitations, i really don't know...

>>6162071
Give an email, I have nothing to do anyways. If I feel like it I'll do something and send it whenever. We're allowed to take a lot of liberties right?

I'm off, anyone who's actually interested, please email me at
guydesu@gmail.com and we can discuss anything ^^

>>6162071
I think he meant about how many hours long do you want it to be.
As for limitations, I meant do you have any clear cut chains of events yet or any idea where you want the differing routes,if it's not linear, to go? Or setting, specific things the protagonist's power can and can't do etc.
I mean, it would be easy enough to help come up with them, but I'd like to get an idea of how much groundwork has been laid so far.

>>6162087
kinda, though we are pushed for doing a demo in time for a convention at the end of october

>>6161640
...........

....atoru...

...........

....t of there

I can't...

I just...

Where am I... I can't...

This isn't a place for me...

I don't exist here..

There's nothing here...

I don't exist here.

I don't exist here.

I don't exist here.

I don't..

I......

DROPPED

>>6162095
quite a few I'd say, but I couldn't tell till it was being properly written

http://www.pastedump.com/paste/1001

is all of the plot that is written up, but I promise you theres a lot more thats discussed

Two main routes with two girls,

>>6162113
Alright, I'm still interested, I'll send you an e-mail with some ideas or something later.

*is off properly*
email,

Need a russian VA?

>>6161940
Nah, sorry.

I'm dedicated to my VN right now, but like I said it's becoming more of an adventure game now like the lucasarts games. Maybe if it's good enough I can bring the genre back.

It's sort of a WW2 story, but the war is only in the background of it and not the main point until the end.

>>6162113
I lost interest from the generic feel of it all.

Email sent. I've always wanted to try my hand at this.

Also sent an e-mail.

>>6162170
Have you ever played "Deja Vu" for the NES (and several other platforms)? Plays like something similar to what you possibly have in mind.

>>6162473
Sounds interesting from the wiki description, thanks Anon.

>>6162473

oh i fucking loved that game! kinda deep for a nes title.

Shameless bump for any more interest in my timezone?