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Love Syndrome!

>Irisu Syndrome! Kai is a hoax

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

So is this a VN or what?

>>6480322

It's a physics based puzzle game.

Is there a download for the game's entire OST yet? Also any tabs for the songs?

>>6480322
It's like Tetris, but for autistic people.

>>6480381

>>6480370
Music files are in the irisu203/data/bgm folder.

>>6480442
Oh how embarrassing. Thank you.

explain story plox

Thanks for the hard work, guys!

>>6480546
play game
>>6480472
I demand a translation of this image.

Good work, guys!

>>6480654
Why does your expression become this strange?

D-Didn't I say I don't want it already...?

>>6480687
Thanks.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ldyu8sip9cdbl0t

Here's a link to the OST. It's 320kbps as opposed to 112. However, it's far from complete.

>Also, it seems Irisu Syndrome Kai is a hoax. Discuss.
AWW HELL NAW y-you better be trolling.. ;_;

Yarp, both Kai's are April Fools jokes. I'm disappointed too.

>>6480738
Source please?

>>6480738
How about the fact that they were all uploaded April 1st, Japan time? And that the "Love syndrome" photo uses the IS menu? And that the screenshot under it links to what I posted up above? And that everything I look up about it on Google gives me lists of April Fool's jokes made on Japanese interwebs.

Wow that was a lot of words. But basically, as far as I can tell, they're pranks.

>>6480790
They talk about it being a joke here:
http://logsoku.com/thread/yuzuru.2ch.net/gameama/1272021622/301-400

So... I just scored 105k in metsu but I didn't get any ending. Does this mean my (older) version of the patch screwed me?

>>6480827
Did you mean the "happy friends" ending? I thought you got that at 50k in Metsu, if I remember correctly. The other ending is: reach level 100 in Metsu, and...well, I won't spoil it.

How the fuck do I play this game

>>6480845
level 100? ugh.

Going up a level has something to do with chaining, yes?

>>6480909
Launch tofu, hit like color with like color, try and hit as many at the same time, try not to let too many fall, use superball as "OH SHIT" button, win!

>>6480963
Though in metsu, it seems to be more economical to just go for matching blocks with bubbles.

Looks like 'Kai' for Irisu Syndrome, is like Higurashi? We must expect for 'solution'/'kai' in Irisu

Hey guys. I already said that the creator is going to comiket but i'm not sure and also other games started as april 1st jokes and were made anyways so let's just wait a little. And not to be a bother but the guy who posted the DxLib things,, i must say, thank you but the files were all in japanese and the ones i need are the ones that are translated to english but thank you anyway.... So, how about the erosu game,i've heard it has a similar secret at 1000k to the one of 40k in normal mode. Any images?

>>6483678
No. No Erosu allowed here you jerks.

>>6483748
I don't want to play the game but i want to know if they put in the game similar elements, just for the sake of the series.

don't mind the prudes.

>>6483678
Isn't Erosu Syndrome just a sex simulator anyway?

>>6484034
There's the game you have to play to enable the sex mode, and its features.

Is there a specific name for anyone involved in this translation? I put together a post elsewhere where I linked the translation, and I was wondering if there were any more specific credits to include.

>>6484324
OSad and two other dudes, an image translating guy and the main translator. Though I've been following this since the first thread and I don't believe they ever game any sort of name out.

Plus, a whole bunch of /jp/ helped. I would say, the whole of /jp/ should be credited.

>>6484708
ｼﾞｮｲﾝｼﾞｮｲﾝｷｮｳｺｰ

And about my DxLib issue?
Could someone please upload the libraries on english?
It's not that i'm not grateful for the other files but i can't work with them. :'(

>>6485552
Can you explain the issue again to me?

>>6485552
do you mean dx files?

>>6485675
>>6486158
I can't extrat the DxLib files (maybe some issue with my computer) and i asked for the files already extracted.
Someone posted them but they were on japanese and i need them in english for a traduction to Spanish for non-english speakers.
So someone could extrac them please?

>>6486297
Ohh :( Coding issues I'm no good with. You might wanna send a shout out to the programmers WHO MIGHT BE READING THIS THREAD HEY PROGRAMMERS HEY who can help you out.

GUYS! GUYS!
GOOD NEWS!
I've just explored the site and i found this!
http://members.jcom.home.ne.jp/wtetsu/comitia88.html

>>6486684
まままままままじですかー

Looks like it's a CD game being distributed during COMITIA 88...whatever COMITIA is. That's where we'd have to get it - I don't think it's a free download this time!

>>6486757
Scratch that. Something about this doesn't look right. I'm not so sure this is real.

>>6486775
Scratch THAT. It was distributed at COMITIA 88, which is some sort of doujinshi meeting like Comiket, and sold for 300 yen. Title is 愛と勇気とかしわもち邂, and packaged with extra CGs for Mamomo and Irisu Syndrome. Sadly, I dunno if we can find this now...

Small correction: あんな子にされてみたいなと思った (the third Metsu song) is correctly translated as "I'd like to be ____ed by that girl". The exact verb is left unspecified in the original (though it's probably "killed"), so in English it doesn't flow very well, though.

>>6487453
It's best explained as being formatted as "あんな子に　されてみたいなと思った", space intentional.

>>6487467
Ah, is that it? Yeah, I had real trouble with that, thanks for the help. If it's not too much trouble, could you check the rest of my work, too? I'm starting to lose confidence in my work.

Who win?

>>6488459
irisu's bat is made out of bread, so i doubt she'd win any kind of fight with it.

>>6486297
Here, buddy. Sorry for ignoring you for so long.

http://www.mediafire.com/?7z05d467e3f5lyq

There's the script files, plus dxadecode and dxaencode.

Now, what I believe you're doing wrong in attempting to unpack the files is that you're not opening the cmd window in Irisu's directory, THEN imputting the other command lines for unpacking/repackaging. If it's not like the screenshot on the left, it's not going to work.

If you're really having trouble with it, send me the Spanish files once you're done with them and I'll repackage them for you.ode and dxaencode.

Now, what I believe you're doing wrong in attempting to unpack the files is that you're not opening the cmd window in Irisu's directory, THEN imputting the other command lines for unpacking/repackaging. If it's not like the screenshot on the left, it's not going to work.

If you're really having trouble with it, send me the Spanish files once you're done with them and I'll repackage them for you.

>>6488713
Also ignore the .ode and daxencode at the end of my second line. That was just me being autistic.

>>6488713
...and ignore the double lines after the .ode and dxaencode. That was just ctrl-v being autistic.

I extracted irisu203.zip, then I copied the translation files over and overwrote some existing files. I click on irisu.exe but then my screen flickers, then the game window flickers and the sound is staticy. Have I done something wrong? Why can't I play this game?

back to the top with this one.

I'll get the level 100 ending someday!

>>6488924
Do you run it on locale japanese?

>>6490304
I've reached level 18 once...

>>6490551
Yes. I've had random problems with my screen flickering before so I think it might be a graphics card issue but I haven't had the problem in a long time and it always happens when I open this game.

>>6490621
If you have an nVidia graphics card, try forcing anti-aliasing.

>>6487671
No problem oﾉｼ Like I always say, interpretation varies wildly between translators, and that's just how I thought the line's intention was. I can compare stuff and see if there's anything that stands out, but I haven't really found much other than "着信ゼロ" meaning something along the lines of "No New Messages", i.e. no received phone calls, text messages, or voicemail (着信が無い→着信無い→着信ゼロ). Therefore, no friends. That's how I would title it, anyway.

It'd be nice to have the original script vs. the translated script if you really want me to go over it! :x

>>6490304
>>6490551
The most I've gotten to is lvl 28.

Level 93 for me...yeah. Uggggg.

Once you get level 100 once, you'll be able to get it a thousand times. Then you'll wonder how you ever had trouble with it.

Once you get level 100 once, you'll be able to get it a thousand times. Then you'll wonder how you ever had trouble with it.

>>6491166
Those... eyes...

>>6491276
Adorable.

http://www.mediafire.com/?0dajhuek97un062
translated
http://www.mediafire.com/?496vepx9qld0rmb
raw

I'm sorry about throwing this upon you, but you seem rather experienced in the language, while honestly I'm rather new. I'm just hoping that I slipped on the music because of context, and that I didn't botch the entire thing.

To everyone else, I'd like to apologize for my shoddy translation work that needs so much patching up.

>>6491668
Ohmanohman :( Nonono, it's a good translation - I'm just a perfectionist and I tend to point out things I'd do differently, rofl. I very much enjoy this patch.

>>6480738
Tetsu may mean 'future' for that Doeramon, anyways what will happen to the story of the game? let's wait paitiently...for now

>>6490852
Im slowly getting better at the game

>>6491668
I'm playing around with the script, and I'm wondering - what's the purpose of filelist.txt? Why are memo.txt and usaginouutarou.txt not in it? Are they intended to appear as according to the game's programming?

Your script is pretty accurate. Most of what I'm doing is typical editing to make it sound "nicer" or whatever I think I'm doing. For the most part, I'm keeping your translation's structure in any rewriting I'm trying out.

>>6492849
Yeah, memo.txt and usaginouutarou.txt, as far as I can tell, are not in the game's coding. They're just extras, like how there's a bit of extra art in img.dxa. Also, I'm glad that most of my work is good. I blame あんな子にされてみたいなと思った　for having a terribly misleading structure, since I looked at 子にされて and read "make into a child". But what you said makes sense, especially in the context of the game. Also, あんな子に殺されてみたいなと思った is a line directly from じさつうさぎにっき.

As for 着信, "Communication" would be best, I think. "Zero Communication." It only really implies to incoming stuff, if I'm not mistaken, but I think that's the best way to go about it. Your opinion?

>>6492910
On that subject, maybe you could help me with something. The hell's an うーたろう anyway?

>>6492913
Sounds like a nickname.

>>6492910
I kinda like "Zero Communication". I think I'll change it to that. Don't worry about trying to nail that one down, I ended up with "Arrival Zero" before deciding I'd study it a bit in the dictionary, when I first saw it.

>>6492913
うさぎのうーたろう → Uutarou the Rabbit.

If I close my eyes in the dark, I can see curious shapes raining down behind my eyelids.

I destroy each and every one.

One by one. Neatly, gracefully.

I've done this ever since I was a child.

This is what I do to calm my aching heart.

And I realized that all day long today, too, I played with the shapes.

From Uutarou the Rabbit.txt. It's implied that Uutarou is what Irisu named the rabbit in the schoolyard. And the 100k normal extra is called u-tarou.png...

Incidentally, memo.txt seem to be Tetsu's notes to himself about the characters' personalities. I translated it just for the hell of it, and I guess maybe you guys can find out how to put the two text files as bonus material in the game somehow? Maybe at appropriate points, they can appear in the folder.

>>6492954
I was planning on translating those for the hell of it, but I forgot. But now you've done it, so it's all good.

...Wait, was usagi no uutarou not translated in the file you got? I totally translated it.

And yeah, memo seems to be notes on the characters. I want to include it because the comments it makes on the characters' personalities are interesting, and don't completely shine through just from the story.

>>6492954
Also, for これをすると心のこんがらがりが解れていく, I liked translating that as about loosening the entanglements of her mind. It just feels more... poetic, or something.

Anyhow, when you're done with everything, could you throw it back up on mf?

>>6492954
But that's Irisu saying that right?

>>6480472
中国にもいりすさんファンがいたのか

そういや、最近かしわ餅全然食べてないな…
基本的に5月に食べるものなんですよ、あれ

明日スーパーで買ってきて食べよう

>>6494842
Well of course. Irisu's love should and must be spread to every corner of the world.

>>6494842
/jp/ - food blog?

I had one of these when kid.

>>6494893
No, that's wrong! Aaaaall wrong!

>>6494842
うらやまし過ぎ
実家の近くにあったヨーグルト店でいつも餅ソフトクリームを買っていたけ
どそれは過去の事

うわあぁ・・・餅ソフトが欲しい。
この辺で売ってるのかな；；　なかったらボストンで、きっと。

>>6494928
TANGRAAAAAMS

>>6494929
Also I have literally started seeing shapes falling when I close my eyes. Irisu what have you done to me!

>>6494933
I had that happen to me before too. Damn Tetris effect.

>>6494879
確かに、いりすさんは世界中から愛されてる
4chan見れば分かるとおり
Certainly, Irisu san has loved worldwide
As understood if you see here

>>6494929
日本のスーパーは年中おだんごとか買えますので、フヒヒ

Suddenly, I realize if the author is lurking behind all of us.

Makes me happy (and a tiny bit scared inside.)

>>6494842
>>6494929
>>6495027
...I suddenly realized that I could actually read and understand most of that, only having to check a few kanji which turned out to be words I already knew. I guess those Japanese classes are actually paying off... still, it's a weird feeling, considering how a little over a year ago I didn't know any Japanese.

>>6495065
It's making you speak in broken English from giddiness.

>>6494842
>>6494929
>>6495027
...I suddenly realized that I could actually read and understand most of that, only having to check a few kanji which turned out to be words I already knew. I guess those Japanese classes are actually paying off... still, it's a weird feeling, considering how a little over a year ago I didn't know any Japanese.

ちょっとうれしい。。。と思う。

>>6495080
I know.

>>6492987
uutaroutherabbit.txt was not in the English copy I downloaded. I added it back in and translated it. memo.txt was also left untranslated...and I did that too. I'll zip everything up when I'm done, thank god for Thanksgiving breaks!

>>6490654
It worked. Thank you very much.

Is there a guide or anything for this? I'm just randomly clicking shapes without knowing what's going on, and I'm seeing plenty of pictures but no text.

>>6495257
Click on the pictures. Check the game folder for text files and changes in images.

Left button launches fast tofu, right button launches slow tofu. Hit like colored blocks with like colored blocks to get points. More blocks at a time = more and more points. Clear blocks on the bottom with like colored falling blocks to stop health loss. Try and combo a lot. Have fun.

>>6495027
おだんご・・・もーーーお腹減った、コンビニタイム

>>6495094
日本語は難しいと言うけれど、私には当然英語のほうが難しく感じます
It's said that Japanese is difficult, but it's feel that English is more difficult in me

漢字は少し見ただけで、どんな意味なのかすぐ分かるからねー
The meaning is understood at once only from seeing the KANJI

irisu syndrome に関係ない返信で sorry

>>6495278
Are you the actual creator of irisu syndrome?
I must say, i love your work, i think that the plot is a good one, original, and the characters, well, everyone has their appeal!
I'm glad that you made such an epic game.
And also, i'm going to translate it to spanish.

>>6497276
Nah, he said that he's unaffiliated with the game. He's just a fan.

>>6492954
Can you tell us then?

Get up.

I am going over the translation for the game - sometimes correcting errors, sometimes just refining the text a little bit - sorry, my editor's spirit is seeping through my revision. The translation is pretty much correct - I'm just making it look pretty. :B

Progress is happening, so LIVE THREAD! LIIIIIVE!

>>6502479
Stop using emoticons on /jp/ please.

>>6502494
Shit, is that a rule here? Sorry, I'll stop.

Nice game and the music is sweet, but since it's a puzzle and the song is so slow and depressing, I get tired from playing very fast. It's exhausting. I think the game needs more speed, at least on the music side.

>>6502509
I actually find it quite relaxing to play

>>6502509
You can change the music by clicking the logo, although they're all kinda slow and sleepy.

>>6502509
But that's the very essence of Irisu Syndrome. It's something relaxing, depressing and calm.

After all, It's a game she has inside her head.

It's not relaxing at all if you're the type to swear every time a shape doesn't do what you want it to do.

>>6502569
Well, that's not a game problem is it?

>>6502577
I don't remember stating it was.

Can someone direct me to the images.dmx download? The unpacked version, not the translated one. I'm kind of lost here with so many links through these threads.

nump

>>6502887
展開できるのはver1.00だけですね
Being able to unpack is only ver1.00

私は持ってないです…
but, I don't have...

土日に2chで探してみるのでしばし待たれよ
It looks for with 2ch on the weekend and wait a little, please.

>>6502887
You want the untouched .dxa image files? Is that what you're saying?

the fuck is this, a game?

>>6505931
Yes?

>>6502887
http://www.mediafire.com/?trk7g4g8uem8dl3
is this what you're looking for?
If you wanted the Japanese icons, I believe the untranslated ones are all here
http://www.mediafire.com/?s2n9yar55rylrec

>>6505531
>>6505889
What I wanted was: >>6506627


Thanks for the help and concern.

Who is the best?

>>6507141
Irisu, obviously.

The artist of that image got her left leg wrong by the way.

>>6507141
I've always thought Uuji's hair seems like he's sporting a short ponytail.

>>6506627
うおおおおおおお、滅の中身入ってるじゃないですかー
でも、滅プレイ中のバックグラウンド（ウサギが自殺してる絵）とかないで
すね？
どうやってアンパックしました？

>>6506844
とりあえずver1.00拾ってきました
http://www.mediafire.com/?t999baoyyoa2yyt
これならパスかかってないので、DxaDecodeでアンパック可能です


誰か英訳頼む、エキサイト翻訳使うのもめんどくさいよー
Can anyone translate please?

>>6509883
え？滅のバクグラウンドはrarの中にちゃんと入っている。ex_back.pngだ。

>>6510448
普通に見逃してました、さーせん
っていうか、1.01以降のアーカイブを展開するパスも載ってたのね知らなか
った

>>6510526
パスっての意味はパスワード？DxLibで？ならば「shine」試してみて。

>>6488713にshineのパスワードが載ってたの知らなかったんだ

>>6510640
英語話せなくてごめん、shineで展開できるのさっき知りました！

適当に英語書くより日本語のほうが通じるんだろうなぁ…ｗ
ありがとう

>>6510770
だよねぇ～
漢字は多すぎるだけど。

...Irisu?!

age.

I usually run out of semen at around 100k. How do people get over a million in this game?

Hey, guys. Confirmed the fact that the creator recognises us! He has on his twitter the version 1.1 of the patch.

>>6515179
Someone tell him to put the most recent version.

>>6515187

Isn't there one more update to come? I remember some guy was doing a translation check on everything. We should wait for that first.

Is there a readme or guide that explains the gameplay? Because I'm somewhat confused.

>>6515388

Shoot your semen into a shape and try to hit it into a shape of the same color. Hit the heads between her breasts, but not more than 5 times. More than 5 times will give you a bad end. Sometimes a shiny ball will appear. If you hit a shape into that ball, every other shape of that color will disappear.

>>6515306
Yeah, I'm just waiting on Retro's check, then the final version can be released.

Alright, I played it for a bit, but my mind is full of fuck. I suppose it's the kind of game that doesn't resorts to spoonfeeding, but are there at least any tips to get a different ending?

>>6516320
10k is an ending, 20k is another, 40k is metsu and 100k is the last ending.

On metsu, 50k EXACTLY is another ending. No more, no less.

There's no secret to get a different ending. It just boils down to how good you are at chaining stuff.

>>6516342
Jesus vectorcannoing Christ. Well, time to bust my ass on it.

>>6516342
>Exactly
wtetsu isn't that cruel. 51556 got me ending 3-0. Also 100k on normal/Metsu aren't different endings per se, but rather triggers to certain things.

This game makes me shit bricks.

>>6516570
Why?

>>6516609
Picture related.

That game makes me sad!
The music is pretty but melancholic...

Bump~

Eh, looks WAY too cute and cuddly for my tastes.

I can't even advance to level 2.

Some notes on Irisu, after a few playtests:
-The first playthrough, you will unlock the CGs. If you after your sixth game, if you've made Irisu cry, you will get ending 1. The cycle of the same five CGs and ending 1 will repeat until you manage to score 20,000+ points before Irisu starts crying. In this case, you will get ending 2 after the five CGs. After seeing ending 2, the cycle will break and nothing will happen after games until you unlock Metsu at 40,000 points. In addition to these scores, there is an event at reaching level 100.
In Metsu, you must unlock the six journal fragments, then score 50,000+ points to unlock ending 3. Again, Metsu has a surprise at level 100.
-Metsu note 1 is unlocked at 500 points.
-Metsu note 2 is unlocked at 1000 points.
-Metsu note 3 is unlocked at 2000 points.
-too lazy to figure out the rest.
-Getting 40k before seeing ending 2 will not unlock Metsu, but will cause the creepy Irisu portrait
-You CAN skip ending 1 if you manage to score 20k+ on your first playthrough.
-If you make Irisu cry, you get ending 1, the bad end. As long as you get 20k+ in a single game before she cries, you'll get ending 2.
-Mouse wheel speeds up the game.
-F10 pauses the game, but it unpauses if the Irisu window loses focus.
-Right click for faster tofu with more momentum

>>6517833
>but it unpauses if the Irisu window loses focus.
Ha

Save the Irisu!

Damn, I'm done with Irisu for the day. Gonna try and get past at least level 20 tomorrow.

"Zero Incoming" is so depressing and nice at the same time. ;_;

>>6518413
As of the next patch, it'll be Zero Communication.
Also, it really is a lovely song.

So, I played this game long ago, but I didn't know about the level 100 ending, but whenever I click "Start" the whole game shutsdown, Any ideas what the hell causes that?

>>6518472
level 100 isn't an ending. See
>>6517833
Also, nVidia GPU? Patched or unpatched?

いりすさんが可愛すぎて生きるのが辛い

>>6519278
合意

Hey! What is with me?

so I just reached level 100 in metsu - it made a strange noise and then dumped me back to the title screen. I didn't see any event, but I also didn't lose -- so SOMETHING happened.

What was it supposed to be?

>>6521057

Irisu smiling and a text file in the game folder.

>>6521139
I didn't get any new text file... what's it named?

My rankings screen shows that I DID get level 100. Any ideas?

>>6521158

Suicidal Rabbit Diary.txt

I'm using a less recent version of the patch, so it's possible that something got messed up. I don't really know what could have stopped it from appearing.

>>6521187
Suicidal Rabbit Diary should be unlocked before level 100.

>>6521473

Are you sure you aren't thinking of Used in Art Class.txt?

>>6521518
My highest score is 51,000 and I have all the text files.

>>6521518
>>6521473
I already have both of those. So does this mean that there actually isn't anything at level 100?

As soon as I start the game my screen goes nuts and my display driver crashes. What gives?

>>6522254
nVidia GPU? Force anti-aliasing.
Not that? Dunno if I can help you.
>>6522199
at level 100 normal game, you get a creepy bunny appearing at the bottom of your screen.
At level 100 Metsu, the Metsu title screen changes to Irisu smiling.

Sorry for the revision being late, Thanksgiving break separated me from my comp and I wasn't able to edit - I'll have this done...fuck it, I'll get this done tonight. How about that, in return for being late?

>>6522260
Forcing AA worked. Thanks.

>>6522262
That said, I'm a bit lost on this line:

ノートを破いて細かくきざんで細く丸めたもので排水口の上でミニ櫓を組ん
でライ
ターでそれに火をともしてすこしずつ炎が広がっていく様をじっとみつめる
。

Way I interpreted it is the sequence of events where she tears up the notes, lets them settle on the drain, then sets them on fire and watches it burn - but that doesn't make sense considering the situation. On the other hand, I think that's how the structure of the sentence implies what happens. vOv Go me being a confused dumbass.

>>6522260
thanks, I didn't actually notice that the title screen had changed.

Now I guess I need to get normal game level 100.

>>6522271
I read the fire bit as metaphorical. That's the only way I could think of, and there's that 様 in the middle of things too.

>>6522332
Yeah, that's throwing me off too. I wanna say that it's in chronological order but you can't set fire to something that's totally wet - blargh, so much thinking.

Also this line has changed:

そして成功した暁には、夕日を背にうーじとふたりきりで、あの素敵なイラ
ストを愛でるんだ。

to

And if I succeed... alone with Uuji, our backs to the sunset, we'll admire those beautiful drawings together.

Since it's saying that 素敵なイラストを愛でる follows sitting with Uuji.

>>6522376
Hm... I see it now, okay.

I keep hearing that Irisu is actually incontinent. I've looked through story synopses and not found anything about this. Am I just getting trolled?

>>6522404
That... is wrong. Though it may be someone alluding to bedwetting being classified as an early sign of Psychopathy/Sociopathy.

>>6522439
I guess. Many different kinds of urinary incontinence are usually the result of emotional or psychological issues.

Just thought I had something in common.

>>6522474
Well, we have something in common...

Pics of that demonic bunny?

So what is this thing that Irisu's dress is actually a demented face?

>>6522503
;_;

Well, at least I didn't walk away empty handed.

>>6522524
Someone things the stitches and patches on her dress make out a demented rabbit face.

>>6522524
This one?

Does anyone have the soundtrack? I really love the piano in this.

>>6522589
You can pull it right out of the game files.

>>6522591
Yeah, just saw that. I ctrl+f'd for "soundtrack" and didn't see it, so assumed it wasn't posted.

Hmm, I like having my songs nicely tagged though. Someone have a key I can look at to match the filenames with the song names? Don't want to manually click each song and find the corresponding name in game.

>>6522524
>>6522572
Demented rabbit? What the hell it doesn't look demented at all. It seems to be more like an angry rabbit to me.

It should represent Uutarou considering one of the ears in her hat.

>>6522592
http://www.mediafire.com/?ldyu8sip9cdbl0t
The soundtrack.

>>6522730
Is that complete?

>>6522794
Tetsu has some high-quality tracks linked here ttp://www.muzie.co.jp/artist/r010256/ but I don't think they're tagged any differently than normal.

Revision will be done in an hour or so. Maybe longer than that.

>>6522794
It's the complete soundtrack, but doesn't have every song.

>>6522826
Thanks

Is there a reason the BGM doesn't come on when I play this?

Guh, "Suicidal Rabbit Diaries" is way longer than I thought...I'm halfway through it and I'm like holy shit. Oh well...continuing.

>>6523155
Yeah, it's by far the longest script.
Keep up the good work~

>>6517833

I think you can unlock Metsu before 40k, I have it at 26k.

>>6523468
Get one of the endings (not sure which one), then restart the game (see the other cutscene). Lose once (just hold down space), then hold space at the main menu. It should change the picture. Then press on the bottom right of the screen.

Not sure if this is standard unlock of Metsu, but just putting that out there.

Nnkay, here's my revision.

http://www.mediafire.com/?9s5g76h5bwnngcl

Things to keep in mind:

"Something to calm me down" seems to be a bit of a theme in the game. Both Irisu and Uujima do it - the game and the drawings, respectively.

"Animal Divination" (動物占い) = ttp://www.d-uranai.shogakukan.co.jp/uranai/index.html . It's like a personality test.

なんと表現すればいいんだろう。　and the aforementioned line are two lines that I'm not sure how to translate, so I left them alone.

In SRD: "And then, finally, I can destroy (滅する) my past." is the intended allusion.

The very last file: "So much meat and bone for such a tiny little body." - Yes, I like NIN, why do you ask?

I took a bit of liberty with my interpretation, in the way that it sounds slightly more optimistic, or at least different, than the original translation. I hope that's okay.

Use any part of it that you want, don't feel compelled to overwrite it all. Certainly go through it and tell me what you think!

>>6523551
Meaning, keep in mind that 滅 (Metsu) means "destruction".

Any questions you've got, ask me and tomorrow morning I'll check and see what I can answer. Good night.

>>6523554
Good night and good work. I'm also quite busy on my end, so I'll probably take up to 24 hours to get back to you.

PROST!

Does anyone else think Zero Incoming sounds a bit like Deaf to all but the Song?

>>6523551
Some comments:
自分を評価しても良いかもしれない。
It may be better to evaluate myself./I really must have a better hold on myself. ---Is this a loose translation or just a strange use of 評価?

くれぐれも不自然な態度をみせないようにお願いします。
In the hopes that you don't show unnatural behavior, I earnestly thank you./I'm holding my breath, in the hopes that no one behaves strangely. --- same as above.


ウサギと、あの女の子の仲を邪魔してしまわない時間を選んだ。
I chose a time when I would not interrupt the girl's visit./I chose a time when I wouldn't get in their way. ---Looking at this, who are "they"?

あの傷だらけのウサギのこと、せめてぼくだけは深く心に刻みつけたままで
いよう。
If nobody else, I at least will keep that scarred rabbit deeply carved into myself./If nobody else, I, at least, will hold the memory of that scarred rabbit deeply carved into my heart. --- keeping this the way it is because I think it's a reference to Uuji's self-mutilation

これもぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもので、とても嬉しい。
Because I discovered this sentiment toward me, I'm very happy./Since she feels the complete opposite way for me, I'm very happy.--- Either way, this seems like a strange use of 裏返し.


その後ぼくは、警察をどうごまかせばいいんだよ。
After that, how could I testify to the police?/After that, how am I supposed to convince the police you weren't there? --- I think the gist of this is supposed to be "How am I supposed to convince the police I didn't do it", which I don't feel from your line.

http://www.mediafire.com/?z6i5ndsjm5u59sy
Here's my integrated version. I kept a good bulk of your edits, which makes me happy because the script has improved this much. On the other hand, it shows how far I have yet to go as a translator.

So which translation do we download?

How do i play this game, what is the objective and how does scoring work, I kinda get it but i cant progress much.

>>6526733
We're currently working on the final patch. Other than that, just take the one closest to the bottom of the thread.

>>6526558

>自分を評価しても良いかもしれない。
I'm not entirely sure of the usage of 評価 here, but I think it means something like self-assessment in this situation - like "check yourself", in a way, but that's just how I interpret it.

>くれぐれも不自然な態度をみせないようにお願いします。
It sounds more here like Irisu is in more of a pleading/requesting tone of voice than a thankful one, IMO.

>ウサギと、あの女の子の仲を邪魔してしまわない時間を選んだ。
You might have a point on this one!

>あの傷だらけのウサギのこと、せめてぼくだけは深く心に刻みつけたま
まで
いよう。
That's what I tried to do as well. I'm not sure how well I succeeded.

>これもぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもので、とても嬉しい。
ぼくへの想い = feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返し = reversal of feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもの = something that is the reversal of feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなものでとても嬉しい = happy about something that is the reversal of feelings for me --> これもぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもので、とても嬉しい。 = happy about this thing too that is the reversal of feelings for me
^ I'll admit...this is kind of a stretch. I wasn't happy with that line at all, to be honest.

>>6527262

>その後ぼくは、警察をどうごまかせばいいんだよ。
Mm, I'm not so sure about that... well, lemme think it through. ごまかす = to deceive, falsify, misrepresent; paired with the rest of the sentence (警察, どう, etc.) Uujima is wondering how he is supposed to deceive the police. From how I interpret it, he knows of Irisu's involvement in the trip and if he's the only one left, after suspicion is cast on him and he inevitably denies it, the police will want to know who it really was if it wasn't Uuji, which would lead to either Uuji or Irisu getting arrested, which means that they're unable to be together, which means that the only way for Irisu and Uujima to be together would be either for Uujima to not go on the trip and take himself entirely out of the picture, or he would have to be killed as well in order for Irisu to not get arrested, which results in not being with Irisu anyway, and if he doesn't go on the trip, then that casts suspicion on Irisu since she is the only one who could have been there that isn't killed. Therefore, there's potentially no way for the plan to work. I see it more as if he's criticizing Irisu's plan rather than fearing for his own safety, basically.

I'm glad you liked my revision! And truth be told, after I compared my script to yours, it ended up being very similar, so I doubt that it's an issue of difference in skill (tho it's always good to keep practicing!). A lot of translation depends on the interpretation and writing style of the translator among many other factors, which is why machine translation doesn't work nearly as well.

>>6527265
Now that I think about it, either of the lines for the last one would work. Up to you.

>>6527262
>これもぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもので、とても嬉しい。
>ぼくへの想い = feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返し = reversal of feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもの =
>something that is the reversal of feelings for me --> ぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなものでとても嬉しい = happy about something that is the reversal of feelings for me --> これもぼくへの想いの裏返しのようなもので、とても嬉しい。 = happy about this thing too that is the reversal of feelings for me

Yeah, I got there too. I just read gaeshi as "return" in this sense, so he's talking about reciprocation. DOes that make sense?

>>6527422
It's 裏返し, not 返し. Don't forget the "ura"!

Anyway I've reached the point where I stop making sense so it's sleep time. Good night!

So what are all the replay files?

.....

>Uujima Satoru ("Uuji")
>Favorite Food: Pudding

This thread must be SAVED

PUDDING PUDDING

>>6530273

Is that legit?

>>6531246
I translated that part ages ago, soooo :V

>>6531246
Heeeeeeeeey! Sweetheart!
What is with me?
How about a date with me?
Come on, cute bunny!

>>6531334
Stop using emoticons in /jp/. I already told you that.