/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #99

[Anonymous No.]

General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread: >>10250249

[Anonymous No.]

cirno would have been appropriate

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326190
Why?
To repeat a lame joke for the 10000000th time?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326194
Yeah.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326198
But this isn't youtube so we don't actually have to do that in order to get upvotes

[Tom No.]

contributing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326200
It's a matter of principle.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326194
>>10326200
You guys just don't get it... The #99 thread HAS to be Cirno!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326203
It's a matter of principle on /jp/ to not act like youtubekiddies.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326190
>>10326207
Get the fuck out of here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326183
Yay finally you drew Komachi

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326269
How's fitting in for you? Your first week at /jp/ been good?

[Anonymous No.]

I was doodling some gay furry porn for a ladyfriend yesterday.

But that's not /jp/ related.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326431
Then don't even bother posting about it like you just did, idiot.

[Anonymous No.]

Fuck off, Magister.

[Anonymous No.]

Trying out spriting seriously for the first time in a few years.

[Anonymous No.]

Trying out spriting seriously for the first time in a few years.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
That's amazing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
And pooped real fast into a shitty mock.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
Between the skirt and the kneecap the leg on the left looks like she's wearing kneepads or something.

Shading on her skirt is bad - for one, because the highlight aligns with her leg it looks like she doesn't have a pelvis but her legs start at a single point instead. Also, the creases on the left side(above that bulging knee) don't make sense.

And it took me ages to figure out she has a coat with a print on the underside and it's not just a random pattern.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327589
>>10327580
That exposed midriff... So sexy! Time to fap.

[Saegrimr !SHIELDM.mE No.]

>>10327580
Well fuck, i'm jealous. Guess thats what I get for neglecting practice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
Just needs some shading on that skirt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327600
>>10327625
Admittedly, I've never been good at even drawing flowing clothes like this, let alone spriting them. That said, your points are more than valid. I definitely need more practice with cloth in general.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10326183

Do Yakumo-sama next PCB outfit please

[Anonymous No.]

My monthly marker.

I plan on splitting what I focus on this year. these next three months will be spent 110% on working on how the fuck I do a upper body/bust.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327625
>>10327600
I'm extremely inexperienced with shading clothing so I really don't understand what you see wrong the shading on her skirt. Would either of you mind either showing me where the problem is or how it could be done better? I'd like to learn something from this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
you have a deviantart account or anything

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
Aren't you the guy that sprited the umineko characters a few years back?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10329073
Nah. I've been meaning to get my own site set up, but it's been a hassle.
>>10329084
Nope, sorry.

Thanks for all the compliments, by the way. I might make more if I have some more free time in the coming days.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580

I am so jealous of your spriting abilities right now. Great job.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10329159
give me ana alias you go by so I can find your work when you do

[Anonymous No.]

Challenge time, /jp/.

http://shindanmaker.com/115155
1. Input name.
2. Receive three colors in hex triplet.
3. Use only those three colors to draw something.
4. Post!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10329159
You should do some requests if you ever get the free time. I'm pretty impressed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
>http://shindanmaker.com/115155

taosymは6600ff、cccc33、00BFFFをつかって絵をかいてください http://shindanmaker.com/115155

[Anonymous No.]

full colored version

[Anonymous No.]

Had I posted this one, alreday?
Well, however.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
>>10327589
Have you got any more to share about that doujin game of yours? How's the project going?

[Anonymous No.]

just messing around

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334269
>I wanna be in one too...
There was something incredibly sad about this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334277
It's only sad when the feelings of someone relevant are hurt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
appleofmysteryはcc0000、ffff00、ffff66をつかって絵をかいてください

I don't have a Twitter account but this looked fun

[Anonymous No.]

>>10333895
6600cc、ffffff、C0C0C0

>>10334336
hnnngh

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334336
that looks pretty good

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
6600cc、ffffff、C0C0C0

>>10334336
hnnngh

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334269
Cirno already has an entire fucking game to herself. It's like if the comic was about Aya complaining to Hatate.

[Anonymous No.]

I'll make something big, something large. I'm going to make it so that there will be at least one admirable part somewhere in it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334269
I've personally exploded Cirno more times than I can count.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334518
lewd

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
Meguca with 660066、ff0066、CD853F

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334881
I didn't pay much attention to the previous version of this, but I can see that you made the keys looks much better in terms of perspective.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334881
Nice. Looking forward to it.

[Anonymous No.]

just starting to draw: how the hell am i supposed to draw the bottom of long hair, like this in the bottom left?
been trying to figure it out for a couple days, but whatever I come up with looks tasteless

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335289
However 2D/stylized shall it be, try thinking and constructing hair as (dinamic looking) locks, rather than just a hanging piece of fabric; then the ends will come logically by themselves.

PROTIP: For a nice and highly feminine long hair, make it wave a little in the wind.

[Anonymous No.]

is there anything like FL Studio that is free? i know the trial is free but its so shitty i'd rather use something else or nothing at all.

just asking before i give up again
keep drawing kawaii pictures pls

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335634
It's not like you're going to use it commercially, so just pirate whatever you like.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335651
hmmm i'll have to find where to pirate reason from then.

[Anonymous No.]

Some experimenting with time measures.

https://soundcloud.com/jdarryl/ribbons-mariana-night

>>10335720
Kat.ph or thepiratebay probably have what you need. I once read about a couple of good free DAW's though. Unfortunately I can't seem to remember where.

[Anonymous No.]

its not really a drawing, but i got distracted while organizing my ammo crate.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335958
Neet.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335958
It's beautiful....

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335958
>touhou and guns

the fuck?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336008
>He doesn't own guns

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336027
I hate you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336027
you know where its at.
are you /k/'s marisa by any chance?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336027
Please don't kill people.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336122
Guns are super cool, but but they don't like to bully random people.
please be a responsible gunperson and your guns will be happy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336000
Get out.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336027
Who are you quoting?

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

Someday I'm going to contribute something to one of these OC threads. But not today.

[Anonymous No.]

This is the only thing I can contribute to this thread. It's a baseball bat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336258
That's lovely.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336258
i wish i had another me to play baseball with.

[Anonymous No.]

Making an original character, how she looks /jp/?
she's small and have big boobs

I think her color scheme is a bit off...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337793
nice original character

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334869
that's cute anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337793
nice original character!!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
Sorry anon, I can't hex triplet

[Anonymous No.]

if we make a /jp/ album will it be 2hu remixes or original?

i need to know what to start working on

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337867
>if we make a /jp/ album
getting ahead of yourself there aren't you?

which would you personally feel is the most rewarding, remixing/rehashing ZUN songs, songs that have already been composed, or making your entirely original compositions?

You should be able to solve this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337880
i'm not very good at coming up with catchy melodies, so remixing ZUN songs would be easier, although making original compositions might be more rewarding.

so as a NEET i'm supposed to pick the one that's easier right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337904
awfully cute as fuck. it has a WATCH for an eye
fucking epoch moe

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337793
Awful.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337867
No.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337897
>catchy melodies

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337897
you're going to choose the stagnation route.
whatever.
You aren't Barack Obamur

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335895
Monotonic, atm, but the phrases sound pretty good.

>>10335958
you should to a pic like that but with actual danmaku around with a Reisen pic.

>>10336258
Good.

>>10337793
Not bad. Though it needs a bit more milk to meet the anime standard of what is called big boobs.

>>10337867
Anything doujin (original and derivative) that clicked with the community, I'd say.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10335895
Monotonic, atm, but the phrases sound pretty good.

>>10335958
you should to a pic like that but with actual danmaku around with a Reisen pic.

>>10336258
Good.

>>10337793
Not bad. Though it needs a bit more milk to meet the anime standard of what is called big boobs.

>>10337867
Anything doujin (original or derivative) that clicked with the community, I'd say.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337793
this is my waifu do not steal

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337940
>>10337948
Get out with your stupid reaction images.

[Anonymous No.]

What you think of these?

http://tindeck.com/listen/acgb
Aiming for a sort of festival background music.

http://tindeck.com/listen/gjvd
Trying to make a little song that a mischievous satyr/troll would play and dance to. Title is a pun from Tod Browning' movie "Freaks" song "Gooble Gobble

I played and recorded everything acoustically, by myself, so sorry for the sound quality.
These I had posted before:

http://tindeck.com/listen/ajoc
A little love song for mai waifu

http://tindeck.com/listen/xvvc
Based on a couple verses of a poem. Sub-title is a pun of Feyerabend's work.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338036
Use Soundcloud please

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338119
https://soundcloud.com/elemile

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338119
https://soundcloud.com/elemile

[froggy No.]

Do videos also count?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKBV9Tgou-o

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338204

Gooble gobblus gets too 'loud' during the middle and almost at the end too. Maybe you should re-arrange the instruments to make them sound more harmoniously. Also, I don't think it is very fit for a troll/satyr song, it lacks some kind of mischievousness in it (being kinda pretentious here, sorry), it's not bad though.

Matsuri isn't bad. A bit excess of shaker usage there for my tastes though.

You need to work on those big grave notes on El hacha de vidrio, they are kind of unfitting there, too loud perhaps. (I'm talking about 1:08 and forward)

El cartero de la primavera siempre llama dos veces is pretty good, I could definitely imagine it on some indie kinetic novel. Reminded me of Narcissu a bit.

Are those songs completely original work? They all give a clear 'amateur sound' but they aren't bad.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338204
I also liked that image, did you make it too?

>>10338228
That's just horrible.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338231
>Are those songs completely original work?
They are.
Thank you very much for the feedback.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338238
>>10338238
>that image
Thanks. It's a re-take of the logo I made for a little Folk/Protest cover group I was on and which disbanded quickly. Here's the original.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337867
>>10337897
How about remixing something that is not fucking 2hu? You can't have me believe that there is no other good/catchy /jp/ related music. Go remix some Ar Tonelico songs or something.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337867
You're doing it by yourself?

[Anonymous No.]

I generally stay away from OC thread because of their poor quality, but I drew this for you guys, because I thought you would appreciate it.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10339419
is yuuka a dry ad

[Anonymous No.]

>>10336214
Oh, leotard guy is back.
I like it. Hips look a bit weird, but it might just be the stretched pose.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10338415
>>10338467
well i was just wondering if anyone else had already taken the initiative to start working on something that i might strive to contribute to. for now i'm just going to mess around.

[Anonymous No.]

Does this >>10338294 count?

[Anonymous No.]

i recoloured the morrigan model from MVC3 and tried to pose it like the one on the left

[Anonymous No.]

>>10340172
her back and neck look painful

[Anonymous No.]

>>10339508
Oh thanks. I still have to fix how I render hips/pelvises in general.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10340172
go
>>10252365

[Anonymous No.]

>>10334881
If you're looking for a cool image, it might be a bit too late to say this, but proper piano technique means that the hands should be rounded. He needs to be seated higher so that his forearms are parallel to the floor while his hands are rounded and fingers are almost perpendicular to the keys. I can see his back is slouched so maybe he has finished playing? If so, then when one finishes playing, one lifts their hands off the piano and then rests them on their knees. If he's just casually playing, the back's fine, but the rounded hand thing still applies. These comments only really matter if you want your character to come across as a good piano player, though. It's the kind of thing where you do it even if you're playing casually because of how you practice. It's also kind of difficult to play the piano properly with the way the hands are drawn in that picture because it's more difficult to control the force of your fingers.

Sorry if that came across as kind of pedantic. It's definitely a good picture.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10337793
Her skirt is too short. Her behind would be poking out at the back and her downstairs would be revealed if she stretched upwards a little. The patch would also fall off easily, I think, so try and make it slant more towards the left.

[Anonymous No.]

What's the first thing you noticed about this?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
no white front dress boob thingy

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
Gears

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
Gear eyes.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341363
>>10341364
Good! Good...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341371
what about me

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341379
I just wanted to see if anyone notice the gears without them being gray.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345

Magister drew it

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
Send that shit to Tasafro.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341341
oh, finally an actual analysis
Well, I was trying to make an small skirt, but not that small, my bad
The patch DOES looks wrong, I'll try to fix it

here's her alternative design

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341383
That doesn't look anything like his style.

>>10341345
Looks like the guy that likes to draw Mokou cosplaying different toehoes. Houtengeki?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
That it's Sakuya with too-big boobs.

[General Malcolm Granger !Da0m8Chris No.]

>>10341383
>Magister
>boobs arent twice the size of the head

aso dem tiny stars in the eyes

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341337
I'm not a piano player so I didn't notice these sort of things. I'll definitely try to fix them. Thanks for your comment

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341441

I know it's a surprise but he doesn't always to to those extremes, actually usually when he does it's characters that are specifically supposed to be that big

speaking of he hasn't done anything really lewd in awhile, I still want to see if he can draw a decent vagina or anus

[Anonymous No.]

Less talk and more content, fags.

[General Malcolm Granger !Da0m8Chris No.]

>>10341457
i just want more ariane
a giant one maybe
i can dream and play with MMD a little right? ;_;

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
Your style resembles houtengeki's. The shading on her shoulder and the nose gave it away.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341345
The hood is kinda floating above her head.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341769
I didn't draw it. She's an OC character I had someone draw for me on /a/.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341869
Also its a WIP.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341869
Why are you on /jp/, DB?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341875
what's an WIP?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341899
I wanted to test to see if the gears were noticeable on /a/nons who hadn't seen it yet. What are YOU doing on /jp/?
>>10341900
Work in progress.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341913
I'm always here in the /jp/ OC threads. I'm everywhere.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341933
post something in topic, then.

[Anonymous No.]

What happened to flockdraw.com/jp?

http://collabdrawing.com/updates/flockmod.air still works with the flockdraw servers

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341949

I'm bad at drawing, and I don't like to post my writing.

[Anonymous No.]

So.. I'm making an touhouXjojo parody

I want to know /jp/'s opinion before I finish it

1/3

[Anonymous No.]

2/3

[Anonymous No.]

I think it would be better in japanese, but I can't moonrunes

3/3

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342087
It sucks.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342148
It's been a while.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342148
Nicely done. I'll be streaming farart in a few moments.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342148
The color is really pretty but the composition is really messy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342148
This gives me an opportunity to post my shitty fanart here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342228
What's wrong with it? It seems decent to me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342255
It seems chaotic and doesn't really seem to have a focus but i'm probably just being overly /ic/.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342286
Can you redline him? I'm of the opinion that it flows alright from top left character to bottom right. I'm not saying it couldn't be better, but it doesn't seem chaotic to me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342148
wow, this is gorgeous

[Anonymous No.]

Hm, the next one will be the 100th. I'd better start drawing right now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342379
Magister?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342434
No.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
nopenは660033、ff0066、FF0000をつかって絵をかいてください

I wouldn't have used white as a predominant color but the combo of red and hot pink was raping my eyes

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342434
What's up with you people asking if the poster of a random post is someone? I noticed that many times now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342550
I think he misunderstood him, thinking he was drawing for the next OP (and we've had numerous Mag drawings as OP) rather than drawing because we're entering the 3 digits and 100 is an event... or something... maybe.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342087
>>10342089
>>10342092
I like it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10341471
>i just want more ariane
this. so motherfucking this. ariane needs more love. like, way more.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342446
very cool now draw a 2hu
>>10342148
who is those people
>>10343348
who the fack is ariane

[Anonymous No.]

Girls are sewing, please wait warmly while Youmu is finished.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343624
This looks very nice! Did you sew the entire thing?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343709
Thanks! And yep, it started out as a couple bolts of fabric, a length of elastic, and an invisible zipper. I didn't really use a pattern either, but circle skirts are easy so you don't need a pattern anyways.

I've also got the shirt that goes under the vest mostly done, just gotta do the buttons for that. But it looks kinda bunchy without the vest covering it, so I'll just wait until that's done too.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343719
Saw you in the Progress thread yesterday, it's looking good so far

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343624
Sweet lewd body, yo.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343624
My real life futa Youmu will soon be a reality!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343624
Don't post pictures of real people, specially not yourself.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343863
Take it easy, it's just a mannequin.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10343863
I try not to, but in this case, the way the two skirts fit together makes it not possible to present my work to the thread without wearing it. I cropped it as much as possible to try to minimize that, too.

[Anonymous No.]

let's see if I actually improve if I keep it up.

[Anonymous No.]

I drew this for the last roll and draw Touhou character but the thread died before I was finnished.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344717
Creepy

[Anonymous No.]

I have to say: most of you guys certainly have some nerve to show that 6yo kid scratches of yours (made with tablets, to top it all). I just hope that, until you can put 3 lines together without being outright shameful, you keep your waste on DA and stop leaking on Pixiv, whose frontal page keeps getting more and more painful to watch by contributors like you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344922
I honestly can't tell whether people like:
>>10344411
are posting here ironically or do they really think their shit is even remotely interesting, or even worthy of criticism.

[Anonymous No.]

I must say: except for 2 or 3 articulate posters, you guys really have some nerve to show those 6yo kid scratches of yours (made with tablets, to top it all). I just hope that, until you can put 3 lines together without being outright shameful, you keep your waste on DA and stop leaking on Pixiv, whose frontal page keeps getting more and more painful to watch due to visual illiterate contributors like you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344922
>>10344934
What would you say is worthy here?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344946
No Bully pls!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344961
Get the fuck out.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344946
Truth hurts, eh.

[Anonymous No.]

shame on the janitor for trying to censor the truth

[Anonymous No.]

>>10345019
...what?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344946
Yeah, because all artists are here for your satisfaction and they should all be nonexistent until they meet your ideals.
Fuck off you entitled faggot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10345183
>artists
sure.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10345203
>>10345183
English is a pretty funny language. if you draw something, you are an 'artist' not a 'guy that have drawn something'.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10345232
That has drawn

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344946
I don't post here often because I think my drawings aren't good enough to share, but I'd rather have beginners showing their work than an OC thread with nothing but conversation and occasional posts from a couple of artists. Kindly go back to wherever you came from.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344946's got much bigger problems than amateurs finalizing the creative process via publishing if he actually wastes time with pixivs new submissions section

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284

didn't go as well as i thought.

[Gen Atto No.]

For you /jp/.
It's been a while since I last posted in a drawthread.

[Anonymous No.]

Hey, is jaypiss flockdraw still alive?
>>10345850
fat hands
>>10345665
who is that guy

[Anonymous No.]

>>10342446

I thought you only posted in /i/

[Anonymous No.]

I made this yesterday

[Anonymous No.]

>>10344411

Why would you share this with another human?

Do you think we're going to be impressed? Do you think you'll be praised for 'maybe improving if you keep it up?'

It's shit. It will stay shit until you stop posting in threads and start practicing, a lot, every day. Do not put your fourth-grade bullshit here and expect us to nurture your ego.

[Anonymous No.]

Let's see if I ever get the motivation to finish this...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347888
Pretty good.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347524
>fat hands
Just like god intended lolis to have.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904

Why do their faces look retarded?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347905
thank you

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347914
Not generic animu = retarded

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347919

No, it just looks retarded. Not different, but really bad.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347888
Doraemon is the essence of

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347914
I like his style...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347921
I like it, and think they just look strange, not bad
or retarded.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904
>>10347924

Really weird how you both end your sentences with ellipses.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347888
noice

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347939
I have a habit of mirroring people's mannerisms, sorry if that confused you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347914
It's just a sketch, I only need to know where everything is.
I fix stuff while painting.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347963
That Alice looks suspicious.
where is her hairband?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904
the composition feels really busy

I get the movie/promotional poster feel you are going for but I think it could easily be broken down into multiple cool drawings

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347971
fixed it, thanks for pointing it out.

>>10347972

Thanks, I get what you mean. I'll play around with it a bit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347999
Probably the best Alice we ever had in these threads.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904
Regardless of style, looks weird.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347999

The dude's face looks like shit. Stop quantifying awful art as 'style'.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347999
are you from /ic/?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348037
I can also do cutesy style, if you like that better.

>>10348049
Nope. I lurked there around ~2010 - 2011, but that's it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348037
>The dude's face looks like shit.

Trying too hard,

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067

This looks awful too. She has a fucking neanderthal forehead and horrific facial proportions.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067
That's not cute at all

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067
That's pretty adorable.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067

Why does her face look retarded?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067
Stay with western shit, you can't into moe.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348100
Because it's all one samefag trying to discourage a decent poster.

[Anonymous No.]

Why does this all feel like the same person? Nobody gives enough of a fuck about these threads to post so much so quickly.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348067

Is this who you were drawing?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348100
I only posted twice, 3 with this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348103

Yep. It's just me. You got me.

I bought some proxies to circumvent the reply timer just so I could insult your shitty art multiple times in one minute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348117
Each post was made a minute after save for one single post. Nice job.

[Anonymous No.]

jp tell me what draw

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348146

Looks like it's not 'all one samefag' after all, huh, crossboarder-kun?

Take your objectively terrible art back to deviantart where you can delete comments that hurt your feelings. I'll be here forever, and if you draw something that's shit, I'll tell you so.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348159
Edgy as fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348161

Your vocabulary is shit in addition to your artistic skills?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348166
Whoa, I'm not even that guy, the fuck is wrong with you? why are you mad?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348166
>>10348159
rude.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348166

I am sorry anon, but the anon you are talking to is not me.
also, if you want to tell me my stuff is shitty, do so. I don't mind.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348168
He's mad because he was called out on his faggotry.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904
>>10347963
>>10347999
>>10348067

I like these drawings. Looking forward to see them completely finished someday.

[Anonymous No.]

here i did an alice for you
stop being angry is bad for your health

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348226
That sucks get out

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348226
I like it.

[Anonymous No.]

here i did an alice for you

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348176

>faggotry.

Epic /b/ lingo.

[Anonymous No.]

i draw picture

insult & ur a fucking crossboarder discourager SCUM who cant appreciate my unique style

[Anonymous No.]

>>10347904
>>10347972
>>10347999
I think it's because it does look like a film poster, but those posters always have a really clear focus and it does not. $0.02

[Anonymous No.]

here i did another alice

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348333

wow, that must have taken you almost as much time as it took me to rip a mean fart just now

we should make a thread for 'original content that nobody gives a fuck about'

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348049
/ic/ a shit place

even /a/ and /v/ drawthreads are more better

[Anonymous No.]

here i made another alice

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348363
Do a tuna next!

[Anonymous No.]

do these threads always have one retard calling everything shit because they can?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348369
no now I'm tired
bye bye

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348268
chin-chan in Karaagetarouland

[Anonymous No.]

Why did Magister of all people have to make this thread? I had to filter the picture because I can't stand seeing his terrible art on the front page.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348389
Because there was nothing better.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348389

>Magister
>terrible art

you troll'n son?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348406
No. His Komachi looks nothing like the original, it's just a general huge-titted Magister abomination wearing her clothes.

I also can't stand the way he colors his drawings.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348416
no Komachi drawing looks anything like ZUN's art, to be honest.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348416
He's sameface/samebody all the time alright, but that doesn't mean it's bad looking.

[Anonymous No.]

http://www.artcream.net:18000/www/entrance_normal.html

how about we paintchat a little?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348416
He's pretty good at coloring. What's wrong with it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348464
>>10348458
>>10348406
Come on, just ignore that guy. You're giving him the attention he wants.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348350
>more better

Also /ic/ is not actually that bad, the thing is that people are dumb and say dumb things, then other people retaliate while the dumb people don't even realize what's going on.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10348389
>>10348401
>>10348406
>>10348416
>>10348422
>>10348458
>>10348464

Dear god, every single thread. I'm astonished at how you idiots fall for the same shit every time.

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>>10348067
Pretty nice, but I think you should reconsider the relation between the eye size and their distance between each other. Right now it looks like the facial features are cramped in a space too small for them. There's room left for them in her left side of the face, use it. (you may have to move some of the hair out of the way)

[Anonymous No.]

Didn't feel like changing the arms/hands

[Anonymous No.]

>>10327580
here, finished another one up at the request of a friend. Took a lot less time, partly due to the lack of giant wings.

[Anonymous No.]

I drew this. What do you think?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349427
That does look pretty damn sweet, bro.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349389
Oh, so it was him. It looks nice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349423

Excellent.

Keep up the good work, Anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349427
Looks great! Who are you going to make next?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349427
Dear God, these are beautiful.

I'm making a game and at some point I'll probably need some, can you give a couple tips for making these?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349541
This. I'd love to see your process sometime.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349541
Yes, stop being easily amazed

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349544
Get a load of this bitch ass fag.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349545
Nice argument you got there.

[Anonymous No.]

Did this the other day, any comments?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349547
It's awful

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349547
you should show something more ambitious to get any worthwhile comments, be they negative or positive

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349547
Pretty cute, not the best. Would wanna see something more finished before I could make an adequate judgement of your skills.
>>10349427
Pretty cool. I feel the boots could use a bit more detail, particularly with the shading. Look forward to seeing more.

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>>10349550
well true I always backup from doing something bigger because procrastination
>>10349552
o-okay
>>10349563
Thanks, really I should get my hands onto something bigger, here's one I finished just some minutes ago

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>>10349575
Is that line from KKHTA?

[Anonymous No.]

And pooped out another mock real quick. Didn't even bother with the meter symbols this time, cause I'm goddamn lazy.
>>10349536
I was thinking maybe Shikieiki or something, but it's not really set in stone yet.
>>10349541
Mmm... I'm not really sure what tips to give. I'm just looking at the sprites of Reimu/Marisa/Ichirin for reference on how to handle shading and proportions and the like. >>10349563
Agreed, actually. I might go back and fix that. Maybe a little of the gold from her ascot or something to pop them out.

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>>10349575
You should draw more real people with actually references, your anatomy needs work.

Gesture drawing with chalk is really the best thing you can do to improve your drafting skills quickly. Your lines will become more confident and you will grow more conscious of lines/how to define volume.

That isn't how spines connect to skulls.

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>>10349575
I feel like you could work a bit on the the face/head shape. From that sort of view there should be a good amount of head visible to the left of her face. The face ends up looking a bit flat.

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>>10349589
Their eyes looks really bad, to be honest.

[Anonymous No.]

How cheap do tablets go nowadays?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349614
Yeah, zooming in the faces could use some work.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349638
Cheapo tablets or good tablets?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349602
>The face ends up looking a bit flat.
Isn't that fine though? She is Japanese. They have heads like that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349893
No

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>>10348281
trying too hard.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349427
The open shirt is too lewd.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349867
What's the problem with cheap tablets?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351272
In first place, how much is cheap?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351281
$70/50€ is quite cheap.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349575
It reminds me of the guy that draws those Kanako pictures.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10349638
A cheap one can go from as low as $40.
>>10351272
No support, awful pens sensitivity, shit pressure levels, probably will stop working in a month, you name it.

[Anonymous No.]

those monoprice ones are supposed to be decent though, right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351420
Get a Wacom, poorfag pleb.

[Anonymous No.]

postan mah shit

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351498
What the hell man

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351513
word in russian means "chireiden"


http://www.rusichi-center.ru/uploads/f1/s/34/178/image/1530/272/medium__-_-_.jpg
it's parody to russian soldiers being dominated by local sandbiggers. Okuu's trademark gesture looks very much like "praise allah" hand sign

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351498
This is sum psychedelic shit.

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[Anonymous No.]

>>10351436
But Wacom tablets are not that expensive.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351561
Intuos/Cintiq, not Bamboo.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351617
why not?
intuos is already pro level.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351713
You want something NOT Pro?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351617
I'm not him, but yes, if he's looking for something cheap he's likely to not need something pro just yet.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351729
I'm not him, but yes, if he's looking for something cheap he's likely to not need something pro just yet.

[Anonymous No.]

Sorry Zetioun, your avatar is awful.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10351556
dskun, why would you do this? Post the whole thing!

[Anonymous No.]

>everyone is knowledgeable about tablets
>no fucking one can draw
nice investment. what about starting with a pencil and some fucking paper?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10352525
Stop quoting nonexistent text.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10352525
>no fucking one can draw
No

[Anonymous No.]

Why do you guys always argue in these threads?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10352525
lol

everyone itt draws in the same shitty style, i wish they would get the fuck out of /jp/ since they're obviously using it as a leg up

and whenever someone a little skilled comes along they'll associate themselves with him to make it look like they aren't useless

"draw me a reimu on a unicorn xD"

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>>10352615
people are insecure about their art so they get defensive or attack anyone that tries to present an earnest face, or encouragment

[Anonymous No.]

>>10352525
But Magister

[Anonymous No.]

>>10352525
>pencil and paper
LOL, listen to this scrub.

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[Anonymous No.]

>>10353237
Do you ever change style?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353363
Why should he?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353363

i should . . .

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353363
I hope he doesn't. These are just too cute. ;_;

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353363
That's always such a stupid remark. Do you ever change your entire personality? Of course it's possible, but it takes an incredible amount of time.

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>>10353376
Just saying, it's a good practice, not that I don't like your current one, but it's too simplistic and you'll never improve that way. Simple cute drawings are low tier.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353385
not really, drawing is very versatile

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353385
That was incredibly stupid.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353391
Of course it is, but it still requires learning. You can't get up in the morning and just decide you want to 180 without working at it.

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>>10353399
So you're telling him "don't learn to draw"?

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>>10353402
No, I'm just irked at people asking someone to change their style on a dime. It's not that simple. I'm not saying he can't improve, but changing styles is like changing faces--one way or another, you have to take the time to learn a different one.

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>>10353411
Uh, no, changing styles is quite easy actually, dunno what you're saying.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353418
I don't think so. It's easy enough to emulate, but actually changing the core of how you think? That's much harder. Anyone can do an impression of an artist, that doesn't make it second nature.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353418
Then why do most artists develop only one style and never deviate from it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353439
Because you don't know which ones they had before.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353430
I don't think you understand this conversation.

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>>10353441
I know I'm making the assumption that >>10353363 was COMPLAINING about his style(maybe he wasn't, who knows), but it still stands.

>>10353446
Artists grow, that's a given. It's going to change, but usually not because they make the conscious effort to be 'different'. They just try to improve, and the style changes as a result. Artists that have taken the time to develop two completely different styles are pretty fucking rare. It's like thinking as a different person.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353399
>>10353385
anyone o n 4chan changes their entire personality the moment before they talk to anyone not on 4chan.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353458
That's an example of emulation. You just put up a facade.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353454
The keyword here is "emulate", a good artist should be able to emulate other styles effortlessly, do we agree? And an artist should easily be able implement certain aspects of other styles to improve their own, yes?
Take >>10353237
What if he had used a different brush? different coloring? more detail, etc. It's not hard, it's just an amplification of his own style, telling him to not experiment with it is just wrong.

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>>10353458
I think you need to think of personality more holistically. Posting on 4chan and talking to someone in person aren't different personalities but are different aspects on the same one. He has one personality capable of presenting himself in two seemingly different ways.

Creating a distinction between how he interacts online and in real life is artificial at best, he is still the same person in both situations, I would say.

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>>10353464
I never said he shouldn't experiment. I also believe that just using a different brush or more detail isn't going to make it a different style. It would be the same style...with more detail, and lines done with a different brush. My definition of 'style' is probably more radical than your own, so we probably aren't going to agree there.

'Different coloring' is definitely one of those things an artist usually cannot just decide to switch out to on the fly and requires some study, because everyone perceives color differently. Again, he could certainly TRY it, but it's going to be emulation until it becomes his preferred method of drawing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353481
Are you even an artist yourself? seriously, it's not even such a big deal, it has nothing to do with personality or whatever.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353491
Yeah, I am.

It doesn't have anything to do with personality, you're right. I'm just likening it to personalities, because 1) They take time to develop, and 2) People generally don't have 2 of them.

A style is something you cultivate over a long period.

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>>10353499
I disagree then, an artist should be able to draw whatever the hell they want in any style they want. But everyone has their own style which they are willing to always draw with and which they are more proficient with, but that doesn't mean it either hard or impossible to draw something with a different style, even if badly done. So yes, there is a certain style which you develop and are particularly better using, but you should be able to draw ANYTHING. To answer >>10353439 too.

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>>10353542
I said something like that before, sure. He could draw whatever he wants, but it would still be in his style. Changing his style enough that he becomes unrecognizable all of a sudden makes it something that is -not- his style, and rather an emulation of someone else's. If he were to take parts of another style and eventually incorporate them into his own OVER A CONSIDERABLE PERIOD OF TIME, then it's still his own signature way of drawing.

Like I said, I think my opinion of what a 'style' is just fundamentally different from yours, so we aren't likely to agree.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353575
Sure, that's it.
Case closed then.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353542
But then what's the point of asking him to change? Just for the sake of changing? I don't see what it would bring. It's not like he can't improve by bringing in more complicated poses, situations, etc.

Emulating another style would only change the surface and he wouldn't suddenly be better at anatomy or composition. It would be superficial.

Unless I'm missing something, you're asking this in his interest right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353590
The point is he has the potential to do better things, if you don't experiment, if you're not more ambitious, you'll get stuff with something relatively mediocre. It's not about changing, but improving.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353606
Experiment != Changing style

He can improve within his current style, and he can improve the style he has overall. Nobody ever implied that they didn't want him to improve.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10353627
Did you even read the whole conversation? holy shit. I'm going to bed.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10354364
Cute, I'd like to see it further elaborated upon. Like cleaning it up and going further into detail.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10354364
cursebeard a cute

[Anonymous No.]

>>10330284
cc0033/cccccc/6495ED
I tried, sorry it's all rushed orz

[Anonymous No.]

>>10355681
Those colors kind of fit her pretty well.

[Anonymous No.]

I hope someone makes a nice #100 thread OP picture.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358120
Its done and ready. Should I make it now?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358126
This is thread is just about to kick the bucket.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358134
Show it first

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358134
Assuming a new thread comes into /jp/, this one gets kicked out. Ok then, give me a minute. Exporting .png.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358126
>>10358134
>>10358137
>>10358139
Wait for the thread to die.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358169
See you guys in a few hours then. Stay dry, /jp/.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358126
Which one is it this time?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358215
Its an old request for Tewi being sexually_suggestive with carrots. Kinda.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358315
No thank you.
Thought it would be something already posted.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358330
Why should it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358315
If it's good enough then I'm all for it. It has to be SFW though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358358
Because it should be about the already scarce OC.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358358
What gives you the right to make the OP image?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358386
Deliveries to requests are OC too, mind you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358394
Yes, and? I'm saying that OP images should be about what was produced in them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358393
There is no right. I will post a new thread if no one makes another thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358406
What? The new OP is almost always a new picture. It's been this way since...well, forever. It's not like /a/ threads.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358418
Clearly you haven't been here long enough.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358425
It's always been a new image.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10358406
Nothing good was made in this thread
>>10358432
Post your shitty drawing as OP and get on with it. Probably Magister again.

[Anonymous No.]

Potential new OP here. Its a new picture, just to clarify.

[Anonymous No.]

Wait for a bit before making a new thread, dammit. It's not like people here can shit out OC every other hour or so, let alone quality ones. Best to give some room to breathe and enough time to make new OCs, especially so since it's for the 100th thread.

[Anonymous No.]

Fuck, I went to sleep just to see this thread dead and replaced with a new one when I wake up, but somehow it's still hanging at the very bottom of the page 10.