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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Video: youtu.be/DV7-q7X8WRA

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>>10872227

>> No.10913327

>Video: youtu.be/DV7-q7X8WRA

Why would you put that in the original post?

Not that I didn't enjoy it.

>> No.10913331

Lisp is the most powerful programming language.

>> No.10913347

>>10913327
Because OC goes in an OC thread.

>> No.10913350

>>10913331
How do I write a routine that will takes three numbers and print the sum of the squares of the two largest numbers, using only ifs/conds?

I need someone to walk me through this...

>> No.10913404

>>10913327
Attention whoring, what else?

>> No.10913418
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10913418

i made animation

>> No.10913444

>>10913418
The animation is good and fluent, but you'll have to work on the art. You could make some pretty cute stuff.
Also what's the circle floating behind her?

>> No.10913513

>>10913350
You could do 3 lines, if the max of the numbers is the first, square that one and add to the result of squaring the max of the other two.
The other lines would be similar except you'd check of the 2nd was the max
And if the the 3rd was the max

>> No.10913549

>>10913444
she was supposed to jump through hops but i failed to animate it

>> No.10913551

I drew Aya a couple of time ago:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t_MwSNqJBv0

>> No.10913559

What's some good music for drawing? The stuff I usually listen to is kinda getting old.

>> No.10913584

>>10913559
Benny Goodman Live at Carnegie Hall.

>> No.10913588

>>10913350
Haven't done anything in years, but gave it a shot.

var square1 = number1*number1
var square2 = number2*number2
var square3 = number3*number3

if (square1 > square2)
if (square2 > square3) {
var summysum square1+square2
print summysum
break
}
if (square2 < square3) {
var summysum square1+square3
print summysum
break
}

And so on... I hope this helps you keep going. You can't forget to add a response should the user input the same number twice in different variables.

>> No.10913601

>>10913588
I meant in Lisp.

I went for

(define (sum-of-two-largest-squares x y z)
(cond ((and (> x y) (> y z)) (+ (* x x) (* y y)))
((and (> y z) (> z x)) (+ (* y y) (* z z)))
((and (> z x) (> x y)) (+ (* z z) (* x x)))
)

but it doesn't work. I've probably messed up the logic somewhere or screwed up nesting, but I can't figure it out.

>> No.10913617

>>10913601
The logic looks fine. I think you forgot one closing bracket for the defint at the end.

>> No.10913632

>>10913601
You didn't take into account all the combinations of the 2nd part of the and statements.
Use another conditional inside to determine which of the remaining numbers is bigger.

It would be easier if you just wrote a function that find the largest of 3 numbers, and the largest of 2 numbers, and then used those functions as I said before.

>> No.10913639

>>10913418
I like the animated circle behind her. It reminds me of an eldritch halo of dark energy coming from the foulest dimensions.

>> No.10913664
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10913664

I was trying to paint more space ships. I think my colors are kind of screwy and I'm losing motivation.

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10913671

>>10913664
I like it.
Keep going

>> No.10913672

(define (2squares x y z)
(cond [(= (3max x y z) x) (+ (square x) (square (2max y z)))]
I think you can see how the rest would look
Ideally, there is no need for conditionals in this function, you can just abstract away the differences between the 3 conditions because they are near identical. I'm not sure how far you are with that.

>> No.10913754

I swear if Mags is fucking up this thread again I don't know what I'm going to do...

>> No.10913749

Whatever you do you need to evaluate 6 conditions, unless you plan to do it by elimination.

A+B:
A >= B && B >= C
B >= A && A >= C

A+C:
A >= C && C >= B
C >= A && A >= B

B+C:
B >= C && C >= A
C >= B && B >= A

A = B = C being the distant 7th.

>> No.10913766

>>10913749
You are using inclusive comparisons, A=B=C is already covered.

>> No.10913781

>>10913766
Yup, still made it that way assuming that he might want to improve his functions by giving it the ability to state which one of the values were used etc.

Might also be the default return though.

>> No.10913810

>>10913754
>I don't know what I'm going to do...
Why not make some OC instead of having a highschool grudge on some artist?

>> No.10913838

>>10913749
And if you are going to do it that way, you are repeating the evaluation of the first comparison, if you used neste conditionals you'd only compute it once.

>> No.10913918

>>10913810
Stop causing drama, please.

>> No.10913982

Speaking of which, since it's a drawing thread..

Meido omitted, shouldn't we /jp/sies make our own official loli? Maybe if we think hard enough about picturing her then people will start to think seriously about making related stuff like games, VNs, or even eroges.

>> No.10913990

>>10913664
Hah, dude. Your space ship is in stratosphere.

>> No.10914020

>>10913982
Why not just draw your own loli here? >>10871786

>> No.10914049

>>10914020
Me? No, I can't draw sh*t and even if I tried it would be a total outrage to the loli sleeping within my mind, assuming there is one.

>> No.10914223

>>10913551
Jesus Christ my lord and savior. Nice work bro, looks almost like Sanic!

>> No.10914237

>>10913754
Good thing you brought him up then. I'm glad to see that shitposters just prove that they are the ones causing issues.

>> No.10914299

>>10914237
Why are YOU bringing this up now? Ah, right, it's because you are the shitposter here.

>> No.10914308

>>10914299
Nice try, but you've already been outed.

>> No.10914333

>>10914308
shut up Mags

>> No.10914469

>>10913559

Try this out--it's pretty chill...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oRUA8DtYqTU&feature=BFa&list=UL5d4E5viRyGo

>> No.10914498

What's this garbage link in the OP? How is that Otaku Culture?

It's always been obvious that a lot of people in here are just using this thread without using /jp/ to pimp their wares, but having that crap in the OP is too shitty. Plus I've seen his shit in here before.

What's the deal?

>> No.10914505

>>10914498
Original content is original content. He's a shitty drawing otaku so deal with it.

>> No.10914518

>>10914505

The link, man. The LINK.

>> No.10914522

>>10914518
Oh, no idea then.

>> No.10914531
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>>10914522

Epic counter-sages.

FUCK "/jp/"

>> No.10914803

>>10914498
Music makes me happy and I give it away to others for free, so I thought it might make them happy.

>> No.10915356

>>10913664
Don't lose motivation please. you a cool

>> No.10915369

>>10914498
>garbage link
I liked it pal.

>> No.10915655

>>10913664
I love you. Keep up the good work.
I also love skies and the color you chose for that one. I would love to have a wallpaper sized picture of your art.

>> No.10916144

I wish Wink posted in these threads.

>> No.10916585
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10916585

>>10913418
made another animation

>> No.10916595

>>10916585
eww she's licking my screen

>> No.10916617

>>10916585

cute

lines should be cleaner for animation though

>> No.10916630

>>10916585
lewd

>> No.10916660

>>10916585
8/10, would nuzzle fang.

>> No.10916780
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10916780

>>10913671
>>10915655
>>10915356

Thank you for the kind words, this isn't the same image but it's in a similar fashion. I have trouble with rendering however so everything I make ends up looking like half baked impressionism... I wonder if soft pastels can be sold and delivered to my house.

>> No.10917367

>>10916585
This might be really cute if it weren't so lewd. Love it, keep practicing anon. Also maybe you could've added a wet monitor and saliva trail effect there.

>> No.10917780

>>10917367
>This might be really cute if it weren't so lewd.
>add a wet monitor and saliva trail

That's pretty contradictory.

>> No.10917823

We only appreciate works of real shut-ins, so please state if you are one if you post your works.

>> No.10917847
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10917847

I tried to fix things based on what some others said last thread...hopefully this is better?

>> No.10917873

>>10917847
Looks great dude, though I wish you'd draw a loli every once in a while. What program are you using by the way, SAI?

>> No.10917891

>>10917847
I like the one in the middle.

>> No.10917896

>>10916780
It's like it came from a children's book!

>> No.10917938
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10917938

Nitori's new 13.5 look.

>> No.10917966
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10917966

I drew Tenma eating a sandwich for some reason.
I don't know how to draw bread.

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10917974

>>10917966
>>10917938
that's pretty fucking kawaii, dude

>> No.10917976

>>10917966
Looks like bread to me.

>> No.10917981

>>10917966
Looks better than American bread.

>> No.10917990

>>10917976
What would be in a Tengu sandwich?
Besides oneself, Aya and Hatate.

>> No.10918056
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10918056

>>10913982
I tried.

>> No.10918081

>>10917938
That can't be 13.5 Nitori, she doesn't look like a famine victim.

>> No.10918084

>>10918056
And you did well, but those bony hips are ugly and she's flat, fits well /jp/ avatar.
Mind making one with some meat on and tits, pretty please?

>> No.10918187

>>10917873
but there is loli there. the one on the very right is flat as a washboard.
though she sometimes grows a dick that's thicker and longer than her leg

>> No.10918227
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10918227

Drawing my not-Leonmitchelli wannabee again.

>> No.10918237

>>10918187
You don't say?
Is there a reference point for this data?

>> No.10918333

>>10918237
that's one of his oc characters, lily.

as for reference point, medicalwhiskey.com/?p=8681

>> No.10918376

>>10917847

VERY improved very good

>> No.10918757

>>10917847
Whoa, nice!
Two new original characters? Do they have names?

>> No.10919868

>>10916585
this is super fluid, is this rotoscoping?

>> No.10920264
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>>10913321
I like your works.

>> No.10920579

Would anyone like me to start archiving all of OC in these threads and upload each thread as a .zip file on mediafire or something?

I looked around and it doesn't seem like anyone does it anymore.

>> No.10920680

>>10920579
p-please! It's jaypee's precious history!

>> No.10922084

I think i'll make myself a new home here. /i/ is dead, /vg/ and /a/ are boring, not /jp/.

>> No.10922095

>>10922084
/i/ is deader than dead, it would be nice if it were faster or shipainter worked. Hope 2d little girls are otaku culture.

>> No.10922268

>>10919868
Its just a lot of frames.

>> No.10922518

>>10922268
Oh I thought you traced over footage a bit, I kinda do that because I can't animate for shit

>> No.10923270

>>10917847
You aren't an otaku and you don't love 2D characters. You will never ever truly love 2D things. I hate you. Die. Go away already, please.

>> No.10923273

>>10923270
Please seek help.

>> No.10923286

Magister is the new Littleshrimp

>> No.10923406
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10923406

Tried designing and drawing a dragon for the first time. Does it look cool?

>> No.10923488

>>10923270
>draws 2d a whole lot.
>has his own made 2d waifus (himari) and 2d self inserts (lily).
>faggot claims he doesn't love 2d and isn't an otaku, something having a 2d waifu and a 2d self insert character is like the definition of.

you seem to have problems. i suggest a healthy dose of anti butthurt spray. apply it directly to inflamed butt regions.

>> No.10923720

>>10923270
Epic

>> No.10923749

>>10923406

It honestly looks like something I'd see on deviantart. I mean that in the most offensive way possible. I'm sorry, Anon

>> No.10923752

>>10923406
it looks depressed ;_;

>> No.10923855

>>10923406
Well, I'll comment about technique here, because I am very unimaginative when it comes to cool things.

You should try and focus on having cleaner lines, they are way too chicken-scratch. Have more deliberation to them in terms of positioning and weighting.

Chicken scratching is when you mindlessly put down a lot of lines until one of them looks right; ideally you want it to look right with as little lines as possible.

>> No.10923959

Have a look at these pages, /jp/ artists, and become motivated, inspired, or feel good about yourselves.

http://zip.2chan.net/11/futaba.htm
http://zip.2chan.net/14/futaba.htm

>> No.10923966

Can people please post their bandcamp/soundclouds?

I really want to hear some chiptune stuff.

Also person who uses milkytracker for their stuff, holy moly, it looks hard to use.

>> No.10924163

>>10923966
That was oddly specific.
soundcloud.com/phenomics

>> No.10924486
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10924486

Can someone here draw me a cute Youmu pouting, please?

>> No.10924493 [DELETED] 

As long as Magister's pics are in this thread I cannot calm down.

He is not only interested in 2D. He doesn't really love it and he likes socializing. If I could I would ruin his life right now.

>> No.10924514

>>10924486
requests go to /a/ friend

>> No.10924600

/jp/ - shitty non-japanese art general

>> No.10924691
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10924691

I sketched a Kappa with horribly anatomically incorrect hips.

>> No.10924713

>>10923855
Hm, I see. You aren't the first person that I've heard that from, so I suppose I ought to work exceptionally hard to mend that issue as best I can since I tend to use the shitty chickscratch all the time. Thanks for the advice, anon.

>>10923752
He lost his wife in a horrible car accident recently, he's trying his hardest to deal with the pain. ;_;

>> No.10924806

>>10924691
Her face is really well done and I like the hips too but the leg facing the viewer looks plain bad to me.

>> No.10924806,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10924493
If you're on /jp/ then you must like socializing too. Everyone does. No one can completely be alone.

>> No.10924832

>>10924713
Just remember that every mark you put on the paper is important and you have all the time in the world to do it!

>> No.10924840

>>10924832
I usually chicken scratch the shit out of a canvas when I'm sketching a pose, and then I go over the sketch on a new layer. Is this a bad thing to do too?

>> No.10924849

>>10924840
Well, it doesn't really matter how you do it as long as the end result looks good. My advice is more suited for the final product, really.

>> No.10924874

>>10924840
>I usually chicken scratch
Yes that's bad.
Control over your lines is important.

>> No.10924875

>>10924840
That's the same exact thing, I do. I just use that to sketch out a pose, then paint over that on a brand new layer and touch it up there. I never seen it as a bad thing, either.

>> No.10924929

>>10924691

well at least you identified you own problems but why in the hell did you not fix them mid in progress I don't understand

>> No.10924945
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>>10924806
So I was told by another artist friend.
I'd love to be able to move the entire midsection a few centimeters to the right, but alas.

I also doodled some more Tenma while in the thralls of insomnia last night. Need to get better with mature ladies and keeping on model. Would probably help if I HAD a defined model for her.

>> No.10924955

>>10924929
>but why in the hell did you not fix them mid in progress I don't understand
Maybe he drew them anatomically incorrect purposefully? People who draw big tits do it of their own accord, if if they know that it's wrong, this is probably no different.

>> No.10925008

>>10924929
Because 99% of the time I do not notice thse things until I'm done. And in that specific case, there was not room on the page to fix it properly, hence I moved on to something new.

>> No.10925008,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10924806,1
why the fuck would you bump this

>> No.10925008,2 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925008,1
You have a problem with original content?

>> No.10925008,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>10924806,1
Why do you assume that people want to socialize just because they're posting in a message board?

>> No.10925008,4 [INTERNAL] 

>>10924806,1
What about lurkers?

I visit /jp/ to read, not to talk. That's what the ghost board is for. I get to comment on the threads I read.

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10925200

>>10924691
Just what am I doing with my evening.

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>>10925200
I think the legs are what's making it look weird. Her right leg is much thicker than the other.

>> No.10925246

>>10924945
You are really good with faces.

>> No.10925395

>>10925239
>>10925200
Not sure how to feel about this, but the way to fix it would be to make the left leg thicker and not taper a terrible amount the closer it gets to the viewer.

>>10925246
Thank you, I still need to work on staying on-model at least with characters that aren't inherently adorable.

>> No.10925395,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925008,2
well since you asked

if i wanted original content i would browse deviantart and these threads really have jack shit to do with the board

i could record myself going balls deep in your mom and post it up on soundcloud in this thread without the janitor blinking

its not like i actually give a shit but these are no different than neet or trade threads where a group of people have set up camp with a general thread to discuss board unrelated content with the justification that its actually relevant just because the posters are on /jp/ (that is as stupid as it sounds)

being creative is great but original content for its own sake contributes nothing and people shouldnt cock ride it

most of these posters would be better served by posting in /ic/, /g/, /lit/, /mu/ etc unless theyre just starved for attention (they are)

>> No.10925395,2 [INTERNAL] 

and thats how it is brah

>> No.10925395,3 [INTERNAL] 

>safe shitposting YET AGAIN

>> No.10925395,4 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925395,1
I actually agree with safe for once.

>> No.10925638 [DELETED] 

I don't suppose anyone is willing to mentor a new artist would they? I have been trying to learn from my favorite Pixiv artists but they are usually too busy to even respond or speak to me most of the time. They claim that I have a lot of promise though, not to try to toot my own horn.

>> No.10925638,1 [INTERNAL] 

Thank you for bumping this. These are still the only good threads in /jp/ like 10 years later or whatever.

>> No.10925638,2 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925638,1
Are you being ironic?
How is shitty original content and attention whoring /jp/-related? Magister just makes these threads to get his e-penis sucked.

>> No.10925638,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925638,2
Of all the things in the universe to care about, and it's that?

Who gives a shit, nerd.

>> No.10925876

>>10925638
Post some shit.

>> No.10925969

>>10925638
>but they are usually too busy to even respond or speak to me most of the time
No one wants to waste time with a beginner unless they get paid too. (assuming you're one)

Start by learning your basics, lines, shapes, perspective etc before trying to learn anime art.

>> No.10925990

New song
soundcloud.com/phenomics/if-i-cant-have-you-then-nobody

>> No.10925990,1 [INTERNAL] 

if anything these threads actually harm the board

they are vortexes that isolate the little bit of content which otherwise would contribute to on topic threads that end up being nothing but rehashed discussion and image dumps

instead of

>el sex with youmu thread
>>image dumping
>>tohos are girls lol
>>image dumping
>>hey look i drew her the softest lol
>>thats cool :3

we get

>el sex with youmu thread
>>image dumping
>>tohos are girls lol
>>image dumping
>>more image dump

because the drawing goes to the oc thread

you could argue that people come here for critique and posters in other threads are not as likely to be able to offer it because they are there for the character/topic and not to provide anatomy/programming/production tips but if people really wanted useful advice they would go to the dedicated board for it

you could also argue that content that wouldnt fit into other threads wouldnt get posted and we would therefore lose content but why the fuck would you post it on /jp/ if its not related to any threads that exist or could be made

you could also argue that these threads make it convenient to view content thats being created but there is no justification in that and you should just fucking browse the board if you care

qed

ps these threads really are shit

>> No.10926049 [DELETED] 

>>10925876
Would you seriously consider me if I did?

>>10925969
I already know that stuff.

>> No.10926049,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925990,1
I don't feel like browsing /jp/ anymore. I just want to see the original content that some of our cute artists create.

>> No.10926078

>>10923966
>chiptune
I don't make music often, but I used to play around in LSDJ and other trackers lot.

https://soundcloud.com/z411/ballerina

>> No.10926099

>>10926049
Really?
Post your work then, I'm curious about your skill.
Are the pixiv guys you contacted nips?

>> No.10926099,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10926049,1
sorry homie if you dont browse the board then “our” is the wrong word

>> No.10926114 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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>>10926099
Yes. I speak with a couple of different Japanese artists and watch one of their broadcasts on live.nicovideo.jp/ whenever it's up. Right now I'm actually working on a story for him for a potential doujinshi project.

In regards to my own work, I don't have much to show for except a couple of drawings but I worked on them for many hours. This is what I'm currently working on though. I recently finished filling in the base colors. I really, really want to do as best as I can on the rest of it.

>> No.10926164

>>10926114
Ooh its Okuu guy.

>Right now I'm actually working on a story for him for a potential doujinshi project.
Interesting.

You're off to a decent start.
You just need to practice a lot of anatomy.
It feels like you're winging some stuff while still trying hard. Like at the hand on the breast.

Try Loomis or Figure Drawing - Design and invention, great stuff for constructing bodies.

>> No.10926188

>>10926114

Someone already mentioned the anatomy stuff so I won't bother with that. There are a couple of other points that you can improve on though. I assume this is not done with a tablet because it looks like pentool with simple brush stroke. If you want to continue doing digital stuff I highly recommend getting a tablet like wacom if you can afford it otherwise huion is pretty good now too. Block in some color and do some quick shading so there's more to comment on.

>> No.10926194 [DELETED] 

>>10926188
It is done with a tablet though... ;_;
And it's exactly that, a wacom bamboo ;_;

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10926232

To the anon who did all those wonderful little girls, someone uploaded the blonde with braids on Gelbooru not too long ago. Not sure if you wanted it to be there, but... I guess it is kind of an achievement.

>> No.10926237

>>10926194
It looks very stiff, like you did each line individually rather than flow through them.
Especially noticeable at the hair

>> No.10926237,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925990,1
>>but if people really wanted useful advice they would go to the dedicated board for it

That is bull because all this boils down to is the act of giving a shit. If you want useful advice, then you will share your 2hu remix with the people that gives the biggest shit about it. That just happens to be /jp/.

Also that line of yours suggests that the dedicated boards are bigger experts at their topic or something (and thus they will give more "useful" advice) but you should know that's bullshit when it comes to 4chan. They're experts in all manners of shitposting relating to their board topic, you mean.

/v/ doesn't know shit about video games, /jp/ doesn't know shit about otaku culture, /fit/ doesn't know shit about fitness, /a/ doesn't know shit about anime, and so on. They just happen to shitpost the most about those topics.

>> No.10926287

Why delete all your posts?

>> No.10926291

>>10926287
His westerner art does not compare to glorious nippon art so he had to delete them out of shame.

>> No.10926351
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10926351

Something like this? It's actually kind of hard to just wing this pose.

>> No.10926351,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10926237,1
i cant even tell if youre being serious gay!bar

/jp/ cares about toho and knows jack shit about production and cares even less

people that care about music production look to talk about it on the music board not /jp/

im not even going to respond to the claim that there arent high level subject expert asdlords on topic appropriate boards on 4chan

>> No.10926351,2 [INTERNAL] 

Sometimes I just want to contribute back to the board that has given me some interesting/funny (on a good day)/cute pictures.

Would I like to be told that it's a good picture and that I'm a good artist? Sure.

But it's enough to know that someone out there has possibly saved an image of mine and that the circle of content consumption/production in the community is complete. I'm willing to bet some other people feeling similarly.

>> No.10926351,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>10926351,1
I don't think /mu/ discusses making music, they mostly just listen. To the best of my knowledge, anyway.

>> No.10926428

>>10926232
what was the artist's tag?

>> No.10926477

>>10926428
It's not tagged to an artists name. Just "drawfag".

>> No.10926579
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10926579

>>10926477

some of my stuff on there is tagged with that, I hate that phrase it's so stupid.

>> No.10926677
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10926677

I have coloured the little girl.

Building up on my work one layer at a time. I have to say, it's done me good.
Even though the only noticeable development is the way I colour the hair, but hey, it's a start.

>> No.10926677,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10926351,2
thats unironically fucking spectacular share your image in a related thread instead of in the original content© thread

>>10926351,3
no, yes

>> No.10926677,2 [INTERNAL] 

What about my gay fanfiction about sanic that I wrote?? If I don't have OC thread then how am I supposed to whore myself out? Check mate faggots.

>> No.10926840

>>10926579
That's pretty much one of the downsides of posting anonymously, I guess.

>> No.10926869
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10926869

Another day, another koishi

Any critics will be heavily apreciated

>> No.10926886

>>10926840
the upside being, if you don't have a name, you usually don't get autistic faggots following you like stench follows a hobo, who shit on you and your works over nothing, usually resorting to creating imaginary faults because there aren't any real ones, like this faggot >>10924493 >>10923270

>> No.10927140 [DELETED] 

>>10926886
Magister pls go, you're a shitty artist anyway.

>> No.10927264

>>10926886
I don't even like Magister but I agree. I'd become upset if people started hating the _bitch.png guy.

Although I hate Magister because he supposedly draws lolis who look absolutely nothing like lolis in any remote way, so it probably doesn't matter if he has a name or not.

>> No.10927333

>>10927140
Those posts reminds me of the sand castle syndrome, when kids would destroy something they know they can't make. All types of art are not for everyone I can underestand that, but actively showing your hate is not good either or its plain shitposting i don't know. Also i don't like those who worship magister. I like magisters characters and drawings but they usually have some flaws as those resent ones had very bad ear plasment as mentioned in the /ic/ thread.

>> No.10927367

>>10925990
>soundcloud.com/phenomics/if-i-cant-have-you-then-nobody
>Sorry! We can't find that sound.
O-ok.

>soundcloud.com/phenomics
>Sorry! We can't find that user.
What's going on? Is it like this for everyone else as well?

>> No.10927369

>>10927367
Works for me.

>> No.10927379

>>10927369
Hmm, odd. Guess it's just me then.

>> No.10927399

>>10927333
>the sand castle syndrome, when kids would destroy something they know they can't make.
No one does that. That sounds like that lame "if you can't do better, then you can't judge it" argument.

>> No.10927433

>>10927399
But I never said that, i endorse criticism as I said and I hate when artists get buthurt and say the you can't do any better thing. But some of those posts are complete unnecessary hate some say why, like the big breasted lolis and that's good but the magister sucks because he is not devoted to 2D are ither shitposts or complete jealous hate.

>> No.10927499

>>10927379
Nope, didn't work for me as well. Maybe it's a region thing?

>> No.10927613

>>10927333
Have you ever considered that people hate him because he is mostly looking for attention and has something like a real-life and not because of the quality of his posts? If you look around then you see others who have as much potential as him to become good, but does anyone hate them? No, because no one knows really anything about what they do outside of this board.

If you follow Magister for a while then you can see that he's just trying to look like a nice guy, but below that the only thing that matters is how large his e-penis can grow with each post he makes. Look with what kinds of people he talks and then think about it again.

>> No.10927632
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10927632

Guess the Touhou

>> No.10927668

>>10927613
>If you follow Magister for a while
Stop doing this. I don't know anything about a single shitposted about person on /jp/ because I don't go following people off 4chan. I wouldn't even know Magister's pen name if posters didn't mention it, as he doesn't use a trip or sign his images.

>>10927632
Lily is the only 2hu with long blonde hair and angel wings

>> No.10927685

>>10927613
>he is mostly looking for attention and has something like a real-life
i never noticed those nor cared about that. you sure you aren't e-stalking him too hard?

as long as he doesn't bring any of those so called "looking for attention" or "real life" here or to his posts on pixiv/medical whiskey/etc, i don't give a shit even if he parties every night.

>> No.10927731

>>10927685
So you don't mind making him feel better about himself by praising him about his pictures even if he is that kind of person?

I get the feeling that is kinda unfair for the other artists here who try to spend every free minute of their lives to get better at drawing.

>> No.10927790
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10927790

Coming along.
Most productive I've been in months, just doing crappy 30min sketches.

>> No.10927798

>>10927731
Nobody spends every free minute drawing, what are you on?
You'd go mad in a week without the occasional video game or book break. 2 hours a day is perfectly normal and reasonable unless you're blocked/inspired.

>> No.10927825

>>10927613
I would have no idea who Magister was if people didn't throw shitfits about him all the time. Well, that's not quite true, I knew he played 12.8. But I would never have known that he posted in the draw threads if you and the maginigger guy didn't complain about him endlessly.

>>10927731
If anyone has spent six thousand hours a year practicing their drawing for the last three years and aren't producing amazing work, they should honestly just give up and go the fuck home.

>> No.10927857

>>10927731
i don't give a shit. i like what he draws, and if it wasn't for faggots like you he'd be treated like every other drawfag here. some criticism, maybe a few praises if quality's good, the end, move on to the next picture.

if anything, people who complain about him actually give him the attention, while derailing the drawthread.

>> No.10927950
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>>10918757
The one with really long hair is Panda, and the short-haired one is Mimi. I've drawn Panda a couple times, but this is the first time I've drawn her friend.

>>10927264
Is...that really a reason? I have my reasons for not drawing my characters quite as loli as I used to(mostly because I'd like to make a manga out of my characters some day and it's hard to pitch anything when all the characters are ten).

>>10927333
>I like magisters characters and drawings but they usually have some flaws as those resent ones had very bad ear plasment as mentioned in the /ic/ thread.
Right, and I would hope that when people point these things out to me, I can fix them. I redrew a lot of things after I got that critique, and I think it looks a lot better, so I really appreciate when people have things to say that AREN'T 'nice' or 'looks good'.

>>10927685
He isn't stalking me very well, then. You don't have to try very hard to find out that I am and have been NEET for a long time now.

>>10923270
>>10924493
>>10927613
I don't usually give your posts the time of day; you can slander me all you want, it doesn't bother me. However, I take personal offense when you insult my wife and daughters like that, thank you very much.

>> No.10927964

>>10927950
>I am and have been NEET for a long time now.
Uh, no you're not. You've been doing commissions, so technically you have a job. Please don't try to fit in too hard.

>> No.10928012

>>10927964
now you're just grasping at straws. you lost, give up and hang your head in shame as you're expected to.

>> No.10928026

>>10927950
Do you like talking to annoying DA idiots?

>> No.10928031 [DELETED] 

>>10927950
Your "children" are just a tool for you to enlarge your e-penis and you don't love them as much as others here love 2D. Say what you want but I doubt anyone here except that one fan of you believes you.

>> No.10928035

>>10927950
I know what those black areas hide and I know I'm going to like it.

>> No.10928043

>>10927950
You don't love 2D as much as me.

>> No.10928045

>>10928012
Err, what? >>10927964 was my first post in this thread. Or did you think that it's not possible for multiple people to converse in the same discussion?

If having a part-time or freelance job can invalidate your NEET status, I don't see any reason why doing commissions shouldn't bring the same effect. After all, all those activities brings you money from providing services to someone else. And anyway it's not like not being a NEET is such a bad thing. It's when you try too hard to fit in and become a hypocrite in the process just for the sake of fitting in is when things start to become unpleasant.

>> No.10928049

Can you guys stop making every OC thread into a Magister thread? Stop bullying him, he's drawing well. Don't force your preferences upon him.

>> No.10928077

>>10928045
Self-employment isn't the same thing as employment. Next you're going to argue that because I sometimes go play guitar in the street and make a little bit of money off of it, I have a job too.

>> No.10928086

>>10928077
Well, you do have a job, but it only lasts for as long as you play that guitar earning money. Then you are back to NEET.

>> No.10928094

>>10928077
So entrepreneurs are NEETs now? What about all those normies in those startup companies? Or those nerds who earn a living through running their own e-commerce site? They're all self-employed now aren't they?

>> No.10928101

>>10928094
What about those underage kids who make money off minecraft mods through donations and those gay adfly links?

They're having a job too, right? Because they make money.

>> No.10928107

>>10928101
Yes, now we're on the same page.

>> No.10928109

>>10928094
You know very well the difference between founding your own company and making small-time money off of bullshit like playing in the streets. Stop being a smartass.

>> No.10928136

>>10928107
yeah, i understand you now. you're an autistic retard who should be forbidden from talking to people on the internet.

>> No.10928148

>>10928136
No bullying.

>> No.10928166

It's likely that you guys don't know what a job is. Just making money does not make something a job.

>> No.10928187

>>10928166
Just like just learning something off the Internet doesn't count as the same kind of "education" NEET implies. Otherwise, not one of us would be NEET because simply being here implies information we didn't know of is being absorbed.

>> No.10928195

How the fuck do you guys lineart and color? I can't do it for shit. Annoys the hell out of me because I can't do it properly.
Anyone have something useful that will help me improve?

>> No.10928200

>>10928187
No one here is a NEET, that's the truth.

>> No.10928202

>>10928166
>It's likely that you guys don't know what a job is.
Yes, I'm sure you know a lot more about jobs than me, especially since you have one, Mr. normie.

>> No.10928218

>>10928200

false

>> No.10928236

>>10928218

I for one don't hang around here wasting my time. I learned that the first time I went NEET.

>> No.10928241

>>10926677

>inward legs while arms in a plane stance

It doesn't look cute.

>> No.10928246

>>10928241
It looks cute.

>> No.10928283
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>>10928246

No it's not. Why on earth would anyone stand with legs inward but arms spread out like they're gliding through the air? Legs inward suggests shyness or anxiousness. Not even fake junior idols do that shit. Learn to observe first.

>> No.10928287

>>10928283
>Why on earth would anyone stand with legs inward

It's considered correct posture for women in Asia.

>> No.10928288

>>10928283
I'm pretty sure cute is opinion based and not formulaic. The face isn't that cute but the pose is plenty cute, stop being such a stuck-up douche.

>> No.10928295

>>10928287

Don't cut off my sentence retard...
>>10928288
I'm only talking about the way shes standing, hands are another face and the only reason why he drew it the way he did was because he can't draw hands in a complex way.

>> No.10928305

>>10928049
Then we must get rid of the source of the problem like those bullying kids in Japanese schools do.If Magister leaves then everything will be alright again. Don't like it? Then you should leave too.

>> No.10928316
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>>10928305

Or you could not be a total infant and just stop shitposting him.

>> No.10928317

>>10928295
Hey retard, some people can find things cute that you don't/

>> No.10928322 [DELETED] 

>>10928316
I'm not shitposting, I just want /jp/ to be /jp/ again. And even if I stopped stating my opinion, there would be others because I know I'm by far not the only one who hates him.

>> No.10928329
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10928329

myon~

>> No.10928332

>>10928317

I forgot I'm not on /ic/ as I am only doing a crit to show him what he's doing wrong so he can grow. Be my guest if you want these threads to continue to be a hugbox but the pose is TERRIBLE and he needs to know the difference between legs that are inward like >>10928283 example to outward inward feet where it would be okay to spread your arms.

>> No.10928333

>>10928305
you're the source. therefore you're the problem. and so, we all have to start bullying you until you kill yourself out of /jp/ and go back to /b/ or wherever you're from.

your attitude is so far from taking it easy you're obviously a crossboarder.

>> No.10928355

>>10928333
neo/jp/ pls go

>> No.10928387

>>10928355
no you.

if you can't take it easy, you're the neo/jp/. you can't, as you've proven by constantly bitching about magister apparently not conforming to your social values for no reason.

>> No.10928391

>>10928329

10/10 would use for the "mommy I made this drawing for you" scene in the next saw movie.

>> No.10928400

>>10928391
epic maymay bro teach me to be cool like you pls

>> No.10928404

>>10928400

The fuck are you talking about?

>> No.10928405

>>10928329
do you like my art skillz /jp/?

is it cute?

>> No.10928407

>>10928391
thank you

>> No.10928429

>>10928333
>>10928387
Why can't you just take it easy?

>> No.10928434

>>10928429
why can't you?

>> No.10928442 [DELETED] 

>>10928434
i don't know about >>10928429, but i can't take it easy because of majizzter. while you probably can't take it easy because you're retarded and can't handle others having different opinions.

>> No.10928448

>>10928442
"HUUUUUUUUUURRRRR, I HATE THIS GUY BECAUSE HE DOESN'T CONFORM!!" like what you do to magister isn't an opinion. it's pure shitpost for the sake of derailing a thread.

you're just as judgemental and brainwashed as the normalfags.

>> No.10928450

>>10928434
I'm taking it easy right now!

>> No.10928458 [DELETED] 

>>10928448
and where did i do that exactly? you can't do anything but use strawmans huh.

>> No.10928463

>>10928322

So it's not /jp/ if one guy who posts anon posts his OC art, in the OC drawthread. But because people recognize his style, accuse him of attention whoring?

See how dumb and backwards that sounds?

>> No.10928467

>>10928458
you apparently have a problem with magister (if your "i can't take it easy because of majizzter" cheap shot is any indication), and are all alone with that in here, so by process of elimination you wrote >>10924493 and the like.

>> No.10928473

>>10928448
>you're just as judgemental and brainwashed as the normalfags.
The difference between a 4chan regular and a normalfag is that the 4chan regular washes his brains himself as he pleases.

>> No.10928484 [DELETED] 

>>10928467
``those people's opinion contradicts mine, it must be someone samefagging!'' - you, 2013

nice logic there m8. there's probably 2 at least, maybe 3 different posters ``against'' you, myself included. but whatever, continue believing what you want to believe. delusion is a thing, you know.

>> No.10928492

>>10928484

You are so fanny fettled it's not even funny.

>> No.10928498

>>10928492
pot calling the kettle black, mr blind rage whenever magister is even mentioned.

>> No.10928496

>>10928492
butt-devastated

>> No.10928505

>>10928498

Responding to the wrong guy m8? I wasn't the guy getting ragingly tush tassled whenever Magister posts an image, or mentions his name.

It's a good thing this thread has never changed and these same people keep ruining /jp/ with their clique shitposting faggotry.

>> No.10928522

>>10928519
so you have a job? get the fuck out, you un-neet.

>> No.10928519 [DELETED] 

>>10928505
just doing our job :)

>> No.10928520
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10928520

I'm sensing a lot of negativity in this thread. Please try to calm down and take it easy!

>> No.10928531 [DELETED] 

>>10928522
shitposting is a full time job. just like your job, being a faggot, is also a full time job which requires a lot of skill and endurance.

>> No.10928540

I bet this guy tried to erp with Mags and was shot down, and he's been tooty inturbulated ever since.

>> No.10928549
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10928549

I tried adding some basic coloring to that sketch I did before. It kind of looks like skullgirls. to be honest I don't really like the way skullgirls looks.

>> No.10928565

>>10928549
Thank you for being tasteful about nudity and not making it lewd.

>> No.10928565,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10925990,1
I agree with you, but I think now it's way too late to do anything about it. It's gone over for 111 threads.

>> No.10928580

>>10927950
>Is...that really a reason?
Imagine I was an artist who said I drew dickgirls and dickgirl pornography.
Now imagine all the characters I draw are small hipped, broad shouldered, flat chested, short haired, slightly muscular, manjawed, and have a dick & balls with no vagina.
Further imagine that when questioned about it, I said "that's just my style. I have my reasons for drawing dickgirls like that"

I could give the excuse that I liked fit lolis and buttsex, thus no need for them to have tits and vag, but in the end you'll still think they look like dudes fucking each other.

Imagine I go to post. I put up one of these drawings and write "hey guys, check out this dg". You look to the pic, expecting a girl with a penis. You see a typical one of my drawings instead. Sure you just close it and move on, if you even bothered to click on it, but can you say you weren't a little disappointed?
Finally, imagine one day I say draw a normal girl. You go to look. It's just the same thing as normal, sans dick and with huge balloon tits, so it looks like a post-op transvestite with implants.

Yes, it's a reason.

>> No.10928988

>>10928580
That's way too extreme an example and it doesn't particularly make sense. Claiming to draw one thing then virtually drawing the other gender? They don't look five, but they don't look like milfs, either. There's not even a claim that loli is what is being drawn in most cases, so you only disappoint yourself by assuming an artist is always drawing that same subject.

>> No.10928996

1. You nerd(s) mad
2. Being on /jp/ does not make you a NEET
3. Being a NEET isn't something to be proud of
4. Being an Otaku isn't something to be proud of ( most easterners feel shame in it and know society hates them for it but deals with it anyway, any "Pride" you see an eastern otaku has is probably purely at the particular knowledge that have for their obsession not in being an outcast )
5. Otaku ≠ NEET ( half the people /jp/ "worships" aren't NEETs Idols,ZUN,milk,etc. ) so it shouldn't really matter
6. The boards name is Otaku Culture not NEET Culture


Please remember this when posting or browsing /jp/, have a nice day ^_^

>> No.10929017

>>10928996

1. I mad I still haven't done my reps because I keep browsing this shit site and don't have the balls to go cold turkey.
2. wat?
3. Nah you're just jealous
4. Who the HELL is an otaku these days? Everyone here is Otacool.
5. that shitposter has been hanging out on /v/ for quite some time and probably is most likely you since you went ahead and named dropped milk likes shes relevant in any way.
6. see number 4

>> No.10929049

>>10928988
>They don't look five, but they don't look like milfs, either
There's a point between child and milf, called various things like teenager, 20 something, young adult, etc. Those aren't loli.

>There's not even a claim that loli is what is being drawn in most cases
They draw consistent characters, at least one of which they claim to be a loli.

>Claiming to draw one thing then virtually drawing the other gender?
Claiming to draw a loli but giving her adult hips, an adult face, and giant boobs is pretty much the same thing. The face being the biggest problem, because even if you claim these lolis are intentionally overdeveloped in body, a child's face is nothing like an adult's face.
That guy thinks just making them appear "short" is sufficient to be loli, but their way of doing it makes them look like fat midgets at most. If they said they liked drawing fat midgets then fine, but in no way are anything he draws loli/children/young girls.

>you only disappoint yourself by assuming an artist is always drawing that same subject.
In my example, I didn't draw the same subject all the time either. The point there is, the non-lolis and lolis don't look any different from each other.
Furthermore, the "disappointment" comes from the artist claiming to draw something they did not, not from expecting them to always draw the same thing.

>> No.10929060

>Implying Magister can draw male characters.

>> No.10929078

Already over 200 posts and only a minimal amount of original content... Please someone ban those fucks derailing the thread every time.

>> No.10929085
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10929085

>>10929078
Ok i'll post this touhou I made for 13.5.

>> No.10929124

New Music with the lyrics
soundcloud.com/phenomics/if-i-cant-have-you-then

>> No.10929161

>>10929078
/jp/ is a discussion board, not a pic dump board.

>> No.10929203

>>10929124
Great song. It's a good combination of guitar and chiptune. The part starting at 0:53 is especially good (I love that effect, no clue what it's called).
I don't really like the vocal version, though. Vocals don't go well with chiptunes.

>> No.10929217 [DELETED] 

>>10929078
Yeah ban Magister so we can enjoy the thread again, please.

>> No.10929217,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>10926351,1
>>/jp/ cares about toho and knows jack shit about production and cares even less

That's cool and all, but you look really stupid saying that in this /jp/ thread about 2hu and production. There wouldn't be posts if they didn't care.

Look just admit that you're letting personal bias get in the way of your (usually) logical thinking. You don't like these threads simply because you don't like them.

>> No.10929302
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10929302

more 2hus

>> No.10929306

>>10928565

Thanks but it's actually a real problem when someone comes to me asking for something more explicit and I struggle because of how I like to compose images. I'm sure I'll get over it eventually though, mostly because it's part of my income as a fleeting artist

>> No.10929399

How does one start drawing? I can't draw for shit. I know that you have to learn to draw real people first before drawing anime so you don't screw up proportions.

My plan is to read the book by betty edwards first.

Then study anatomy by drawing/copying people in different poses. When I am confident enough that I can draw people from memory I will read tutorials on how to draw anime.

Do I have the right idea? My biggest concern is that most books seems to focus on copying. But I don't want to be able to draw reality as good as possible, I want to be able to draw OC from memory. Cute girls in different poses without copying anything. How do I do that?

>> No.10929430

>>10929399
My experience is that a combination of the two is best: both copying reality and drawing from your imagination, alternating between the two (or even combining). The exact mix, I don't know, but that's not a big problem.

The most important thing, though, is time. Practicing, being patient but trying to find ways to improve.

>> No.10929499

>>10929399
The more you draw from reality (pictures, copying, etc), the better you will be at drawing from imagination, since you'll get a better understanding of things. Just make sure you really pay attention to what you're looking at instead of just copying.

>> No.10929520

>>10929399

I never went to /s/ until very recently but it's a really great place for female references. I assume the male equivalent board is of a similar fashion. You must learn the basic building blocks that make a person, what makes the proportions work in order to translate them into anime images.

Your best learning will be putting pencil to paper. Draw something first and then try to figure out why it's wrong as you learn from tutorials.

also draw with your shoulder not with your wrist it gives you a freer range of movement and helps with linework because you wont constantly waste time feathering (going back and forth) over a line when you can do it in one confident motion.

>> No.10929528

>>10929203
They're called arpeggios. The gameboy itself is very limited in it's sequencing so instead notes of the chord are played extremely fast sequentially so simulate a chord. I don't much care for my vocals either which is why all my releases have the non vocal tracks included.

>> No.10929539

>>10929399
http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-draw-learn

Start there.

>> No.10929588

>>10929539
>>10929520
>>10929499
>>10929430

Thank you for your replies!

If you are an absolute beginner how long does it take to get decent if I practice every day? How long did it take you?

>> No.10929599

>>10929588

5 years.
>>10916780

Although to be fair I am a complete shut in teaching myself. I'm sure if you went to a school you could cut down on the time it takes significantly.

>> No.10929614

How do I get better with my linework? Drawing smoother/straighter lines, drawing them right with fewer tries/undos, etc... Will even just tracing my own rough drafts enough times help?

>> No.10929621

>>10924514
Oh sorry, I will head there then...

>> No.10929622

>>10929599
>5 years.

Damn. If I started sooner. Kids under my age can draw better than me. When I will finally be able to draw well I will be old. This is depressing.

>> No.10929626

>>10929588
>I practice every day
Practice 4 hours a day seriously and you might be able to pull off decent anime art in 2 years.

>> No.10929631

>>10929588
If you practice every day, you'll improve fast. I'd estimate around half a year if you practice an hour or a few every day.

Then again I haven't ever been able to keep up that kind of pace, but I personally feel like I improve really fast. I'm also not that great at drawing, so I don't have a mountain of experience backing me up.

>> No.10929638

>>10929614
Draw your sketch as messy as possible, make a new layer, draw lines.
Make long smooth lines, draw from your shoulder for that.
When you get to small details you can use your wrist.
Try to vary the lineweight, it makes your lineart look more lively.

>> No.10929676

Man, construction is a drag. I'm sure the pro mangaka don't do it like this.

>> No.10929699

Anyone draw with Manga Studio? I got my hand in a bunch of Manga Studio 5 installers. But I always have an error after installing the materials.

Is Manga Studio 4 good enough? That one works fine in my computer but I was hoping to work with all those new features of five specially the 3d doll thingie.

I'm using windows xp btw, maybe that's my problem.

>> No.10929836

>>10929676
By the time you're a pro you'll be doing it all in your head naturally and won't need to do that.

Don't forget, even pros still use references for bodies or anything, they usually have tons of reference books.

>> No.10929864

>>10929588
>>10929622
Depending on what you consider decent, you should be able to get to that point in 2 years easily, if you actually draw every day.

>> No.10929869
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10929869

I am really amazed how well some artists draw detailed scenes. Do they use references?

>> No.10930089
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10930089

I think I finally found a way of drawing hair I'm happy with.
Can't post the lower part on a christian imageboard though.

>> No.10930114

>>10930089
Did you draw this? Wow it looks good. Very nice coloring as well.

>> No.10930207

>>10930089
You can post NSFW drawings here >>>/i/405071

>> No.10930311

>>10930114
Thanks. Took me long enough to figure that stuff out.
>>10930207
I don't really want to post on any boards other than /jp/. The rest of the image is only half colored right now anyway.

>> No.10930336

>>10930311
Maybe you can just link it?

>> No.10930384

>>10930336
Then I'll do that, once it's done.

>> No.10930400

>>10930384
I am looking forward to it!

>> No.10930589
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10930589

I'm really happy .. my lineart skills have improved alot thanks to /jp/
;_;

>> No.10930642

>>10930589
Just gotta add the 3rd dimension now and you're all set

>> No.10930652

>>10930589
Face looks nice, but the torso is a little funky.. It might the breasts.

Very clean and nice though.

>> No.10930674
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10930674

quick miko scribble warmup because I got the flu and my drawing skills went down the toilet

>> No.10930690

>>10928332
>>10928295
Hands are actually what I think I'm pretty good at. Hell, I'm capable of drawing any hand pose at a high speed with very few problems. Personally, I think it's my specialty.
This particular image doesn't exactly give a good example since I'm working with a pretty somewhat small resolution. I can't really give too many fucks on details.

You're pretty much spot on with poses though, I'm fully aware that they're bad, but I just roll with whatever I think looks cute.
Is there some set of rules I can follow for posing? I generally just move joints around and let it make itself.

>> No.10930704

>>10930674
I like the colors.

>> No.10930745 [DELETED] 
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10930745

So I tell my younger brother to draw me something so I could post it on /jp/ and make fun of his and the faggot draws this bullshit, the fucker is insane I should have disowned him.

>> No.10931154

>>10929399
>>10929588
Use Loomis, at least that's what i was recommended.
http://alexhays.com/loomis/

>> No.10931561

>>10929124
Good job. There's really no glaring fault, so I can't really say much. However I do have to agree about the vocal version. It feels like you could have done better with the vocals, sorry. Perhaps you could try and modulate the vocals even more, like, overtly autotuned vocals, and that might make it mesh better? Use a vocoder filter? I don't know man.

Thanks for contributing the off-vocal version to the album, by the way.

>> No.10931613
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10931613

>Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.
>programming

I posted in a thread a while ago on here and some anon asked if he could run lolis over, so I told him I would implement it, but I forgot for a day and by then the thread died. I implemented it now though and here it is.

>> No.10931662
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10931662

>>10928549
It does remind me of Ahad's stuff a little, but I don't think that's a bad thing! Though I guess if you don't care for him it is.

Trying to compose explicit images in a tasteful way sort of sounds like a fun exercise, I think!

>> No.10931682

>>10931613
c-can I play it too?

>> No.10931686

>>10931613
That's pretty neat, you fucking asshole.

>> No.10931690

>>10931613
Let us play that fagit.

>> No.10931693
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10931693

>>10931682

All you can do is drive around a town without buildings running over lolis. You can get out of your car and walk around too, but all there is to do on foot is walk around and then get back in your car. Hopefully within a week you'll be able to talk to lolis and stuff, I've still got some dialogue scripting coding to do as GUI coding though. Here's what the game used to have a loooong time ago for its dialogue. Funny thing is, when this picture was taken the source code was only 1300 lines, and like 10 files. Now it's 15000 lines and 170 files or so... yet there was more gameplay back then....

>> No.10931818

>>10931613
Nice work. Are those skidmarks from the car drifting or something?

I had asked because in that other game that was going around at the time you started, where you kidnapped the kids and forced them to learn stuff, you could also hit them, if I remember right.

>> No.10931837

>>10931686

W-why am I an a-asshole?

>>10931690

see >>10931693


>>10931818

Yes, they are skidmarks. The driving is miles better than I Have Candy Get In The Van... that game had atrocious controls. I am to have a much more in depth system than he has. His game was very arcadey. Also the code was fucking horrible, worst C++ code I've ever seen. Everything was public, raw pointers only, almost no C++ features, it was just (bad) C code wrapped in C++ with UpperCamelCase names... hell, all levels and dialogue was stored in CODE too. (He published the code with the game) Sorry for that rant but holy fuck was it bad.

>> No.10931880

>>10931837
Didn't you leave /jp/ for a while because people kept mocking your code?(no offense intended) That guy's code must have been the worst.

>>10931837
>>10931693
>All you can do is drive around a town without buildings running over lolis
That's like half the reason to play GTA. That'd probably hold people over until the actual release.

>> No.10931933

>>10931837
>W-why am I an a-asshole?
For running over little 2D girls for no reason, what else?

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10931942

>>10931880

I left /jp/ because the meido started deleting any threads I would make about the game. My programming ability has increased significantly since the last time I posted on here regularly, however part of the reason people mocked my code in one of those threads is because they thought I was using global variables for something, but the screenshot was really of private variables within a class, but since the screenshot only showed the variables and not the rest of the class some people got confused I think.

It's not that satisfying to run them over right now though since their bodies just immediately turn into blood which goes everywhere... there's no corpse to get sent flying, only blood.

>> No.10931951

>>10931880

I left /jp/ because the meido started deleting any threads I would make about the game. My programming ability has increased significantly since the last time I posted on here regularly, however part of the reason people mocked my code in one of those threads is because they thought I was using global variables for something, but the screenshot was really of private variables within a class, but since the screenshot only showed the variables and not the rest of the class some people got confused I think.

It's not that satisfying to run them over right now though since their bodies just immediately turn into blood which goes everywhere... there's no corpse to get sent flying, only blood.

>>10931933

I was running over them to test out my code, specifically the blood/gore functionality.

>> No.10931989

>>10931951
>I was running over them to test out my code, specifically the blood/gore functionality.
O-okay. That's not a good reason, but a reason nonetheless, so I shall upgrade your title from asshole to bastard. Rejoice! You could've used something else tho e.g. slavs.

>> No.10932035

>>10929869
Of course.

>> No.10932181

anyone have any idea where to find all the descriptions and profiling of the nijiura maids?

>> No.10932882

Another song I made this morning

https://soundcloud.com/phenomics/bounce

>> No.10932973 [DELETED] 

>>10931989

It's a game about kidnapping/raping (or seducing+raising) lolis, there are no slavs.

>> No.10933336

>>10931989

It's a game about kidnapping/raping (or seducing+raising) lolis... there are no slavs, only (loli sex) slaves.

>> No.10933514

>>10932882
I quite like the song, nice work~

>> No.10933827

>>10933336
There are no loli slavs?

Also speaking of the game. I remember it being possible for the girls to be hideously ugly. Is there any significance? Do you get points based on attractiveness, or do they have low self esteem, or their parents miss them less?

Can you teach slovenly lolis to dress and act cute, eat right, and turn presentable?

>> No.10933875

>>10931613
>>10931693
I want to play it.

>> No.10934546

>>10933827

>Can you teach slovenly lolis to dress and act cute, eat right, and turn presentable?

nothing is implemented relating to that so far. I do want the player to be able to affect how she grows up though, like if you give her books in your rape dungeon and teach her things she'll get smarter, etc.

>Also speaking of the game. I remember it being possible for the girls to be hideously ugly. Is there any significance? Do you get points based on attractiveness, or do they have low self esteem, or their parents miss them less?

it might effect the player's boner later on. it can effect self esteem. In the old dialogue I had it if you tried to compliment the girl by saying she was really pretty if some function taking in her attractiveness/gullibility calculated something, it would either have her act positively, or she wouldn't believe your compliment (if she was really ugly + not very gullible) and in turn dislike you for lying to her.

>>10933875

The current game? You literally just drive around. It's not fun.

>> No.10934856

>>10934546
You keep saying that, but how would you/we know if we haven't even tried it yet? Some people here find staring at walls fun, so it's gotta be fun to at least some people.

>> No.10934868

>>10934856

I can't be fucked to boot into linux to compile it there, would a Windows build be fine?

>> No.10934883

>>10934868
Maybe.

>> No.10935077

>>10934883

Here's a Windows build. It's just driving cars around a randomly generated block layout running over lolis.

http://a.pomf.se/5Pe6.zip

WASD moves/drives, E gets in/out of car. There's really not much to it... maybe eventually...

I do have a lot more than it looks like programmed, you just can't see it yet in there. Like the dialogue/scripting stuff. That part's mostly done, just not the part where you can see it or where the player interacts with it.

>> No.10935139
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10935139

>>10935077
Didn't work for me.

>> No.10935168

>>10935077
Derek?

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>>10935139

Hmm. Might need a VS redistributable. Oh fuck it, I'll compile it using GCC again.

Here's the executable compiled with GCC (4.7.2) see if that works:
http://a.pomf.se/7Yw5.zip

Also I just realized by getting into cars that are overlapping you can clone yourself - pic related.

>> No.10935241

>>10935139

Shit, probably not having the VC++ runtime redistributable. I'm trying to recompile with GCC right now. I don't know why but when I launch via my IDE it's fine but when I open it from anywhere else it errors. (Although the VC++ compiled one runs fine for me since I have the redistributable)

Are you on a relatively fresh Windows install, or do you not install many programs (like games)?

I'm trying to get the GCC version to work though... it worked just fine a couple weeks ago...

>> No.10935263

>>10935241
Pretty sure I had it beforehand, but I downloaded the redistributable anyways since it was throwing missing dll errors at me, then I got the one in >>10935139.

>> No.10935269

>>10935139
>>10935263

What version of Windows are you on?

>> No.10935275

>>10935269
Windows 7

>> No.10935392

>>10935275
>>10935263

Well I've got no idea. I'm trying to get the GCC build working... still only works when I run it from my IDE, not when I launch the .exe by itself.


Are you guys on 32 bit or 64bit Windows? I ran the .exe VC++ made (the one linked in this thread) on my netbook (Win 7 32bit) and it ran fine. And it worked on my desktop (Win 7 64bit)... I'm not sure why it's not working for both of you guys, if you're on Win 7. Although I do have SFML on both machines... but I'm statically linking so that shouldn't be an issue. I think I'll try dynamically linking in VC++ or something. Dynamic vs static linking using GCC (MinGW) didn't help that works-when-launched-from-IDE-but-not-by-itself issue... fuuuuck. Why can't things just work?

>> No.10935417
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>>10934546
>The current game? You literally just drive around. It's not fun.
HOW IS THIS NOT FUN?

>> No.10935450
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10935450

>>10935275

Okay well >>10935417 my desktop, my netbook, and a couple other people I had test it can run it. I don't know why you get the error in >>10935139 but I'm panicking less now than I was before. At first I thought no one at all could run it...

I also realized there's a bug where you can clone yourself if you get in/out of overlapping cars...

>> No.10935472

>>10935450
Must just be me then. Don't worry about it.

>> No.10935501

>>10935472

The fact that it doesn't run for you though isn't a good sign, and having the GCC version only work when launched from my IDE isn't good either. I'm not happy about either of those things.

Although it's not like you're missing much, yet.

>> No.10935527

>>10935450
After I get out of a car, they seem to inch little by little despite me not driving them.

>> No.10935552

>>10935501
I tried to run it too and a window popped telling me that it's not a valid win32 application.

>> No.10935558

>>10935552

I.... what? Goddammit. Are you on Windows 7 too? 32bit? 64bit?

>> No.10935562

>>10935450
Works on my machine after downloading the VC dlls. I'm running a Windows 7 64-bit.

What the, it's hella fun dude, you lied. Is it going to have bgm and sfx later?

>> No.10935569

>>10935558
I-I'm on XP 32bits... Is my OS not supported anymore? ;_;

>> No.10935580
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10935580

>>10935450
Allows me to dori dori drift.

>>10934546
If you want music, I can be of service to make something 8-bit or maybe normal if you want. Just let me know what kind of feeling you want and maybe some example youtubes and I'll get on it.

>> No.10935598

>>10935580
Side note, game crashes if I go too far into the dirt.

>> No.10935603
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10935603

me in the middle about to get bukkake'd by an army of vulgar /jp/sies

>> No.10935657

>>10935598

Too far in which direction? North, south, west, or east? I thought I fixed it when if you went outside of the level it crashed...

>>10935580

How would you recommend drifting to work?

>>10935569

I don't have a XP computer, let alone a 32 bit one at that to test it on so I'm not sure. I hope not! I'm sure if I could get the fucking GCC compile to work it'd run for you...

>>10935562

It'll have bgm/sfx if someone gives me bgm/sfx. Well, it'll most likely have bgm since someone I know already volunteered to compose for it.

>>10935527

I've known about this for a while, been too lazy to fix it. I guess I'll do that now. The game wasn't really intended to have a playable demo right now, since I just kind of uploaded it in the middle of programming.

>> No.10935670

>>10935657
Too far east
The vehicles already drift, in fact that's the only way they seem to turn at all.

Some bgm, if you want: mediafire.com/?3d1m88q35du7qc3

>> No.10935679

>>10935657
It's daijobu. Only a few people uses xp and it would be better if you worry about compatibility later in the project. Keep working on those lolis.

>> No.10935683

>>10935670
Wow, I played the game with that tune on in the background. The game got twice as fun now I think.

>> No.10935705 [SPOILER] 
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10935705

I really have to do a sketch and then have the patience to do a clean line layer...

>> No.10935916

>>10935705

Lewd but cute

>> No.10936069 [SPOILER] 
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10936069

>> No.10936074

>>10936069
what

>> No.10936159

>>10936069
It's missing it's extended index finger that it's dipped in whipped cream.

>> No.10936199

>>10935916
>>10936069

Here is the full version, it goes down further.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/10002025/roll2.PNG

>> No.10936203

>>10936199
Very nice

>> No.10936825
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10936825

legs are hard /jp/
p-please help....

>> No.10937082
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10937082

>> No.10937158
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10937158

>>10936825

>> No.10937168

>>10930384
I'm still waiting.

>> No.10937299

>>10936825
Try a hot compress. This usually works.
If it persists, call a doctor.

>> No.10937304

>>10937082
cute

>> No.10937414
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10937414

>>10937158
thank you so much ! I appreciate it.

>> No.10937597
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10937597

Sooo, I drew the right picture roughly 6 months ago and the left one recently.

Am I improving at an acceptable rate? Am I improving at all?

>> No.10937632 [DELETED] 
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10937632

>banned for erasing my own drawing

>> No.10937665

>>10937597
The Koishi is cute enough to save for me.

>> No.10937669

>>10937597
Chin's too pointy and the neck's are too long. The eyes and hair are nice though.

>> No.10938018

>>10936825

You have rendered before getting your basic shapes down, this will not end well!

You are only as good as your foundations.

>> No.10938086

>>10938018
>You have rendered before getting your basic shapes down
Either I lack the talent or I'm too new, but where are my basic shape mistakes and how do I improve them?

>> No.10939050
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10939050

Fuck this gay earth

>> No.10939147

>>10938018
I can't find anything that will teach me legs so that I'll understand quickly... I know practice makes perfect b-but they're hard ; __;/

Or did you mean... The rest of the picture is shit

>> No.10939164
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10939164

>>10938018
>>10939147 & >>10936825 here


ah ... I think I misread that.
I get too impatient and want to start doing something that looks decent first...
I also realise I messed up the left foot this time...

>> No.10939317

>>10939164
I see you realized there are two right feet, but I would also like to point out that the angles of the calfs make it look like she is standing pigeon toed while here feet are straight out. Looks really awkward in my opinion.

>> No.10939498
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10939498

I feel like I've fixed the legs.

>> No.10939744

>>10939498
Her navel is very low.

>> No.10939855

>>10935657
Download virutalbox, run an XP VM and compile it in VM.
It works fine like that.

>> No.10940743
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10940743

>>10939147
>>10939164
>>10938086

Shapes are your friends. With them you can draw the little girl. The idea is you break down things into their simplest forms and for things such as the legs they are cylinders. You then build upon those shapes adding the natural curves of a body to get a nice drawn layer to work off.

>> No.10941803
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10941803

I really must expand my landscapes...

>> No.10942088

>>10939050
r-really good

>> No.10942281

>>10941803
that rock looks like a fat woman with big hair and a pink stripe dress golfing

>> No.10942307

>>10941803
I like your stuff. Keep it up, and make a background some time.

>> No.10944113

>>10939498
Those pubes are super lewd. Keep up the nice work.

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