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Old thread >>4924300.

/jp/ VN creation thread. Let's do this.

>> No.4930102

Shit, right?

>> No.4930104

>>4930102
Yeah, pretty much.

>> No.4930107

>>4930102
Yes its shit.

>> No.4930116

>>4930097
I want to hug her tight.

>> No.4930127

>brown girl

Oh, no /jp/ won't like that at all.

>> No.4930134

>>4930127
you need to lurk more. There have been tons of threads on /jp/ about little brown girls. I approve.

>> No.4930137

She turns into a slut, right? For the protag, at least?

I liked /jp/ girl better, but this is fine too.

>> No.4930147

get out ks devs

>> No.4930153

Relevant images are also >>4924749, >>4925384 and >>4925434.

>> No.4930163

>>4930137
She's the "shy pure girl who actually has some crazy fetishes but represses them" character.

>> No.4930166

>>4930163
Even better.

>> No.4930167

>>4930127
The fuck is your problem?

>> No.4930170

Reporting in.

>>4930147

Never said it was KS.
Also, I'm just doing it because I can.
I don't give a shit what you think of it.

>> No.4930173

>>4930134
I think he was being sarcastic.

>> No.4930180

>>4930097
Why do I want to hug her so much?

>> No.4930183

i will write the story

i am a literary genious

>> No.4930196

>>4930183
no ur not.

>> No.4930198

>>4930170
Also, why do people make such a big deal about this projects?
So what if nothing comes of it?
So what if it's utter shit?

I mean, this thread is for people who like VNs.
Wouldn't you want to see if you could make one?
I don't see any reason why we should just not do this.
It could at least provide something for /jp/ to discuss.

I mean, seriously, it's not like we're spamming advice dog or something.

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4930202

>>4930198

>> No.4930209

>>4930198
Oh, and plus, we've already made more progress than a lot of you people thought we would make with this.

>> No.4930216

>>4930102
>>4930104
>>4930107
This is one of those rare situations in which I believe it is actually appropriate to state: "Haters gonna hate".

>> No.4930218

I wish you nothing but success, VN team.

>> No.4930224

>>4930196
no true genious is ever apprecieted in his time

>> No.4930225

American /a/ remaking thread over and over.

>> No.4930226

>>4930202
...4chan confuses me sometimes...

>> No.4930231

>>4930198
No one really got that mad, so there's no need to become frustrated.

More power to you guys, though. I say go for it. The characters certainly seem fappable, at least.

>> No.4930232

If by any chance this project isn't dead by the end of the month I might actually show interest.

>> No.4930235

Reporting in, had to wake up before noon for this

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4930254

>>4930231

>> No.4930255

Someone want to summarize this whole thing for me?

>> No.4930266

by the way, to the drawfag, your character drawings are sex

>> No.4930275

>>4930255
Basically some people who have only played a couple VNs have decided to make their own. The premise right now is just a bunch of self-insert pandering shit. That's what I gathered from the first two threads, I don't know if I missed anything.

>> No.4930276

my great idea for a vn character is an esper who takes drugs to increase her power level but they make her constantly horny. there would be a scene where the main character and the sidekick character install a camera to spy on her humping her pillow.

>> No.4930278

>>4930266
Why thank you, kind anon.

>> No.4930281

>>4930097
Nice work with churchgirl design!

>> No.4930282

Also, I thought the thread was supposed to be at 7pm PST

>> No.4930286

jeypi is my waifu, i call her

>> No.4930287

>>4930282
Yeah, we kind of disregarded that.

>> No.4930297

>>4930287
alright, just don't be surprised if nobody is here then

>> No.4930322

thread hidden

>> No.4930328

>>4930322
Good for you.

>> No.4930348

>>4930231

That's why I made this post:
>>4930198

>> No.4930357

>>4930348
Oops.. I mean this post:
>>4930226

>> No.4930358

add some emo drama shit to it
/jp/ loves emo drama shit.

>> No.4930367

>>4930358
/jp/ girl will an hero because she can't live up to 2D or something like that. There, some drama.

>> No.4930377

>>4930367
That's dumb. Is the MC going to be one of those "I only like 2D!" characters that are completely played out now?

>> No.4930379

>>4930282
Yeah, but the thread happened to still be going..
At 7PM, hopefully the other thread will die, and I will post the image of the second threads character so that they'll be directed to this thread instead...
Or... A new thread with that image will be made, and I'll try to direct everyone to that one.
Whatever.

Any way, a lot of the people previously present were still present throughout the thread, so it didn't seem to matter.

>> No.4930392

>>4930367
That doesn't make sense. She has a husbando just like MC has a waifu.

>> No.4930393

>who have only played a couple VNs have decided to make their own.

It's going to be shit for sure. I always support projects such as this and all but if the ones behind it don't have a good experience and knowledge with VN it will never be good no matter how you look at it.

>> No.4930396

Forget the plot for now.
Need to make the characters first, then we'll work on the rest.

>>4930367
>>4930377
No.
Also, I should stop responding to posts like this.

>> No.4930402

>>4930379
Drawfaggot here. I probably won't be able to see the 7 PM PST thread, so could someone make sure to link to the new threads and such so that I can read through them on Easymodo later?

>> No.4930406

>>4930255
We have two characters so far, /jp/ girl and church girl.
The MC is a otaku/hikki/shut in, who one day orders a onahole. /jp/ girl is the delivery person. The original concept involved /jp/ girl saying something about freezing the onahole so it feels like cirno.
(Though I think we should switch the onahole out for something else to make it a little more serious.)

Now, /jp/ girl wishes to be a shut in as well, but after being kicked out of home she has to work in order to live.
Possibly at some point she will end up living with MC so she can quit her job or work less.

There is a possibility of MC going to college after years of online school and being classmates with /jp/ girl.


>GOOD END: Dakimakura threesomes.
>DRAMA END: The gap between 2D and 3D is too big, and she realizes neither of them will be completely happy with real life. She can't live up to his Touhou waifus and commits suicide.
>ROMANCE END: The protag and the /jp/ girl spend their days cuddling, playing VNs together, and possibly also having some dakimakura threesomes.

Church girl is
>the "shy pure girl who actually has some crazy fetishes but represses them" character.
She is a Karen reference.


I don't think we have much more then that. Obviously things are still in discussion.

>> No.4930425

>>4930406
I thought we decided NOT to do the onahole thing.

>> No.4930427

>>4930406

Onahole idea is fucking stupid, needs changing asap

>> No.4930438

>>4930425
Yeah, I think we decided against the onahole, though she still delivers something to the protagonist. Then when he has to go to class instead of staying inside for online classes, he sees her and remembers her because she was hot or something. Shit, I don't know.

>> No.4930451

>>4930396
>Forget the plot for now.
>Need to make the characters first, then we'll work on the rest.
And this, gentlemen, is why the VN will end up every bit as shitty as KS (if it even manages to come out in some form).

>> No.4930452

>>4930438
I think that's too plot convenient.

Also, why would the MC think she's hot? Isn't he just a cynical social recluse? I think it would be better if he didn't go through one of those "love at first sight" kind of things.

>> No.4930453

>>4930097
UNF UNF UNF.

I actually like these character designs, so I'll skip the sage.

>> No.4930464

>>4930451
I agree. I believe the plot needs to have some sort of substance. No, it doesn't have to go DEEP status, but look at Katawa Shoujo, it appears to be completely transparent.

>> No.4930477

>>4930464
This.

I'll keep working on the character designs, but we need to figure out the plot.

>> No.4930487

>>4930406

That idea is retarded, it's like making a (shitty) comedy then all of a sudden changing it into some teen drama and/or romance. Pretty sure anyone who's serious about this thinks it's terrible.

>> No.4930495

>>4930487
It's still in discussion. We know it's bad, and we're aiming to make it better.

>> No.4930502

>>4930406

>GOOD END: Dakimakura threesomes.
>DRAMA END: The gap between 2D and 3D is too big, and she realizes neither of them will be completely happy with real life. She can't live up to his Touhou waifus and commits suicide.
>ROMANCE END: The protag and the /jp/ girl spend their days cuddling, playing VNs together, and possibly also having some dakimakura threesomes.

I missed something.
I thought nobody would take that part seriously and we were just focusing on character development for now...
That's what I tried to say...

>> No.4930504

Characters and plot should be made at the same time, with equal effort going into each.

>> No.4930508

What is this shit? Take it to jpproject forum, faggots. Reported.

>> No.4930509

>dakimakura threesomes
It's like I'm really watching 30 Rock!

>> No.4930516

>>4930275
There's more than one person here...

>> No.4930518

>>4930477
Okay, if you don't mind me being a little presumptuous, here's some ideas I came up with:

We'll go with the MC going to college after years of online school and being classmates with /jp/ girl.

For the /jp/ girl route, while the two prefer being social recluses, they find comfort in being able to share their life with each other. So basically they become hikis together.

For the church girl, I kind of imagine her as being the antithesis of the MC and the /jp/ girl. She doesn't believe you can live a fulfilling life by being a recluse, and tries to convince the MC that the world isn't as cruel as it seems.

In order to provide more substance than what is presented in Katawa Shoujo, the VN will
explore what living a fulfilled life means. Does it mean living how you personally believe is
fulfilling, even if it means being a social recluse? Or must you interact with the world in order
to enjoy life? However, I believe this sort of commentary should be subtle, not be preachy, and let the
readers decide for themselves.

Anyway, that's shit I came up with. What do you guys think works and what doesn't?

>> No.4930523

Forget about characters for now. Plot is fucking retarded, change it right now. And don't go making references to /jp/ on it or anything like that, it will be stupid as hell.

>> No.4930541

>>4930518
I like that.

Also, did we figure out what colour the /jp/ girl's uniform sweatshirt (god, I hate calling her "the /jp/ girl") should be?

>> No.4930542

>>4930451
Well, no.
It's just we need something to start with and all the plot ideas were shit.
We don't necessarily need to focus entirely on characters, we just need to get somewhere..
Also, what are you talking about?
It's a dating sim; The focus is ultimately still on the characters, period.

>> No.4930546

>>4930523
>And don't go making references to /jp/

This. Mugen always mentions /jp/ in his VNs and it's fucking retarded.

>> No.4930554

>>4930541
Yeah, I think we should hammer out what we mean when we say "/jp/ girl".

I think we should avoid name dropping /jp/, and just leave it to allusions.

>> No.4930555

>>4930546
That's true and we should avoid referencing /jp/ or anything like that, but also, it's Mugen. It's gonna be pretty retarded anyway.

>> No.4930557

Oh boy it's like a repeat of last year, and the year before that. You fags will fail as usual.

>> No.4930565

What? Mugen is working on this too?

Sage and reported to mods on IRC.

>> No.4930566

>>4930557
Probably, yeah.

>> No.4930568

>>4930516
>...
My mugen sense are tingling. You've held out and restrained yourself quite well for long time, but there was always something a bit off about your posts. Now I think I know just why that is.

>> No.4930569

>>4930565
He's got nothing to do with this.

>> No.4930571

Was Anonymous Nice day ever fully released?

>> No.4930578

We're discussing visual novels on /jp/, I see nothing wrong with this. Hide and move on, fags.

>> No.4930581

>>4930578
What are you talking about?

>> No.4930582

>>4930578

Some people just HATE original content.

>> No.4930583

Honestly I don't like the "/jp/ girl" concept. Because she is set to be the ideal character for the protag right from the start, maybe replacing her with another character would be better to make a fairly acceptable plot and then start to put things together.

>> No.4930584

>>4930097

>Delicious Brown Girl
>ganguro girl church girl

Not sure if want..

>> No.4930587

>1. All things otaku welcome!
This is pretty "otaku," I'd say. Let it slide if you don't like it and just hide the fucking thread, please.

>> No.4930599

Having Jeypi as a /jp/ lurker just makes the whole story completely impossible, but whatever, wish fulfillment etc

>> No.4930601

>>4930587
This is Gaia-level otaku shit. It doesn't belong on /jp/.

>> No.4930605

>>4930599
She's not really a /jp/ lurker any more so much as someone who has reclusive tendencies.

>> No.4930606

>>4930601

Ok bro. What kind of original content should we be creating instead?

>> No.4930610

>>4930583
Yeah, same here. Actually in general, I don't really care for characters that MC tend to start off already having a huge crush on, or love a first sight bullshit. Makes for some really uncreative writing and tired plot devices.

>> No.4930612 [DELETED] 

>>4930599
....
....
....
Shit, I fucked up didn't I?

I'm going to forget about this tripcode.
Bye /jp/.

>> No.4930614

Are you guys working on this anonymously? Because if you are, this will definitely fail. An artist or a writer will get tired of working on this at some point and it will be easy as hell for him to just disappear.

>> No.4930618

>>4930601
The word "Otaku" is pretty 'gaiaish' itself to tell you the truth.

>> No.4930619

>>4930518

Wait, people really are going with the self-insertion idea?!

>> No.4930627

>>4930612
Oh, for the love of god...

>> No.4930628

>>4930614

Don't worry, the project is already over.

>> No.4930629

>>4930610
Her job is supposed to be a delivery girl anyway. She could just be someone the MC sees on occasion and doesn't really get to know until later. Also some Restaurants have colors as uniforms and you can wear sweatshirts as long as they are that color so I suppose "/jp/ girl" could be a waitress too.

>> No.4930630

>>4930619
Well, when you don't really have much literary talent, what else would you write about other than some fragment of yourself?

>> No.4930631

>>4930619
What else would you expect from /a/ friends?

>> No.4930636

>>4930627
I misread his post.
Forget I said that.

>> No.4930639

>>4930627
I don't get it, why he give up and delete his post? Was it because his samefagging was confusing himself?

>> No.4930640

And again, another project that was not even officially born yet, died.

>> No.4930643

So you guys are creating a dating sim rather than a VN?
Kinda disappointing.

>> No.4930644

>>4930639
No.. Look, forget that.
Oh shit...

>> No.4930645

>>4930640
And nothing of value was lost.

It's a shame, I kind of liked this one.

>> No.4930646

>>4930639
>>4930640
>>4930643

You guys piss me off. Bumping even if the idea is dead.

>> No.4930648

Hope its not too late to post my idea.


You are are a lord at some fancy mansion. You live with your parents and your imouto who suffers from a rare, deadly disease. You have everything you desire, all the wealth in the world, a face as if it was carved by an angel and a naive and positive personality.

One day you wake up and find yourself imprisoned in a dark, underground facility. You are approached by your parents and told that you are actually a homunculus, an artificial being that was created in a lab, and that you were grown so that you could be sacrificed to your imouto to cure her, lifeforce hurrdurr etc

Locked away and isolated from the outside world, your mind starts breaking. At this point you can take on of two routes. You can either succumb to it and decapitate your chained limbs then go around raping people, including your "mum" and imouto. Alternatively you remain sane and are rescued by a clumsy, moe, megane type girl who is working as an engineer and managed to get lost in the underground section of the mansion. She frees you and you decide to take revenge on your parents and help your imouto.

You can steer from the imouto route to other routes like the meganekko, the tsundere maid, or even mind-rape your "mum".

Ultimately the true route, the imouto route, has the choice of killing the parents in the end. If you do she gets their lifeforce or whatever but its corrupted and she kills you, bad end. If you don't kill them then you spend the next few years living together with her until she passes away, having hawt DFC sex everyday.

>> No.4930652

>>4930644
Haha oh wow. Also, I think you did read it right, but quoted the wrong quote.

>> No.4930653

>>4930646
don't be ridiculous

>> No.4930654

Don't give up yet there still is hope. So many offers of contribution. This cannot go to waste.

>> No.4930655

Lack of fucking orginisation is the only thing stopping this from getting underway. We need to gtfo /jp/

>> No.4930658

Get out ksdevs

>> No.4930659

>>4930653

Normally I use sage to keep the content fresh, but just this time I'll noko to piss you off.

>> No.4930660

>>4930643
I think they think "dating sim" means "romance VN."

>> No.4930663

>>4930648
It's not too late.
I just misread a post and overreacted a bit.
It's not dead yet.
Damn it.
Why does the entire project have to hinge on me now?
Oh well.
That misunderstanding won't happen again.

>> No.4930665

Anyone still have a link to that java VN engine? I wanna give it a try and see if can do some test/teaser with a bit of what we have so far.

>> No.4930666

Haha, this is great. I love watching people fail after working hard on something.

Please go back to /a/ when you're done with this shit, alright?

>> No.4930672

>>4930663

Jesus fucking christ, stop writing like that, it's getting on my fucking nerves. You took the lead, you better get shit done then.

>> No.4930673

>>4930665
http://jvn.x10hosting.com/jvn-applet/applet.html

>> No.4930675

>>4930666
They didn't work that hard on it. They drew a couple pictures. They don't even have a basic outline of what they want yet.

>> No.4930679

Goddamn it..
I need to stop reacting the way I do.

>> No.4930681

>>4930663
You are the shadiest motherfucker.

>> No.4930683

>>4930679
Just ignore the people that are pissing you off and doing trollish things.

>> No.4930686

>>4930666
>Nihilism FTW XD

>> No.4930687

I liked this idea from the first thread

repost:

I have a great eroge idea. Its about this young scientist who always has this strong attraction towards a certain few women who are being studied at the lab which focuses on the human mind. One of them in particular seems so familair to him. Unable to control his lust he rapes her repeatedly over the course of several months, impregnating her. His boss has him do one last experiment to complete the project. When its over the scientist wakes up and to his horror he finds that he's in the body of the pregnant female he's been raping for months.

The boss comes in and reveals to him that "he" was a woman all along, and the mind switching was an elaborate experiment to see how the minds of different genders handle being in bodies of the opposite sex. She was really raping her own mindswitched body and now is carrying a child she impregnated herself with using a male body.

>> No.4930688

>>4930655
>We need to gtfo /jp/

Did you retards already forget about your faggy php forum for "original content"?

>> No.4930694

>>4930679
Fuckit man, just wait till 7pm, hardly anyone from the previous threads are even here, only trolls

>> No.4930696

>>4930687
doesn't make any sense to me

>> No.4930697

>>4930672
Yes, you're right.
It was accidental, but I will stop talking that now.
I'm gonna get a glass of water etc...

>> No.4930706

>>4930648
Horrible idea, thanks for playing.

>> No.4930708

>>4930697
Jesus Christ, you sound exactly like mugen.

>> No.4930718

>>4930706
Should note, I only made that post supporting his post because I wanted to say the thread hasn't died yet.
Maybe someone will show up and see this thread at the time I mentioned..

There is a lot of luck involved here, I admit.

I'm starting to think the only reason these projects 'fail' is because people say they will.

>> No.4930728

>>4930718
Goddamnit.

Okay, remember how in the very first thread, where everything was just "hurp, wouldn't it be awesome to live in a warehouse with /jp/ and make eroge?" "not really, no," and despite only generating crack and shit a few people were enthusiastic and kept it going?

That's what we need. Not this "oh, maybe we'll be able to make something..." shit. Throw away the fucking ellipses and just do something. Forget what other people are saying - haters are going to fucking hate. Just keep going.

>> No.4930735

This VN isn't made by /a/. It's worse than that. It's made by fags from #/jp/meetup

>> No.4930736

>>4930708
Hm...
We'll see, the reason for that was just that I misread something in such a way that if the way I misread it was true, then this would all be worthless.. maybe even unethical.
The misinterpretation lead me to become a bit embarrassed, but it's over now.

>> No.4930737

>>4930718
That's usually how it goes since the morale of all the people involved tends to get destroyed. I hope you guys do get somewhere with this however. Get organized and keep at it, I look forward to seeing what you guys can make.

>> No.4930747

>>4930728
Take your faggotry somewhere else and stop associating yourselves with /jp/.

>> No.4930749

I hope I didn't scare away the drawfag..
Oh well.

>> No.4930756

>>4930749
No, I'm still here.

Don't know why I'm working on something for a project that's apparently now dead, though.

>> No.4930760

http://jpproject.2ksite.com/

This site is still as slow as a snail. Is there any alternative?

>> No.4930762

Changing the subject.
So we need a name for these characters..

>> No.4930764
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4930764

It's just like the Virus VN all over again.

>> No.4930766

>>4930735
Suddenly it all makes sense. I approve of people trying to make VNs (though you really should do it somewhere off site) but this is seriously one of the worst ideas I've ever heard.

>> No.4930770

>>4930764
Or the plant VN.

>> No.4930773

>>4930756
We still got some people here it seems.
Let's keep going.

>> No.4930779

How about we base character archetypes on /jp/ anons like that devoted anon who was chasing his dreams of meeting the princess while heading for an NTR ending?

>> No.4930783

No, wait, okay. A young boy saves the world

>> No.4930787

>>4930728
See, that's all good, but people only are enthusiastic until someone turns it into serious business.

Hell, I'm doing fucking drawings for this shit and I'm not taking it too seriously. I mean, I'd like to continue with it and pursue the idea, but it's nothing to get mad over.

>> No.4930790

>>4930762
you should probably take the earlier person's advice and wait until 7PM. It's not that long anyway. And like he said most of the people in this thread right now are trolls.

As for the other Girl I still like the name Nina.

>> No.4930792

>>4930756
Listen, anon, just don't waste your time. Go draw something that you enjoy drawing and forget about this retarded bullshit.

>> No.4930794

>>4930760
The bun projects board.

>> No.4930795

>>4930792
>draw something that you enjoy drawing
But I enjoy drawing for this.

>> No.4930805

>>4930735

proof of this

>> No.4930813

>>4930790

Actually I meant 7PM PST, which was the predetermined time in the other thread, but the OP went and made this way ahead of schedule. As a result, it got flooded with trolls.

>> No.4930817

>>4930794
Bun has one? I haven't been to Bun since it was created 3 years ago.

>> No.4930826

>>4930728
>and just do something.

We have tried this many times and it always fails. It doesn't matter if you keep on saying "oh we can do it, we can do it!", you will fail. But at least last year /jp/ was more organized than this. Do you really expect to get things done on an anonymous imageboard? What did you accomplish so far? You guys just drew 2 shitty sprites, and you're already celebrating as if you've done something big.

>> No.4930827

So... Perhaps we should set up a chatroom or some other such thing on another site were we won't be bothered so much.
I still think perhaps /jp/ could still be of some use to us, though.

>> No.4930833

>>4930760
http://bunbunmaru.com/kareha/projects/

>> No.4930835

>>4930826
Eh..
We weren't really celebrating.

I only say that it doesn't matter if we fail and even if we fail we could still have something and so forth because, really, I wish that if we don't actually make a VN, we can still make some content that would be interesting.

>> No.4930838

>>4930817
It's not associated with /bun/ in any way, don't worry.

>> No.4930840

>>4930687

Woah, what.

>> No.4930843 [DELETED] 

>>4930766

>> No.4930842

>>4930838
What's wrong with bun?

>> No.4930844

>>4930835
You are retarded, please just go away.

>> No.4930845

Okay, so when does the project generate enough in profit to buy the dividers we're going to need for our abandoned warehouse?

>> No.4930847

>>4930835
Minor but important change to that:
>I wish that even if we don't actually make a VN

>> No.4930849

>>4930845
30 years.

>> No.4930850

...lol at this

The art is shitty, the story is shitty, the character design is shitty.

It's like I'm reading a VN story written by lolsorandumXD gaiafags

>> No.4930859

>>4930849
Okay, so is that before or after we release "Act 1" or have we even passed the demo and prototype stage?

>> No.4930860

>>4930850
That's because #/jp/meetup devs are a bunch of gaiafags.

>> No.4930862

>>4930817
>since it was created 3 years ago.
Oh, you.
Also, someone got Kureha to enable up guest posting for his JP board, so there's another alternative: http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?board=8.0

>> No.4930863

>>4930833
Wow, an OC archive thread!

>>4930842
Bun is filled with internet bullies who are always mean to Anons on /jp/!

>> No.4930868

>>4930850
>lol at this
>written by lolsorandumXD gaiafags
>calling others gaiafags
>saying lol

Oh dear.

>> No.4930874

You guys need to get this out of /jp/. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against this thread and any other that you might end up creating, but if you want to get serious with this project you'll need a place where you can actually assemble a team and talk privately.

>> No.4930884

>>4930673
Getting an "Error: Class not found: nl.weeaboo.vn.template.AppletLauncher."

Also, any documentation for it yet?

>> No.4930888

You know, we just don't really have anything substantial yet.
We need to develop a background story for the character(s), than work from there.

>> No.4930897

>>4930874
This. You know how everyone says /jp/ is shitty?
Well, it is. I'd like to see this succeed, and that defenitly won't happen if you stick around here.

>> No.4930907

>>4930874
Nah, it can be done on /jp/, just look at the Hatsukoi translation. The only thing is you get profuse amounts of trolls trolling trolls and butthurt trying to organize and collectively work on something on /jp/.

>> No.4930908

>>4930888

You know why? Because nobody is fucking here, it's you, me, a drawfag and maybe two others at most

>> No.4930911

You need to get out of /jp/. I don't mean that in a "hurr you fags get back to /a/" way. It's just impractical to do anything here.

Also, it's a fucking VN, and your first one as well. It doesn't need to be a masterpiece. Deep, complex stories aren't the only entertaining ones.

>> No.4930916

try slice of life

>> No.4930920

>>4930908

Also, the last threads were nighttime threads, and had maybe one samefagging troll

>> No.4930926

>>4930874
And, yes, I agree with you.
Just thought we could find the people here, then we go offsite.
We could use some sort of IRC-type site..
Like tinychat... or.. well, something like that.
Unfortunately, I rarely use that kind of feature so I don't personally know of many sites like that.

>> No.4930936

>>4930863
#bun is not /bun/

#bun is full of fags, trolls, and Jones' bots
/bun/ is a slow board that can actually be interesting once in a while

>> No.4930942

>>4930926
Are you new? /jp/ has 4 (if not more) sites for this kind of shit.

>> No.4930945

>>4930926
I'd vote for the /bun/ project forums.(http://bunbunmaru.com/kareha/projects/))
But I'm not helping with this, so...

>> No.4930954

>>4930926
Are you aiming for a company that can support a dream paradise in at least an abandoned warehouse, or are you trying to make a game for whatever reason?

>> No.4930958

>>4930911
...
What would happen if I posted this in /a/?
I almost want to post there, but that probably wouldn't be a good idea.
I wish /jp/ was a bit larger..

>> No.4930959

>>4930945
>/bun/

Yes, let's make people hate this project even more.

>> No.4930970

>>4930958
Do it. Go to /jp/ and make a VN for them. They will love it, unlike /jp/sies. I mean KS was made on /a/ and they loved it, right?

>> No.4930972

>>4930959
Really, why do people hate /bun/ so much? Did it kill /jp/'s dog/waifu/dog waifu or something?

>> No.4930976

>>4930958
>/a/
oh no you le didn't

>> No.4930981

You guys should focus on making a 2-hour VN with a single heroine first. It would help A LOT.

I can't help much since my area of expertise is with After Effects, but if you guys want a intro video or something, I'm always around.

Either way, best of luck to you guys.

>> No.4930982

>>4930959
More like "let's make people hate /bun/ even more". I don't want to see this kind of a shitty project there.

>> No.4930988

>>4930970
> go to /jp/
I meant go to /a/

>> No.4930989

>>4930972
Let's not start this again, please.
I'm perfectly fine with the state of both boards right now, and I don't want to change that.

>> No.4930993

>>4930981

This, keep it fucking simple.

>> No.4930997

>>4930958
/jp/ is large enough. Stop being a cry baby. Almost every large project ever undertaken has been led by one or two individuals either with strong leadership skills or unwavering commitment.

>> No.4931001

>>4930972
Because it has nazi mods like Jones and no fun is allowed on /bun/

>> No.4931022

Alright, I've taken your suggestions and made a project thread here (http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?topic=321.0)), though it's pretty bare right now. Feel free to use it, or let it just hang there as yet another token of /jp/'s failure.

>> No.4931030

>>4931022
Fuck that. Continue here. Don't be a pussy who caves into a handful of butthurt faggots.

>> No.4931033

>>4930936
I keep confusing #bun and /bun/. My mistake.

You're right; they indeed are seperate entities.

>> No.4931049

>>4931030
That's fine and all for discussing and making concepts, but eventually you'll have to find a more permanent mean of storing resources.

>> No.4931057

>>4931030
Hey, no need to get mad. It's still a good thing to have. We can use both /jp/ and that.

>> No.4931100

go back to /a/, please.

>> No.4931114

>>4931049
Suggested using a git server already, but everyone else was all hyper about sprites for a game that doesn't even have an engine yet.

>> No.4931116

>>4931030
That wasn't what I meant.

Actually, you know what /jp/?
Here's what I'm going to do.
I don't know if I am consistent enough to be a leader.
Everything I say seems to eventually come out pretty pussy and I admit I am falling for trolls.

But I've already got involved.. We've already made characters..
So I can't just let this fail, so here's what I'm going to do, /jp/.

Since I'm almost the only left, I'm going to work on this myself.
I'm going to develop these two characters and try to see if I can write them on my own.
Rather than focusing on trying to get a collaborative team together, I'm going to try to see what I can think of about these characters and come up with something which, for the most part will be on my own.

Then I'll come back to /jp/.. I'll try to make the thread interesting somehow and I'll try to see what happens when I post my ideas.
It won't be entirely mine, of course, it will still be something that was forged by /jp/ but I have to actually do something rather than just keep trying to rile you guys up with nothing.

If anyone wishes to help me or has any ideas, you can post to this thread.
I am fully open to new ideas and the story will not be called my own.
After all, I obviously can't work on it on my own.

My first post will be after I make the first two character profiles..

Also, I'll play more VNs...

Then, well, I'll just see what happens.

>> No.4931120

>>4931049
>>4931057
>>4931100

Encouragement post to counter those fags.

>> No.4931122

I'm glad this idea failed like all the others. You guys need to stop trying to make things.

>> No.4931135 [DELETED] 

>>4931116
Wait.. I said that wrong.
What I mean is, I'll just work on those first two characters, then I'll get back to you guys.

Wait... that's just back were we started..
Oh well, you guys, you can just continue the discussion without me if you wish.

>> No.4931142

>>4931122
You can't say something failed if it hasn't even started.
This shit takes work.

>> No.4931145

>>4931135
Hey, don't go and leave /jp/ just for this.

I'm still interested in doing art for this, at the very least. So make the thread later tonight, and I guess I'll post whatever art I have done in that other forum thing, and we'll see what we can do.

>> No.4931153

>>4931145
Note to self: Don't delete posts unless I have a reason to.

Thank you, drawfag.
I'll try to decide on a site for continuing this.

>> No.4931154

>>4930665
FUCK JAVA NO !!!!

>> No.4931160

>>4931116

Well, it was fun while it lasted, now that you're going solo it's almost a guaranteed failure.

>> No.4931170

>>4931160
No, he'll have my sword!

>> No.4931181

>>4931170
Mine too.

...I think.

>> No.4931183

>>4931170
And my Axe!

>> No.4931184

>>4931116
Whatever you do, don't fucking do this as a solo project.

>> No.4931190

>>4931154
Fuck off.

>> No.4931199

>>4931116
>on my own.

Okay, you really are Mugen.

>> No.4931206

>>4931116
HAHAHA OH WOW, you are one of the most retarded people I've seen on /jp/

>> No.4931214

>>4931160
I'm not going solo; I'm developing the characters so we can have something to work with.
I don't know how far I can get and I don't know if my initial ideas will be good, but we will see.
Perhaps we may not have too many people, we still got some people at least.
We need a site.
Fuck.. what is a site I can use.
Hm....

>> No.4931220

In the end, if you want to get something done, you have no choice but to do it yourself. Once your project is advanced enough, you can show it to people and hope someone will join you. You can't just throw wild ideas and hope it will bring everyone to work together.

>> No.4931224

>>4931214
Even then, don't develop the characters alone. Away from /jp/ with fewer people, sure, that's great - but don't do it alone.

>> No.4931232

http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?topic=321.0

some anon made a thead here, guest posting is enabled only in this part of the site

I agree with the don't do it alone part, that'll take too long with too few results.

>> No.4931244

>>4931116
Don't solo this or it wont even be close to what the OP intended. If you don't really know what the fuck to do about something, then there is always someone else here who does. Only actual work will accomplish this or any other project. Furthermore, the organizational problem you seem to be having doesn't even exist, it's all in your mind.

Remember, this is /jp/ so take it easy.

>> No.4931253

>>4931244
Shut the fuck up.

>> No.4931256

>>4931214
We just need a slower moving /jp/ right?

>> No.4931257

>>4931224
Well, I wasn't planning on doing it entirely alone...
I don't know.
I think I'm just confusing myself at this point.

It seems to be a bit difficult for me to type and look for a site and try to think about everything we're doing all at the same time.
It's a bit rushed and I'm trying to measure everyone's interest and whatnot..

And yeah, I really can't do this alone at all, can I?

>> No.4931278

>>4931257
you don't need to look for a site anymore
http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?board=8.0

Guest posting is enabled.

>> No.4931286

These projects never get anywhere (KS notwithstanding)

I look forward to this dieing in 2 days.

>> No.4931287

The writefag who did Dandy Girl is looking to make a new doujin/indie group, apparently.

Also, it might actually become something because people who've never used 4Chan will be working in it.

>> No.4931300

You guys need a better artist. A good story wouldn't hurt either. I know you guys are new to this, but holy shit, make something worth making.

I support the idea though.

>> No.4931307

>>4931257

Do you have fucking OCD or something? We're still brainstorming ideas, there's no need to make everything perfect so damn early.

>> No.4931340

>>4931287

Link?

>> No.4931354
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4931354

>>4931300
Getting a better drawfag might be a hurdle, I mean being a drawfag is one thing, being an unlazy drawfag with enough dedication to see a project through to the end is another. unfortunately I can't draw on par with the better draw fags, and can't draw faces. Started cleaning up the sketch I drew yesterday...

>> No.4931359

>>4931307

Probably.
Yeah, I seem to have some weird problem like that.
I admit I'm not usually a leader, it just kinda turned out like that.. I mean, someone said I was the leader any way...

I don't know what to say about that behaviour I just exhibited.

>> No.4931379

>>4931354
Hi Chisame. You know, the K1chan link on your blog isn't working. Might wanna fix that.

It's linking to http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1chan/index.html when it should be http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1chan/

>> No.4931389

>>4931379
oh ok I'll just direct link to the board without the frames as it's useless when there is only one board

>> No.4931390

Musician here, let me know when I can start doing some shit.

>> No.4931395

>>4931390
You could start composing character themes based on the current 2~3 character settings.

I'ld vote for a church girl theme.

>> No.4931404

>>4931390

Man, musicians on 4chan are such a dying breed. I always see artists, writers, even webdesigners willing to help. But I'll be damned if we have a musician able to compose songs avaible.

>> No.4931414

Well, if you guys want a drawfag, why don't you find/employ the former-Virus drawfag who also did those Meido-san strips.

>> No.4931422

I hope you all haven't forgotten the MILF character.

>> No.4931424

>>4931404
Didn't we get a bunch yesterday? I'll help out if needed, but wanna see some new blood in this.

>> No.4931431
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4931431

>>4931414

Better yet, get this guy back.
pic related

>> No.4931436
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4931436

Lots of differing opinions here, but I'd support on getting the project the hell outta here and forgo any labeling with /jp/. This thread is fine as recruitment and feedback, but to make it regular like Hatsukoi would be discouraging to the team's creativity. Haters gonna hate.

(not like jpp is better, but whatever)

Don't care if it's shit, just keep on going. Anything is better than the whining of pathetic losers. By the time you realized this VN is worthless from the start due to loads of classic beginner's mistakes, you're already a better creator.

>> No.4931442

>>4931436

I want to give her a hug.

>> No.4931451

>>4931436
Once again, from a lesser drawfag to a far greater one, that's fucking awesome.

>> No.4931452

>>4931436
>DAT BROWN GIRL
HNNNNNNNNNNG

>> No.4931463

>>4931436
>pantyhose

Needs obligatory footjob scene

>> No.4931481

>>4931463
Of course. That's the sole reason why I gave her pantyhose in the first place.

>> No.4931497

>>4931436

Go join Dandy Girl's writer. He's looking for creative people who aren't faggots.

>> No.4931503

>>4931481
You're awesome.

>> No.4931505

>>4931451
>from a lesser drawfag to a far greater one

I doubt he is going to draw anything for the project. He just drew some fanart to have his e-cock sucked by fags like you.

>> No.4931510

>>4931436
Now I'm interested.

Drawfriend reporting in. If you want my help, get me up-to-date in one post.

>> No.4931523

>>4931510
Some idiots from #/jp/meetup decided to make a shitty VN with lolrandum /jp/ memes. You really want to help them?

>> No.4931543

>>4931523
Something that doesn't exist yet/is incomplete cannot be shitty. Besides, if we get our act together, I doubt it will be any worse than ZUN's games.

>> No.4931552

>>4931523
Once again, we're not doing plot yet and, as far as I can tell, no one here actually supports that particular idea any way.

>> No.4931557

>>4931523
Oh man, did you really believe that. I just posted that irc link for trollan and I can't believe I've actually caught a few.

Also, >>4931436
NJ!

>> No.4931563

>>4931557
But yeah, seriously, don't go to #/jp/meetup. If there is a need to set up an IRC channel, we can do that, but do definitely do not go there.

>> No.4931582

ITT: every game that /jp/ tries to make is /jp/ related

>> No.4931593

>>4931582
But, why wouldn't we want a /jp/ related game? After all, aren't we making it for ourselves?

>> No.4931610
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4931610

A slightly more cleaned up version of the /jp/ girl, who desperately needs a name or at least another title.

Also, it appears that there are other, more talented drawfags willing to work on this, so I'm guessing you guys don't want or need any more shit from me. However, if you'd like anything else, I'm still up for churning out some sketches and whatnot again.

>> No.4931644

>>4931610
good, go away

>> No.4931655

>>4931610
Go away with your shitty art.

>> No.4931669

>>4931610
It looks like something drawn by a 12 year old.

>> No.4931670

>>4931644
Don't you get tired of trolling the same thread for hours, sametroll?
>>4931610
That's actually looking quite good in my opinion. The color I guess is a bit rough, but I really like the design overall. So yeah, just keep churning them out, try different poses, etc.

>> No.4931683

>>4931670
I think they said their tablet was malfunctioning or they were using a mouse for some other reason, so yeah, I'd say that it looks pretty decent.

>> No.4931698

>>4931610
You also drew Airhead-tan didn't you? Your faces look terrible. Stop trying to make "your own style" and just draw some generic moe faces

>> No.4931701

>>4931698
Forgot your sage? Here, have mine.

>> No.4931703

geez look at all the samefag in this thread

>> No.4931709

>>4931701
Sage isn't going to do anything.

>> No.4931711

>>4931703
It's like a horrible disease spreading around the board or something.

>> No.4931724

Well, here's some things I'm wondering about.

How are the two characters related to one another? Are they friends or classmates? Do they even know each other?
In what sort of setting do these characters live in?
How old are they?
What are their likes/dislikes?

>> No.4931742

>>4931724
Shut the fuck up.

>> No.4931748
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4931748

IM SO MOE

>> No.4931751

>>4931742
NO U!!

>> No.4931752

>>4931610
>>4931436
I want to hug them both.

>> No.4931755

I don't get it. Didn't /jp/ already make a VN? Then why is everyone getting so pissed at this?

>> No.4931756

It's like an eternal influx of new posters.
Every two months or so, such a lame project pops up and disappears within the span of a week.

>> No.4931758

>>4931724
Church girl is paranoid about sinning and her friends sinning. Her life belongs to Jesus and/or Mary. She writes all of her errs in her diary daily.

>> No.4931759

>>4931755
SHUT UP NACK-SAN!!!!!

>> No.4931762

So, which one of these is the loli bisexual lolicon who browses /jp/ and has sex with dakimakuras?

>> No.4931767

>>4931755
Because /jp/ doesn't like anything, generally.

>> No.4931769
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4931769

>>4931759

>> No.4931771

>>4931762
There weren't any lolis, but the bisexual lolicon was the ugly brown haired bitch.

>> No.4931778

>>4931755
Because trolls.

>> No.4931782
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4931782

>>4931771

Looks like stereotypical jp-dream-waifu to me, then

>> No.4931783

>>4931755
It's easier to insult something and say it's shit than actually contribute. While taking it easy, you can either produce some OC regardless of quality and do something, or you can troll and yell and sage.

>> No.4931785

>>4931782
But she doesn't have big eyes or a verbal tic!

>> No.4931786

>>4931755
At least partially because the idea is terrible self-insert wish-fulfillment shit.

>> No.4931813

>>4931786
LET THEM WORK ON THE FUCKING PLOT THEN

>> No.4931816
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4931816

You know, I kind of actually like the idea about the VN based around Hospice, now that I think about it. There could be routes like how there are different songs - like one route for the BAWWW CANCERRRR part, and a route for the song about maybe-abortion.

>> No.4931819

I started drawing to toss my own art into the mix but I'm just crumpling up everything.

this is what i get for neglecting to draw in over a year.

>> No.4931821

>>4931816
Oh great, now /mu/ is getting into the fun as well. Just swell.

>> No.4931824

>>4931819
Bro, it can't be worse than >>4930097 or >>4931610. It's impossible.

>> No.4931825

Wow, this has fallen apart faster than I expected.

>>4931431
I'm committed to something else, plus I'm not interested in the ideas here.

The current artist(s) are probably fine. There's been worse from doujinshi visual novels out of Japan, but perhaps you'll want art to take a backseat here.

>>4931354
This isn't /ic/ or anything (and I've never been there so I may have the wrong impression of them), but I'd suggest you look up some information about perspective. It'd help with your backgrounds. Otherwise, disregard the background entirely (like some Pixiv artists).

>> No.4931828

>>4931821
They were here in the very first thread, actually.

>> No.4931835

>>4931813
I don't recall doing anything to prevent them from doing so.

>> No.4931838

>>4931824
I guess...

>>4931436
Intimidated me. But I'll try to get something satisfactory done and take a snapshot.

>> No.4931852

>>4931816
Haha, yeah, let's let the faggots from /mu/ take over this shit, it's not like it could get w-
>hospital worker becomes obsessed with terminal patient, they get married, she gets pregnant, and then fucking dies

It could actually work.

>> No.4931879

>>4931852
Eh, I donno. Sounds borderline Narcissu rip-off, and I don't really want to write a sob-story (or rather I doubt I can, effectively).

>> No.4931887
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4931887

>>4931824

Damn, really? Well, in that case I drew my own character for the game as well. I hope you guys like her as much as I do. Her name is Kagami-neechan, so please get along.

>> No.4931917

I'm still wishing someone would get me another link or something...
Maybe start an IRC channel...
I suppose we COULD do it on another, less active chanboard, but I was thinking perhaps it would be better if it were more private than that?

I mean, this thread is going to die eventually, so we have to do something more permanent with less useless troll posts.

>> No.4931927

By the way, since you guys are so opposed to /bun/ (even though the /projects/ board isn't affiliated with /bun/), you could try using http://www.stack.nl/~vdz/oc/wakaba/wakaba.html instead. You can upload up to 10MB per file, plus several sound file types are supported as well.

It was agreed (in one of the more recent "we should have an off-4chan site for working on /jp/ projects!" threads) that most people would prefer an imageboard instead of a phpBB, so there's that too. I mean, you guys asked for it, might as well use it.

>> No.4931949

>>4931917
Well Mugen, I've made the kureha link (which right now is really just little more than an archive thread), but I think most (potential) contributers have either abandoned it or gone troll.

>> No.4931956

>>4931879
This just in, everything involving terminal patients is a Narcissu ripoff.

>> No.4931962

>>4931927
It's just that it seems a little odd to use an off-site board to discuss something from /jp/..
I'm a little afraid of starting a discussion like that...
I guess I'll have to disassociate it from /jp/.

>> No.4931977

>>4931962
If you use something off of /jp/, the people interested in the project will go there. Trolls will be easier to ignore and control. It will be a smaller amount of people, yes, but it will be easier to keep track of who's who, and there will be less samefagging to influence what ideas seem better or worse.

>> No.4932011

Get a livejournal community.

Faggots like LJ, right?

>> No.4932020

>>4931956
Well, that's probably what people who played Narcissu are going to think. It's pretty much the only game (series, even) that has strong ties that sort of setting. You're basically going to get comparisons all the way through, and eventually just end up as a poor-man's Narcissu.

>> No.4932023

>>4931927
http://www.stack.nl/~vdz/oc/wakaba/wakaba.html is dead. No one posted anything in the last 36 days.

>> No.4932045

>>4932023
Well, if you're just going to use it as a place to discuss things, not worrying too much about getting new blood, it should work just fine.
Though there may be problems further down the road if the admin is not really there much and some shit happens.

>> No.4932055

>>4931977
OK.
Well, on the site that one anon linked to, they say you need a thread title..
For some reason, I'm having trouble with that...

>> No.4932058

>>4932023
But the site works. You guys are trying to find somewhere to get organized, right? I don't see how it matters whether the last post was 36 days ago or not. Also, someone make a new thread since it's the designated 7PM (Pacific Time) already, and next time avoid killing the thread internally like !!9dl676lNTQ+ did.

>> No.4932075

>>4932058
Shut it.
I'm not usually like that.

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>>4931838
Alright. I did what I could. =/
It's very stiff. I must get stronger. And it sucks not having a scanner.

>> No.4932109

Well, if there is anyone still left: http://bunbunmaru.com/kareha/projects/kareha.pl/1271816205/l50

>> No.4932119

>>4932108
>=/

Reported.

>> No.4932120

I shouldn't have used the tripcode the whole time..

>> No.4932123

>>4932075
>killing the thread
>mugen
Cool story, eh?

>> No.4932139

>>4932108
Not bad, let me take it and work on it a bit.

>> No.4932153

Make a new thread already, this one reached its bump limit long ago.

>> No.4932155

>>4932139
I'd love to illustrate an eroge at some point, but now I don't have nearly the skill i'd be willing to show readers. Especially when it comes to H scenes.

>> No.4932164

>>4932155
Wait, are you guys seriously thinking about making this VN with sex in it? Oh I lord I'm already cracking up thnking the abominations anon will draw for us, with regurgitated copypasta stringing the scenes along.

>> No.4932171

>>4932164
Beats me. I know nothing of the project really.

>> No.4932196

Can we get a new thread already?

>> No.4932206

>>4932196
No.

>> No.4932232

>>4932206
Wait for next picture or something.

>> No.4932232,1 [INTERNAL] 

Here we go again... I've been telling countless times... I (Uncle Mugen) only posts on /jp/ with my authentic and secure tripcode so not correct tripcode, not me OK...

>> No.4932232,2 [INTERNAL] 

>>4931199
No... that is not me...

>> No.4932363

Even though I have nothing to do with this project, I feel tempted to make a new thread for this soon anyway. You guys who do (or should) care, you're killing what chance of success there was through inaction.

>> No.4932431

Here: >>4932413

>> No.4934091

the hostility and senseless trolling in this thread is ridiculous. whatever happened to taking it easy? good job ruining a potentially fun project with your pointless hatred.

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