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>> No.4938563

Get the fuck out roleplayfags

It didn't fly when meido did it its not going to fly now.

>> No.4938565

Ground floor reminder that you should stop posting.

>> No.4938571

Still insisting the /jp/girl idea huh?

>> No.4938574

not related to /jp/

reported

>> No.4938582

Go back to /tg/ faggots

hidden and reported

>> No.4938583

>>4938558
I thought we had names, Lucetta is the church girl, Nina is the former /jp/drawfag

>> No.4938585

>>4938571

It's been taken and modded so it's much less /jp/ based.

>> No.4938586

>>4938571
Not really. I can't be bothered to read the last thread. They have names now. Anyone that can modify the OP so it's actually correct would be much appreciated.

>> No.4938587

Ageru

>> No.4938595

>>4938583

We do, and you are right. Those are the names.

We were tinkering on the personality when the troll train rolled in.

>> No.4938597

There is no amount of words that can describe how fucking horrible of an idea this is. And how horrible OP is as a poster

>> No.4938599

Someone other than me should save this OP and modify to make new threads. I'm not awake 24/7, but these threads seem to get traffic nearly 24/7. I can't be depended on to post this all the time, but the OP is quite nicely set out, so someone else save it for future please.

>> No.4938601

Bad user. Stop posting

>> No.4938609

>Nina used to be a total weeaboo and made her own doujin, which were probably pretty well-drawn but were exactly what you'd expect from a twelve year old girl just getting into anime. She probably cooled down with the weeaboo tendencies and became more like /jp/ rather than /a/, but became a train otaku. Her apartment is covered in model train track and they run everywhere, around furniture and over objects, but she can navigate around them even in the dark.
>She could be kind of artistic but hesitant to draw anything lately. When she was younger, she could have been a weeaboo and tried to make her own doujins, but they clearly failed and it's her secret shame now.
>The protag can go to her apartment/other living space at some point and step on something before she flicks the lights on, and when he looks down he realizes he stepped on model train tracks. They're set up everywhere in her apartment and are constantly running.

I like what I'm seeing.

>> No.4938614

>>4938609
As do I. I'm not all too keen on all these angry trolls though. They sure to love to shit on good threads.

>> No.4938617

Actual girl on /jp/ here.

I could help in any way when, you know, you're wondering on what one thinks.

>> No.4938619

>>4938614
Jesus fucking christ just get back to pooshlmer already.

>> No.4938621

So you have 4 other sites but still insist on having a thread up on /jp/ 24/7? Please stop associating us with this garbage.

>> No.4938625

>>4938617
Why is it necessary for you to say you're female?

>> No.4938628

I'm not going to lie

You pretty much fucking ruined this by taking the trolling seriously.

The last thread went though so much garbage all because you idiots couldn't stop bitching.

>> No.4938632

>>4938617
>rofl im irl guuuurl ^_ ~
See what these threads are attracting? Get this vile filth the fuck away

>> No.4938634

>>4938617
>I could help in any way when, you know, you're wondering on what one thinks.
Sorry, what?

>> No.4938639

>>4938621
it's actually 1 site, used to archive things, the last two links are dead and unused

>> No.4938641

>>4938617


Toss in your thoughts. Even if the ideas are bad, we can use them to make better ones.

>> No.4938649

>>4938617
Worst post ever.

I didn't agree with the sagers before, but I do now.

>> No.4938652

>>4938641
Yup. Every little helps. These threads are pretty useful for brainstorming ideas. People come up with good shit.

>> No.4938659

Well, let's keep it simple. To summarize, MC gets kicked out of his place, Lucetta brings him to the warehouse. Along with Nina, Lucetta, Alexis, Chris and Chisame, they all live in the warehouse (rented by Lucetta). The warehouse have one tiny "office" which have been modified to act as the restroom. Mountains of old cardboard boxes and newspaper stack are used as walls to separate the territories of the homeless bros.

1. Lucetta is somewhat insane with the whole "God" thing after she was rejected by the church so many times. She acts individually in the name of God, recruiting homeless people to carry out her "will of the god". She refers herself as a priestess/servant of the god. She carries around a hard covered "holy book" --- the texts inside, however, are all written by her.

2. Nina was formerly a decent doujin artist, but fell into depression after her failures. She later became a train otaku. In her territory, it's hard to walk around without stepping on her train rails or collections. She carries around a sketchbook containing countless drawings she had done years ago, unable to let go, yet at the same time unable to show others.

>> No.4938662

fuck off and die. mods, please ban anyone who posts here.

>> No.4938668
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4938668

6th topic? Wait...Is this actually happening?

>> No.4938673

>>4938659
Honestly, we don't need the warehouse or the extra trap characters. It worked better before the warehouse and homeless bros.

>> No.4938683

>>4938668
Yes. We've got a lot of people who are committed to this. I've spent several hours doing work for this, as well as posting in the thread, and so have other people.

>> No.4938692
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4938692

>>4938628

Piff. As if a few trolls can end it. Nigger, this is not trolling, this is vauge annoyance, although I do agree, need to just ignore the bastards now. It's not helping.

Alright. So, Lucetta. Why does she strive to keep her fetishes hidden so much? Also, has she ever acted on them, or is she virginal? Belive it or not, but, that would have a strong impact on her. If she has tried, and likes it, well, she knows she could again, but, if never tried, it's just something that could be.

Thoughts?

>> No.4938696

>>4938673
The extra characters are only small time characters.

>> No.4938698

>>4938673
it didn't work better because there was nothing at all.

>>4938662
yeah lets all get permabanned including you

>> No.4938710

>>4938673
This works better, actually. It limits the places they can go to, and the characters that they'll interact with. As for the traps, they're the homeless bros (no worry, it's only 3). Chisame is the trap bro, Alexis is the reverse trap, and Chris is supposedly the MC's former high school friend.

>> No.4938713

>>4938659
>2. Nina was formerly a decent doujin artist, but fell into depression after her failures.
I thought she was a former weeaboo and made doujin shit when she was twelve or so? They were probably embarrasing yaoishit for big three series, but eventually she grew out of that period and they're her secret shame now.

>She later became a train otaku. In her territory, it's hard to walk around without stepping on her train rails or collections.
Change territory to apartment and it works.

>She carries around a sketchbook containing countless drawings she had done years ago, unable to let go, yet at the same time unable to show others.
I like the idea of her carrying around a sketchbook, but I don't think she's that broken up about stuff. Just embarrassed about drawing because it brings back doujin wapanese memories.

>> No.4938714

Pretty sure the warehouse full of bros and trolls is just a metaphor for this project.

>> No.4938715
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4938715

>see this thread and realize this is what /jp/ will become if we don't fucking stop it right now
jesus christ how horrifying

>> No.4938717

>>4938692
>Why does she strive to keep her fetishes hidden so much?
It's probably not accepted by whatever religion she is part of.

>> No.4938725

>>4938659

Alright. Yes, I like this. Nice job condensing the ideas. Also on the Nina front, she tends to hide her old powerlevel, but it does slip from time to time.

>> No.4938732

>>4938692
Lucetta is supposedly spreading god's will, so shouldn't she be a virgin and the reason she tries to keep her fetishes hidden, as not to stray from god's will?

>> No.4938734

>>4938710
>former high school friend
>friend
Holy shit. Is Chris a hikikomori too, but they bonded because they were both forced to go to school?

>> No.4938737

>>4938692
The problem is that you can't take a hint and get the fuck out

>> No.4938745

ITT: same unfunny sagetroll

>> No.4938753

When half the posts in a thread are people telling you to get out it's time to rethink posting

>> No.4938754

Here's what we should do guys! Ignore the trolls. They're attention-seekers, get it? So if we ignore them, they'll go away! I'm so smart.

>> No.4938771

>>4938692
I'd like to keep her a pure/non-slutty. Bad thoughts doesn't always lead to sexual thoughts. We can have some history background about her witnessing someone get raped, then suicide or something. That'll have a huge impact on her believes, making her "lawl it's the will of the god" so hard for salvation.

>> No.4938776

>>4938754
We are. We were doing good till you told us to ignore them!
>>4938732
>Lucetta is supposedly spreading god's will, so shouldn't she be a virgin and the reason she tries to keep her fetishes hidden, as not to stray from god's will?
Yeah, pretty much this. She isn't a slut.

>> No.4938779

>>4938753
actually your so called half all derive from the same ip, (you) hence the spaced posting times from the flood control

>> No.4938782

>>4938683
I'm glad to see other people are committed to this, too. I posted the first crack idea in the original warehouse thread about the delivery /jp/ girl and I'm glad to see it's changed from something so shitty to something...well, slightly less shitty. I might only be able to contribute shitty drawings and ideas for the characters and plot, but it's better than nothing.

>> No.4938784

How the fuck are you not able to take a hint and get this the fuck out of our sight?

>> No.4938792

>>4938732

Right. but, when did she start? Perhaps she indulged a bit before, and when she "Heard her calling" put the hard clamp down on that stuff? Perhaps even took to wearing a chasity belt?

>> No.4938800

just fucking kill yourselves

>> No.4938802

>>4938734
MC did not becomes hikki until after high school graduation.

>> No.4938806

>>4938782
>I might only be able to contribute shitty drawings and ideas for the characters and plot, but it's better than nothing.
Everything is appreciated. From all the stuff we've got so far, we've got some pretty solid shit really. It's not just mounds of shit.

>> No.4938816

>>4938806
>It's not just mounds of shit.
I've got bad news for you.

>> No.4938822

>>4938802
Oh. That seems pretty fucking odd. Was he originally a shut-in though? Or did he get on fine but just decided to fuck it all and become a hiki?

>> No.4938823

>>4938776
>>4938771

Damnit, should have specified. Liking sex in a relationship =/= slut.

>> No.4938837

>>4938784
How the fuck are you not able to use your brain and use the hide feature/filter?

>> No.4938842

>>4938822
His parents died shortly after his high school graduation. It's written in the story draft.

>> No.4938851

>>4938837
That doesn't get rid of you that fucking hides you.

>> No.4938853

>>4938837
Trolls have brains? All I ever see is mindless babble.

>> No.4938861

>>4938837
don't feed the troll, the posts are spaced exactly 1 minute apart because of the spam flood control implemented, it's all the same guy trying to look like many people.

>> No.4938864

>>4938837
Hiding the thread isn't a solution because it implies we tolerate shit threads like these.

>> No.4938866

>>4938837
>filter/hide
That's exactly what sped up /tg/'s amount of faggotry so its so unbearable as it is today.

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>> No.4938876

Reported this shit

>> No.4938901

Take this shit somewhere else

I dont care if you make it but at least take it to another board/forum/whatever

>> No.4938918

>>4938842
I know about his parents dying, but that caused him to become a hikikomori? I was under the impression it just made him mooch of them for a while and be a little sad. By the way, I written a lot of the draft, so I know about most of the shit we've done, I'm just asking you questions so you can flesh shit out some more.

>> No.4938934
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4938934

saying it again to myself, I kinda think the chastity belt works in with her feverish faith. Thoughts?

>> No.4938936

>>4938901
I agree these trolls are horrible and there's plenty of free options available where we could make it in peace without them. I'd really like to just be able to discuss this without having to deal with them.

>> No.4938949

>>4938934
Sounds like a good idea. Chastity belt reveals she is a pretty horny slut.

>> No.4938958

>>4938949
I thought messy drawfag wanted to keep her pure... oh well

>> No.4938961

>>4938934
>>4938949
Guys? >>4938936

>> No.4938975

>>4938958

Well, she takes steps to prevent anything possibly happening. She KNOWS of the weakness of the mind, and has...removed the chance. perhaps keeps the key in a lockbox in a bank?

>> No.4938980

>>4938918
Hmm, I think NEET would fit him more actually. It'd be easier to explain NEET than hiki. For NEET, I'll probably say that he applied and was accepted to multiple colleges/university before graduation, but the sudden death of his parents left him in grief. It took him a while before he got over it, and by then, school have started, and he have been dropped from all the colleges/university he have applied to (of course, he didn't sign up for any class, didn't go to any orientation etc etc). Along with large sums of money/inheritance, he becomes even more unmotivated to reapply to school, or seriously look for work. You get the rest

>> No.4938983

>>4938958
She is pure. But she's a horny pure girl. That's why she wears a chastity belt.

>> No.4938996

>>4938980
This sounds better than hikikomori. GOOD THINKAN.

>> No.4939004

Jesus christ get the fuck out

>> No.4939039

>>4938983
She can wear a chastity belt, but I don't want it to be her reason for her insanity.

>> No.4939043

>>4938980
Sounds good.

>>4938983
Chastity belt is a dumb idea.

>> No.4939054

>>4939039
lolno. She just has to remain a virgin as that's part of her religion, but seeing as she's a slut she wears a chastity belt to take away any chance of her having sex.

>> No.4939070

>>4939043
>Chastity belt is a dumb idea.
How come?

>> No.4939093

>>4939039

Oh, no. It's not the reason, it's a symptom. She's worried about all the temptation that is in the world, and took the logical step of putting 10 pounds of metal between the world and her bits.

>> No.4939110

>>4939054

Not slut! Goddamnit. She just knows her own weaknesses, and takes steps to cover.

>> No.4939121

>>4939054
Can she be a troll then? She'd tease MC sexually all the time, but then show him the chastity belt and be like "oh, too bad".

>> No.4939122

How insane is Lucetta exactly? Is she just a fanatic for her 'religion' or is she actually mentally unstable?

>> No.4939143

>>4939122
I'd say just fanatic.

>> No.4939148

>>4939121
>Can she be a troll then? She'd tease MC sexually all the time, but then show him the chastity belt and be like "oh, too bad".
Trolling. I like it.

>> No.4939154

I don't mean to shit in your cereal but...

...do you actually think any of this will come to fruition or are you just creating this thread to pretend that you are a >9000 power level weeaboo faggot? I just don't see this happening... I wish you luck, though, if this is a serious attempt and not a troll.

>> No.4939158

>>4939143
That's good. Insane girls are bad.

>> No.4939160

>>4939070
>How come?
Exactly

>> No.4939171

>>4939070
I feel like it changes her character in a negative way. I can't really explain why, but its just my opinion.

Though if everyone else is good with it, whatever.

>> No.4939176

>>4939154
This is a serious attempt. We've got artfags that have drawn, we've got writefags that have written, we've got a viable engine to use, we've got faggots coming up with good tidbits to flesh out the story. What more could you ask for?

>> No.4939190

>>4939121

...my gods. YES. "Well, if he's going to have such thoughts, let him reap what he sows."

And teases the hell out of him.

>> No.4939196

>>4939171
>I feel like it changes her character in a negative way
I don't think this at all. I mean she just uses a chastity belt to avoid any temptation to sin. It's not like anyone here has a fetish for a chastity belt, I think it just fits her character. She is devoted to her religion, so it only makes sense that she would take these precautions.

>> No.4939198

>>4939176

Alright then... Do it! I'll be looking in from time to time.

>> No.4939201

>>4939176

touhou

>> No.4939218

>>4939201
No Touhou in this VN. Bitch.

>> No.4939229

>>4939143

Fanatic, but, SLIGHTLY unstable. You have to be a bit off to do something like this. It's nothing even close to yandere nonsense, or anything like that. But, to have such a drive, she's not fully playing with a full deck.

>> No.4939299

Its starting to feel like the MC is the most sane character we have.

>> No.4939302

I made a new thing for the next OP. I'll be asleep by then.

/jp/'s VN Project!

Status Update:

Archives.
1st: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4922639
2nd: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4924300
3rd: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4930097
4th: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4932413
5th: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4936268
6th: http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/4938558#p4938558


Gallery: http://m810.photobucket.com/albums/Anon02/jp VN Gallery/

Music & sounds.
None.

Story drafts.
http://jpproject.pastebin.com/AynpVqUd
http://pastebin.com/xzV1DXKQ
http://pastebin.com/7SBgtaB8

Project sites.
http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1/index.php?topic=321.0
http://kureha.no-ip.org/k1chan/o/
http://bunbunmaru.com/kareha/projects/kareha.pl/1271816205/l50
http://jpproject.2ksite.com/

Protag: Graduated from high school fine, only 1 true friend made though (Chris). Had high aspirations in life, applied to many schools. Parents died and left him a lot of money. He became depressed/NEET. Mooches off parent's money for many years till he runs out of money and is kicked out. More shit, but just basics.
Characters: Lucetta, Nina.
Minor Characters: Chisame, Chris, Alexis, 2 undecided others.

VN engine.
ONScripter: http://onscripter.denpa.mobi/
or
Ren'Py: http://www.renpy.org/

>> No.4939342

>>4939299
Well he is pretty sane. Just shook up and depressed for years because of his parents death causing him to lose all motivation.

>> No.4939368

>>4939299

Well, nina is not too badly off, she's just embarrassed about her past, and has light body issues, that she deals with by wearing bulky clothing.

Lucy, though, thats going to be fun.

>> No.4939375

>>4939302
You have 4 project sites

Go there, and keep this shit off /jp/

>> No.4939449

>>4939375
This is a /jp/ project. You seem to lack the ability to read, you won't be needed.

>> No.4939494

Alright. So. We have the basics for Lucy down. should we start going into her past?

>> No.4939509

>>4939494
Who the fuck is Lucy? Holy shit, what?

>> No.4939515

Is that pantyhose I see or some disgusting thighighs?

>> No.4939525

>>4939509
Lucetta, I'm assuming.

>> No.4939527

>>4939515
Pantyhose. Fuck yeah.

>> No.4939540

>>4939525
Oh. Hurr me.
>>4939494
Well. She's a fanatic for her religion. I have no idea how someone could have a past that would make them like that.

>> No.4939543

>>4939509

>Lucetta

>Lucy

Can't be bothered to type it out every time.

>> No.4939564

>>4939540

Yeah. Thing is, nether can I, and I would rather not some stupid contrived horrible past life.

>> No.4939578

>>4939564
> and I would rather not some stupid contrived horrible past life.
lol she gut raped by a priest!
Yeah. I don't want that either. I'm going to fucking sleep. Cheerio.

>> No.4939603

>>4939578

Night. I'll poke around a bit, see if anyone else wishes to contribute.

>> No.4939607

>>4939540
>>4939564
Father was a priest, she grew up thinking she would follow in his footsteps. Then something happens to her father, though I'm not sure what.
Maybe he commits adultery, gets kicked out of the church, and his wife leaves home with Lucy.

>> No.4939633

>>4939607
>and I would rather not some stupid contrived horrible past life.
>stupid contrived horrible past life.
lol

>> No.4939639

>>4939607

Humm. Possible. But why the almost insane fanaticism? What leads to her being so unfavored by the church she basically says "Screw it. I'll go found my own, with black jack and hookers. Wait, forget the hookers."

>> No.4939645

>>4939633
I don't think it's so stupid. It's quite good.

>> No.4939648

>>4939639
>Wait, forget the hookers.
Your vague references to something that I can't remember is funny. Futurama?

>> No.4939664

>>4938558

Some of the violent reactions in here are classic.
I'm slow, and confused as to what this actually is. It looks like a game project.... Not sure how that's related to role play though.

>> No.4939671

>>4939664
>related to role play
It isn't. Just some mad sagefag who has left the thread because we did the right thing and ignored that little faggot.

>> No.4939674

>>4939603

Writefag from last night here.

Thanks to whoever made the edits, appearing much more appealing.

In a few hours I can start writing again, if someone can give me a basic template to follow after the first choice on the intro that was done up between jumping/going with church girl. I can do a (shit) write up again.

I just need the basic points/order of events.

If not enough have been brainstormed, I'll just do the first bad end(he jumps) and leave it at that for the night.

This is assuming we're still going with the idea i wrote up in the first place of course.

>> No.4939677

>>4939639
Maybe it isn't the church the rejects her, it is her rejecting the church because she thinks they are wrong, due to whatever happened to her father.

>> No.4939684

>>4939671
>sagefag
No. Stop it.

>> No.4939687

>>4939633

Eh. You know what I meant.

>> No.4939699

>>4939674
That was me. I enjoyed making it nicer.
http://jpproject.pastebin.com/AynpVqUd
Use that so it's clear what revisions were made by who and what revisions are best.
>This is assuming we're still going with the idea i wrote up in the first place of course.
We've changed a lot of things. I recommend looking at this thread and the last one. A lot of stuff on characters/change of protag past means the old writing you made will no longer be useable really. It was good, but it was following an early and pretty poor story. I'd be happy to modify as I did before if you wrote some more stuff.

NOW IM ACTUALLY GOING TO BED. Stop being addictive, /jp/ project.

>> No.4939700

Hurry up and pick a title for this so I can shout

>GET OUT ____ DEVS

ever time something related to this is posted.

Thank you for your cooperation.

>> No.4939704

>>4939648

Bingo. Good old Bender.

>>4939645

I'll agree. I was thinking of father rape, did not want shit like that.

>> No.4939706

>>4939700
One person made '運命ですか/Is it fate?', but this sounds generic. It might be a useable title, but still sounds pretty generic, and might not fit with what we're writing as it goes on.

>> No.4939714

>>4939704
>Bingo. Good old Bender
Wow. I was right. I am impressed.

>> No.4939720

>>4939706
Oh god, so generic. It kind of doesn't make sense either. Better than anything I could think of mind. EVERYTHING I think of will probably sound corny, cliche or shit.

>> No.4939729

>>4939706
Call it Mint Box

>> No.4939735

>>4939700
I think we will probably just be calling this project warehouse for a while.

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>>4939664

It's taking a vague idea from a thread, and trying to make a V-novel from it.

Pic is related, I loath having to use it.

>> No.4939780

>We've changed a lot of things. I recommend looking at this thread and the last one. A lot of stuff on characters/change of protag past means the old writing you made will no longer be usable really. It was good, but it was following an early and pretty poor story. I'd be happy to modify as I did before if you wrote some more stuff.

Alright, I'll go though the intro and rewrite it as needed. Do the first bad end and see where it takes me. I should be able to start around 2/3am. And depending on how much crap been thrown around I should be done before the general shit storm of the day starts.

So much calmer in the night..

>> No.4939794

Also church girl

Is adorable.

>> No.4939828

>>4939794
I agree. I've fapped to her. That's how much I love that art. The only part I dislike is her eyes, they just look out of place.

>> No.4939843

>>4939828

What would you suggest? Any and all are good, we are trying to make this FOR /jp/'s amusement, after all.

>> No.4939845

>>4939747

So what you're telling me is that it's KS all over again?

Cool story bro.

>> No.4939851

>>4939780

Also: How bad are we wanting the Bad Ends? Fate/Stay bad, where you die messily?

>> No.4939861

>What would you suggest? Any and all are good, we are trying to make this FOR /jp/'s amusement, after all.
I was complimenting the artwork. I love it. Are you sure you didn't click the wrong post? Even if this dies (I hope not.), I want more artwork of Lucetta. She's so cute.

>> No.4939866

>>4939735

'kay, cool.


GET OUT WAREHOUSE DEVS

>> No.4939882

>>4939851
The bad ending he wrote would be you falling into the water and killing yourself. With some ronery text before good ol' 'BAD ENDING' popping up on the screen.

>> No.4939896

>>4939861

You said you disliked the eyes. Too big, too small, wrong color....whats' not right to you?

>> No.4939904

>>4939896
I said they simply look out of place. Everything else looks hand-drawn, whereas the eyes use an odd-looking gradient. But now that I look at it more, it doesn't look out of place. Just me being picky. Her eyes are cute :3

>> No.4939916

May as well use a trip for these threads.

>>4939851

First bad end I'm sure that will go in is just the jumping off the bridge. The others I'm not to sure of (if they'll even me any more).

I think I'll replay though fate tomorrow.. Pay attention to how its actually written.

>> No.4939917

Six threads? Pretty sure this is being reposted just to troll now. Either that or it's one aspie from /a/ forcing his idea. Reasons:

1) Most of our older "create a VN" threads ended after the first or second one.
2) If someone was serious about creating something then they would have moved this project away from 4chan a long time ago.

>> No.4939937

>>4939917
These threads are useful as a clusterfuck of ideas. And there is nothing wrong with doing it on 4chan. I made one thread, the OP of this made another, and some other dude made the other ones. We're not trolling, just COMMITTED, BRAH.

>> No.4939948

>>4939904

Ah, not a problem. Any suggestions of character for her? Thus far we have bossy, very fanatical who is well aware she would likely like sex,and thus wears a chasity belt, but is not above teasing someone, to help punish them properly for "Impure thoughts". Keeps a diary of her own impuritys.

>> No.4939957

>>4939948
I don't think you can really build on someone's character much more than that. She doesn't really have any hobbies or interests outside of being religious.

>> No.4939963

Whoever invited timezones is a fag. good night warehouse devs.

>> No.4939964

>>4939916

Oh. Um, do not take any sex advice from Natsu, though. Despite what he would have you believe, we do not have erotic thoughts about seafood. The rest of his stuff, take advice from, yes.

>> No.4939973

>>4939917

A lot of the threads have been filled with pointless trolls and arguments (See /tg/ shitstorm)

Later on when this thread reaches its bump limit I'll throw an e-mail in the OP post, and get the people who are serious about it to e-mail me. We'll branch off into an irc or something from there and get it off /jp/.

So probably about one or two threads before these threads will go.

Far as I can tell there's at least 4/5 people who can actually want to do this. So it should be fun for a little while

>> No.4939974

>>4939957
sure you can build on her hobbies, likes, dislikes, favorite food, routines like if she goes around the back to feed a cat she keeps secretly or something.

>> No.4939983

>>4939957

True. Just trying to flesh her out a touch more.Humm. How does MC start to break into her shell? Hanging out while she preaches, helping her out around the place, trying to start to ground her in reality a bit more?

>> No.4939997

>>4939973
we're already archiving the important stuff on the first link in the project sites, the imageboard there is also free to use, don't use something like IRC because it's a hassle to setup/ register for nick and stuff..

>> No.4940004

>>4939904
>:3

This is what /jp/ has become.

>> No.4940005

>>4939997
It's easy to setup/register for nick and stuff. What the hell are you talking about?

>> No.4940006

Just a note for the writefags - please use post your stuff in http://jpproject.pastebin.com/ or something similar so it's easier to keep track of.

>> No.4940014

>>4939973
I'm going to sleep now, I really enjoy working on this, I did some writing and discussan before. Send me an email please, I'm going to bed now, don't wanna miss the chance to email you in the next thread.

>> No.4940015

>>4939917

Are you making the music for this, Zunbar?

>> No.4940027

>>4940006
I've been using this since OP linked it. Useful to determine which revision is the best and if someone has vandalized, it is easy to revert the vandalism.

>> No.4940035

>>4940005
some people are behind abnormal connections that limit connections, ports, proxies etc, irc clients take up extra windows and idle there. while web based setups can be closed and nothing will be missed when people shut down for the night. With IRC you have to keep connected.

>> No.4940039

>>4940015
I don't think so. There are tons of other musicfriends waiting to hop on this if actually moves foward.

Personally I'm still waiting for someone to make the /jp/ Satan loli VN and the hobo VN.

>> No.4940044

>>4940039

If this turns out well, maybe we'll actually fund it

>> No.4940048

I've not read anything in these threads, but I'm just stopping by to tell you you better put in a trap character or else.

>> No.4940060

>>4940048
There is a minor character that's a trap, as pointed out in the first post, but no route.

The only routes are Nina (jp drawfag) and Lucetta (church girl)

>> No.4940064

>>4940048

Probably a side character at the least since people won't give up on it (this is for /jp/ after all), won't get its own route though.

>> No.4940065

>>4940039
Satan loli VN?

>> No.4940068

>>4940039

>Satan loli VN and the hobo VN.

wait, what?

>> No.4940071

>>4940039

What are these ideas? I've been wanting to start a project of my own, but people aren't too interested in the plots I come up with.

>> No.4940076

>>4940039
>Satan loli VN
FORGET THIS SHIT, LET'S FUND THIS

>> No.4940079

>>4940071
look in OP post 4th link and browse the graveyard of ideas that never took off.

>> No.4940105

Anyway, getting ahead of myself, with the whole Lucy route. Still need to hammer her past out.

So, perhaps what the one tripguy said, father was cheating, and left because of it?

>> No.4940106

>>4940027
Alright, just making sure. The two story bits from the last thread didn't seem to be put stored there, so I made these for now:

http://jpproject.pastebin.com/SxVz7U0B
http://jpproject.pastebin.com/s6RxER34

Didn't really bother formatting the lines, though someone should probably fix the second one at least.

>> No.4940120

>>4940039
>/jp/ Satan loli VN
Haven't heard of this one before. Easymodo link?

>>4939973
There's no need for that (e-mail nor branching to IRC). Just make a thread on http://www.stack.nl/~vdz/oc/wakaba/wakaba.html or something. I'll even do it if no one else will.

I can't say I really like the direction things have gone (you guys seem kind of disorganized still), but I guess as long as people continue to stubbornly insist they'll see this through, there's a chance of success. It takes that kind of mentality to keep projects alive when reality sets in and your initial excitement wears off.

>> No.4940125

I guess this is the "Satan VN"

http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/2330025#p2332297

>> No.4940149

>>4940120
check project links in OP post first link

>> No.4940176
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4940176

I am laying out ideas for a VN with a hobo main character, in fact. Though it's different from the idea in that thread.

It's going to be based on this book. The main character is a gambler who discovers he only wins because he has the power to see and change probability, so he decides to throw it all away and travel the world seeing how he can use that power to help people.

I'm planning it to be short, only two routes confirmed.

>> No.4940187

>>4940120

What do you not like about the direction?

>> No.4940219

>>4940187
It's both stupid and impossible to try and create something primarily through threads on /jp/.

>> No.4940243

>>4940219

Bah. We are working around that. Right now, it's just data mining, and idea gathering.

>> No.4940249

>>4940219
We're at the drilling for oil part of the process, we'll move on to refining the oil that we obtain later on.

>> No.4940302

>>4940187
I'm not sure how to word the cause of my uneasiness. Prior project attempts gathered interested participants, they moved to a location off 4chan, and people were assigned roles. As for this, there doesn't seem to be a core team at the moment.

>> No.4940328

>>4940302

Because it's two days old at the moment. The fact that it has lived this long bodes well.

>> No.4940348

I'm still interested in this, but I need to sleep now. See you guys tomorrow. This better not die by then.

>> No.4940360

>>4940348

It'll kick and scream and fight like hell, before I let it die. This gives me something to work on, after all.

>> No.4940378

>>4938558
I think the trolls are already tired. GJ for toughing it up.

Anyway, four horsemen of apocalypse VN; the twist is they're highschool girls.

>> No.4940394

>>4940378
Oh, from that thread?

http://archive.easymodo.net/cgi-board.pl/jp/thread/1875743#p1876228

I wonder if anyone kept the art.

>> No.4940424

>>4940378

That..is utterly horrifying. Nothing is more vindictive then a high school girl.

>> No.4940433

>>4940394
No, that guy just stole my ORIGINAL IDEA DO NOT STEAL.

>> No.4940517

I like original content, have tried this sort of thing myself and even think /jp/ is a correct locale for this sort of thing, but just about everyone who visits here has probably noticed it by now. It's time to migrate the people who care to IRC/private board/etc and get to it, with the occasional reminder/looking for talent/'etc thread.

>> No.4940625

>>4940517
I think we need a week first. No more than that though.

>> No.4940700

>>4940625

Sounds about right. Week of brainstorming, then we start putting down a foundation?

>> No.4940745

Well as for the reason Lucetta became fanatic toward religion it doesn't have to be something complicated. Maybe someone she knew just told her something before they left town/died and she just sort of came up with the idea on her own. Having a complicated back story isn't always good writing.

>> No.4940752
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4940752

fuck off please. this shit does not belong here.

>> No.4940817
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4940817

derp

>> No.4940823

What happen to that forum where all the dead /jp/ vn projects were?

>> No.4940861

>>4940817
Haha, is this the Chisame concept?

>> No.4940893

Seriously, go away. I'm tired of /jp/ becoming a dumping ground for general western shit.

>> No.4940902

>>4940861
i tried to go with some of the ideas from the previous threads.

blonde hair, yellow/blue eyes, sailor suit thing, some sort of ribbons in hair etc.

>> No.4940905

>>4940745

True. But, with all the fanaticism she pores into it, it should be a good reason, at least.

>> No.4940913

>>4940905

Fucker...name slipped.

>> No.4940921

>>4940902
That's cute, but I thought s/he was supposed to be a fellow hobo? Or are we going for more those of the more couth type?

>> No.4941047

>>4940921

Well, a hobo that has a place in a warehouse. She's got SOME slight income.

>> No.4941127

Moved the first story bit into the /jp/ pastebin, and titled the untitled ones for better organization. Check here for all the posts/edits so far:

http://jpproject.pastebin.com/archive_subdomain.php?p=1

>> No.4941197

>>4941047
I though the protag was living in the warehouse. Is this girl a moocher or something?

>> No.4941227

>>4941197

The warehouse is owned by Lucy. About 5 or 6 people live there, she's pretty much grabbed them from the streets to "do gods work".

>> No.4941246
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4941246

>> No.4941317
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4941317

>>4941246

>> No.4941318

>>4941246

A little flat, and a touch too young, but, goddamn, I wish I could draw as good as you.

>> No.4941324

>>4941318
>A little flat
>a touch too young
Get out of /jp/. Now.

>> No.4941334

I'm the one who originally suggested Lucetta. I'm happy my little Karen-reference has come so far.

>> No.4941344

>>4941324
Oh you.

>> No.4941365

How about Lucetta's reason for being with the church just be that she was an orphan raised by the church?

>> No.4941368

>>4941344
oh you~

>> No.4941373

>>4940817

What is with you and your obsession with traps?

>> No.4941374

>>4941365

That would only serve to make her hate the church.

>> No.4941406

>>4941373
dunno, i just like them. as i like girls from lolis to eiken size.

only 2d though.

>> No.4941415

>>4940817
looks very akagi and trollish

>> No.4941418

>>4941374

She....kinda does.

"How DARE they refuse ME again! Who is more faithful then ME!? FINE! If they will not let me preach his word, then I shall MAKE MY OWN.'

Hence, why she's got a warehouse and people living and working in it.

>> No.4941445

>>4941418
Fuck no. I refuse to bond with the HERETIC

>> No.4941453

>>4941418

Well the point is, she'd only grow to hate the chuch and also religion by having it drilled into her at such a young age.

>> No.4941464

>>4941453
That didn't seem like it when the europeans made their children christian from the start the crusaders went east with their christianity crusade, they grow to hate religion when you try to instill it in them after they get to a certain age, you know.

>> No.4941591

>>4941246
hnnngg

>> No.4941601

>>4941246
Size up the breasts just a tad, slightly longer sleeves and skirt, and giver her glasses.

>> No.4941605

>>4941453

Oh, no. She LOVES the religion. Just thinks they are all fools and doing it wrong. God will forgive them, though.

>> No.4941623

I really don't like the "bitchy" personality she's developed. The entire point of her was that she'd initially be pure and we'd draw out her urges and corrupt her.

>> No.4941668

>>4941623

It's...I can see how you see it being bitchy. It's not.she's confident, and sure in her faith, but not overly controlling, or snarky. Unless you start hitting on her, in witch case you are bringing it on yourself.

>> No.4941689

>>4941668
It just seems like an angrier version of Farnese to me.

>> No.4941696

>>4941689 here
Wait what am I talking about? I should really be saying "lighter" version of Farnese.

>> No.4941721

>>4941689

I..don't know who that is, and google is giving me nothing. The church and it's refusal to ordane her is the only thing that gets her mad, at this point in time, she's quite happy with how things are. She's forgiven them the foolishness, it let her start her own, and that is CLEARLY for the best.

>> No.4941739

>>4941689
She does everything for god with a smile. The church thing is only a minor annoyance.She's not really bitchy.

>> No.4941763

>>4941721

Well, MOSTLY forgiven them the thing. She's still a bit annoyed about it.

>> No.4941839

>>4941601
>Size up the breasts just a tad, slightly longer sleeves and skirt, and giver her glasses.
The breasts are already larger than the size I normally draw. I did screw up the sleeves. Skirt was short because zettai ryouki was intended before I changed my mind. I'm not a fan of glasses.

Oh well, like I said before, I'm not interested in working on this project. I'm just playing cheerleader because I hope to see a second VN project made by people here succeed.

However, I thought the sillier, tongue-in-cheek idea presented in (>>4932857) would be a lot more manageable for /jp/ers to do.

>> No.4941876

Alright, I've just read though the threads and here's what I mostly absorbed.

The Church Girl takes homeless people to her warehouse, gives them living space of some kind and forces them to work (what I'm assuming are min-wage and crappy) jobs. She's kind of a slave driver to them, but since she provides shelter/food to the people living there, they don't bother fighting her and just take it, although they have a general idea that they're being mistreated. May possibly be a big cocktease, and punishes people for having impure thoughts. Or something, not sure

Cont-

>> No.4941877

Among these homeless people the characters that MC mainly interacts with are the artistic girl, MCs close friend from high school that the kind of forces a relationship with the MC. (I'm thinking we're going with a MC that hates the world and everything around him, but for whatever reason the old friend tries to get close to him regardless of his attitude, maybe out of feeling sorry for him or something. True bro character) Though the MCs friend it would be easier to branch off and give a reason into meeting the artistic girl and other minor characters. I'm not convinced there's a point to a trap

>> No.4941882

I think there's are still ideas on the basic intro for the MC in his room being done by other writers, so I'll probably leave that alone.

What I would really like to do is get the know the main character better. So instead of going Intro > Kicked out of apartment > Meet Church Girl > Warehouse, we can have something like Intro > Kicked out of apartment > MC wonders the city for a few days, interacts with people, stores and just hangs around public in general. With this we can add a load of situations that show off how low the MC actually is. Maybe not a fear of being outside, just hating it. Maybe he sleeps -under- the bridge for a night or two. Gets bored/sick/whatever at this kind of living, then decide to go up and kill himself, where he meets the church girl and basically gets kidnapped.

>> No.4941888

This way its not all excitement and we really get to know the MC better. Less emo too

How does this sound to the people who are still around?

>>4941246

Adorable

>> No.4941897

>>4941839
>Oh well, like I said before, I'm not interested in working on this project. I'm just playing cheerleader because I hope to see a second VN project made by people here succeed.
...Why am I getting tsundere vibes from you.

>> No.4941912

>>4941876

>forces them to work

Kinda sorta. She makes sure they either carry a job here or outside, and takes a small percent as rent.

As to the cocktease, it's only if someone hits on her first, and then she is completely one, to punish as you said.

She's not really a slave-driver, but, nor will she have people being lazy in the eyes of the lord. It's a "for your own good" situation, with the catch being she TRULY thinks it's for their own good.

For anyone outside of the group under her care, she can come off as bit of a con artist, but, she genuinely cares for those under her watch.

>> No.4941923

>>I'm not convinced there's a point to a trap
a side character, could be like the gay guy in ymk or something similar. a side character doesn't really need a major role.

>> No.4941924

>>4941882

I..am impressed. I must say, this is a good idea. lets us get more used to him, lets us get used to the setting...good idea.

>> No.4941974

>>4941882
When he is under the bridge does he meet Nino err I mean Nina?

>> No.4942009

>>4941974

Nina is the artistic girl right? (Someone label the characters, I've been ignoring names completely)

That could work as a small intro.

Maybe on the last night before he was kidnapped she was near where he's been sleeping, drawing the harbor under the bridge(which may be stunningly beautiful after she explains some artsy stuff about it. Allows him to see it though her eyes, where he hasn't gave it a second look until now)

There doesn't need to be a major introduction for her, she could explain why she was there ("I come here to draw sometimes"). And after some idle conversation he simply goes to his corner and sleeps. He wakes up with her gone back to the warehouse, which he gets dragged to that day. Then its kind of a "Oh its you" moment after they're formally introduced

Random thoughts

>> No.4942081

>>4942009

Nina, what we have so far on her.


>Nina used to be a total weeaboo and made her own doujin, which were probably pretty well-drawn but were exactly what you'd expect from a twelve year old girl just getting into anime. She probably cooled down with the weeaboo tendencies, and for the most part does not admit to them, although if an obsuce joke is used, she might catch it and not be able to hold back a laugh. Became a train otaku. Her apartment is covered in model train track and they run everywhere, around furniture and over objects, but she can navigate around them even in the dark.
>She could be kind of artistic but hesitant to draw anything lately. When she was younger, she could have been a weeaboo and tried to make her own doujins, but they clearly failed and it's her secret shame now. Is GOOD at drawing, however, it was what you can imagine a 13 year old that just got into anime making.
>The protag can go to her apartment/other living space at some point and step on something before she flicks the lights on, and when he looks down he realizes he stepped on model train tracks. They're set up everywhere in her apartment and are constantly running. Knows the setup intimately, can traverse the room even when exhausted and the room is dark.
>Mild body issues, is not fond the fact she has dat ass, and tends to dress in bulky clothing to hide the fact.

I know a bit repeats, but, I've just been saving things that have been said.

>> No.4942144

>>4942081

The train thing is oddly neat, but if she has her own living space then why would she be at the warehouse?

Basically a "I like to help" mindset?, boredom?, maybe she doesn't need to worry about money or something and she feels that in order to be useful she has to help the homeless.. Ah idk. Luckily I don't plan to write that far ahead

>> No.4942167

Should Nina have a sprite where she's in a conductor outfit too? Y'know being a train otaku and all...

>> No.4942207

>>4942009
>That could work as a small intro.

I was kidding.

I was referencing 'Arakawa Under the Bridge', which just happens to have a homeless character names Nino living under the bridge.

>> No.4942250

>>4942207

I should have recognized that with the Nino, I've said before I'm fairly dumb, so cut me some slack ;_;

Oh well, you got me thinking none the less.

>> No.4942258

>>4942144

It's her bit of the warehouse. After Lucy helped her find a job, she was so used to living there, she just started paying rent(like, say, 15% of each paycheck, while everyone else givs 5%), basically, and got a small room to use for herself in the place.

>> No.4942304

>>4942250
Don't worry about it. I figured I would have to explain it anyways, since this is /jp/ not /a/.

(Just realized I have been forgetting my trip, not that it matters.)

>> No.4942415
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4942415

legs not finished since i have no idea what kind of shoes to use yet.

the rest of the clothes is from the "A a sailor based top with the kind of skirt adult nanoha wears with her barrier jacket? small skirt inside large trailing skirt thing outside?" description.

>> No.4942477

>>4942415

This is the trap right? If so, why the tits?

>> No.4942483

>>4942477
pads.

>Chest size should be around B (padded)

>> No.4942495

>>4942477

Took a page from Sukya, clearly. Pads.

>> No.4942507

>>4942483

Damnation. That will teach me to refresh more often.

>> No.4942520

>>4942415
If you are so insistent on adding a trap, someone should make a short joke end, "a trap is fine too," etc.

>> No.4942532

>>4942520

well, it was planed on just a side char, but....humm. Perhaps. Might have some merit.

>> No.4942556

>>4942520
coupled with a h scene if this game's supposed to be 18+.

>> No.4942559

>>4942258
So the the whole apartment thing is actually just a bigger "territory" in the warehouse that Nina owns (since she pays more for it, just to keep her train collection around)?
For Lucetta, I'm supporting the idea of her rejecting the church instead of the church rejecting her. The church is more about preaching and etc, but she thinks people won't be saved that way without any actions.

>> No.4942596

>>4942556

h-scene is asking to much, I'd say.

Need ideas on what to do for social interactions for him to go though

Fuck I'm slow starting tonight

>> No.4942597

>>4940893
> I'm tired of /jp/ becoming a dumping ground for general western shit
> western shit
americanjurassic.wordpress.com

>> No.4942614

>>4942559

It's a combination of the two. They refused to ordain her, unless she would be bit less....well, fanatic, some of her views are a bit odd. So, she refused them. It's like the old joke. "Your fired!" "You can't fire me, I QUITE!"

And, right. you pretty much got the idea for the housing. She might have an actual room, a bit small and cramped, but, a room none the less.

>> No.4942633

>>4942614
Build with actual drywood walls in the warehouse, or still bordered with newspaper stack/cardboard boxes?

>> No.4942639

well one simple idea could be that the trap wants the mc, so under the pretense of friendship he gets closer to him.

after they get the whole bro thing going, trap starts to hint at what he wants, making the mc feel uncomfortable and all in the process (getting uncomfortably close, grabbing his arm etc), but he brushes it off as him just fooling around.

if you get enough trap points from the interactions with him, the mc will slowly start falling for him and getting confused, unsure of his sexuality, and eventually confess.

cue hot trap sex (or just a blowjob if full blown sex is too much) and trap end.

>> No.4942651

>>4942633

Humm. I was thinking she had taken one of the pre-built ones. Most tend to have them, a managers office, break room for workers, that kinda thing. the smaller room, she's got.

>> No.4942737

http://jpproject.pastebin.com/B1QjM0K2

This what I have written up for right after he is thrown out.

He goes to a coffee chain a decent distance away since he's banned from the local ones. Chain is a parody of Tim Hortons (obviously)

I know he sounds -really- aggressive, but I'll have him calm down as he continues to walk the streets. Be slightly more bearable.

>> No.4942773

You're a good drawfag but shit dude every one of your posts has been talking about the trap and how much you want to sex him

>> No.4942791

>>4942639
No trap route mate, not yet until we make the two heroine route at least. Where are my concept drawings?

>> No.4942793

What about the ethnicity of the characters? /jp/girl or Nina is Caucasian American of European descent (Dutch, German, French, English, or Irish?), MC is who cares?, Chisame is Asian, and churchgirl is hmm. Half Swedish and half Arabic? Or maybe she's American of Italian or Mediterranean descent?

>> No.4942794

Ugh, there's actually going to be a trap now? Dropped.

>> No.4942817

I dunno guys, adding more characters? We should make this a short novel with just a True End and a few Bad Ends. Let's keep it simple at first.

>> No.4942820

>>4942794

There always was, but, it's just a minor character, not a route.


>>4942793

French and English, work well for Nina, and Mediterranean works well for Lucy.

>> No.4942829

>>4942793
They should all be Palestinian.

>> No.4942841

>>4942817
Don't worry. These are just ideas. At the end of the day, those of us doing the actual work just do what we can and pick the ideas that sound most fucking retarded and deserving of a first VN. Technically second if we include DG.

>> No.4942844

What's with the concern over race? Don't bother with things that are not necessary. Keep it simple.

>> No.4942847

>>4942791
yeah, it was just some idea in response to those two.
>>4942520
>>4942532
and obviously the main routes go first.

>> No.4942862

>>4942844
Because race fleshes out background. It's not like it will ever be mentioned but it gives writefags something to think about when they're trying to write in the mindset of fictional characters, and convey how they interact socially.

If you don't consider inconsequential things like racial background they all become samgefag.

>> No.4942870

>>4942862
"Nina is a nigger. She stole my TV once so I raped her and now we're going steady."

>> No.4942900

>>4942870
See, it helps writefags stereotype easier.

>> No.4942901

>>4942862
Alice is blond, Lucy has brown skin and white hair, but they're all Japanese and speak Japanese fluently.

>> No.4942910

>>4942901
>Alice

I'm sorry, who?

>> No.4942915

"Lucy is some kind of crazy nigger with white hair but she ain't ass-old yet. Whenever I ask her about it she just stares at me. It's as if no one programmed a response in. I think she's from one of those crazy-ass islands like Borneo. Fuck Borneo."

>> No.4942916

>>4942901

Problem with that being it's not set in Japan.

>> No.4943007

That was all I could come up with for tonight, I got to distracted.

What would really help me is ideas for what kind of events the mc runs into before he gets thrown into the warehouse

>> No.4943022

>>4943007
He goes to a tea party rally.

>> No.4943062

I felt like making a theme for the church girl. Of course, I'm not very good, so I stole most of the material from a Bach chorale, and it's way too short, needs to be more loop friendly, more orchestration, more creative harmony and voice leading, and I have no idea whether it matches the author's idea of the character, but..

http://www.mediafire.com/?g5ytqqzwu2z

>> No.4943063

Allright. I'm off for a bit of sleeping, be back to work on all this later.

>> No.4943092

>>4943062
The harmony actually sounds pretty interesting to me, though I don't really like the repeated chords on the piano - gives it a bit too hurried a feel. Melody sounds like a workable start, needs more fleshing out.

>> No.4943107

>>4943092
Oh, and I guess I'll set up a music gallery too, though I doubt it'll be as active coming in as the pictures.

>> No.4943111
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4943111

>>4941246
Better or worse?

>> No.4943117

>>4943111
she looks perverted

>> No.4943126

>>4943117
As far as I know, we've decided her personality to be a tease troll/"lawl god's will". I just edit according to what I was given.

>> No.4943132

>>4943126
What does that mean, if she rapes you then it's all part of the Divine Plan?

>> No.4943136

>/jp/ VN
>no desuwas
>no drills

Son, I am disappoint.

>> No.4943146

>>4943136

Chill out man, this is just a short project. Ojou-sama can come next, but for now let's stick with the program.

>> No.4943154

>>4943111
>>4943111
>>4943111
I kind of like the flush, makes her love more lively. Not sure about the stripes on her clothes though.
Also, I thought these pictures were just for fun, since the other drawfag didn't want to commit to the project right now? Shouldn't someone start trying to make prototypes for the real sprites to be used?

>> No.4943171

>>4943154
should be
>*makes her look more lively
even

Also, derp tripquote

>> No.4943195

>>4943154
We're still working out the character designs. Nothing is concrete yet. Personally, I still kind of want to change her hair color...

>> No.4943205

>>4943092
Well, by harmony, I mean voice leading. Block chords in left hand is pretty damn uncreative, but how it should be extended upon would depend too much on the ensemble. Maybe just a church organ would work.

>> No.4943235

>>4943111
at least you got the right kind of skirt now, is she supposed to look like a child?

>> No.4943280

>>4943235
Thread hitting bump limit. >>4943277

>> No.4945756

>>4938558
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Honto ni gomennasai.
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