/jp/ - Otaku Culture

>>37792949
>Los?

>>33557550
sketch scrap sketch scrap get bullied for questionable fetishes repeat ad nauseam

Kept you waiting, huh?

All's Fair in Love and War, chapter 15
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHyXBARl2jEx-qQy3X8dzPvWYe3H6RCEqp5BXwIBiRQ

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek

>>26789735
Fuck I meant to reply to >>26789656

The unfortunate part about both writing and drawing is that you inevitably have to split effort betweent the two, compared to someone who only does either.

Kept you waiting, huh.

All's Fair in Love and War, chapter 14.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DceAgabN2gznwhODemQN2tLvrLYGACgm8HAmoAeZ0-Q

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek

>>25339992
>I wonder why it was removed.
Someone started report-nuking my stories since smut is actually against the rules so I pulled all the smut down, regrettably.

>>25323582
There's also going to be quite a lot of divergence between the two versions so you're better off reading the original fully if you don't want to wait like 5 years for the rewrite to be completely done. One of the biggest examples is how in the original Demon Realm Silver phases through everything that isn't flesh or itself (IE armor) while in the rewrite it does not, it's just plain metal with magical properties.

>>25323447
First one was when I was far more noobish at writing. I wrote it as I went and made things up on the spot without an actual outline of the entire thing, along with other technical stuff I had not yet learned at the time.

The rewrite is more on thinking things over and using what I learned since then to tell the story with an actual outline of the whole thing from start to finish, trimming out a lot of unnecessary stuff as well. The first chapter of the original was like 10k words, while the rewrite is around 1k.

Unfortunately since I picked up drawing too the rewriting ended up slowing down to a glacial pace.

Hello hi, All's Fair in Love and War chapter 13.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4g1lzNzDnk4dyGUnHnLSTzrwco3duB9nVoJXZ7R_dg

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek

>>24690543
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4g1lzNzDnk4dyGUnHnLSTzrwco3duB9nVoJXZ7R_dg
Added two more segments at the start, should be one left. Don't know how long it might take so I'm just leaving it there now. One of them is Victoria actually monsterizing someone, although it's very underwhelming for how most stories of the sort go.

I don't know how long it's been since I've written. The rewrite of Victoria's story isn't dead, though it certainly is going slow. Here's a wip of the 13th chapter, although it's mostly the latter half of the chapter that I wrote first.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4g1lzNzDnk4dyGUnHnLSTzrwco3duB9nVoJXZ7R_dg

Hello hi I'm not dead yet

Chapter 12 of All's Fair in Love and War's rewrite
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D2KwwOS4QJimEPrmm7lwdPYIlAq7spOoqJx3hXPndnk/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/LF16gBMU

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU

Glacial pace but I still live

wip
https://pastebin.com/LF16gBMU

Hello hi. All's Fair in Love and War, chapter 11.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XE-j3dVtNB9CF-fMxznQfRXmq8mAf8R1Zlqk38iGrks/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/Q6P1hbdu

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU

Bad news. More of my stories in pastebin were getting nuked, and since I feared I'd get reportspammed to the point of my account being banned altogether, I had to purge it of any smut it had. Ochi is in the process of archiving it, and if anyone here commissioned me for any story that got either nuked or purged, please contact me to see where else I can host it since I still have the files on my hard drive.

As far as I'm aware this is due to a guy who found a commission I wrote that had topics he really didn't like, so he went through my pastebin to report all he could and have it taken down. Sorry if this led to any story people enjoyed being deleted as consequence.

I highly recommend that people back up anything on pastebin that they put up or enjoy reading, since I've had three stories there deleted without any notice and only found out through another person. Not a big loss to anyone here since those three stories aren't what I'd post in this thread, but I don't know if there'll be more deletions in the future.

>>22661817
Where's the viccy gallery, lebowski.

>>22590956

>>22590609
Rude, her name is Victoria!

Hello hi. Chapter 10 of All's Fair in Love and War's rewrite. New thread so leaving it here too.

https://pastebin.com/KVZhBnS2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/167t4ip-BkCLSQEMLjR4s14Ci5c44RHQ_P6g1Hg4DvN8/edit?usp=sharing

List of chapters
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing

Hello hi. Chapter 10 of All's Fair in Love and War's rewrite.

https://pastebin.com/KVZhBnS2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/167t4ip-BkCLSQEMLjR4s14Ci5c44RHQ_P6g1Hg4DvN8/edit?usp=sharing

List of chapters
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing

>>22410958
Lewd

Hello hi. Chapter 9 of All's Fair in Love and War. Victoria is about to invade Nostrum. Posting it again because last thread didn't last.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ftL0quZRwGuuqy6CeIeBUw9N4uykyXq6y7cgRLYFWig/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/Nsjpj6dx

Index of chapters
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU

Hello. Chapter 7 of All's Fair in Love and War is up.

https://pastebin.com/GFek0bEf
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16LurC5pMyUrGvira88ACWa-jxAf9ZBpxZfSwR7MKzkM/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter list
https://pastebin.com/nKLhpxjU
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RvRBbkascUinQcYvNuXBYH-oQ_EOZSIiDIRLF0NBDek/edit?usp=sharing