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>>16936418
Ah, you managed to find your way from the VA thread?

Or did I get my wires crossed and you're someone else in which case sorry about that.

Either way, hope it goes well and if you'd like any tone clarifications or the like just let me know.

>>16919461
The VA who said she'd like to do it did have a busy weekend so wasnt able to do much work, and with length of script and other requests it might take a little time to do it.

>>16911205
Cirno could in the "idiocy in contagious" style.
Get enough winter fairies around and they could probably swarm you. Yuuka could but why ice fae over flower fae.
But your best bet is probably letty- there's been little bit of hints that she's more punch to her than she showed in pcb, and as the winter touhou she's most likely to want to make more ice fairies.

>>16912676
Nice, good to see someone else getting into the writing side. What sort of hypnosis method are you going for?

>>16906769
Hey, that's pretty good, I'm liking it. the voice feels fairly on point for the character which is always good.

>>16883852
I know that I did throw a lot of possible scenarios out there last thread, so if anyone can find it they should still be there. There's quite a lot of ways you can get mindscrewed by the touhous actually.

Well, I wasn't expecting to see this thread again, so this is a pleasant surprise to wake up to.

Doublechecked and the script version linked in OP is the final version, so that's good.

As for voicing, /d/ is probably the best place to looks. There's a /d/ voice thread, although there is a "slight" difference in length between the script and the sorts of stuff that gets requested there, but it can't hurt to try.

There's also usually a hypnothread up which could post to either find someone who might be up for trying it or getting directions to other places that we could find a VA.

Hmm- since if anyone does try getting a recording made, it'll probably take a little while to get done, so I guess if someone does so and this thread has died whoever it is makes a new one so everyone else can get it?

Personally, while I'm hoping it gets voiced, I can't do it myself and don't have the cash to pay someone to do it, so out of my hands there.

So really I'm just hoping that as many people as possible see or save it so it doesn't get buried and that people like what I've made.

>>16653442
I think an anon up thread had someone they knew but I don't think they ever said who it was.

>>16648577
http://pastebin.com/4gQCnDZB

Well if you're looking for a complete version, I am pleased to present the completed, finalised and edited 1.0 version of the reimu script.

3900 words if you count the bits of voicework instructions to help any VAs.

It's hard to think it's almost been a month since this idea started rattling around inside my head.

>>16643728
Sadly you're going to have to wait a little bit longer; I've almost finished the editing and note making process, I'm just at the start of the body tf section now, so it should be finished by tomorrow.

Still going through the editing, but how the hell did I manage to get 3600 words out of this.

>>16632498
I was hoping for a bit more feedback as well for improving the script some.
Speaking of, no update today as A- had uni work to do, B- it's only edits now so I'll be posting the whole thing when they're done which I should hopefully be able to do in one sitting.

>>16626275
Hmm, I might try seeing if I can find a place to work that in when editing. No updates tonight because I had an 11 hour shift doing basically nothing but standing in place so all I wan't right now is a hot bath and to sleep, waking up from said sleep as reimu optional.

http://pastebin.com/ygbgDdif

Okay, I think that this is the first draft complete! All I need to do now is to sort out voice notes, format it properly and make any final edits that catch my eye, and then this script will be all complete for any voicework that get's done.

So if anyone has any suggestions or criticism, now is the time for it.

http://pastebin.com/0ge75xdV

Only a small update today, haven't had the most time and will be a bit busty over weekend, but I'll try to get enough updates out to keep thread alive. I think I just need to do a little more reinforcement of "you are reimu." and then lead into the wakeup and outro.

And then after that it's just formatting and edits.

>>16608518
Or both!

http://pastebin.com/u1JDygJw
Haven't had much writing time past few days, but I've managed to link from body shift to "you are reimu" bit, so just a bit more reinforcement there and should be done with draft.

>>16602209
Well, that would be pretty cool if it happened, as it would be an interesting experience trying to go under to something I wrote.

>>16603229
All this just sorta happened. I put too much thought into this after a day of having nothing to do, I started writing, and then the idea just hooked me and I don't like leaving things half-finished.

Speaking of that, have the rewritten tf portion. Im much happier with this style of shift than the tingling shift, and the red-white fits the thematics a bit better.

http://pastebin.com/ZCSa0nNP

>>16598082
I've been a little worried about the effectiveness as well, just because this is my first time writing this style of thing so I'm not exactly the most experienced person out there. Still, thanks for the criticism. Creent plan is to finish up first draft, get it formatted properly with more details on voice and such, and then maybe put in some reasoning in at various parts to try and make edits better.

http://pastebin.com/hdpdZa23

More slow and steady progress- at the body tf bit, hit a bit of a block but I think I have an idea of how I'm going to rewrite it to make it better, which I will do as soon as I am not half asleep. But I'm slowly making progress and I think that as soon as I get this bit sorted out, it'll be nice and easy writing to the end.

http://pastebin.com/fHNbwpRL
Not much progress today, not had much writing time, but I think I'v got the though shift filled out now. I am a little shaky on getting across the change in how you think so any feedback is welcome as always.

>>16586671
Also once again I forget a picture. This is what half past today does to me.

>>16582667
Thank you, it is nice to know that there's a good few people looking forward to this being finished.

Speaking of, here's today's progress.
http://pastebin.com/UdxNPHDJ

Managed to get over the block that gave me trouble last writing session,and the muse was with me for a bit so was able to make good progress. Just need to finish up thr mindset shift, and then it's onto the last bit of transformation- the body and the I.

>>16581547
Also have a pic because I am a considerate hypnotist and I won't just leave all my soon to be reimus with just a ramble about writing technicalities.