/lit/ - Literature

i think your a writer if your writing everything else is business or bullshit

i understand that's not how evolution works i ment to say a new branching off species but i have brain rot from Xmen
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also i will be right back because i have been neglecting my work

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thanx i did post poetry here before but none of my stories are fleshed out enough that i feel comfortable posting them also i have a fear that if i post the only good thin i will ever write someone will steal it and and i wont be able to prove its mine. also concepts are quicker to thumbs up or down

Theories for my Scifi
Faster then light travel- i believe that if u can create a rotating "singularity"( i mean more event horizon) in the shape of a cone it would in turn where the point is the singularity and the flat end is the direction of travel the rotation would bend space in sort of a screw "grove" making a reaction like friction because the absorbing light is absorbed at different speeds along the groove. the Ship is then pulled along the screw path like a screwdriver pulling out a screw the artificial singularity absorbs any obstructions in the path and pulls the ship because the ship is anchored to it. So basically a black hole that only sucks in one direction.

The cult of brain power
setting modern day
Pete is a teenager who runs away from home because his parents are constantly fighting about money and getting a divorce.
Pete leaves Boston for LA because of the cliche dream of stardom (he thinks if hes famous his parents will get back together). Reality bites him in the ass he ends up picking pockets in NYC and living in the subway stations. He finds mild success in the criminal life then finds his friends slowly dieing off or being arrested. When some of his friends go missing he goes in search for them because the authorities wont. He comes upon a small cult(your not supposed to know its a cult in the beginning but whatever).
I am skipping all the inner turmoil crap and just telling you the stuff i think people might find intriguing.

The cult promises a world of peace and friendship(regular cult promises) but they also claim to have telepathy. They demonstrate these powers and tell Pete that they can teach him.

The great revel in the story is that the cult leader is a fraud and the telepathy are not his doing. The truth behind the powers is that a child born to the cult is the next step in evolution, Pete discovers this and confronts the child.
I am unsure what i want to happen then but i wanna explain that the telepathy works like the radio the child is a receiver and transmitter. The child needs docile and calm minds to transmit clearly to and thus thrives in the cult culture.

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thank you i got it on /b/ and i thought it was appropriate because i am providing incomplete data. also its nice to find someone with a similar sense of humor

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thank you for the encouragement sir but i do have a modicum of common sense i only mean that on occasion get over zealous about an idea and cant see the forest because i am focused on one tree.
I apologize if you did not enjoy my post and hope to not disappoint in the future.

Also i don't really care to be Stephen king (commercial success) or Hemingway (art) i just enjoy making up characters and stories.

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1st thanx for reading my post
i agree that that line was cliche but i didn't really wanna post the climax that i am considering. also i thought the white power douche raping the main character was cliche but i needed a motive for the main character to want someone dead.

I also am a Scifi fan and if you wouldn't mind i would like some notes on my fictional science i plan to use in my other stories. until u respond in the affirmative i shall continue in the concepts theme i started. again thank you very much

I think the dragons are as important as the ice zombies. which means not much because the story is really about the people. Do you think the song of fire and ice is a reference to the sizzle sound melting ice has on a hot griddle/

please be patient with me it might take me long to type and respond because i am at work and will have to step away from the comp periodically.

Prison Diary
From the perspective of a recently released embezzler. He is rereading the diary he kept in prison and burning the pages after he finishes.
The diay goes along these lines
he enters prison is nervous
cell mate is a white power douche
cellmate rapes him
to escape the cellmate he stabs an random guy in the cafateria
he gets solitary and then goes into a new cell block
for a time its peaceful but then one day a 68 year old man is among the new transfers and that same night the main character hears screams that wake everyone up and the cell block then wakes up and starts screaming in return. In the morning everyone is talking about how this old man killed his cellmate.
He learns from another cellmate that the old man is a hitman and that he is in solitary. He also learns that the white power rapist is going to be transfered into his cell block
the day of the transfer the main character starts a fight to be put in solitary. The when in solitary he trys to get a message to the old man.
there is a conspiracy that follows that costs the Main character more then the he was willing to offer. but good news the white power douche dies

Dear /lit/erate and il/lit/erate,
PLZ HALP
I am a aspiring writer and since graduating college have been unable to find a writers workshop to replace the one i was once part of. My brain makes up stories constantly but with out peers to bounce ideas off of i cant really distinguish which of my ideas are gold and which are shit because naturally i think my ideas are great.
I will be bumping the thread with concepts that i think might be promising.

sincerely, UredMyName

P.S.
usually when i write a story i know from the beginning what the ending is but some stories i cant see where there going and i am unsure if that means i should ditch those ideas for the others.