/lit/ - Literature

I fucking hate you Americans with your goddamned $1 or less perfectly good books.

Seriously, this shit makes me so jealous

>>6734694
this is mine

>>6732169
The flow is very hard to follow, however, the wording is very good. theres alot of depth

try speaking it out loud though, and it comes out very strange. Might help you find a way to slightly tweak it for readabilities sake without taking away its meaning


>>6730036
#edgy
it needs the hashtag because it could go on twitter
it has a decent point but it just realllly comes off teen and edgy. IDK, maybe it's just me

>>6728331
I have no idea what it's actually referring to, but i feel like i shouldnt know the exact thing. i love the second stanza. Beautiful, and powerful imagery.

It seems ot be about some form of passion and its origin to me, but the middle of it confuses me