/lit/ - Literature

let me weep and exalt you from your shores, let me hang my harps in the trees nearby, that none shall hear, none shall speak, let us be alone, let me wade inside you, cascade over me, let me become awash in your wetness, surround and rush over me, let me drown in you

when I choke you, as I release come forth as the whitewater from a broken levee, gasping and harried, let your breath fall equal and still as the water; when I bend and manipulate you, that you may cater to the whim of a man, let yourself break free and claim dominion over me; when I come inside you, let our fluids mix in a deluge, a tidal wave that recesses only to sally forth, to level all before it
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we rise up and become the sun and the moon. i feel your molten gold drip down my throat and you eat my silver. we are the cosmos becoming two and then one again as we join in commune.
i eclipse you, hide you from the world. you are mine and i absorb your essence. we make memories, love, joy, in the river lethe, but our love is so strong that you cannot forget me. i take your pain and hold it and you take my anger and we are all that ever was.
i create the seas when you make me come. you give fire to the mortals when you orgasm. the chasm we create when we shake the earth swallows the hurt of the world. we start anew again.

i'm keepin up the good fight. nothing kills me, man, spider bites, blood poisoning, mrsa, especially not you /lit/, though you can try. bigger men have tried before.

i've been busy (see above) but now it's time to do a poetry reading thing as i promised in my other thread. if you critique my poetry (any) and your poetry is easy to do songs with, i will turn it into a song (you'll be waiting a while so i'll read it too). here's an example of a poem that's not mine that i did song things to:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1pqvs2Qntc1

otherwise, just post your shit and i'll put on my spectacles and spectators sit back, i have some rawness pent up and ready to be sent your way.