/lit/ - Literature

>>18873752
>>Ed bludgeons two prefects to death with a pipe
Immediately went to find this page, just to see if he could write something that hardcore, and it turned out pretty lame. It's written with such poshness that the impact feel cushioned. I mean, when is it ever good to use a word like "thwack" when describing a bludgeoning?
I'm not gonna pretend he's a seriously awful writer, because there are far worse offenses in literature than this, but it's definitely too flat to be particularly enjoyable.