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What's better?

>John looked at Sarah. His hands curled into fists. "I've had about enough of your bullshit."
>"Oh, please," she laughed. "You'll never do anything about it."
OR
>John looked at Sarah. His hands curled into fists.
>"I've had about enough of your bullshit."
>"Oh, please," she laughed. "You'll never do anything about it."

This is a short example, but basically feels weird when long paragraphs have dialogue at the end and not sure if it's better to just have it be it's own paragraph.

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