/lit/ - Literature

>>18668454
In my first draft, the story opens up with the main team getting pinned by artillery fire just after a monster attack. With the team stuck in a hopeless situation. This is a sneak peek into the future though. Sort of like the prologue to ghosts of onyx.

The next chapter opens with the team bantering in their dorms and going to child soldier indoctrination class.

They play football with transfer students from the other kingdom. Then a commotion starts around the newspaper stands. The team hear shoutings about war being declared between the kingdoms. The team exchange glances with the transfer students from the other kingdom

>>18668454
I like the newspaper intro. Maybe something like pic rel?