/lit/ - Literature

>>20873870
>Jeeves Butler but between wizards story
>whatever Hell-anon does next. Saw a lot improvement/effort as that one went
>borderline homeless guy and his brother renovating the abandoned boat
>anything from the "artist's artist" flash fiction guy
>God help me, but I want to see what bucksneed comes out with

Most a probably abandoned/dead. I haven't posted anything in month or two and this general's population seems to cycle in that time so half of you probably have no idea who I'm talking about or what i posted.

>>20478263
>He woke
>woke him the second time
Pic related

Paragraphs could use breaking up, too many self posed questions, needs a good edit pass for brevity (also typos/lack of capitalization in at least one instance)

Overall I can see good skills/instincts underpinning the writing but it needs more polish and I find these dream sequence stories uninteresting conceptually due to lack of stakes.

>>19738153
Top 2021 Reddit fantasy novels:
>#1 Brando sando
>#2 "middle earth universe"
>#3 Brando Sando
>Dune???