/lit/ - Literature

>one of the two characters of the novel is a daughter of a lord who was stripped of his titles and lands.
>One night she starts having a dream of her former home.
>Convinced that the dream was no dream but something bigger she prepares herself for an adventure
>not knowing where to go, she starts going to the alehouses to hear gossips and rumors when she overhears a rebellion is starting to form.
>join them in the hopes they would reward her with her former home.

Extremely tired to write the rest of the greentext, the remainder of her story comprises of cliches until the midpoint where everything changes as they failed in taking a castle and therefore failing their main objective. Is at this point everything start to crumble not just the rebels but also for the main character as she thought- no- deluded herself into thinking she was some sort of hero and was great at everything.

I was thinking on writing her as prideful and arrgont from the get-go like some other novels' characters. But I was thinking of being subtle as I won't feel it being hammered at the reader.