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Anonymous Fri Apr 3 14:30:44 2020 No.15012533 [View]
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Beginning of chapter 2 of my first novel. It is a standard fantasy story, but it is simple enough for a newbie writer. I recently passed the 20k words mark and I'm looking for some critique of prose. Also, English isn't my native language, so any tips on grammar are welcomed.

Anonymous Thu Apr 2 14:00:53 2020 No.15004433 [View]
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Recently passed 20k words in my first novel. It is a normal high fantasy story, but it's easy enough for a beginner like me to try and finish. Any constructive criticism is welcome. Also, English isn't my native language, so grammar tips are always welcomed.

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