/lit/ - Literature

You should have interrupted her and told her in front of everyone that it was for her.

>>12865763
I'm too much of a beta to put her and myself in a position like that, I also have a thing where I mumble alot when I get nervous,emotional, or just talk too fast so I woudve fumbled over my words with a bit before ever being able to confess something like this.

>>12865782
I feel you lad. Keep working at it. I had a similar experience (didn't write a poem though lol) and it turned out she was a lesbian. Oh well, who needs real women when you can carve a perfect being from language?

Did she really say lugubrious? Jesus. You dodged a bullet mate.

>>12865745
Don't worry OP, this event boosted your angst for you to become the greatest poet of the 21st century. Why would you like such a horrible person though

>>12865745
She sounds terrible. I wouldn't really beat yourself up over it. It may not have been the best idea, but you still out yourself out there. We've all done dumb stuff in the past when crushing on a girl, it's just part of being human

>>12865763
If you pulled this off it would have been a balls of steel level move

I once unknowingly critiques my “crush’s” poem. Though not in a derogatory manner, but still, I wanted to jump through the window.

>>12865745
This reminded me how much it sucks when you stop having these feelings

>>12866702
Lol this

>>12865745
>tfw I wrote one last poem that same night at around 4 in morning and mailed it to her
Show us then, friend

>>12865745
BITCH IM MOROSE AND LUBUGRIOUS

>>12865745
Maybe she hates herself and you highlighted all of the things she hates.

>creative writing class
How about you take Grammar 101 before doing that you faget.

song for feels OP

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIo_apl_dtc

>>12865745
Post the poem

>develop a feeling for butterfly
>she goes and does something with someone else

;_;

My only defense is that she was lying. Which is very plausible :3

She has lied before

>>12866997
And no butterfly, no.

I don’t work for lyft :/ it was just a saved pic on a cpu I was on

>>12866802
This. I’ve known no attraction to a girl beyond fleeting carnal lust for at least a year

>>12865745
She probably realized you were talking about her Anon. I don't understand why, but girls absolutely hate it when guys obsess over them from afar. Like, nothing is more unattractive to a girl than that for some reason.

>>12866929
sorry, when you type things like this the story just writes itself multiple thoughts overlapping eachother(I should have double checked though your right).

NICE BLOG FAGGOT ASSHOLE CUNT

Post poem OP

>>12866862
>>12866992
>>12867378
When I get home today I'll find where I left it in my journal, I promised myself to never show any prose I write ever again but you guys have convinced me she was a total bitch so im not so down anymore :).

>>12867096
>>12866802
>she was the first girl i've "loved" since sophomore year of HS, and I could not manage to be more than acquaintance to her so I just obsessed myself with her image till it pushed me over the edge with this little ploy; I like philosophy better now anyways.

>>12865782
Same shit happens but all the time because I am beta enough to get anxious when I even talk to my family. I have been self introspecting for awhile and realize I have an extremely fragile ego and no self esteem. What books should I read as a self cognitive therapy that could fix this problem anons? I found meditations by Marcus really helpful. Stocisim in general is extremely.helpful. but what else is there?

she noticed the poem was about her and freaked out, it was too much for her to handle at once.

we've all been there.
WE'VE ALL BEEN THERE.
ALL OF US HAVE BEEN THERE.

you did nothing wrong. you've got to live passionately in this world.

>>12867410
Unironically world war 2 memoirs. Comprehending the sheer amount of wasted potential in all those dead young men makes you loathe to waste your own.

>>12867423
This. OP was, at the least, acting Sincere.

...and that's how the Divine Comedy was made.

>>12865745
Your story is that you wrote a long poem for a creative writing class and a girl you have a crush on didn't like it. Nothing in the history of the world has ever mattered less. Stop being such an inconsequential pussy for christ sake.

>>12865745
>acquire typewriter
>busk at local events improvizing poetry and/or prose
>make cash+improve writing skills
>forced to socialize with random strangers, able to talk about and empathize with virtually anything
>meet lots of people

If you go down this road (which is hard and sometimes downright humiliating at first, but quickly becomes incredibly fun), I'd advise you also keep copies of everything you write (using carbon paper or your phone's camera) to keep track of your progress. Hashish helps.

>>12867446
>it's an anon plays tough and acts like he's never had a crush on a girl before
where does you interest in art come from if you have no respect for sincere emotion?

>>12867472
The fact that you're balls deep on new sincerity's dick is almost less interesting than OP's story about his poetry class going badly.

>>12867491
You're an annoyance and a bore

>>12865745
>I'm so basic I only care about a pretty face
Kill yourself, shitskin.

>>12866702
this

>>12866997
>>12866999

>>12866702
I don't know what lugubrious means but I think I remember Biz Markie using it in a song once.

>>12867347
You made more errors in this response than anywhere else. Honestly your writing is shit and I would guess that the hottie was right.

>>12867410
>when I even talk to my family.
That's where it originates.

>>12867438
Rec me some good books in this senpai

okay, I went into this thread expecting some horrible cringe that would leave me baffled at the state of incels, but that was actually pretty brutal. fuck that bitch, I hope she eventually realizes how horrible that was

>>12865745

>>12865745
> having romantic feelings for women
And that's where you're wrong, kiddo.

>>12868807
if you're going to discriminate based on sexuality at all, this is how you do it

>>12867096
same boat

>>12868856
The Japanese understand the world.

>>12865745
is this a pasta? It reads like one.

>>12865745
>woman
>using the world lugubrious
iit things that didnt happen

>>12868885
>tfw people think you're gay because you're single
i just try not to go outside

>>12868912
> not being gay in 2019

>>12865745
Fake. Women are not that critical beyond "I didn't like it :/ "

>>12869042
I can tell you already havent been in a writing class in a uni, its literally all woman and their critiques are just complaints to cope with their incompetence of misunderstanding, op prob dident even write something bad if everyone else liked it, she must have noticed.

>t. MA in English

>biblical references
>shakespeare references
You're obviously an angl* and should therefore kill yourself

I have been rejected like that as well, OP. I realized that we often fall in love with women that don't give a shit about us because they are pretty. It is better to find a girl that loves you from the start and try to help her grow into something more beautiful. That is what I did. Her devotion is remarkable. Find a love worth dying for. Give a girl a chance. She may surprise you.

>>12869138
pretty sure everyone does this though

>>12867835
Don’t talk to LARPing stalker trolls.
Dumbass

Why are you a faggot? Cute whores do nothing for my heart, I understand it's simple carnal lust. On the other hand women that are on the same wavelength as me make me diamond hard even if at first sight they looked ugly and make my heart aflutter.
Unless you are such a bad person you are on the same wavelength as a vindictive whore.

>>12866762

IF he could have pulled it off that is. That is quite a fucking task, might have ended up with him getting disciplinary harassment action from the uni if he fucked it up or was ugly.

>>12867407
You home yet, OP?

>>12865745
Wow OP, you've sure exercised your "creative writing" skills here. Can't wait for you to post your 20 page epic poem that you really have actually written.

OP will not deliver.

>>12868888
op clearly wants it to become one
I don't think it's worth becoming a staple but I guess it can be worth derailing a cancerous thread with some time
also checked

>>12867457
I want theodor adorno to dissect this image

>>12865745
anon, you're based as fuck and that girl is a cunt, especially if everyone else loved it

>>12865763
Alpha move scotty!

>>12870238
yup, browsing /lit/, relaxing. I spent 2-3hrs trying to post the small poem before making changes,adding/removing stuff, changing imagery, and changing the line breaks; it just turned into something that it was not a complete stranger to the original. If I post it its going to be changed to something that its not and edited in various ways to cope with my anxiety for disapproval and the fact that I have a unhealthy emotional value attached to it. It's best not to post shit if its not gonna be what you guys asked for, I rather be honest. Anyways feel free to throw shit at me if you expected anything, what can I say im a disappointment

>>12871455
How's your relationship with your mother?

>>12865745
Better to have tried and failed than to have not tried at all Op.

I still feel pained thinking about the girl in my chemistry classes who I never even asked out. Had I known she we was going to transfer colleges I would have mustered up enough for one attempt knowing that I’d never see her again if she rejected me. Never got her last name or number so I could never find her again...

No one has come close to her beauty. Not to say that her rubenesque body was particularly remarkable (although it suited her well in my eyes), but she had the most beautiful face I’ve ever seen. Even without makeup and covered in sweat (All the Bio labs were nice and cool, but I guess chemistry got the short end of the stick.) I couldn’t help but stare at her when I could hazard a glance. And such a gentle disposition, the sort who lacked that vindictive and spiteful spirit that modernity seems to breed...

>>12866997
stop it, get some help

>>12868925
I've never met a gay person that wasn't an NPC. I think gay people are sort of enslaved to their lust, and it kills their ability to think independently.

you're unironically based

>>12872568
Here you go, buddy

>>12865745
What a fucking beta cuck lmao

>>12866928
Most likely possibility; she probably dejected the poem because it struck her at her deepest. If she was the only one who didn’t like the poem, it’s probably on her. Odds are, she’s been abused with respect to the traits you so admire, OP. Just keep being a man if you want to win her heart. Men don’t stare at ceiling tiles or feel sorry for themselves after they’ve given an honest effort. Don’t let a women level your virtue.

1. This never happened
2. This definitely never happened
3. The fact that OP still hasn't posted the poem proves this.
Why do derive pleasure from imagining yourselves in degrading scenarios. I really don't get it. You're really pathetic OP. Normally I don't comment but damn breh go to r9k with your cuck fetishes. Bitch ass nigga.

>>12872888
there are a ton of fake greentext on here but op's scenario can be easily very real, if you've ever been in a writing class with sjw's or a cute girl you like chances are this shit has happened;happened to me. Also people don't post "sad" green text they post degenerate shit like saying they are depressed,'confirmed' schizo, "I wEnT to a MEnTaL aSYlum fmGuys" or your average doomer shit about not doing shit in life, atleast this one is subtle with its moroseness.

>Even if it is fake its one of the better fakes imo

>>12871455
pls deliver oh pee

>>12874148
see>>12872878

>>12872283
>rubenesque body
>body like a reuben
>body like a corned beef sandwich
>body like a roast beef sandwich
>roastie

Do better.

>>12872888

>post poem now anon
>so we can laugh at you
>and save it on our hard drives
>and doxx you, potentially
>thing you are sad about will be used to mock you for the next few decades

>>12865745
>20 page epic poem

>>12865745
You never really know someone, bro. Keep writing, but don't do this to yourself.

>be me
>17 at the time
>creative writing class in senior year
>one wednesday we had a little activity where we'd draw names from a hat and write a poem about the classmate
>didn't even need to rhyme, just needed to sound good
>got some rando girl, write it -- whatever
>when everyone finishes, teacher reads them out loud then says who it was written about
>gets to mine half-way through
I've known you since grade 3
Grade 3 I knew you were different
You didn't have many friends, but you had a few close ones
We never had a full conversation, but I know how smart you are
You laugh with your friends in class and I want to ask whats so funny
I don't and that's okay
You are cool
You work out, but you are not like the other guys
You work out because it is to better yourself -- other guys do it to show off
You've found something you enjoy and it has made you more confident
I have seen a huge change in you since grade 3
>shit warmed my heart like nothing else
>mfw

>>12866802
tfw

>everyone siding with OP instead of his based crush
You should let her put you in a chastity cage OP