/lit/ - Literature

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>>18032913
Freedom!

>>18032913
"Deleuze please..."

>>18032913
The blessings of liberty

Reminds me of something Breece DJ Pancake would write of.

>>18032913
fuck murica
the end

>>18032913
"Look ma! I gawts it! I gawts it ouuwt!"
Bernice took a long draw of her cigarette. It wasn't the first rodent to put forceably removed from her cunt.
"quickest suicide methods," Googled the Squirrel in his mind browser

>>18033167
kek

>>18033167
Almost good

>"Look ma! I got it! I got it out!"
>Bernice took a long draw of her cigarette and sighed. It wasn't the first rodent to be forcefully removed from her cunt.
>The squirrel's mind raced trying to think of the quickest, easiest suicide method possible.

Author: >>18033167
Editor: >>18033201

>>18033167
Winrar simply for "the squirrel googled in his mind browser"

>>18033167
The fact that you analogize interrogative thought to using search engines is unintentionally hilarious. The minds of zoomers have been completely colonized by tech firms.

>>18033201
sterile and styleless
I can smell the YA-tier prose from here

Self Published >>18033167
vs
Traditionally Published >>18033201

Maybe change the last line to something line
>Dangling by the tail from the boy's clammy fist, the squirrel wondered how quickly it could kill itself and how it would do it

>>18033167
"quickest suicide methods," Googled the Squirrel in his mind browser

>>18033167
>"quickest suicide methods," Googled the Squirrel in his mind browser
powerful

>>18033257
>just water things down with absolutely no artistic purpose bro

>>18032913
generations ago her forefathers settled a rural southern state with a lot to gain but nothing to lose. They worked day and night towards the newly found American Dream. A dream of riches and true freedom. If they could have seen what would become of their little nation in the centuries to come they would have simply stayed it europe
was this the american dream all along? to commit yourself to backbreaking labor to feed a small family who will likely suffer the same fate as you? to die for a country that cares more for newly arrived minorities and immigrants than the ones who descend from the very founders of that country?
these ideas where much too tense for her overworked brain to handle, so she went back to taking long drags of her Pall Malls and ignoring the world around her

>>18033459
>anon (re)discovers commercialism
your artistic vision is only as good as it is profitable with the lowest common denominator
to publishers at least

>>18033547
fuck publishers

>>18032913
Margaret refused to even look at it. Disgusting thing. How did it even get in the house in the first place? The glee that radiated from her Zach was nearly as revolting as the rodent itself. She took a drag of her cigarette and imagined the sound the bright red cherry at its tip would make against his eyeball. She imagined the sexually ambiguous first responder, stuffed into her uniform like an over-filled sausage, crying out in horror at such a blatant assault on the boy. Not now, she though, it was already bad enough that he was in his tank top. The responder would probably see the bruises, and she's be back where she started the month; sitting in her nicotine-stained living room biting her tongue across from that sickeningly polite nigger CPS agent. She wondered if life would be better as a squirrel. Just freely climbing trees and fucking until inevitably some drunken teenager blasts your skull into pieces with a BB shot from a freshly stained wood deck. If those chinks are right about reincarnation or whatever they call it, she thought, she'd like to come back as a squirrel and force my way into someone's home just to live the chaos from the other side. Taking another drag, she contemplated how she was going to explain to Ralph that the insurance would probably be going up again, only giving a short pause to consider in what creative way he'd beat the shit out of her when he got in from the paper processing plant.

>>18033167
fucking kek

>>18033208
Based collaboration.
>>18033257
Not when you have an autistic anon around.

>>18033201
this isn't better

>>18033167
>mfw Squirrel logs on

>>18033167
Kekked

>>18032913
For sale
One squirrel, never used

>>18033167
brilliant. soul
>>18033201
hackwork. soulless

>>18032913
For sale: meds, never taken

>>18032913
Useless bitch's heart gave out again, had to call the EMS. Now she's sitting out on the stretcher with a damn dart in her mouth. Maybe if she didn't smoke so much her body'd work right. Stinky bitch.

Least my son's still got some good to him. Little shit cracked a squirrel with a rock and he's been showing it off to anyone who's got the eyes to see it. Damn if kids ain't blessed, I wish life was all chasing squirrels. Those were the days.

I gotta make sure to let him live it up before he starts looking at girls, before one sucks the life outta him. Hope the hospital doesn't keep the wife too long. Could use a quick pump. Actually, I always wanted a brother as a kid. Maybe I should lay off the smokes 'til she's back, get my cum swimming right.

>>18032913
Her youngest son held the flaccid squirrel by the tail in victory but it didn't matter. She would still trade him for his father if she could.

>>18032913
my diary desu...

>>18033167

>>18033167
based
>>18033201
MFA in creative writing

>>18033201
>erasing the regionalism from the dialogue
anon why

>>18035718
Poignant

>>18032913
>Look Ma, I avenged your prolapsed pussy

>>18033201
Beat me to it lmao

>>18033547
>caring about sales
ngmi