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/lit/ Open Mic MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 00:57:23 2015 No.6785484 [Reply] [Original]

Let's get another one of these going.
Post whatever you want
We're talking prose, poetry, spoken word, whatever
Also post a critique if you can I can only read so fast.

>>	MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 00:59:35 2015 No.6785488 Haiku Only posting late The screen flashes on my face As I waste away

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:00:57 2015 No.6785493 >>6785484 Yo Yo motherfuckers /lit/ is my main i visit r9k too this is my rap because you suck dick just hear my beats feel them with your ass like the feel with no GF like the pretentious cunts who read DFW YO YO YO!

>>	MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:01:51 2015 No.6785502 >>6785493 No flow in either rhythm or rhyme I'd say keep working on it anon!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:06:12 2015 No.6785519 >>6785484 In an unjust jealous rage she cursed me! I never speak first, but always have the last word. Who am I?

Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:07:58 2015 No.6785522

>>6785484
No title for this yet.

I open my eyes
I try to see but I'm blinded by the white light
I can't remember how
I can't remember why
I'm lying here tonight

And I can't stand the pain
And I can't make it go away
No, I can't stand the pain

How could this happen to me?
I made my mistakes
Got nowhere to run
The night goes on
As I'm fading away
I'm sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me?

Everybody's screaming
I try to make a sound but noone hears me
I'm slipping off the edge
I'm hanging by a thread
I wanna start this over again

So I try to hold onto a time when nothing mattered
And I can't explain what happened
And I can't erase the things that I've done
No, I can't

How could this happen to me?
I made my mistakes
Got nowhere to run
The night goes on
As I'm fading away
I'm sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me?

I made my mistakes
Got nowhere to run
The night goes on
As I'm fading away
I'm sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me?

MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:08:37 2015 No.6785527

>>6785502
lemme try a rap

Sitting on my porch chugging rumchata
staring at some honies like
oh i gotcha
Looking to get fucked
trying get dis dick sucked
but I'm not
so I stop
and go home to beat my meat
and treat my neets
To rhymes I wrote in jest
this shit ain't the best

>>	MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:11:25 2015 No.6785538 >>6785522 I like how the repetition contributes to the motif off continued mistakes, almost like something bad has happened, is happening and will continue happening. Is that what you were going for?

Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:11:33 2015 No.6785539

Listen, Listen
Real nigga I got y'all
Hit up and eat up a nigga, hot dog
AK-47 shoot a nigga
Fuck you and your crew nigga
Ya'll niggas weak as fuck
I come through in a pink ass truck
Big rims, big body
Ya'll niggas 12 gauge shottie
Pow, pow to a nigga dome
Run up through a nigga home
Nigga know his bitch a bitch
And I'm a dog I give that bitch a bone
Arf, Arf, bark, bark can't see a nigga in the dark, dark
Hit a nigga quick, nigga got a problem, make his bitch lick a dick
I'm mothafuckin goon ass nigga you don't really wanna fuck with

>>	MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:13:33 2015 No.6785542 >>6785539 Like the onomatopoeia at the end, if this had some gunshots backing it this might be some Chief Keef shit

MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:21:16 2015 No.6785565

free verse

wandering around downtown at 3 in morning
groggy and sloppy and looking like shit
I saw a homeless man begin to approach me
I knew what he wanted but I didn't have the coordination to brush him off
So I kept on stumbling, rumbling down the streets
Ignoring the calls of the city and my friends
as I continued on my own
maybe one day they'll catch up to me
or maybe one day I'll realize I'm the one trying to catch up
either way the drinks were strong and I'll forgot my rambling tomorrow
I'll always have tomorrow to forget yesterdays thoughts

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:24:32 2015 No.6785578 >>6785542 its some odd future freestlyle..., bitch

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:28:29 2015 No.6785591 >>6785578 It's not juvenile enough for what ODD Future go for. Like it needs to be more graphic and random to qualify for their sound. I know they're trying to be more mature now but they still love that scat humor and gore

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:29:44 2015 No.6785594 >>6785578 nevermind just realized it was an actual odd future song. god damn they used to be real shitty

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:32:24 2015 No.6785603 >>6785594 it's not a song lol. it's a freestyle that tyler did as a joke because he doesn't appreciate the expectation of having to freestyle.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:33:34 2015 No.6785608 >>6785603 ah I was always more of an Earl fan so I'm real ignorant to what Tyler's up to. Dudes a decent producer though

>>	MC FAGGOT Mon Jul 6 01:44:55 2015 No.6785642 Looks like we had some hiphop and Prose For tonight's open Mic It's time for this MC to knock himself out with a stiff drink. Stay creative and keep practicing those writing muscles before they atrophy into nothing

Anonymous Mon Jul 6 01:48:22 2015 No.6785661
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Sterile

She was the smiling Sistine ceiling,
the lilac halo of tear-brimmed eyes,
the sweet sigh of budding blossoms.

Now ethanol burned her nostrils.
Intravenous veins snaked
her Eden skin--

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 02:06:04 2015 No.6785725 >>6785484 Pillows of the great apocalypse are devout Christians Together however they make great Muslims Further apart they make even better Jews A combined power without approach.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 02:07:38 2015 No.6785730 http://vocaroo.com/i/s0kfGsnHKdbM

Anonymous Mon Jul 6 02:17:38 2015 No.6785757

Intro for book I just finished. Proud as fuck of it.

One groovy afternoon after another clouded my mind. A hazy cloud containing memories of days long past went by.Words etched on the cloud read: That fateful day. In I peered, deep into the recess of my memory and yet information I dearly desired drifted further and further away. Was it really me? I didn’t seem the type to do such a thing. I mean I guess I never really devoted time to really get to know myself; spent too much time drinking and drugging my brain dead. But mass murder? That just didn’t strike me as me.

Waffles and socks Mon Jul 6 02:55:59 2015 No.6785882

HE HAD MONEY,
SHE HAD NONE,
HE WAS LONELY,
SHE WAS FUN,

LIFE IS SLOW,
UNLESS YOUR WHITE,
LIFE IS POINTLESS,
YES YOUR RIGHT.

KILL YOURSELF, FAGGOT I WANNA WATCH.
KILL YOURSELF, FAGGOT I WANT A WATCH.
CAN I RECORD THIS?
I NEED MONEY.
CAN I RECORD THIS?
AINT IT FUNNY?

YOU AINT SHIT.
BITCH YOU AINT.
FUCK YOU BITCH.
SNIFF MY TAINT.

LIFE IS JUST
SO DAMN SLOW
LIFE IS JUST
SO DAMNNNNNNN
FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK

FUCK ME FUCK ME FUCK ME FUCK ME.

LIFE IS SOO

FUCKKKKKK

LIFE IS SOO LIFE IS SO LIFE IS SO LIFE IS SO.

FUCKK FUCK FUCK.

YOU WANT TO FUCK?

I KNOW YOU DO.

YOU WANT TO FUCK?

I DO TOO.

FUCK FUCK FUCK.
FUCK FUCK FUCK

LIFE IS SLOW.
UNLESS YOUR WHITE.
LIFE IS SLOW.
UNTIL ITS NIGHT

FUCK FUCK FUCK

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 02:57:09 2015 No.6785888 H-Hey guys it's my first open mike night and... I forgot my c-comedy note cards. S-sorry. Bye.

Waffles and socks Mon Jul 6 02:59:24 2015 No.6785899

GIVE ME A WINDOW.
I WANT TO SEE.
GIVE ME A WINDOW.
THERES A TREE.

WHERES MY MOTHER?

shes dead.

WHERES MY MOTHER?

Shes dead.

WHERES MY FATHER?

He's dead too.

WHERES MY SISTER.

On her knees.

WHERES MY BROTHER?

look at that tree.

FUCK FUCK FUCK.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 03:01:02 2015 No.6785901 >>6785519 You're Echo

>>	Waffles and socks Mon Jul 6 03:03:49 2015 No.6785907 LIKE ME, HATE ME, FUCK ME, RATE ME, TELL YOUR FRIENDS. TELL THEM ALL FUCK ME. FUCK THEM. FUCK ME, FUCK THEM. LETS JUST FUCK, ONE LAST TIME, LETS JUST FUCK. FUCK FUCK FUCK. fuck fuck fuck FUCK FUCK FUCK fuck fuck fuck ARGHHHHHHHHH FUCKKKKK

>>	Waffles and socks Mon Jul 6 03:05:17 2015 No.6785912 SOMETIMES I STARE AT MYSELF SOMETIMES I STARE AT MY WEALTH SOMETIMES I STAIR AT MY STEALH SOME DIMES I STARE AT MYSELF FUCK FUCK FUCK.

>>	Waffles and socks Mon Jul 6 03:06:38 2015 No.6785915 JUDAS WAS MY FATHER SATAN WAS MY MOTHER MARY WAS MY SISTER NOW THEIR DEAD. FUCK FUCK FUCK

>>	Anonymous Mon Jul 6 05:08:27 2015 No.6786137 Detailed anger scribbled etchings of a world gone mad. Peaking echoes fluctuate within me Joyous air horns blare me with glee I’m a duty flower flying into despair

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