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Autumn comes, and still
The heat intrudes upon me --
Always discontent.

>> No.7099591

>>7099585
sounds like something a "melancholic" 16 year old would write on their tumblr

>> No.7099594

>>7099585
you suck dude this disnt deserve its own thread

>> No.7099603

>>7099585
yeah this is awful please go dude

>> No.7099604

>>7099594
I'm not OP—but I think this is supposed to be a haiku thread!!

>> No.7099609
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7099609

>>7099585
Watching white moon face
The stars never feel anger
Blah, blah, blah, the end

>> No.7099614

>>7099585
My god, this is shit;
Anon, you fucking faggot.
Kill yourself now please.

>> No.7099618

>>7099604
no, haikus are lazy trash for tryhards who cant write actual works an d weeaboos

>> No.7099624

>>7099591
>>7099594
>>7099603
>>7099614
I felt the op needed to have a haiku as a matter of course; I literally wrote it in like a minute.
Contribute a haiku if you can do better.

>> No.7099631

>>7099614
>>7099624
I did.

>> No.7099638
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7099638

>>7099585
Here to read haikus
And using yr hand you found
I was trolling

>> No.7099659
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7099659

>>7099638

>I was trolling
>I (1) was (2) tro (3) lling (4) ...
>...
>4

>> No.7099689

>>7099659
:DDDDDD

>> No.7099700
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7099700

The apparition
Of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet

>> No.7099708

Do please reprice her;
Too much does she refuse all,
When he can have more.

>> No.7099712
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7099712

Thumb, pointer, oh no
Let's try again: pinky, thumb, shit...
Could be jacking off

>> No.7099735

A nipple, is it?
I turn to google that shit—
"Saturn's hexagon."

>> No.7099743

>>7099700
BLACK BOUGH
BLACK BOUGH

>> No.7099758

A haiku should be
more than a syllable ex
ercise you posers

>> No.7099768

>>7099758

line
line
punchline

>> No.7099782

love comes to me quick
it will be cast to the wind
now, i do not care

>> No.7099786

At full fathom five
Language moribund, whiteflamed
In sunkcunt gutters

How's that one?

>> No.7099787

>>7099758
Seld feprecating
humor ayy lmao bada
bing yr fucking great

>> No.7099793

BANG FURY'S HEADLIGHTS ON
TRUMPET OF DEADLONG REDCURVES
O HOW IT ALL SWIRLS!

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7099800

Lo hanging ta tas
Nipples like a beer bottle
Scrape the dirty floor

Mrs. Monkey-nips
Likes to pretend she never
Drinks and lies and farts

>> No.7099825

Ample sand plastic
Luke warm basking fair net twine
Dawn sinks yellow dread

>> No.7099833

>>7099825
Bloated bodies twitch
They bend and break as we watch
Meaning they break wind

Epilogue for that
It was a fart joke you see
Will this end with enough

NO

>> No.7099834

>>7099800
moar
>>7099825
wot

>> No.7099839
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7099839

>>7099833

>> No.7099847

a day of toil
the suffering of hope
wake up again

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7099857

>>7099847
This looks okay
But maybe it's my accent
Or you're retarded

>> No.7099863

>>7099847
> 5 / 6 / 4
FAILURE

>> No.7099881

>>7099585
Abomination
Unconventionality
Haiku by white men.

>> No.7099903

Twigs lie between them
Devil's voice in flowing storm
The winds clear the land

>> No.7099925

>>7099857
who is that godess?

>> No.7099931

>>7099925
Lolita.

>> No.7100150

Strafe the in-between:
Two trees whose canopies join,
Promise birds aren't there.

>> No.7100324

I shan't voice today
My displeasure through rhyme, no
I feel fine frankly

>> No.7100381

>>7099925
>>7099931
http://www.vice.com/read/phonies-0000213-v19n6
possibly Tsarina Merrin
tsarinamerrin.tumblr.com/

>> No.7100389

>>7099786
>in sunkcunt gutters
Damn, that's good.

>>7099793
>BANG FURY'S HEADLIGHTS ON
>deadlong redcurves
Love it

>>7099782
This one is good, too.

You guys are pretty good.

>> No.7100411

She punches the switch
And the whole night screams to life
We are out of there

>> No.7100419

Haikus are insane
Nobody writes this shit
Unironically

>> No.7100448

>>7100419
Sometimes the mood takes
me-- it's fun to place creative
restrictions sometimes.

>> No.7100465

I love that one song...

where it's like: BWOW! DOO DAH DOOOOO

I know you've heard it

>> No.7100466

I glide across the bed
Silence, then a sigh
The sun is in my eyes

>> No.7100469

I pick up the pen
And start to write a Haiku
This is so meta

>> No.7100471

Only faggots think
A haiku is just sticking
To set syllables

>> No.7100482

>>7100469
Writing about same
Is as a nail stamped in wood.
Rapping is as bad.

>> No.7100483

A mother, a child and her toy baby carriage
A ripe young woman passes
A squeaky hinge and the tapping of tiny shoes

>> No.7100485

>>7100471
>A single ripple
>Nimbly slips between the ships
>Look how smart I am

>> No.7100495

A sweaty, endless sun
strips of light between the shutters
ventilated wet hair, restless

>> No.7100506

A day's busywork mentally slashing
the memory of a loved one, leaves
only small sharp pleasures.

>> No.7100512

Old pond,
frog jumps in
- splash

>> No.7100518

Clouds drifting off:
The sight of
Moonlit heavens.

>> No.7100534

Juxtaposition
Is haikus' defining trait.
Not talk of nature.

>> No.7100539

Pale tits, warm and pink
Two summer cherry blossoms;
Wet bleeding flowers.

>> No.7100540

>>7100534
This is ignorant
Wrong, too, you dumbass faggot
Eat a throbbing dick

>> No.7100545

>>7100540
Contrarian dolt;
Its first statement may be false;
Its second isn't.

>> No.7100554
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7100554

>/r9k/ tries to haiku

>> No.7100560

My throbing penis
Thrust in OP's boy pussy
Less gay than haiku

>> No.7100561

>>7100554
Unwell obsession--
To ponder over others,
In place of yourself.

>> No.7100610

>>7099585
Can you not do that
autistic syllable thing?
It's not even real.

>> No.7100637

Sitting on the loo
Black and tar-like it oozes
At least fifteen wipes

>> No.7101884

>>7099585
here is one I wrote a while ago.

the autumn leaves drip
small beads of dew and warm rain
cum from my hard cock

>> No.7102692

A shadow through the crack
Its hard to swollow
a shiver rises from my knees

>> No.7102748

>>7099825

Now, this one's too abstract, I feel. I love expressionism, but there needs to be some basic coherency - or anyways, you need to show me you're a good writer before you go off the deep end.

>>7099903

This one's good.

>>7100411

Love it.

>>7100466

Utterly stereotyped. Break the barriers, my man.

>>7100539

I also rather like this one, though I can't say it's not overdone. "Wet bleeding flower." Very nice, even if it just combines a couple traditional poetic attributes of the vagina.

>> No.7102760

Haiku in English
are not five, seven, then five
syllables laddies

>> No.7102771

Rumbling - in the water closet
blasting abstract asspressions.
A toilet paper controtionist.

>> No.7102781

>>7102760
underrated post

>> No.7102783

look, here comes a plane
WHOOSH, SMASH, CRASH, BOOM! SCREAMING, DEATH
never forget this

>> No.7102804

september morning,
rush hour traffic, city streets,
then the towers fell

>> No.7102849

>>7100554
>Text says please respond,
>Seen and ignored, her pants drop,
>Chad's cock penetrates.
I hate the world

>> No.7103464

Eyes shut, see black grain
Muscles trembling, ground shaking
Numbness to needles

>> No.7103485

>>7103464
Edgy edge edge edge
Doggy style farty farts
Oops I just went over

>> No.7103490

petals on a breeze
warm currents lift them away:
sapphire bluets

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>>7103490
A fag posts to /lit/
A flower poem of shit
And thinks ohhh mayy gawwd

>> No.7103502

ubazakura
saku ya rogo no
omoiide

>> No.7103507

>>7103485
all these dank meme queens
shitting on top of your dreams
summer almost over

>> No.7103512

>>7103501
it's actually a poem about losing one's virginity

>> No.7103516

summer wind
through an open door;
a piercing cry

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7103534

>>7103502
Look at the moon child
His gibbering monkey talk
His teeny phallus

>>7103507
The summer now fades
A sunset of shit posters
We now part, John Green

>> No.7103543

>>7099585
Callouses burn as i take off
These grissled workboots
Yellow freckled mosquitoes roam

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>>7103512
A boy's fantasy
His mangina spread and pierced
And pushed in his poop

>>7103516
Passing wind
I'm not a bad guy
Four syllables

>> No.7103554

THE ROCK DIVIDES THE STREAM IN TWO
AND BOTH WITH MIGHT AND MAIN
GO TUMBLING DOWN THE WATERFALL
BUT WELL I KNOW THE TWAIN
SHALL SOON UNITE AGAIN

NOT A HAIKU AND NOT MINE AND IM USING CAAJDEBNAFKLDS
CANCER

>> No.7103557

>>7103543
Meter? Who cares, huh?
I do what I want, fgt!
It's "grizzled" you dunce