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12750128

Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:37:25 2019 No.12750128 [Reply] [Original]

Critique this passage.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:38:18 2019 No.12750134 >>12750128 10/10

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:41:04 2019 No.12750152 >>12750128 i can't, it's perfect

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:41:04 2019 No.12750153 >>12750128 fuck tolstoy

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:42:03 2019 No.12750160 >>12750128 >this was published and you aren’t Well, I’m going to suicide

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:42:42 2019 No.12750165 >>12750153 You know, I'm actually curious to know how Tolstoy - as great a writer as he was - would write about a blowjob.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:44:16 2019 No.12750175 >>12750128 The sudden change of tone really throws me

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:44:32 2019 No.12750179 There’s nothing to critique. Nice troll thread dickhead. Maybe next time you can post a passage from Tolstoy or maybe Joyce and tell us to critique it

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:46:58 2019 No.12750195 >>12750128 Is Benjamin Franklin a character in the novel? Is he referring to the historical one? Or is he simply thinking of “hunna dolla bills”?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:47:00 2019 No.12750196 >>12750179 shut up, queer

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 14:50:02 2019 No.12750219 >>12750128 >the sac of my balls >the SAC of my BALLS >THE SAC OF MY BALLS

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 18:39:29 2019 No.12751420 >>12750219 >A whole nother >A whole NOTHER >A WHOLE NOTHER

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 18:47:57 2019 No.12751470 >>12750128 Sperg-tastic, truly.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 12 19:16:49 2019 No.12751617 the hole of my ass the hair of my pubic region the phones which are to be worn on the head