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What does it mean when your posts/writing are criticized as “word salad”?

>> No.12818859

Brevity is the soul of wit, anon. Learn to get to the fucking point.

>> No.12818864

>>12818855
I kinda want to read this, do you have a PDF?

>> No.12818866

>>12818855
If you know what you intended, have a concrete idea, it means that the people reading you are stupid and/or you're not skilled at writing clearly. If you had no concrete idea to begin with, you were just bloviating in jargon to make yourself feel smarter.

>> No.12818872

>>12818855
>1 post by OP
Today OP is a faggot

>> No.12818982

>>12818855
Who's the girl?

>> No.12818984

>>12818982
Me ^_^

>> No.12819000

>>12818864
I think it’s free on Amazon

>> No.12819002

>>12818982
It's a sissified guy on the cover, not a girl. In this world the blacks have sissified all the white males or something. The plot is that this sissified guy has to protect his perfect pure virgin sister from the appetite of the buff black soldiers on a rampage around the country. He does this by sacrificing himself to get gangraped by the blacks.

Weird fetish

>> No.12819015

>>12819000
No, it's something like $3. I know it's chump change, but I don't want to associate my credit card/name with this shit.

>> No.12819026

>>12819002
btw I didn't read the "book" I only read the blurb on Amazon, just so you know

>> No.12819033
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>>12818864

>> No.12819041

>>12818855
>What does it mean when your posts/writing are criticized as “word salad”?
Could mean you take forever to get to the point. Could mean that you're being pedantic. It's a criticism used by brainlets more often than not, so I wouldn't be too worried about it.

>> No.12819708

>>12818855
Someone drop the epub so that we can be done with it.

>> No.12819757

>>12819002
>>12819026
Sure buddy, or should I say gurl?

>> No.12819783
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>>12818855
fucking weird book, reeks of psychosis

>> No.12819790

>>12819783
its unrealistic. i think other countries would immediately invade the US if black people took over and enslaved whites. The international community, Canada/UK/EU would not allow it to happen

>> No.12819866

>>12819790
EU/UK is in the process of being enslaved by Muslims and Canada is... well, Canada.

>> No.12819880

>>12819866
Lol, if there's one social group who's political power is nearly zero it's probably muslims.

>> No.12819888

>>12818864
Seconded

>>12818855
It means that the reader is having trouble jumping from one word to another. Usually this is because they have bad reading comprehension. But in some cases it's the fault of the writer for not developing their ideas, and instead offering obscure hints at what they are thinking, as if the reader could read their mind, or held all the same associations for those words.

>> No.12819894

>>12819866
it wouldn't stop a massive international incident and intervention if a sexual race war occurred in the US

>> No.12819896

>>12819880
Give it time, they will only grow bolder as long as they keep getting pampered. Also the mayor of London is a muzzie.

>> No.12819904

>>12819894
There's a sexual race war going on right now and nobody gives a shit.

>> No.12819912

>>12819894
What you don't seem to get is that the author has a massive boner for this fantasy. It's not a prediction.

>> No.12819923

>>12819904
Not really man. Interracial sex is still rare, and who cares Breh, Black women can be hot/intellectual too

>> No.12819929

aren't like 80% of these books a marketing experiment and whether they can pass machine generated stuff with a little editor input as actual books? Chuck Tingle comes to mind, because no human being can generated THAT much garbage THAT quickly

>> No.12819932

>>12818855
Every time I see this cover, it pisses me off. Every idiot knows you put the panties on over the garter straps, not the straps over the panties. Otherwise they get stuck in the straps when you try to take them off

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>>12819929
i like it in small doses, read too many at once and it becomes unfunny

>> No.12819947

>>12819932
>#sissyadvice

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>>12819790
>Canada/UK/EU would not allow it to happen
>if black people took over and enslaved whites
>Canada/UK/EU would not allow it to happen

>> No.12819968

Is it true that people with a sissy fetish have a higher IQ than people who don't? (Fact, it is true).

>> No.12819981
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>>12818855
Verbose and overly technical and detailed writing.

>>12819033
>Captain Soul cried, his wide African nostrils flaring with passion

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>>12819033
>smooth jazz playing in the background

>> No.12820066

>>12819896
Behold, my evidence of a muslim takeover: muslims, one of the most persecuted groups in europe is being pampered somehow. Not only that: the mayor of one of the most multicultural cities in the world is brown, this is a shock.

>> No.12820071

>>12819968
This is some 3019 bait.

>> No.12820072

>>12820066
>muslims, one of the most persecuted groups in europe
LMAO

>> No.12820073

>>12819783
>planet of the apes script

>> No.12820088

>>12820072
>Actually, whites are the most oppressed group
Kill yourself. You're probably a fucking burger high on breitbart and /pol/posting.

>> No.12820090

>>12820071
According to some studies done by Blanchard and related psychologists AGP transsexuals and transgenders have a higher than average IQ, somewhere between 110 and 120. But the sample sizes were so small, the conclusion is dubious.

>> No.12820097

>>12820090
That would explain why trannies seem drawn to extremist (IE redpilled) ideologies like acceleration and third positionism. Also why they're read on Evola, Hoppe, Land etc

>> No.12820098

>>12820088
You're just a pussy dude. You repeat the prog line because you're afraid of being labeled a racist

>> No.12820111

>>12820088
exit the cathedral

>> No.12820122

>>12820097
Unironically that does seem like the thing a slightly above average but not too above average to be considered intelligent person would be attracted to.

>> No.12820132

>>12820111
>>12820098
Yeah, couldn't have anything to do with the facts, must be that I haven't garbled the redpill down hard enough.

If you're afraid of an oppressed group with little systemic power you're a fucking pussy, not to even mention that nothing is as cucked as giving yourself up to your 'volk'.

>> No.12820144

>>12820132
>Yeah, couldn't have anything to do with the facts
Fancy posting some of these facts?

>> No.12820147

>>12820132
You're repeating exactly what you,re allowed to say. You're not antiracist because of 'the facts' youre antiracist because if the government wont outright jail you like in Britain for 'hate speech', you will lose all social capital.

It is beyond hilarious seeing you try to posture as tough or intellectual while being a literal mouthpiece for an establishment that's assfucking you

>> No.12820211

>>12820147
https://books.google.be/books?hl=nl&lr=&id=BfelDgAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=muslims+in+politics+europe&ots=JAaUu35E9L&sig=BcqUxLvA47ZN3yZsEVHy9xhT9N0#v=onepage&q=muslims%20in%20politics%20europe&f=false
https://www.politico.eu/article/with-anti-muslim-laws-france-denmark-europe-enters-new-dark-age/
https://www.politico.eu/article/germany-islam-chemnitz-far-right-demonstration/
https://muse.jhu.edu/article/258502
>>12820147
The fact that there are very active and very succesful anti-muslim parties and political activists is pretty much enough to prove your comment wrong and mine correct.
also: Muh establishment. Bloody burgers.

>> No.12820217

>>12820211
Also to add unto that: Most who were actually banned from the UK just so happened to be literal neo-nazis, who'dve thunk?

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>>12820066
>muslims, one of the most persecuted groups in europe

>> No.12820240

>>12820223
I just got owned so hard by this epic meme, fuck of with your white victimhood bullshit.

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>>12820066
>muslims, one of the most persecuted groups in europe

>> No.12820252

Who would have thought a thread like this would attract /pol/acks? This is a surprise to literally no one.

>> No.12820261

>>12820211
There are Muslim mass child rape gangs that the police cover up in like a dozen of your cities you absolutely cucked britbong.

>> No.12820262

>>12820211
A link to 'Dilemmas of Inclusion' is not a fact.
Politico articles are not facts.
A review from a book of 2008 is not a fact.

Consider the recent CJEU decisions that have essentially implemented new blasphemy laws.

>> No.12820283

still hoping for a pdf

>> No.12820312

>>12818855
I've never seen the number of words advertised as a selling point

>> No.12820406

>>12820261
Lol since didnt the British cover up a child sex ring not that long ago

>> No.12820453

>>12820283
Why would you even want to read that? It’s degenerate gay cuckold erotica. Put the sóy down ffs

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>>12820066
>muslims one of the most persecuted groups in europe

>> No.12820568

>>12820240
>whites
>not victims
>bullshit
if i put these 3d glasses on i can almost see the nose protruding through my monitor!

>> No.12820584

>>12820453
its funny
isnt having a good snort at some bad fiction allowed on this board?

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>>12818855
it means incoherent writing with words that have no relation to each other. word salad is symptomatic of the mental degradation of the brain's logic typically seen in schizophrenics. Whoever is saying that it means verbose or overwritten is wrong, period.

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>>12818855
tfw this is actually a real book available on amazon.

>> No.12820614

>>12820597
But people use it figuratively in that way to shittalk writing they dislike all the time. Have you never seen anyone on this board call Phenomonology of Spirit "word salad"?

>> No.12820637

>>12820614
In my opinion, they're using "word salad" wrong. Being overwritten is still coherent. The definition is literally in in the phrase's name. A jumbled mix up grab bag of words is not coherent, period. Although I can understand people calling phenomenology of the spirit word salad considering people do insult Hegel as some rambling schizo.

>> No.12820645

>>12820614
hegel was schizophrenic

>> No.12820728

>>12818855
Are the blacks socialist or fascist in this timeline?

>> No.12820829

Hot naked black men. I want to be sissified. I want my ass filled up with boiling hot black caulk. I want to feel my belly fill up and warm shit press out between my legs. I want to be fucked.

>> No.12820863

>>12820829
if your calcium is black and hot you should have taken it out of the microwave sooner

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>>12819033
>>12819783
Can someone tell me the appeal of the so called ghetto speech? I can understand the appeal of exotic and foreign men of races unlike your own but I’ll never get the attraction to the exaggerated thuggish like speech and mannerism for said race (often fake and written by a write author).

Intelligence AND being a hunky dominant black/brown/red/bkue man can go hand in hand, I don’t know why element is forgoed for the other. Is it a degradation thing?

>> No.12821908

>>12820453
The opening lines say something about the protagonist having narrowed eyes, wearing a hooded cloak, and walking with a staff on the side of a mountain. He's shortly revealed to be wearing a legally compulsory pink and blue wig under the hood.

There's a subtle kind of "but actually I'm not gay" going on here that is hilarious. "Whitney Ryan" is 100% a guy based on those gary stuish opening lines, but not just that - he's also a guy who thinks he's straight. He's pretty normal. I'm a bit above average in intelligence. Spiritual but not religious. He probably has political opinions that are this or that side of center. Writes books about being raped by black men while dressed as a girl, but it's unwilling, so it's actually piercing social satire when you get right down to it. An all round okay guy who you have met hundreds of times in different forms, each of which thinks he's a little bit special.

>> No.12821922

>>12820728
Literal slavery is pre-capitalist, so it really doesn't compare to either. You could call it a command economy, but the question of shortages or inefficiency wouldn't really come up, since the slave-owners would not be exposed to that.

>> No.12822350

>>12820887
It's monster fetish. You're not fit to be a hero and no heroine wants to be saved by you, so you willingly give yourself to the monstergirls, dragons, demons, robots or orcs (niggers).

>> No.12822357

>>12822350
So it’s a humiliation thing? Monsters don’t always have to be unintellectual.

>> No.12822378

>>12822357
>So it’s a humiliation thing?
Yes, though I'm not into it. There's also the aspect of conquest, which I'm into more often than not.
Doesn't matter if it's demons conquering nuns, paladins purifying demons, whites conquering or blacks conquering. Women have to be conquered. It can even be nuanced, with the male phallos conquering women directly through dickgirls. The shame of it is that some fools think they can embody it with current technology apparatus.

Conquest is a powerful theme and fetish.

>> No.12822400

>>12819033
I don't remember this part of Gravity's Rainbow

>> No.12822414

I find it sort of funny that people found a way to push interracialism on /lit/ too

>> No.12822424

>>12822378
I understand the conquest mentality more than the humiliation. However, is this not to say that the desire to be conquered is more a feminine mindset than a masculine one?

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>>12818855

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>> No.12822523

>>12819033
>>12819783
Why do I feel this kind of thing must be popular on /pol/ ?

>> No.12822534

>>12822523
Because there are a lot of jewish trannies shilling on /pol/?

>> No.12822955

>>12822424
>However, is this not to say that the desire to be conquered is more a feminine mindset than a masculine one?
Conquer your Anima and find out.

>> No.12822965

>>12820066
Mosques aren't being bulldozed. Jews have only one enemy faction in Europe and it isn't the muslims.

>> No.12823007

>>12822523
for a white man to read this, is this the equivalent of a woman fantasizing about being raped?

>> No.12823096

>>12822414
Nice blog post

>> No.12823324

Do (non-racist) people who enjoy this blacked fetish even understand how racist and degrading it is to black people? It's literally no different than bestiality.

>> No.12823346

>>12823324
the whole point of blacked style cuckolding is that the nigger is worth no more than a dildo
>look at how weak this ytboi is
>lmao hes so fucking weak i need to use this nigger of all things

>> No.12823403

>>12823346
It seems to vary from person to person though. For some it is "Fucking nasty animal is fucking a woman. I enjoy this." while for some it is more like "I am pitiful and they are strong, they deserve it more than me." I've seen some other describe it as that they became interested in due solely to the fact that it was spammed.

>> No.12823473

>>12823403
the blacks don't get angry about this or even care because 1
>muh dick
and
>where da white wimmin at reparashuns nao ytboi
its just a bit to much of an abstract concept for them to get