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>main antagonist was name-dropped in the first chapter as a one of the few boogeyman that old people uses to scare children
>later, protagonist read legend about him in one of the in-universe book
>he made physical appearance in 1/3 of the story
>he was confirmed to be main antagonist in middle of the story
Is that a good writing?

>> No.19236272

>>19236205
Pretty simple and formulaic, but that's not to say it can't be done well and produce a popular novel. Good writing is what makes good writing, not a few lines of greentext.

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19236619

If you're being paid ten bucks to translate the Russian bootleg of a Korean mobile phone game, then that's exactly the kind of writing your discerning audience will love.