/lit/ - Literature

I'm pretty sure he would have noticed, op.

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/fit/
/mu/ (I have been on this the longest... Since about '07)
/tv/

I don't really trip that much. Only sometimes.

>>4394004
;)

>>4392000
putting on a trip adds nothing to your strength of argument. you are still acting quite childishly.

I was referring to the fact that you kind of ordered me to listen to them. You used the imperative of "to listen" as if it was something that I should do. Pardon me for misinterpreting your grammar.

>that's because you're a pleb.
You got me. Well done.

>post effeminate romanticism
I'm just imagining you scoffing and snorting at the joke you made like that kid with braces that nobody really likes who wont stop talking about runescape or some shit.

>>4376955
don't listen to this frazzle

>>4375272
I'm pretty sure there was a decent Japanese version...

:^)

>>4372944
i guess I'll write a book about a young boy who lives under the stairs and gets a letter from a wizard school telling him he's the chosen one or some shot like that then

Big nurse has big piggie tits

>>4372909
/mu/tant for a couple of years

I love that shit. I love ambient and minimal techno and drone and micro house and field recordings.

I feel I'm writing what I like but get conscious that it wont be received well

>>4372905
i like doing that

>>4372873
>bob ross

Subtle par right there

>>4372860
that's a nice thought.

>>4372839
the cost of beauty is something I had scribbled down somewhere at least

>>4372839
yes.
That was my intention.

>>4372825
hehe you are a funny guy

>>4372808
why would you say that?
What led you to this conclusion?
I would consider myself well read.

This is the first page btw (with the rattling that deep&edgy was moaning about)

Terribly written yet entertaining nonetheless.
A few genuine laugh out loud moments.
The black humour is definitely interesting and thought provoking at times, but it strays too far beyond ridiculous much of he time

>>4372782
I'll have a think.
I want to create an obsessive and love drunk protagonist who slowly falls into despair and ruin and loses his value for beauty and forgets why he is living.

The point was he sees her again later in the story and hates her as he would a whore.

>>4372757
>>4372758

I try to stick by this rule, but the male gazey part is the only part that reveals any character in that particular excerpt

>>4372749
I guess I may as well call him Holden too.

>>4372734
Thankyou for your input

>>4372710
don't laugh too much

>>4372714
I posted an image of a dictionary definition proving you wrong.

>>4372709
i guess I'll do that.

Thanks for the advice