/lit/ - Literature

>>813635
Yeah, we've began working a way around that.

>>813623
Go for it.

I'm fine with most of /lit/'s critique.

>>813582
Yeah, that was all we've wrote. I'll start writing the first part tomorrow. And it's going to be more of a short story, not a full-blown novel.

>>813564
I guess we'd start it with a summary of what the man who delivers the books is out to do?

>>813532
Alright. Our basic plot is that these two men, very good friends, each get a notebook. Whatever one man writes in his book, happens to the other.

>>813529
What? I don't know what-

oh. now I see.

>>813514
Eh, he was rather tired.

>>813498
Well, you'd have to know the basic plot to think it interesting or not, right?

>>813489
Well, the first attempt was my partner's, but thanks! We'll keep working on it.

>>813470
Oh. It's shitty? Well, fuck.

>>813457
Alright, thanks. I'll keep all the advice in mind. Thanks, guys. You all are bros. Except the ones that were douches.

>>813435
The first post is rendered irrelevant by the rewrite. Thanks, though.

>>813432
Yeah, I get what you mean. Thanks.

>>813407
It's just an excerpt. She just gets annoyed by him sometimes, and vice versa. She's usually pretty nice.

>>813392
Alright, thanks. I'll keep in mind to avoid adverbs like the Plague. And I do read.

>>813333
Okay, the fuck? Calm down.

The last candle lighting Isaac's study was about to die when he heard a light rapping on the door. He shrugged it off and went back to his reading.
Shortly after, his maid, Mrs. Hester, came in, carrying a small package in one hand.

"What do you want? Can you not see I'm reading here?"
"Oh, big surprise there. There's a package for you," Mrs. Hester explained,s etting the package on the worn table across from Isaac,"though God knows why someone would send you a package, let alone know you. You never leave the house!"
Isaac fumbled with the package nonchalantly, not particularly caring about the maid's comments. "And to whom do I owe my deepest gratitude for this..this grand intrusion on my liesure?"

"How should I know?" the maid asked. "He just gave it to me and walked off."
Isaac sighed "Fine. Thanks. Now, please go?"
The maid did as told, closing the door rather loudly on her way out.
Rewrite. I'm tired, so there's probably a few mistakes.

Hold on, I'll rewrite it.

>>813194
It's just an excerpt.

Co-writer here. Yes, I know it might look like that now, but that's why we're posting it on /lit/. To request your aid.

>>809779
That is a really good idea. I'll talk it over with my partner.

Shit. Unrelated, but I got 3 doubles in a row. A sign?

>>809737
Would it be correct for two people?