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Guys i just realised multicularism and modernisation has failed by so much

Imagine you were in a place where its pure. Every body looked like the same race and all belonged to a big group. You all spoke the same languages in same accent and eat the same foods. You allwere apart of a community that dressed the same (according to class divisions. You had to be in a time where you couldnt fall back on the electronics that have made us less willing to go out amd seek companionship and we stay with our family until we are older. Our family probably pushes us to find love more amd actually help us set up meetings. Our family cares for us too even when we are older. We will never have wasted a single day staring emptyly into this lit up screen, this damn place. We will have live life as it was intended, to be with everyone else for the absolute need for everyone else. We have advanced as a species but we lost our great united spirit. We are too luxury and great gifts are no longer suprising us. We no longer know our neighbours. We are separated from our parents because of school and work.

How could we not see this coming guys? We are truely blinded by our greed of all materialist news.

>>9259688
The sky in Toronto is always grey, all the buildings are high rises and they are all made of concrete so they are grey as well. There is mentally ill ppl literally everywhere i go. Loads of crime that i even personally got yo experience being a hero in, i stopped a bike thief from cutting a bike lock on a main street at 12pm NOON and held my ground despite him kicking and shouting at me, i was lucky to didn't get stab by a needle. My roommate steals from me. Past dark the streets are scary af full of scary ppl.

>top city in the world
Tbh i just wanna live a simple life on the countryside and write my music and songs and poems to my wife and children one day. Toronto is literally a slightly better version of New York but that doesn't make it any less shit.

But id like to be open monded see from ur perspective, where should i travel in Toronto that you think makes it so great?

>19
>Toronto
>Bible - book of Matthew
Gives me some hope in this dark city.

---懒生课烦诗---
早晨离床要听课
何不歌诗讨大乐
温暖被窝照阳光
无理离房受冷刻
现说早起睡何用
课以开始乱我眠
现在要走上课晚
何不闭眼继续懒
Sinomemez

>>9249056
The sounds are physical manifestation of us.

>>9249020
And if you don't believe in souls. How can our body and these memories we have make us who we are. That essence you know is you and only you can truly understand it, what matters to it our body and memories we live through. The soul is life in fact, everything around us is all part of one great soul. We are merely fragments of it experiencing it changing it and be apart of it!

>>9248663
To op. There are physical manifestations of those non physical things. Ideas of these takes on form just like our appearance takes on the form of our soul.

Here is a good start from my 1st year music history course.

>>9234543
"Publicity shoot"
Haha 10/10 genius anon.

Imagine if mary really cheated on jobac then the whole of new testment would be a massive meme. Also if she did what kind of men did you think she cheated with, what would this mysterious father of jesus look and think like?

Too high i forgot to put my name tag sorry.

>>9226365
>>9226373

>>9226329
The darkness of man finds no shadows in the house of God that ever glows of love. Our one and only home in the infinite.

>>>>9226223
Feels God's love extra strong in these dark times. If only you believe, it will be a less lonely world knowing God has always loved and will love you when your finite existence ceases and you return to the eternally rest.

You will know that the troubling fear of death will no longer be lonely and the hardships of life will be shared by our father.

No longer be afraid and suffer the pains of this Edenless place on Earth. We will be at a better place with God, one where the darkness of man have no room in the ever loving light.

I read the Bible while high.

>>9218420
Okay


Thanks guys. If I dont call it poetry can i pass it off as "artful" writing? Like a short short story.

笔哟哎木批

Two Birds and Rain

Two birds were dancing.
One in the sky, one on the ground.
Then raindrops started falling.
And there were no bird in the sky,
nor the ground.

Ground was wet and the plants grew.
Then final raindrops ended.
And birds returned,
to a garden called home.

How can i improve this poem i wrote?

>>9208908
>doesnt do hand writing

I just write cause keeping the ideas pent up makes me a literal madman and depressed and when i write something i am proud of i feel a sense of accomplishment. Like i added a bit more color and beauty to this godforsaken world.

>>9206463
Moar!!!!

>any difference
>cover is clearly different
Yes there is a difference.

I feel if the music fits the mood of the text im reading its a much more well rounded experience. But of it doesnt match mood then it is super distracting.

Write your own poems feg.

Also composer reporting in.
http://benzcomposer.weebly.com/compositions.html

>tfw you tell a girl you write poetry