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"can we not degenerate to name calling? edition"

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>>40695942
oh nice, there's pictures now!

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>>40695975
that CYOA has been around for a LOOOOONG time, and a bunch of different people have redone it a bunch of different ways...

>> No.40696001

>>40695895
Yeah, let's try not to.

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>>40696018
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>> No.40696075

>>40695982

Can I take grumbling 3 times?

>> No.40696102

>>40695997
Wasn't there a version where New Identity had a cooldown of one month instead of three? Or was that just something the author said they would/might do, but never got around to it?

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>>40696075
yes, your mighty grumbling shall indeed be the most expressive

>>40696102
don't know, some of the CYOAs in my collection may be out of date

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>> No.40696175

I pick spirited style for m previous character

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>>40696214

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as usual my other motive, for these threads, to hopefully get feedback on the system I modified to run the Battlemage CYOA as a tabletop RPG

it runs in a modded version of the Legend of the Wulin a copy of which can be found here.
>http://www.4shared.com/web/preview/pdf/JNcCvv0d

RPG CONVERSION NOTES(includes a brief on the system)
http://pastebin.com/2R0ML3V7

CHARACTER GENERATION
http://pastebin.com/z5FEsWVa

COMBAT SYSTEM
http://pastebin.com/37ps85zX

WEAPON AND SHIELD STATS
http://pastebin.com/mMP8VP62

ARMOUR STATS
http://pastebin.com/2LLi0eTs

WEABOO FIGHTAN STYLES
http://pastebin.com/zyuuztxj

SPELL STATS BY ELEMENT
FLAME;;;http://pastebin.com/KGtLuwAx
FROST;;;http://pastebin.com/0FSNrtmX
NATURE;;;http://pastebin.com/pcFqd6Yg
LIGHTNING;;;http://pastebin.com/s5RXXDJj
FORCE;;;http://pastebin.com/FqbXZ0AB
UNDEAD;;;http://pastebin.com/1Y5UUfxj
ACOUSTIC;;;http://pastebin.com/vzShwuVm
SHADOW;;;http://pastebin.com/vGt9g6iw
DIVINE;;;http://pastebin.com/ZDnkf2fy
ARCANE;;;http://pastebin.com/fC23mLhM

>> No.40696272

Place
The island and ghost noises

Boon
Nanite cloud and spectral apperations

Friend
Waifu companian
Enemy
The ascendent

Escape plan
Hold tight
Flaw
Bait and switch

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>>40696261
don't forget to bring a towe-erm I mean equipment

>> No.40696274

>>40695954
>Control room
>Portable shield
>KN-900
>Bulkheads
>Silverskulls

The plan is simple: control the sliverskulls' movements, figure out what happened to the facility, and escape before I get killed. Keeping the shield and synth, if possible, would be a nice bonus.

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>>40696273
or minions and mounts, for those that feel they're actually an important part

>> No.40696297

>>40696261
Have you actually gotten any feedback on that in these threads?

>> No.40696332

>>40696297
I did when Battlemage had it's own threads, but none here in the CYOA generals...

when the old Battlemage threads stopped getting posted I just brought it back here hoping for some feedback instead of posting another new thread myself...as is, it's a playable system but I'm not sure if it's properly balanced, it's why I keep posting to ask for input..

>> No.40696369

>>40696332
I hear there's an IRC channel to go with the CYOA Generals. Have you tried asking for feedback there?

>> No.40696375

>>40696122
>Blood
>Rage

Behold, the Contender, the self-defeating sword.

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>>40696377
...
...
>>40696369
for some reason or other I can't access IRC chat from any of my normal computers...

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>> No.40696417

Anybody have that date rape CYOA?

>> No.40696471

Did the author of this ever move past Release Candidates into proper release versions?

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>> No.40696514

>>40695942
>Human
>Plate
>Dagger
>Brutal
>Axe

>Deflection 2
>Dodge -1
>Absorption 2

>Accuracy 7
>Speed 8
>Power 8

>Prowess 200

>> No.40696518

>>40696471
How would that affect the world at large?

>> No.40696520

Are there any Jojo CYOAs?

>> No.40696524

>>40696520
How many times have you asked this?

>> No.40696529

>>40696524
Once. Why?

>> No.40696539

>>40696529
I dunno.

>> No.40696548

>>40696518
Probably not at all, really. Just wondering if it's going basically be forever-beta despite seemingly not getting any further updates.

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>> No.40698106

>>40698064
>>40698086
You just have to ruin things, anon.

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>>40698106
meh, ruining things is kind of my shtick

>> No.40698200

>>40696214
>Ultra light
>Strength: Athlete, 400 pound press
Fuck no.
Do you know how much a 400 pounds over head press is? That's superhuman on roids on nanomachines

>> No.40698234

>>40698200
perhaps it means some other kind of press...I've heard the words leg-press before, is that a different kind of thing?

>> No.40698244

>>40698200
>That's superhuman on roids on nanomachines
Well... Yeah. And?

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>>40698200
>Complaining about realism in a CYOA thread
>A CYOA where you become an alium
>A CYOA where you can have psychic powers, telekinesis, and X-Ray Vision
>A CYOA where you can create attack drones from your body, generate and fire plasma weaponry, or Create clouds of Venom
>And that's the only thing you complain about

>> No.40698362

>>40698262
I think he's complaining about the statement regarding how strong an "athlete" is,

that said, I can lift 100lb over my head, my powerlifter friend says that 200 is the last thing on her warm-up so I just kind of assume >>40698200 was thinking of Kilogrammes which would certainly have been patently ridiculous

>> No.40698376

>>40696417
you need to be more specific

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>tfw you wrote more for the CYOA you're making than for your PhD

>> No.40698424

>>40698362
DYEL.
>OHP 200
>Her
I call absolute bullshit, unless she's a fatty and roiding.

>> No.40698462

>>40698362
>just kind of assume >>40698200(You) was thinking of Kilogrammes which would certainly have been patently ridiculous
and no. I'm well aware of what a pound is.
But no fucking athlete could EVER get even close to pressing 400 pounds above their head.
This guy pushpressed aka. used his legs to drive the bar, and pressed 445.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mlVOfqAgPaE

>> No.40698486

>>40698462
/fit/ pls

>> No.40698516

>>40695997
>and a bunch of different people have redone it a bunch of different ways...
I wish this was still the norm. These days it seems like your average CYOA is a one-person affair and people don't improve it if they want it improved.

The sparkledick graphical drivel probably contributes to this.

>> No.40698529

>>40696018
>Background
Machine Body

>Hardware
Armored Systems
Armored Skin
Cyber Arms
Cyber Legs
EMP Mesh
Enhanced Senses
Respiration Augment
Thermal Adaptation

>Wetware
Mnemonic Augmentation
Reflex Package
Multitasking

>Nanoware
Self-Repair
Lazarus Protocol

>Skills
Hacking 1
Combat 1
Technology 2

>Complications
Duty

>Allies
The Razor

>Enemies
The Fixer

>Gear
Basic Credstick
Gold Upgrade
Basic Apartment
Workshop
Tech Lab
Ident Card
Street Sweeper (Desert Eagle .50)
Cyberdeck
Portability Upgrade
Nanotech Lockpick

>Setting
Home-L4 O'Neill Cylinder
Neutral-Hong Kong
Enemy-New York Arcology-2

>Antagonists
Restraining Bolt

>> No.40698567

>>40698424
nah, She's tiny(5 feet even give or take an inch or two), and didn't elaborate on how she was lifting the 200, just that it was the last thing on her warmup. knew her in college, seeing her shirtless would put fear into your boner...

>>40698462
>I'm well aware of what a pound is.
I've known non-americans to make the mistake...

and if the guy is an athlete and could pushPRESS 445 then perhaps thats the Press implied by the description in the CYOA

>>40698516
yeah, but sometimes people just don't want to work together or take input or criticism.

>> No.40698590

>>40698567
>work together or take input or criticism.
The fact that you defaulted to that is the kind of bullshit mindset that caused this.

>> No.40698634

>>40698590
I've never created a CYOA before personally, I just save them for later use, I've put forth suggestions, but I don't have the skills to edit a CYOA(no, not even with 9001 hours in MS-Paint)

but I always remember every other group project I've been a part of and I sympathize with the mindset.

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>>40698486
Can I pls stay? Playing pretend is fun, and it's easy to hide the cancerous discussions
>>40698567
m8, I'm telling you... she can not possible PRESS 200 pounds and definitely not as the last part of her warmup.
That's likely double her bodyweight.
If you had said "bench press with the spotter holding the bar the entire time", then maybe. But no, 200 lbs OHP is impossible for her
This is Julia Rohde. She's 5'0", 115 pounds.
In 2012 she did a clean and jerk (which is even easier than a push press) with 110 kg
Julia is a professional athlete

>> No.40698734

>>40698693
>dat ass

>> No.40698783

>>40698693
she never told me HOW she was lifting just that she was. I can't into /fit/ and I don't really keep track of whats what. what defines a "clean jerk"?

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>>40698734
Just say the word and I'll happilly spam pictures of Julia
>>40698783
This is a clean and jerk
A "press" or "OHP" would be not moving your legs/hips and simply pressing the bar up from your shoulder until your elbows are locked out.

>> No.40698825

>>40695942
I don't rate this as well as the last thread's OP. Racial prowesses, crappy racial art, styles are worse and lesser to personalities, no magic.

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>>40696122
Still accepting all art for the expansion

>> No.40698881

Explosive judgement sword

>> No.40698901

>>40698824
>A "press" or "OHP" would be...
and a pushpress would be?
and on the subject of technique and correctness I may as well restate>>40698362
>I can lift 100lb over my head
should be I can lift 2, 50lb horse feed sacks up to my shoulders and walk around with them...

>>40698840
to what sword does the "builds charge" statement apply?

>> No.40698931

>>40698840
>Ether Judgement
>Ghost Curse
>Gravity Ether
>Gravity Ghost

>> No.40698946

What do you guys think about CYOAs that have stats (Str, Con, Dex, etc.)? Manageable or too tedious?

>> No.40698966

>>40698946
Depends. My opinion is this: make it and post it. Bad or good, more CYOAs are always welcome.

>> No.40698989

>>40698901
>pushpress
A press, but you bend your knees which helps generate force through the beginning of the movement

>> No.40699013

>>40698946
depends on how big it is. I lose focus with CYOA's that are long + I have to remember stats

>> No.40699020

>>40698946
Don't use unless there's a reason for them (e.g. can't choose a thing unless you have enough of a stat) or unless their meaning is either obvious or clearly explained.

>> No.40699030

>>40698634
>group project
See, that's the fucking problem. A group-project is an identity-based mess. All it leads to is circle-jerking. Once upon a time, long before you rolled in from reddit or wherever, people didn't worry about fucking identities all the time. The idea that you can only work on something that you originated, or that someone should have preclusive control over something just because they made it, is a cancer.

>> No.40699033

>>40698946
I will direct your attention to the Powered Armor CYOA threads that have been going strong for years, they now have a system to run the stats and regular updates.

stats are fine, keep them brief to begin with though...

>> No.40699046

>>40698783
When you don't cum at the end.

>> No.40699224

>>40698966
>>40699013
>>40699020
>>40699033
Thanks for the input. I'll try to keep stats concise and meaningful as a whole.

>> No.40699265

>>40699030
>Group Projects
you know I meant the sort of project you do as a group in school right? the kind where one person does the actual work and 1-5 schmucks take credit

>See, that's the fucking problem. A group-project is an identity-based mess. All it leads to is circle-jerking.
not always, just usually

>Once upon a time, long before you rolled in from reddit or wherever
not from Reddit been there once back when it was new, didn't like it

>people didn't worry about fucking identities all the time.
except on academic papers, industrial designs, legal documents, copyrights, etc. etc. etc.

people worry about Identity all the time, they just usually worry less about it here.

>The idea that you can only work on something that you originated, or that someone should have preclusive control over something just because they made it, is a cancer.

leaving aside the aforementioned documents and the idea conjured (in my head mind, I'm not using it as a point of discussion...) by your comments that Wikipedia and similar sources should be used as certified truth.

so any CYOA should be freely editable by anyone for any reason whatsoever? I can't in good conscience say that that's a good thing.

>>40699224
wonderful, I'll look foreward to your creation

>> No.40699386

>>40699265
>you know I meant the sort of project you do as a group in school right?
Yes.

>except on shit that not only isn't CYOAs, it isn't even fuckign 4chan
This has no relevance to anything.

>Wikipedia and similar sources should be used as certified truth.
It's far more accurate and less biased than print encyclopedias and news journalism. It's the next best thing after actual peer-reviewed research. And peer reviewing is the same concept.
Although this is pretty a pretty divergent topic from CYOAs.

>so any CYOA should be freely editable by anyone for any reason whatsoever?
Should be? They already are. But it would be nice if people actually did the editing more often.

>I can't in good conscience say that that's a good thing.
Feel free to justify your opinion if you want, though I imagine it'll be just as bullshit when supported by whatever attempts at logic you can muster than when thrown out without support.

>> No.40699458

>>40698385
I know that feel anon, go with it.

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>>40698901
The one that's asterisked, the Thunder sword. Basically it provides a use/advantage for one-2-one combat, in that after ten strikes the enemy takes a super shock.

Last thread I posted a bunch of addons to Choose Your Champion, and this thread I post them added into the potfold.

>> No.40699530

>>40696122
>Frost
>Haste
If your foes can't hit you, you can't lose.

>> No.40699544

>>40699046
>clean and jerk
That's when she shows you her snatch and is considerate enough to clean you up after your jerk session
I love olympic lifting

>> No.40699552

>>40699386
>except on shit that not only isn't CYOAs, it isn't even fuckign 4chan
>This has no relevance to anything.
except to point out that the blanket statement was incorrect, and if you look, a lot of the CYOAs are signed with version numbers, meaning that people actually DO care about identities being tied to their work, it's a habit people get put into in school, that gets enforced by basically everything.

>Although this is pretty a pretty divergent topic from CYOAs.
again I had no intention of using that as an argument, just mentioning that your choice of words led me to a thought that you meant "any source on the net is fine"

>But it would be nice if people actually did the editing more often.
indeed, my point there however was that not everyone should edit, I don't like when people "edit" a thing by shoving their fetishes in it for example, or when they insist that because it's a more recent edition of a thing the older version should be universally rejected(I've seen it happen but have no better evidence than hearsay though)

>Feel free to justify your opinion if you want, though I imagine it'll be just as bullshit when supported by whatever attempts at logic you can muster than when thrown out without support.
I'd also like to point out that you are also arguing an opinion...

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>>40699386
>people actually did the editing more often.
If you can't create, just take someone elses work and slap a fresh coat of paint on it, remember to call it a homage, then talk up how it's the newer and better thing.

We all remember the better version of this one right? Where someone took red ink to the word dragon and just wrote in monster, then added the options they felt it just had to have.
Wasn't that such an improvement?

>> No.40699634

>>40699618
You do realize what you just posted now isn't the original either, right?

>> No.40699669

>>40699612
Rest of the pages when?

>> No.40699675

>>40699634
It was at least an update by the original creator, as opposed to someone declaring 'i can do better because reasons!' and smearing their dick all over it.

>> No.40699709

>>40699552
>the blanket statement
There was no blanket statement that included any of those things.

>a lot of the CYOAs are signed with version numbers
That's a modern trend, it only started a few years ago.

>you meant "any source on the net is fine"
There's better and there's worse. And those are tied to actual qualities of the source, not just "well the author was the first one to get involved in this". The same applies to CYOAs; just as shit sources aren't generally used much, shit versions of a CYOA aren't usually reposted much. Except by the dumpfags who just load their folder into 4chan X and set it to spam.

>If you can't create
Changing something involves creation.

>remember to call it a homage
Why? What's more legitimate about another version?

>> No.40699722

>>40699675
>It was at least an update by the original creator
How can you tell? You can't. What difference does it make? None.

>> No.40699789

>>40698824
I also figured out she's gotten married and has an SJW haircut.
This hurts the man

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>>40699618
I remember creating no such thing.

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>>40699722
Contrast and compare, also known as using your fucking eyes and thinking for a moment.
The writing style stays the same throughout, it's not a sudden shift in tone or fonts or anything else obviously standing out.

Take pic related, you can tell someone got butthurt and just went at it with paint.

>> No.40699871

>>40699821
>dat edit
Toppest of all keks. How autistic must a person be to make a silly edit like that?

>> No.40699876

>>40699821
That one deserved it though. I remember the creator started a massive shitposting spree about 2 minutes after posting it.

>> No.40699910

>>40699871
>>40699821
is there anything changed other than pick 3 rather than pick 1?

>> No.40699934

>>40699910
Wood, Spirit, Heart, Lava.

>> No.40699970

>>40699709
>There was no blanket statement
see, >>40699030
>Once upon a time [...] people didn't worry about fucking identities all the time.
no limiters on that statement implies all people...

>>40699709
>That's a modern trend, it only started a few years ago.
so did CYOAs, at least CYOAs as we know them.

>>40699709
>qualities of the source
indeed, and a CYOA maker that doesn't have a high quality, and/or refuses to make changes usually gets "booed off stage" till they fix their issues

>Changing something involves creation.
arguable, but mostly on semantics.

>Why? What's more legitimate about another version?
nothing is, just the will of the people.

I wasnt disagreeing that people shouldn't edit CYOAs, just that the creator should do the editing based on critiques as opposed to someone just *fixing* something because the creator can at least be consistent to the style and intent of the CYOA

>> No.40699976

>>40699934
wow, that's some shitty editing and for awful reasons

>> No.40699981

>>40699669
I don't know. I barely know what to put on them besides some basic personal gear.

>> No.40700070

I am the void

>> No.40700137

>>40700070
You are a faggot. Stop doing this.

>> No.40700172

>>40700137
You're the faggot for encouraging him.

>>40700070
Your mom is the void.

>> No.40700263

>>40699871
You just have terrible taste, plebby.

>> No.40700521

>>40699821
And what's the problem? I prefer the one on the left, but not because it's original, simply because it has more levity.

>> No.40700550

>>40699612
The Independent Merchantry.

>> No.40700555

>>40700521
No matter what you create, someone else will have a completely different intake of it, better or worse. I usually only listen to opinions that make sense to me as a creator or have a trend among many people.

>> No.40700580

I am now a huge faggot

>> No.40700608

>>40698376
How about all of them?

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>>40700747

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>>40700771

>> No.40700838 [SPOILER] 
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>> No.40700873

>>40700838
>part 2

>> No.40700892

>>40700838
Do you have the first page?

>> No.40700909

>>40700873
>>40700892
First bit, IIRC, was basically "choose one, find out what it does afterwards".

>> No.40700980

>>40700873
>>40700892
Nope

>> No.40701079
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>>40700838
>>40700873
Gotcha covered, this is part 1

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>>40701079
Part 2 is of course >>40700838
and this image is part 3

>> No.40701117

>>40699970
>limiters on that statement implies all people
Or it would, if it wasn't in the context of a larger conversation.

>so did CYOAs, at least CYOAs as we know them.
Maybe, if you're mixing up values for "a few", and especially depending on how you defined "as we know them". I suspect that how I know them may be more broad than how you know them. But even by quite restricting definitions, there were a couple years where they were made here on /tg/ in something approaching our modern style, and usually lacked those.

>usually gets "booed off stage" till they fix their issues
Why hold booing people to be a higher form of art than fixing what you hold to be a problem by your own self?

>just that the creator should do the editing based on critiques as opposed to someone just *fixing* something
I know, and this is also the point on which I'm disagreeing; identity has no direct bearing on quality. What matters is the skill or quality of the changes (and, in most cases, personal preference). Having more people work on something builds it, over time, into a greater and more robust thing, with a wider breadth of concepts integrated. Style should be respected; when changing things you should generally respect the style of a CYOA unless you actively want to change it, in which case you should be sure to account for anything that, unchanged, would contradict your stylistic changes. Same as with mechanical changes. Intent doesn't really matter, it can be different for every writer and every reader.

>nothing is, just the will of the people.
On this, at least, we agree entirely.

>> No.40701384

>>40699821
>all those edits
>no one bothered to change Slavic witch bit

>> No.40701410

>>40694466
>Shadow and Undeath are just different sides of the Dark, Spooky coin
Because manipulating undead and casting shadows are two completely different magics. One has no relation to the other.

>The Illusive mechanistic aspect of Shadow would be better served with it's own Lore
That's one of the biggest parts of what makes the Shadow school diverse.

Furthermore, neither school is inherently evil. If you say otherwise, you're talking about another universe.

This is a perfect example as to why your vision is completely different than mine

>Arcane just struck me as bland.
First one to argue about that, actually. And I will reiterate that it still was one of the more popular schools.

>I'm talking about design; you as an individual or me as an individual do not come into it.
You essentially are enforcing your opinion on someone else and aren't backing down to accepting the fact that I had already rejected your feedback. As you said, it's nothing personal, but it got to the point where you're kind of making it annoying. I've said this several times before, I am essentially done Battlemage, and I'm not looking to make many more major changes.

>They contrast, but our visions are still largely compatible.
See above.

>> No.40701531

>>40701410
SDA, please, answer some questions:
>>40562297
>>40562356
I already fleshed out most spells, and unified Earth with Force and Water with Ice. Do you plan to include any other new schools in Battlemage eventually? Because, damn, thinking up acoustic spells without copying your content was pretty hard.

>> No.40701562

>>40701384
That's because no one is stupid enough to change one of the best parts.

>> No.40701585

>>40701562
What is best about wrong ethnicity? Or was it some kind of intended joke?

>> No.40701626

>>40701562
I think what he's getting at is that it sounds like it's all about Else from Disney's Frozen movie, but she's Norse.

>> No.40701721

>>40701626
I think he means Chaika (some kind of witch-sniper, I don't know) from some anime I never watched. /a/-tards always spam threads with her name for some reason.

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>>40701721
Chaika is best sniper.

>> No.40701887

>>40696520
There is a Jojo jumpchain. Check the drive on the jumpchain thread.

>> No.40701965

>>40701775
She's not even a real sniper.

She's just a wizard who made a rifle-shaped staff.

>> No.40702164

>>40701721
No idea who Chaika is, i was talking about how it was clearly Elsa reference, who is clearly not Slavic.

>> No.40702449

>>40701410
>First line
Missing the big picture. I'm not going to repeat myself on this point.

>That's one of the biggest parts of what makes the Shadow school diverse.
When the only feature of the school of Fire is that all the spells have Fire in them, what the hell does diversity mean? This doesn't seem to have anything to do with the discussion we were having, and contradicts your own attitude in places.

>neither school is inherently evil.
The layperson certainly gets that impression.
>If you say otherwise, you're talking about another universe.
I have no idea what your universe is and I have nothing to do with it. I'm taking about fun, balanced choice design, nothing more.

>First one to argue about that, actually.
It's not an argument. It's a statement of opinion. You and an other anon seem to have a hard time recognising straight-up statements like that. I'm not saying anything when I say "I thought Arcane was bland" other than "In my opinion Arcane was bland". Synonyms.
>And I will reiterate that it still was one of the more popular schools.
Woot! A point we have already covered.

>You essentially are enforcing your opinion
WOOAAHAH!! Shit dude, I'm sorry, I didn't notice me breaking into your house and telling you to bite the curb until you accept my opinion! Christ, I should restrain myself! Really, this situation would have been a terrible mess if you hadn't used dramatic language to tell me what was going on.

>aren't backing down
"If you state an opinion I dislike, you are out of the line and need to back down!" - SDA

>annoying
Like the other anon, you have misadjustments if you get any shade of mad over cyoa discussions.

>I'm not looking to make many more major changes.
Woop de fucking doo! Lets mail all the people in the world who were asking you to change Battlemage and tell them to suck it!!!!!!!! YEHAYEYAHSYYYEWDAUDG

You don't fucking get it.

Why do you think I'm asking you to do shit?
(cont)

>> No.40702509

>>40701410
>>40702449
Why do you still believe, after everything I've said, that any of this argument or the initial conversation you butted in on - that had NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU - constitutes a request or demand that you do ANYTHING at all? Why the fuck do you think I care? I'm stated repeatedly that I like and am happy with Battlemage! You're so fucking blind that you can't take my frank opinion of it as anything less that a total dismissal or my howling demand that you PERSONALLY alter your style, when it's got nothing to do with any of those things.

The conversation could've ended posts ago in the previous thread, and it could've ended with the thread. But you can't fucking let go. Let go. Accept that others have different opinions. Let go.

>> No.40702593

Does anyone have the one magic cyoa where you choose a color of magic and a magic animal patron? There were more choices, but that was the one that stuck out for me. I've tried looking for it in the archives, but I haven't found anything.

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>>40702593
This it?

>> No.40702713

>>40701079
>>40700838

mug, made good choice.

>> No.40702786

>>40702692
Yes. Many thanks anon,

>> No.40702817

>>40701079
I'm going for the Notebook. Let's see what I's gots . . .

>> No.40702944

>>40700838
>>40701079
>>40702817
Well, I think I did pretty well. The paperclip is pretty damn tempting, to be honest. I don't see what the point of the typewriter is. Anyway, good game.

>> No.40703049

>>40699481
>Giant
>plate
>spear
>great weapon
>patient
>morph with felling
I'm really slow but do fucktons of damage

>> No.40703098

>>40702449
>You don't fucking get it.
>Why do you think I'm asking you to do shit?
Anon, seriously, shut up. It's his CYOA, and if he considers it finsihed so be it. Go mind your own business. Your walls of text don't add anything to the quality of the thread.

>> No.40703144

>>40703049
Pretty sweet combo. Funnily enough, I haven't actually posted my own entry from the expansion I did.

>Giant
>Rogue Gear
>Lash
>Dagger
>Sling
>Evil
>Morph with Elf
There's no particular strategy to this set, I just think a really tall dude with tonnes of nasty weapons feels cool.

>> No.40703199

>>40703098
> It's his CYOA, and if he considers it finsihed so be it
That's my point you doofus. I'm telling him, IN THE VERY TEXT YOU GREENQUOTING, that I am not telling him to do shit. If you are not even going to read an argument, why are you going to get involved in it? I've said what I've had to say and I haven't said any more. Why give anyone reason to start up again? Dumb fuck.
>Your walls of text don't add anything to the quality of the thread.
And SDA's did? Christ you can't think things through.

>> No.40703231

>>40703199
lel ur so mad

>> No.40703281

>>40703199
You shouldn't be so upset, anon. You see, I just posted a CYOA and contributed something, while you are just sitting there and whining. Just relax. :^)

>> No.40703334

>>40702509
I get feedback all the time. Sometimes people splerge out above the others. You are one such person, and I believe there have been two others so far who I've encountered that are this bad. You kind of people are blind to subjectivity and can't understand that we didn't ask for your opinion in the first place, and if we did, it didn't benefit us or we just plain don't like your opinion.

Don't put this on me when you typed out several almost full type limit posts on your opinions. I was just here for clarity but you took that as a window to dump your vision on me, I guess.

>> No.40703355

>>40703231
I am annoyed that someone has ordered me to shut up for doing nothing but
- Share my view
- Providing reasoning for said view
- Give feedback
- Share content
- Put up with accusations and get told that I'm the one making demands
Yeah, none of that is even slightly irritating at
all.

>>40703281
I'm disgusted you replaceable fuck, get your emotions straight.
>I just posted a CYOA
And I already posted two >>40699481 >>40698840.
>waaa stop having an opinion anon
>you're whining b-but I'm not
;¬}

>> No.40703451

Guys, can't we all just be the little girl friends and get along?

>> No.40703510

>>40703355
Anon, the problem is not the content of your feedback, but how you present it. Please change your writing style into one that portrays calm speaking, not angry yelling. Do you understand?

>> No.40703538

>>40703334
>Sometimes people splerge out above the others. You are one such person
My christ, you are one delusional fuck. I'm sorry SDA, I respected you but your baby-like inability to take "I like the choices and the images but I prefer CYOAs that focus on the content than the presentation" with any degree of dignity is shameful. You literally project all of your negative emotions onto me because you don't like - you can't TAKE - that I don't entirely love your CYOAs. Merely likely but not totally agreeing with your choices isn't enough, so you have to accuse them of "forcing their opinion on you" and "trying to make me change the way I do things". When it gets pointed out to you that, surprise, nothing like that was every happening, you call it "splerging out" and say that it's "bad".

Funnily enough mate, it's your intolerance of other's opinions that's bad, nothing else. You are the one is battling with subjectivity. All I did was state an opinion, and you had to make yourself centre stage of the argument and make a million dumb defensive statements. You don't look well.

>we didn't ask for your opinion in the first place
Your arrogance is unbelievable. Do you think other people have to ask for your permission before they can share their views? What happened to free speech? What's the point of a fuckign discussion board if people don't share their views? The whole point of sharing an opinion is to look for debate, positive or negative. You couldn't provide either, nor could you just walk away. You had to try and claim that by stating my view I was being oppressive, and it didn't work.

>it didn't benefit us
lmao

>Don't put this on me
You inserted yourself into a discussion a fraction of the length of this one that had nothing to do with you. Then late into another thread long after the other one had died, you had to bring this BACK UP again! You outright *went out of your way* to make this a thing again. This is all on you.

>> No.40703557

>>40703334
Oh yeah, and that last sentence? Way to prove that you can't handle other people's opinions. I'm done.

>> No.40703608

>>40703510
The feedback that you are commenting on is irritated. The point of the feedback is to express irritation. If it didn't come of as annoyed, it would be doing a pretty poor job.

That you are judging the entirety of my critical capacity from an excerpt of one conversation covering a narrow back and forth is the issue you're facing. You could go back to the last thread and see a whole bunch of posts that were not angry - because, surprised, I wasn't setting out to express irritation - but it wouldn't be necessary.

>>40703451
Tell that to SDA. The conversation was over with the last thread but he won't drop this.

>> No.40703670

>>40703538
>>40703557
>>40703608
Anon. You must calm down.

>> No.40703738

>>40703670
Perfectly calm, just annoyed. It's mostly mellowed out into disappointment in any case.

>> No.40703763

>>40703538
Anon, I would strongly advice you to discontinue your feud with SDA. You're literally spending all your time telling every person in those threads how you don't agree with his opinion, but they still can be reconciled, what kind of CYOAs you like and blah blah blah. If you want to tell people about your life and opinions that they're not interested in (I, for one, am not enthusiastic about them at all; as I see from SDA reaction, he's not enthusiastic either), take it to your personal blog.

>> No.40703764

>>40703538
>>40703557
I feel really sorry for your keyboard. Thanks for proving my exact points, though.

For the record, I get a lot of hate. Your accusations are kinda baseless. Sorry that your opinion wasn't wanted.

>> No.40703861

>>40703764
Anon, please do not use that dismissive tone of voice. You will only make things worse.

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>>40703334
>this bad
I can think of a few others...

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>> No.40703924

>>40703871
>Prison Meisters
They're still too powerful. Fite me.

>> No.40703928

>>40703763
>I would strongly advice you to discontinue your feud with SDA.
What part of >>40703557
>I'm done
Don't you get? Why is it you chucklefucks can't seem to fucking read?

Furthermore, what feud? But in any case, I'm tired of pointing out stupid things.

>You're literally spending all your time telling every person in those threads how you don't agree with his opinion, but they still can be reconciled, what kind of CYOAs you like and blah blah blah.
That's the thing. I'M NOT. I spent a few posts on it last thread and a few more arguing, then SDA brought it up again. I haven't spent a single post doing anything of that. I have made it PERFECTLY CLEAR I don't care. Why do you need to speak the fuck up?

>If you want to tell people about your life and opinions
Oh for christ's sakes, you people are dumb as cement. "Life" opinions? The opinions are about CYOAs, in a CYOA thread. You're seriously trying to tell me that there's something wrong with sharing opinions about CYOAs in a CYOA thread. You couldn't be more wrong.

>I, for one, am not enthusiastic about them at all
Good for fucking you! Why don't you make a sharp decision towards furthering your disenterest by not involving yourself in the conversation and leaving it fucking be when it's over. You don't care about my opinions so you have to start the argument again? Nice going jackass. I don't care.

>>40703764
Petty point scoring and meaningless digs to the end. Never change, SDA.

>> No.40703958

>>40703924
We don't know how the other ones will stack up against them yet though. I agree that the stuff he teased was terrifying. no fite for u

>> No.40703972

>>40703861
Anon, that anon made things worse by speaking up in the fucking first place. Conversation was over, and yet he had to chime in with his great magnanimous "You are fueding and you need to stop!" after, you know, everything had stopped. The dismissive tone is just a formality.

>> No.40703992

>>40695895
>"can we not degenerate to name calling? edition"

No, it seems we cannot.

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>> No.40704018

>>40703992
Looks like /pol/ was wrong.

>> No.40704033

>>40703992
Sadly so. All praise SDA for his ability to accept other peoples views and not dredge up dead arguments because his feelings are easily bruised . . . not.

>> No.40704035

>>40703928
>I'm done
>Another huge post
Come on, anon.

By the way, did you know that most of my design choices (including the choice to reduce the spells by half) was from feedback? The difference was that I found their opinions helpful, despite their conflict with mine.

Are you done yet?

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And it's only listed as 5/10

>> No.40704079

I hope these threads die soon. They've been getting worse for months, and any hope I once had of recovery has faded.

To whoever keeps making these threads: You know as well as I do that /cyoa/ is dying of cancer and stagnation. Don't prolong the agony - let them go quietly into the night.

>> No.40704110

>>40704035
>Another huge post
To someone who isn't you. Because when I said "I'm done", I was talking to you. Nice job proving everything I said wrong and irrelevant with a jibe that didn't make sense. The upper ground is unassaibly yours now. :^)

>> No.40704144

>>40703928
>I don't care
>wall of text
Yeah, right. How about you just swallow your antidepressants and calm down?

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>>40704079
This is exactly the point I was making last thread. These arguments are simply because people like different things in cyoas, and having them all in one thread doesn't work becuase people are madams and can't take that their designs are not universally loved.

My proposition is that /cyoa/ remains for lengthy wannabe rpgs exclusively, which the moment they get popular enough and generate namefaggotry spin off into their own threads. We create a new general called /chg/ which is just for choicegames, which I define as any CYOA or CYOA-esque thing that is short and designed just around the choices - like the swords and elements one up earlier, or pic related - because those do not encourage bullshit. I rest my case.

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>> No.40704202

>>40704144
>I can't argue with his entire post but can't let it stand either, so I'll try to needle him with a meaningless out-of-context remark! That'll show him!
Why are you so mad anon?

>> No.40704205

>>40704110
>>40704076
Keep trying to make yourself look good, anon. Edit that to a 10/10 if that will make you feel good about yourself.

>>40704177
Sure, let me go ask the mod.

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>> No.40704214

>>40704076
This really needs a list of people's CYOAs. I've never even heard of half the names on this list. Anyone care to enlighten me?

>> No.40704215

>>40704076
>Thanks every deity that I was smart enough to not namefag for my cyoas
>I'd probably end up as worstgirl on the list.

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>> No.40704242

>>40704229
What's the point of mind control when persuasion is half the cost?

>> No.40704259

>>40704193
Pretty good CYOA. I'd take Heal, Back and Calm. Heal is a prime utitilty and all of them seem useful. I could go for walks twice the length of what I normally do, because when I get tired I can just warp back home. And I can calm arguments (HINT HINT THREAD) effortlessly.

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>> No.40704300

>>40704205
The second link in your post is not me, but the first and last are both me. Nice going SDA, you once again confirm that you totally agree with me but can't accept that I don't agree with you, jostling for petty points like a spanked child all the while.

>> No.40704313

>>40704152
C seems the most versatile if you know what you're doing you can make stones that give you super powers.

Like grind up part of a turtle and a stop watch and you probably can get a the world stone.

>> No.40704317

>>40704212
Wow, this is legitimately funny. Unique/10.

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>>40695895

>magical
>unassuming
>the agency

>endurance 3
>durability 3
>immunity 3
>self healing 3
>elementalism 2 (fire)
>self improvement 2

>new identity
>safehouse

>rival

Superheroine time! Build is meant to be really hard to hurt or kill and be really good at elemenatlism magic and keep it boosted all the time so be like a agency sorceress, except not squishy.

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Ima just keep dumpin till I drown out all the bad in a sea of content.

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>> No.40704423

>>40704240
It's too hard to choose. I'd really appreciate an option of having them all on paycheck, constantly making new content and getting money for it. I'd say Thrallherd, The Scientis and SDA get 1000$ a month and a personal office, Spessrefuge and Spadsey 500$ a month and Spessrefuge guys gets a free Photoshop courses until he's able to make nice backgrounds, I'm fucking serious, do it faggot, and Tunebuggy 250$.

And the autist that shits this thread with his hot opinions gets nothing until he makes at least one CYOA.

>> No.40704433
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>>40704229
>Time travel

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>> No.40704467

>>40703871
That third panel guy doesn't look like me, but I stand by it.

>>40703958
Though this is an excellent point.

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>>40704423
I presume you are talking about me with that noble last remark. Here's one CYOA I design some years ago, I'll post another two to follow. But thank you for calling my opinions hot. I'll be sure to let SDA know that, as the individual who started the shitflinging in this thread for no reason other than that it suited himself, you think he's an even bigger shit than me.

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>>40704423
>1k a month
Sorry but I already make more than that. I'm not SDA.
Thank you for the thought though, I could use that photoshop course if I had the time.

>> No.40704497

I miss the old, simple cyoas that were just one choice scenarios. I ain't makin a character sheet for these damn things...

>> No.40704498
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>>40704481
A CYOA I made very recently.

>> No.40704505
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>>40704481
>duplicator can be used on people
>anything that physically effects one will effect the other

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>>40704497
Praise be, brother. Let /chg/ be a thing!

>>40704481
And here's part one of the most popular CYOA I designed. One that has no pictures and no colour, and still managed to dominate several threads back to back purely off of the depths of its choices and the discussion it generated. Eat your heart out, fellow autist.

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>>40704525
I remember someone brought that up when I first posted that CYOP. I made a small errata that the change happen at lightspeed - so if you send a duplicate in a rocket ship to beyond the moon's orbit and cut the object on earth the duplicate will get cut in the time it'd take light to shoot from one to the other. This usually resolves most queries and theories about the power.

>>40704536
Part 2.

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>>40704433
I'm also going to need sauce on that, google is being less than helpful.

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>> No.40704592

>>40699618
blue white sagacious drake gaurdian

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>> No.40704615

>>40704569
>>40704536
>>40704498
>>40704481
They're okay.

At least now we know that walls of text are your speciality :^)

>> No.40704619

>>40704570
So what happens if I tell the genie in the pic I won't tell her what my wish is till she fucks me?

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>>40704615
>nothing negative to say
I shall consider myself vindicated.
Here's some CYOAs that I have expanded from others, incidentally.

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>>40704651
I mean, here's one such, and another CYOA I designed when someone said something along the lines of pure simplicity or elegance of choice. This is intended as a psychological diagnostic tool more than anything else - do you prefer opportunity or security?

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>> No.40704719

>>40704300
It's like you can't even read.

I didn't agree with you from the get-go. So in the midst of your first argument last thread, you somehow manage to pull me in and offhandedly mention about your preferral of the old Battlemage CYOA.

I go on to reply to you of my reasonings that were not only logical to me, but based on the majority of the feedback I've gotten from the first builds of the CYOA. I pushed this change months ago after a long time debating on what to do with it. And you aren't the first to disagree with the changes, but for every one who brought it up, I posed to them the reasonings (seeing that they missed my explanations from before) and usually accept it as reasonable. I always try to emphasize that the changes also benefit the extent of myself as a designer.

Then you come along and start posing ways on how things on my cyoa should be, or your vision on how much better of a cyoa it can be. I disagreed with your opinions because they do not appeal to me, and doesn't really fix anything in the structure that I built months ago. Months ago, that I set in stone thanks to feedback.

Then you attempt a rehaul of the entire cyoa and tell me why some things should change. I mean, where did this come from? Combining Undead and Shadow? That's an opinion, which you did blatantly point out was fact since "the layman wouldn't understand the difference" (when this was literally the first time I've heard of this suggestion). At this point, I pretty much see where you're going with this so I tell you that you're being an asshole.

Let's face it, you're shoving things into my face and forcing me to eat it, and when I rebuttal, you call me a whiner and that I can't accept people's opinions. I'm going to call you an asshole.

Then you fucking rage, and I find it fucking hilarious. And it goes from there.

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>> No.40704816

Rolled 28, 24, 21, 15, 21, 1 = 110 (6d30)

>>40704454

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>> No.40704847

>>40704719
>tried to nag me for making long posts
>it doesn;t work
>explodes and makes a giant post
Never change, SDA :¬)

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>> No.40704878

>>40704847
It's worked quite literally every time before, I was hoping it would this time.

Seeing as you have no argument, I guess I finally let you see your own autism.

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>> No.40704902

>>40704823
For selfless Sacrifice, is this one day a month on the exact same day, or is it randomized? In addition, what timezone's 00:00 counts as the beginning and end of that day?

Furthermore, If I chose Selfish Waifu, does she disappear during this time period, or does she just lose any extrahuman powers/abilities she has?

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>>40704823
do you mean
>she can't end up GETTING any of the benefits of any other choice in this cyoa

also

selfish
selfish
selfless
selfish
selfish (pic related)
selfless
selfless
selfish
selfless
neither

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>> No.40705115

>>40704878
>still can't drop the argument
>still can't let go
Never change, SDA. :¬)

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>> No.40705241

>>40705115
I literally just closed the argument. There's nothing more to it other than that you don't know human interaction nor courtesy. You were an asshole.

You still are an asshole, seeing as you can't just leave it be and that you must reply with a meme face. Least I know now that you are as pathetic as we all thought you were.

>> No.40705249

>>40696122
>Explotion
Dammit that ruined an almost perfect CYOA

>> No.40705290

>>40699618
>Behemoth
>Mechanical
>Hibernation
>Sagacity

You can guess at what I'll do.

>> No.40705315

>this thread
Right. It seems a certain anon needs to calm down. Your commitment is unsettling to us all. It ain't easy trying to mediate with spergs.

Anyway, dungeoneering cyoa doc is almost done. Kept revising and altering mechanics and design but I'm at a spot where I'm satisfied with it. All it needs now is some more writing, then ontomaking evil waifus/hubbies. Is personal power important enough for me to add or should I just let it go unspoken?

>> No.40705356

>>40705315
As soon as you add something for personal customization, you're gonna be prodded into expanding on it and balancing it. It's a lot of work for something you're on the edge about. For now, leave it out. Let's see how it plays and then you can make your decision based on how it goes.

>> No.40705441

>>40696018
>>40696035
>>40696050

I want to combine all the Antagonist plot lines.

>> No.40705582

>>40695954

What happens if you take the Yellow Mask and The King? You can't pull off your face.

>> No.40705652

>>40705315
That anon would be SDA.

>> No.40705697

>>40704651
YUQ

>> No.40705760

>>40705652
See >>40704719

Don't worry, when your proposed /chg/ thread gets made, your textwall cyoas will finally get recognition.

>> No.40705911

I'm working on a new cyoa but I've hit a bit of a sag with the Bestial parts. I'm afraid that they're too vague. Can someone look this over and give me some feedback?

Also, I know someone else is working on their own monster mother cyoa. This isn't supposed to overwrite their work, I'm focusing on you becoming the child of a mythological being, not giving birth to one.

>> No.40705970

>>40705911
>Bestial Ears
Echolocation/Superior hearing.
>Bestial Nose
Smell blood from far away, like a bloodhound.

Not really sure what you want to do with the horns.

>> No.40706001

>>40705911
>For showing loyalty to a single parent, you've been given immortality, eternal youth and the ability to shift into a powerful new form. You'll retain both your intelligence and your ability to speak while you're transformed.
>immortality, eternal youth

Expect most builds to be single parent builds.

>> No.40706106

>>40705911
Do your children retain your special traits?

>> No.40706228

>>40706001
I expected this. I'm either going to add some incentive to pick parts from multiple parents Maybe another goddess/monster shows up and gives you a reward for being chaotic? or remove the immortality & eternal youth and make the player work for it instead.

>>40706106
Yes.

>> No.40706257

>>40705970
I'm thinking horns will be for magical powers. Demons will get illusion magic, Dragons will get elemental magic, and beasts will get transformation magic.

>> No.40706404

>>40704823
Life is a rock
>Selfish
Fly like an eagle
>Selfless
Be the little girl
>Selfless
Wizard
>Selfless (its not really that selfless if it will end up harming others)
Muh waifu
>Selfish
Series of Tubes
>Selfless (I benefit from it too)
In space, Baby
>Selfless (why know the secrets of the universe if i can't do anything with it. Have some space adventures baby)
Slam Jam
>Selfless
King-Guy
>Selfless (kinda hard choice honestly, If i get to meet the guy i'd be fine)
Sacrifice
>Selfless

>> No.40706539

>>40704536
>>40704569
Reposting what I remember of my build for this.
>Dark
>Time
>Air

>Mail of Dark, Time, and Air
Dodge tank.
>Small Claw of Time and Dark
I'm pretty sure Speed 10 is faster than every 4 seconds, and I can just whack at where they were to hit them.
>Whip of Time
Snap projectiles/strikes out of the air retroactively.
>Veil of Time
WHOOPS I ACCIDENTALLY SLIPPED INTO THE TIME STREAM ITSELF SORRY FOR NOT DYING
>Amulet of Time
I'm slightly faster than everyone else.
>Mask of Air
Your sword? Air. That air? Shackles.

>> No.40706610

>>40704823
Life is a rock:
Selfless
All I really want is to be unaging. I am a part of humanity, therefore, I do not age.

Fly like an eagle:
Selfless
Eh, teleportation is boring and time travel doesn't matter enough.

Be the little girl:
Selfless
I don't want to be the little girl.

Wizard:
Selfish
Okay, being a wizard would be awesome. Also, I don't want it to be militarized. Win win.

Mah waifu:
Selfless
I think it would be wrong to just bring some predefined person into my life to love her.

Series of tubes:
Selfless
I'm an immortal wizard. Money is useful, but I can get it on my own.

In space, baby:
Selfless
Why would I want to know all about science? As fascinating as it is, I think knowing everything about it would make life boring.

Slam jam:
Selfless
Not a big sports guy.

King guy:
Selfish
What can I say? I dislike others leading me. This is super selfish, but still.

>> No.40707023

>>40696388
use kiwi irc or mibbit

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dump resuming, got distracted by sexy times.

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>> No.40707161

>>40704214
just look up the file on the foolz archive, people have listed cyoas for them many times

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>> No.40707187

>>40704570

Ask and ye shall receive: http://g.e-hentai.org/s/f3aa47b7e6/515951-1

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>> No.40707194

>>40705209
How does the mother treat me?

What are your theories /tg/?

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>>40707187
Thanks.

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>> No.40707251

>>40704651

KUB

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>> No.40707507

>>40707314
One Hour of Training is objectively the best option.

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Just noticed we're past the bump limit, I suppose my work is done.

>> No.40707837

>>40707448
At first I thought this might have been MCCYOAA warming back up before getting back to the cyoa.

Then I noticed there was a black girl in the list, and realized I was wrong.

>> No.40708352

>>40707517
>pick dubs ring
>point at every other ring

>> No.40709261

>>40704229
>Shapeshifting
Go go magical realm time.

>>40704242
Presumably Persuasion can be protected against. Because it involves verbally convincing someone, it would only work if they can hear you, and understand your language.

>> No.40709309

SOOO much good cyoa, I won't have time to create a deep imagination for ALL of them. God damn.

>>40704651
BDE

>>40704769
This CYOA can be broken, let me show you.

Organic machine
The seer

(hard as balls to figure points out but a while later)

18 chassis and 18 intergration, becoming a completely human/genetic machine that can never die and can reproduce. As my friend once said to my question:

"what would you call a machine that can do everything a human can do and can reproduce, ie, giving life?"
"god"

>>40704790
Toothbrush. Finally, control of my crazy realistic fantasy dreams.

>>40704823
>Rock
God damn it. Selfless and I pray I made the right choice. I'm sorry for what I've done world.

>Eagle
Selfish, there is no way everyone able to fly is going to be good for immortal humans.

>little girl
happy day anons, you're dreams come true, you are immortal little girls.

>Wizard
>militarized
Selfish. Fuck immortal torture and mind control.

>Mai waifu
Selfless, have fun guys.

>Tubes
Selfless! Selfless! YES!

>space
Selfless. space for everyone.

>slam
>no cheating
haha, sure, selfless, thats what this is.

>king
selfless. (anyone else notice were getting pretty emperor up in here?)

>Sacrifice
Selfless.

>>40704848
Eldritch (if you got to fight hard, might as well choose the best)
sothis armor
holy beam
lightning
lesser demon

(where is the yellow king from?)

>>40704868
I'm fucked.

Hermaphrodite (because hell, when am I getting this chance again?)
athletic -5
average (is average tits?)
Perfect memory -10
immunity to pain -5
limitless energy -5

I'm pretty much fucking GREAT at this point. Wow.

Shapeshifting -20 (5)
Night terrors +15
Scientific tablet -20

I will find a single man, a single person and I shall teach them the future.

>> No.40709400

>>40695922
>You have 13 points
>Only 12 powers
What am I missing?

>> No.40709429

>>40709400
You can only use any power for X+1 amount of time, where X is the point spent on that particular power. Reset when you sleep.

>> No.40709456

>>40704900
Regeneration 2, 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128 (as much as I WANT to do this, lets be practical)

Cash x 10 points (200 dollars a day, x 30 = 6000 x 12 = 72,000 a year, without working)
intelligence x 2 engineering robotics and business

I believe I'm done, thank you.

>>40704931
Nakedness drawback +30 (130)
Vagina (125)
Normal butt and E sized tits thank you
Dragongirl (110)
Vaginal tentacle (105)
Invulnerability (45)
Fantasy world (35)
Afterlife (25)
Friendly gods (15)
Slime girl (0)

Yes please, not even into being a woman but all in all, an afterlife, sex that i can feel, invulnerable, immortal, fantasy world, i mean come on. This doesn't get better.

>> No.40709571

>>40704955
fuck it, give me eye of the goat. Time to perceive liars

>>40705010
Medicine staff. Dress up as a shaman, put on a big show, act like a crazy guy and actually heal. Show the world. Gain a cult. Die by angry religious people. Save thousands of lives.

>>40705098
(what is this based off and is that book any good?)

The ark. Time to be a monk.

>>40705164
holy shit, small text.

>> No.40709590

>>40705911
Well what do you know, someone else took the idea up. No offense or anything but I thought you were going to out do me and i was like "aww, damn, someone better has the same idea"

but cool idea, keep at it.

>> No.40709725

>>40699821
What the fuck is the difference between stone and earth?

>> No.40710173

>>40709725
You can do better, Anonymous.

>> No.40710331

>>40709400
>>40709429
Still seems pretty darn OP

>> No.40710442

>>40704823
>Life is a Rock: Selfless
>Fly like an Eagle: Selfish
>Be the Little Girl: Selfless
>Wizard: Selfish
>Mai Waifu: Selfless
>Series of Tubes: Selfless
>In Space, Baby: Selfless
>Slam Jam: Selfish
>King Guy: Selfless

>> No.40710505

>>40705010
I think I'll go with the peace drum, and then work on making recordings, and having them played at important summits and meetings between decision makers, even as just a light thing in the background. It wouldn't make the world perfect, but if I could get recordings to places where there is extreme hostility or just ignorance of others, I think it would help out.

>> No.40710510

>>40698385
You can do it, anon!

>> No.40710531

>>40696332
To be honest, this isn't so much a CYOA thread as a CYOA dump thread, i hateit.

>> No.40710562

>>40701104
>get to the point of making a choice
>there's no mystery box
>"You used that already. I could tell you what you were before."

>> No.40710603

>>40695895
>Mutant
>Powerhouse
>Free Agent

>Strength 2
>Agility 2
>Endurance 2
>Durability 3
>Reflexes 2
>Self-Healing 3
>Predator 2
>Adaptability 2
>Self Improvement 2

>Safehouse, Expert

>Hated, Valuable, Limited

Yes, I'm an abomination for most of you, but that'll change once I've made you all like me.

>> No.40710740

>>40710603
Free Agents don't get perks

>> No.40710770
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>>40710740
I found that lightly upsetting, but understandable. As an AMERICAN, I understand the price of FREEDOM.

>> No.40711037

>>40702713
I wanted that, but I guess I'm okay with the typewriter
No more muslims/other religious extremists (or vegans and feminists)

>> No.40711082

>>40710173
I'm asking why make stone and earth 2 different elements. For Christ's sake that's like Wood and Wood Chips being 2 elements.

And wouldn't it make more sense for Earth to give Earthbending and Stone golem creation, not the other way around.

>> No.40711308

>>40711082
>And wouldn't it make more sense for Earth to give Earthbending and Stone golem creation, not the other way around.

Yeah, that would make more sense. Maybe it was a bit of subtle trolling?

>> No.40711366

>>40703049
>>40703144
You're big guys

>> No.40711373

>>40707411
Is...is that spearhead supposed to be like a JoJo arrowhead?

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