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>> No.55743314 [View]
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In gen 2 4/5 chuubas are 5-views, but to balance things out, the universe decided to make 3/5 not stream

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>>37568534
>turning into the worlds biggest gigaslut because of a few daddy issues isn’t to most realistic premise to begin with.
I guess you're right, but I needed an initial reason for Ayame to try it out and realise she loves having sex, I didn't want to say "she started inviting guys over and became a slut just because". Maybe some more in-depth reasoning and a slower build up to her circumstances would have helped.
>the Aqua arc felt a bit castrated
Yeah, I'm starting to see that. As I said before, she WAS going to play a larger role in the other versions of the story and only ended up being a little useless because of the direction the fic went. That's not really an excuse, though, I probably should have given the onion drama some more attention.
>The smut might not be the most ball-busting piece of erotica in the archive
I'd expect so. If you don't mind me asking, can you pinpoint anything I could do to make it hotter? I might find myself writing Towa sex in the distant future.
Anyway, cheers for reading and enjoying, it's pleasant to hear.

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>>37604251
Nah, I'm neither a good writer nor a fast one in comparison to most of the thread. The last time one of my series had a proper update was August LAST year.
>>37577478
No problem man, just you saying you liked it is more than enough, thank you. I'm not even sure how a prequel would work. Wouldn't be about Anon since he's had a boring life, so it'd have to centre around Ayame.
I don't have any plans to open an AO3 account but shit, if someone who has one wants to upload it and say it's from /wg/ in /vt/ I'd be cool with that.
>>37617502
Gracias.
>>37618024
Yup, tried squeezing all the rrats I knew in. Might have forgotten some but I think most of the ridiculous ones are there.

>>37631663
>I gotta say the dialouge by far my favourite part of the fic, everything flowed so well and Anon's and Ayame's interactions were always such a treat.
Bless, I'm glad to hear that since I worked pretty hard on the those. Even I as the writer found myself liking the dynamic between the two characters I had created.
>Spoiler
I was originally going to have that be way more in your face, but decided to tone it down. Good to see you noticed. It also ties into the STD joke.

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>>32126150
I've set the story in (northern hemisphere) autumn and plan to have a regular vanilla date as a finale, but maybe I should wind the clock back and make it a summer festival date with yukata Ayame instead.
Speaking of, I fucking love traditional Japanese clothes so much, the latter half of the live was great. I wasn't a huge fan of the swimsuits because it felt out of place for them to be on a concert stage, but Polka dancing was good.

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